适用于老高考旧教材2024版高考英语二轮复习题组限时满分练11短文改错书面表达（附解析）

满分练(十一)　短文改错+书面表达(限时:30分钟)Ⅰ.短文改错(2023四川内江三模)Lastsummer,IwenttoDjerba,Tunisia.ItwastrueoneofthemostattractivedestinationIhadevervisited.ImustadmitthatIhaveneverseensuchabeautifulcoastlinebefore.Ispentmostofmydayswalkingonthebeachbutenjoyingthesunandthepeacefulsoundofthewaves.Onmyfourdaythere,Itookatourandvisitedsomelocalattractions,includedtheElGhribaSynagogue.Andthatwasunforgettableexperience.Overall,IfeltsoluckytobetherebecauseofeverythingwasgoodthanIcouldeverimagine.I’mlookingforwardtoexploremoreofthisbeautifulcountrynexttime.Ⅱ.书面表达(2023四川自贡二诊)假定你校英文报正在以“养成好习惯,促进我健康”为主题开展征文活动。请写一篇短文,向报社投稿,内容包括:1.介绍一项你的好习惯;2.该习惯对健康的影响;3.呼吁养成健康习惯。注意:1.词数100左右;2.请在相应位置作答。GoodHabits,GoodHealth_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Ⅰ.[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要描述了作者去杰尔巴岛旅行的经历。1.第二句:true→truly　考查副词。分析句子结构可知,此处要用副词truly作状语,修饰be动词was。故将true改为truly。 2.第二句:destination→destinations　考查名词的数。根据“oneofthemostattractive”可知,后面加名词复数,表示“最……的之一”。故将destination改为destinations。3.第三句:have→had　考查动词的时态。根据句意可知,“承认”是过去的动作,“看见”这一动作发生在“承认”之前,故用过去完成时。故将have改为had。4.第四句:but→and　考查连词。分析句意可知,“walkingonthebeach”和“enjoyingthesunandthepeacefulsoundofthewaves”是并列关系,不是转折关系。故将but改为and。5.第五句:four→fourth　考查数词。根据句意可知,“在第四天,参观了一些景点”,用序数词表示。故将four改为fourth。6.第五句:included→including　考查非谓语动词。句中已有谓语动词“took”和“visited”,因此include应用非谓语形式,“localattractions”和“include”之间是主动关系,故用现在分词。故将included改为including。7.第六句:unforgettable前面加an　考查冠词。泛指“一次经历”,要用不定冠词修饰名词,unforgettable以元音音素开头,需用不定冠词an。故在unforgettable前面加an。8.第七句:because后的of删掉　考查连词。根据句意可知,because引导了原因状语从句,becauseof后只能跟名词、短语等作宾语,不能接从句。故将because后的of删掉。9.第七句:good→better　考查形容词比较级。根据“thanIcouldeverimagine”可知,要用形容词比较级。故将good改为better。10.第八句:explore→exploring　考查非谓语动词。lookforwardtodoingsth.表示“期待做某事”,用动词-ing形式作宾语。故将explore改为exploring。Ⅱ.GoodHabits,GoodHealthNowI’veformedagoodhabittoimprovemyhealth.Thatis,Iplaybasketballwithmyfriendsontheplaygroundfor40minuteseverydayafterschool.However,ayearago,becauseoftheheavylearningtasks,Ialwaysstayedintheclassroom,notparticipatinginafter-schoolactivitiestorelaxmyself.Asaresult,IfoundIcouldn’tconcentrateonmyschoolworkandalwaysfelttired.IrealizedIhadtoadjustmylifestyle.Then,IbeganplayingbasketballsinceIlikethissport.Now,Ifeelenergetic,andmylearningefficiencyissatisfactory.Astrongnationisbasedonitsstrongyouths.Asseniorthreestudents,weshoulddevelophealthyhabitsandhaveahealthybody.1.词汇积累 养成:form→develop任务:task→assignment因此:asaresult→asaconsequence集中:concentrateon→focuson2.高分句型(1)IrealizedIhadtoadjustmylifestyle.(省略that的宾语从句)(2)Then,IbeganplayingbasketballsinceIlikethissport.(since引导原因状语从句)