适用于老高考旧教材2024版高考英语二轮复习题组限时满分练12短文改错书面表达（附解析）

满分练(十二)　短文改错+书面表达(限时:30分钟)Ⅰ.短文改错(2023陕西榆林三模)DadandIgotomygrandparents’homelastweekend.Besidesvisitedmygrandparents,wewantedtohelpthemtohavethebroadbandnetworkfixing.Dadaskedthecommunicationcompanytodoitintheadvance.Atechniciancameontimeandfinishedhisworkrapid.Thenitwasmyturn.Ijusttaughtmygrandparentswhattousetheirsmartphonesstepbystep.Soonwelearnedtoreadnews,shoponlineordosomethingelse.Theyshowedmuchinterestinvideochat,whichtheythoughtwasthemostusefulfunctions.Now,Iusuallychatmygrandparentsonline.Ⅱ.书面表达(2023四川绵阳二诊)假设你是李华,上周末去学校周边某社区参加了志愿者活动。请给你校官网英文专栏写一篇短文介绍你们的活动情况,要点包括:1.活动概况;2.感悟与收获。注意:1.词数100左右;2.请在相应位置作答。Manyhandsmakelightwork_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Ⅰ.[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲的是作者和爸爸在上周末去帮助爷爷奶奶修理宽带和教爷爷奶奶使用智能手机的事情。1.第一句:go→went　考查动词的时态。由“lastweekend”可知,句子描述过去的事情,时态用一般过去时,故将go改为went。 2.第二句:visited→visiting　考查非谓语动词。Besides是介词,其后跟动词-ing形式作宾语,故将visited改为visiting。3.第二句:fixing→fixed　考查非谓语动词。network和fix之间为逻辑上的被动关系,应用过去分词作宾补。故将fixing改为fixed。4.第三句:去掉第二个the　考查固定短语。inadvance是固定短语,意为“提前”,故去掉the。5.第四句:rapid→rapidly　考查副词。修饰动词finished要用副词rapidly,意为“快速地”,故将rapid改为rapidly。6.第六句:what→how　考查特殊疑问词。根据语境可知,表示“如何”用副词how,“如何使用”是howtouse,为“特殊疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语,故将what改为how。7.第七句:we→they　考查代词。根据语境可知,此处表示“他们学会了阅读新闻、网上购物和做其他事情”,“他们”作主语,用they,故将we改为they。8.第七句:or→and　考查连词。readnews,shoponline和dosomethingelse是并列动作,用and连接,故将or改为and。9.第八句:functions→function　考查名词的数。此处表示他们认为视频聊天是最有用的功能,指一个功能,function要用单数,故将functions改为function。10.第九句:在chat后加with　考查介词。chatwithsb.是固定短语,意为“和某人聊天”,故在chat后加with。Ⅱ.ManyhandsmakelightworkLastweekendwewenttoacommunitynearourschooltodosomevolunteerwork.Whenwegotthereinthemorning,wewerewarmlywelcomedbyeverybody.Soonwegotdowntowork.Someofuswenttothelocalnursinghometohelptheelderlywithchores.Theyweregladtoseesomanyyoungfacesaroundthem.Theothersjoinedthelocalstocleanuptheneighborhood.Wehelpedsweepthestreetsandcollectrubbish.Soonthewholeareatookonanewlook.Theactivitydidnotlastlong,butwelearnedalot.Byjoiningourhandswecanaccomplishbigthingsandmaketheworldabetterplace.1.词汇积累到达:get→arrive高兴:glad→delighted参加:join→participate收集:collect→gather 2.高分句型(1)Whenwegotthereinthemorning,wewerewarmlywelcomedbyeverybody.(when引导时间状语从句)(2)Someofuswenttothelocalnursinghometohelptheelderlywithchores.(不定式作目的状语)