适用于老高考旧教材2024版高考英语二轮复习题组限时满分练13短文改错书面表达（附解析）

满分练(十三)　短文改错+书面表达(限时:30分钟)Ⅰ.短文改错(2023四川宜宾三诊)Iamapplyingavolunteerpositionforthegames.Personally,Iconsidermeaqualifiedcandidatefromthefollowthreeaspects.Firstly,asasportsfan,mysportstalentsletmetofitinanyvolunteerposition.Secondly,myfluentlyEnglishwillenablemetowellunderstandtheneedsofsportsmenthanothers,andthusoffertimelyhelp.Thirdly,myvoluntaryexperienceshavenotonlystrengthenedmyteamspirit,butalsoequipmewithpracticalskillsandknowledges.Ikeeppassionforsports,butIhopetomakeacontributiontothisworldsportsevent.IwouldappreciateitwhenIamofferedthisopportunity.Ihaveattachedmyresumeandlookforwardtoaninterview.Ⅱ.书面表达(2023四川成都、绵阳五校高三适应性考试)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom很喜欢中国文化,最近他在学习汉语,但他发现记忆汉字很困难,因此发邮件向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.培养语感;2.广泛阅读;3.反复书写;4.熟练运用。注意:1.词数100左右;2.请在相应位置作答。DearTom,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua 答案：Ⅰ.[语篇解读]本文是一篇应用文。文章主要讲述了作者正在申请奥运会志愿者的职位。作者从以下三个方面认为自己是一个合格的候选人。1.第一句:在applying后加for　考查动词短语。根据句意可知,此处为动词短语applyfor“申请”,满足句意要求。故在applying后加for。2.第二句:me→myself　考查代词。根据句意以及主语I可知,此处为对应主语的反身代词myself“我自己”,满足句意要求。故将me改为myself。3.第二句:follow→following　考查形容词。由threeaspects为名词短语可知,此处为形容词形式修饰该名词短语。故将follow改为following。4.第三句:删除to　考查动词不定式。分析句子可知,此处为letsb.dosth.,为使役动词的用法,后需接省略to的动词不定式。故将to删除。5.第四句:fluently→fluent　考查形容词。由English为名词可知,此处应为形容词形式修饰该名词。故将fluently改为fluent。6.第四句:well→better　考查副词比较级。由该句中的than可知,此处为副词well的比较级better修饰动词understand。故将well改为better。7.第五句:equip→equipped　考查非谓语动词。由notonly连接的strengthened为现在完成时的过去分词可知,此处butalso后也应为过去分词形式,与其保持一致。故将equip改为equipped。8.第五句:knowledges→knowledge　考查名词。该句中的knowledge表示“知识”,为不可数名词,所以此处应为单数形式。故将knowledges改为knowledge。9.第六句:but→so/and　考查连词。根据句意可知,此处为连词so/and表示“所以或接下来”,满足句子逻辑关系。故将but改为so/and。10.第七句:when→if　考查连词。根据句意可知,此处为连词if表示“如果”,引导条件状语从句,满足句意要求。故将when改为if。Ⅱ.DearTom, I’mmorethangladtoreceiveyouremail,whichtellsmeyouhavetroublerememberingChinesewords.Ihavesomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourvocabulary.Firstly,youshouldreadaloudasoftenaspossible,foritcandevelopyourlanguagesense.Secondly,youmustreadmore.Readingcancertainlyenlargeyourvocabularyandyoucaneasilyfindplentyofreadingmaterialsthatinterest you.Thirdly,everytimeyoumeetanewword,it’snotenoughtojustwriteitdown.Themoreyourepeatit,thebetteryou’llrememberit.Finally,youneedtoputyourwordsintopractice.Onlyinthiswaycanyouusethemskillfully.Ihopetheaboveadvicecangiveyousomehelp.Bestwishes! Yourssincerely, LiHua 1.词汇积累高兴的:glad→delighted有困难:havetrouble(in)doingsth.→havedifficulty(in)doingsth.培养:develop→cultivate最后:finally→atlast2.高分句型(1)I’mmorethangladtoreceiveyouremail,whichtellsmeyouhavetroublerememberingChinesewords.(which引导非限制性定语从句)(2)Onlyinthiswaycanyouusethemskillfully.(部分倒装)