适用于老高考旧教材2024版高考英语二轮复习题组限时满分练15短文改错书面表达（附解析）

满分练(十五)　短文改错+书面表达(限时:30分钟)Ⅰ.短文改错(2023四川成都一诊)Lookingbackatmyseniorschoollife,Ihavesomanythingstosharethemwithallofyou.IstillrememberthatIstepintomyhighschoolwithhighexpectations.Therefore,Ifeltsofrustratedafterthefirstmonthtest.IevenbegantodoubtthatIwasqualifiedtobeaseniorschoolstudent.Withthehelpsoffriendlyclassmates,teachersandparents,Ipickedupmycourageandregainedthespiritstodevotemyselftostudy,thusdowellinsomeacademicperformances.Besides,Itookactivepartincolorfulafter-schoolactivitiessuchasbasketballmatches,singingcompetitionsandEnglishdebates,onwhichIbenefitalot.Inaword,Iamreallysatisfiedwithmyseniorschoollifewhicharepartofmygrowth.Ⅱ.书面表达(2023陕西榆林一模)假定你是李华,你的英国交换生同学William今年要在他的寄宿家庭过春节。请你给他发一封电子邮件。内容包括:1.给他送上新年祝福;2.邀请他到你家做客。注意:1.词数100左右;2.请在相应位置作答。DearWilliam,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua答案：Ⅰ. [语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。作者回顾了自己的高中生活。1.第一句:将them去掉　考查代词。分析句子结构,toshare作manythings的后置定语,them是多余的。故将them去掉。2.第二句:step→stepped　考查动词的时态。此处陈述过去发生的事情,使用一般过去时。故将step改为stepped。3.第三句:Therefore→However　考查副词。上文提到“我怀着很高的期望进入高中”,下文提到“我感到非常沮丧”,上下文之间形成转折关系。故将Therefore改为However。4.第三句:month→monthly　考查形容词。修饰名词test需用形容词monthly作定语。故将month改为monthly。5.第四句:that→whether/if　考查连词。此处引导宾语从句,从句不缺成分,连接词表示“是否”的含义,需用连接词whether/if。故将that改为whether/if。6.第五句:helps→help　考查名词的数。help为不可数名词,没有复数形式。故将helps改为help。7.第五句:do→doing　考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,已有谓语动词pickedup和regained,此处为非谓语动词作状语,I和do为逻辑上的主谓关系,需用现在分词形式。故将do改为doing。8.第六句:在active前面加an　考查冠词。takeanactivepartin为固定搭配,意为“积极参加”。故在active前面加an。9.第六句:on→from/through/by　考查介词。benefitfrom...为固定搭配,意为“从……中受益”,可以将on改为from;或者考虑前面句子和定语从句的关系,表示“通过这些课外活动,我受益良多”,需用介词through/by。故将on改为from/through/by。10.第七句:are→is　考查主谓一致。which指代schoollife,不可数,谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。故将are改为is。Ⅱ.DearWilliam, OnknowingthatyouhavedecidedtospendtheSpringFestivalatyourhostfamilyinChina,Ican’twaittoshowmydelightforit.AsfarasIknow,itisthefirsttimeyouhavedecidedtocelebratetheChineseNewYear,whichwillimpressyougreatly.AsacustomoftheSpringFestival,Iwillsendyoumybestblessingstoyou.IwishyouahappyNewYear,allthebest,happinessandhealth.Besides,IsincerelyinviteyoutomyhomeandsharethehappinessofChineseNewYearwithmyfamily.I’dbemorethanalittlegladifmyinvitationisaccepted. Yours,LiHua 1.词汇积累兴奋:delight→excitement我认为:asfarasIknow→inmypointofview祝福:blessing→wish开心的:glad→delighted2.高分句型(1)AsfarasIknow,itisthefirsttimeyouhavedecidedtocelebratetheChineseNewYear,whichwillimpressyougreatly.(which引导非限制性定语从句)(2)I’dbemorethanalittlegladifmyinvitationisaccepted.(if引导条件状语从句和被动语态结构)