江苏省2022高考英语第三部分写作层级训练第一步循序渐进提升写作技能第八讲巧夺天工的连篇技巧讲解

第八讲　巧夺天工的连篇技巧李仕才有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“开篇、承接、转折、总结”四个方法使文章流畅自然，是考生在书面表达题目上争创高分的非常重要的条件。一、开篇——创造良好开端1.常用表达“开篇”的过渡词语(常用在段落或文章的开头)first，firstofall，atfirst，inthefirstplace，firstly，tostartwith，recently，now，atpresent，inrecentyears，ingeneral，generallyspeaking，atpresent，lately，currently等。2.常用表达“开篇”的句型(1)Itisoftensaidthat...(2)Astheproverbsays...(3)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...(4)Itisclear/obviousthat...(5)Manypeopleoftenask...FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.(陕西卷)It’softensaidthatallworkwithoutplaymakesJackadullboy.Astheproverbsays，nopains，nogains.(北京卷)二、承接——顺势承上又启下1.常用表达“承接”的过渡词语secondly，inaddition，besides，moreover，whatismore，whatisworse，forexample，inotherwords，especially，particularly，obviously，atthesametime，nodoubtmeanwhile，asaconsequence等。2.常用表达“承接”的句型：(1)Itistruethat...(2)Everybodyknowsthat...(3)Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat...5\n(4)Noonecandenythat...(5)Thereasonwhy...isthat...(6)Thereisnodoubtthat...(7)Totake...forexample(instance)...(8)Whatismoreseriousisthat...Inaddition，IwillgoonatriptoSichuan，wherethereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest.Meanwhile，Iwillregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.Asaconsequence，childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.三、转折——利用转折巧过渡1.常用表达“转折”的过渡词语but，however，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，inanycase，or，orelse，while，despite，inspiteof，regardlessof，instead等。2.常用表达“转折”的句型(1)Everycoinhastwosides.(2)Butfor...Iwouldnever...(3)Anotherexampleisthat...(4)Takingeverythingintoconsideration...(5)That’swhyIfeelthat...Therewillbemanychallengesahead，butIhaveconfidencethatI’lltakeontheburden.However，itisnotsoeasyforpeopletorealizetheirdreamseverytime.四、总结——完美结束全文常用表达“总结”的过渡词语：inaword，ingeneral，inshort，aboveall，finally，inconclusion，atlast，insummary，asaresult，onthewhole，inone’sopinion等。常用表达“总结”的句型：1.Somethingmustbedoneto...5\n2.Itcanbesafelyconcludedfrom...that...3.Inmyopinion，wecandrawtheconclusionthat...4.Itmaybesummedupasfollows...Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows：it’shightimethatourgovernmenttooksomemeasurestoimproveourenvironment.Inmyopinion，peopleneedtolearntoaccepttherealityandkeepontrying.[跟踪训练]Ⅰ.完成句子1.With__the__development__of__theInternet，computersplayanimportantroleinpeople’slife.随着因特网的发展，计算机在人们的生活中起着重要作用。2.Generally__speaking/On__the__whole/In__general,__themoreyoupractise，themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.总的来说，你练习越多，用英语写作就越熟练。3.Take__Beijing__for__example，itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。4.That__is__to__say，ifyouwanttosucceed，youhavetobelieveinyourself.也就是说，如果你想成功，必须相信自己。5.As__far__as__I__am__concerned，Ilovewealth，butIvaluehealthmore.就我而言，我喜欢财富，但我更看重健康。6.In__my__opinion，peopleshallnotsmokeinpublicplaces.按照我的观点，人们不应该在公共场所抽烟。7.In__a__word/In__conclusion/In__short/In__brief/To__sum__up，agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.总之，一个好市民应该遵守交通规则。8.Besides/What’s__more/In__addition/Moreover/Furthermore,__ourclassalsoorganizeavarietyofactivitiestoenrichoursparetime.另外，我们班还组织了各种各样的活动来丰富我们的业余时间。9.Worse__still/To__make__matters__worse,__ifwespendtoomuchtimeonphones，wewilllosethecommunicationskillsweneedinthefuture.5\n更糟的是，如果我们在电话上花费过多的时间，我们会失去将来需要的交际技能。Ⅱ.完成短文1.Firstly，Icollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.2.Then__Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.3.__After__that,__Isweptandmoppedthefloors.首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。Ⅲ.翻译句子1.努力学习，你就会升入重点大学。__Work__hard，and__you__will__be__admitted__to__a__key__university.2.游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。Swimming__not__only__benefits__our__health，but__also__helps__us__have__a__strong__will.3.然而，使你最惊讶的是下述新的功能。However，what__amazes__you__most__is__the__following__new__function.4.相反，智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。On__the__contrary，smartphones__not__only__take__up__our__valuable__time，but__also__do__great__harm__to__our__health.5.多亏医生的及时治疗，他获救了。Thanks__to__the__doctor’s__timely__treatment，he__was__saved.6.因此，我建议应该给我们更多的时间用于体育运动和睡眠。Therefore，I__suggest__we__be__given__more__time__for__sports__and__sleep.7.只要你不灰心，就一定会成功。As__long__as__you__don’t__lose__heart，you’re__sure__to__succeed.8.如果我们忽视我们的未来，就像图画中的这个人一样，我们就会以失败告终。__If__we__neglect__our__future，we’ll__end__up__in__failure__as__what__happens__to__the__man__in__the__picture.Ⅳ.用方框内的过渡词完成下面的短文second，so，asaresult，despite，on(the)onehand，what’sworse，instead5\nof，inaword，ontheotherhand，asiswell-known1.As__is__well-known,__onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.2.On__the__one__hand,__onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First，onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings.3.Instead__ofsearchingacrowdedstore，wejustneedtowatchthecomputerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.4.Second,__itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.Wedon’thavetospendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Third，wecanseealotofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenatthesametime.5.On__the__other__hand，onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.6.As__a__result,__wecanbecheatedeasily.7.What’s__worse,__wecannotseethethingsindetail.8.In__a__word,__9.despitethedisadvantagesofonlineshopping,Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.10.Soweshoulddevelopit.5