适用于老高考旧教材2024版高考英语二轮复习题组限时满分练14短文改错书面表达（附解析）

满分练(十四)　短文改错+书面表达(限时:30分钟)Ⅰ.短文改错(2023四川广安二诊)Ilikekeepingadiary.Ithinkkeepingdiariesareagoodhabit.Itinterestspeopleofallage.Olderpeoplewanttolookbackonthepastandseewhichthey’vedoneandlike.Theyalsohopetoleavesomethingusefullyfortheirgrandchildren.Middle-agedpeopleexploretheirlivesbykeepdiaries.Whydoyoungpeopleenjoykeepingdiaries?Withmyopinion,theywishtofindoutwhotheyare,andwherethey’regoing.Ifyouwanttorememberyourpastlife,andyouneedtokeepapersonaldiarythroughouttheirlife.That’sbecauseitisimpossibleforyouremembereverythingyou’veexperienced.Ⅱ.书面表达(2023陕西西安一模)假如你是李华,是全国机器人大赛获奖者,育才中学王校长邀请你去给机器人爱好者培训,请你回复邀请函,内容如下:1.表态接受邀请;2.介绍培训计划。注意:1.词数100左右;2.请在相应位置作答。DearPrincipalWang,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua答案：Ⅰ.[语篇解读]本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍人们都喜欢写日记的原因和写日记的好处。1.第二句:are→is　考查主谓一致。主语是动词-ing形式短语keepingdiaries,谓语要用单数形式。故将are改为is。 2.第三句:age→ages　考查名词的数。可数名词age前面有all,名词要用复数形式。故将age改为ages。3.第四句:which→what　考查连词。see后是宾语从句,从句中缺少动词done和like的宾语,意为“什么”,用连接代词what引导。故将which改为what。4.第四句:like→liked　考查谓语动词。分析句子结构和意思可知,这里like和前面havedone是并列的谓语动词,都用现在完成时,因此like用过去分词。故将like改为liked。5.第五句:usefully→useful　考查形容词。修饰前面的不定代词something,应用形容词。故将usefully改为useful。6.第六句:keep→keeping　考查非谓语动词。介词by的宾语应用keep的动词-ing形式。故将keep改为keeping。7.第八句:With→In　考查介词短语。这里考查介词短语inmyopinion,意为“在我看来”。故将With改为In。8.第九句:删除and　考查连词。这句话是if引导的条件状语从句,后面的连词and多余。故将and删除。9.第九句:their→your　考查代词。从句提到的人称代词是you,所以用you的形容词性物主代词。故将their改为your。10.第十句:在remember前面加to　考查非谓语动词。此处为固定句型:itbe+adj.+forsb.todosth.,it作形式主语,后面用动词不定式作真正的主语。故在remember前面加to。Ⅱ.DearPrincipalWang, It’ssuchagreatprivilegeformetobeinvitedtosharemyexperiencewiththerobotloversinyourschool.Withthedeepestgratitude,I’msopleasedtoacceptyourinvitation.Asisscheduled,thetrainingcoursewillbedividedinto3parts.Themostadvancedtechnologyandapplicationwillbedeliveredinthefirstplace.Toenhancetheirfurthermotivation,aninteractivepartwillbeprovided,throughwhichtheycansharetheirperspectivesonthegivensamplerobotenthusiasticallyaswellasbeinspiredmutually.Intheend,apracticalrobotdesigningontheirownwillberequired.I’mlookingforwardtomeetingwithyounextweekandIdohopethecoursecanbeofgreatbenefittoyouall. Yourssincerely, LiHua 1.词汇积累　荣幸:privilege→honour高兴的:pleased→delighted观点:perspective→opinion有益的:beofbenefit→bebeneficial2.高分句型(1)Asisscheduled,thetrainingcoursewillbedividedinto3parts.(as引导非限制性定语从句)(2)Toenhancetheirfurthermotivation,aninteractivepartwillbeprovided,throughwhichtheycansharetheirperspectivesonthegivensamplerobotenthusiasticallyaswellasbeinspiredmutually.(动词不定式作目的状语以及“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句)