江苏专用2022高考英语二轮增分策略专题五书面表达第二节分类突破三增加细节的5大策略优选习题

三、增加细节的5大策略在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、字数要求不达标或者结构不连贯。适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。微技能(一)　列举具体的实例进行补充说明1．我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.→Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample，wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags，refusetousesingle-useproducts，plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.2．我要花一些时间和父母呆在一起。I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.3．我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.→I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible，wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.4．我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。I’mahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch.6\n→Iamahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch，especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime，I’llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.题组过关1　根据括号内提示完成句子1．TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.Wecannotonlyreadnewsfromhomeandabroad(我们不仅能阅读国内外的新闻)，butalsogetinformation，sendemailsandattendonlineschools.2．LauraisastandardAmericanstyle.ShespeaksperfectAmericanEnglish(她说一口完美的美式英语)，andthat’swhyIamcrazyabouther.3．However，itseemspeopleareunawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample，manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontoface-to-facecommunication(比如，很多人开始越来越不重视面对面的交流)．4．However，everycoinhastwosides，sodoestheInternet.Forexample，beinglostintheInternetmayaffectourstudyandwork(比如，沉溺于因特网也许会影响我们的学习和工作)．微技能(二)　增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容1．我有时去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverwasveryclear.(背景渲染)→Weatherpermitting，Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相关背景)2．我发现了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehavior.→Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall；somepeopleplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.(相关行为描述)3．晚饭后，这位男士走向了卧室。Aftersupper，themanwenttohisbedroom.→Afterarichmeal，thefatmanslowlymadehiswaytohisbedroom.(神态、动作)题组过关2　根据括号内提示完成句子5．Consideringtheactivityisofgreatvalue/ismeaningful(考虑到这项活动很有意义)，weintendtodesignauniformsuitedtoourownclass.6．I’lltrymybesttomakeyourunclehappyhere.Iameagerlylookingforwardtohisvisittoourcity(我热切地期盼着他来我们城市参观)．6\n7．Manyteenagersdon’tpayanyattentiontotheirhealth，especiallyduringtheholiday.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV(他们花费太多的时间看电视)，playinggamesandchattingontheInternetallnight.8．LookingbacktomystayinBritain，Ifeltveryhappyandsatisfied(我感到非常高兴和满意)．9．Inthesummervacation，Iamlongingtoget/haveapart-timejob(我渴望得到一份兼职工作)．微技能(三)　增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容1．我要和父母一起去超市购物。I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.→I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwon’tbebackuntilabout5∶00intheafternoon.(增加时间)2．我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.→IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(增加地点)题组过关3　根据括号内提示完成句子10．YaoMing，whowasborninShanghaionSeptember12,1980(1980年9月12日出生于上海)，startedplayingfortheShanghaiSharksasateenager.11．TheChineseSilkRoad，whichstartsfromtoday’sXi’anandfinallyfinishesattheeastcoastof(起源于今天的西安，并最后达到……的东海岸)theMediterranean，iswell-knowntotheworld.12．TodayIpaidavisittooneofthegreatestcitiesinAsia，BeijinginChina(在亚洲，中国的北京)．13．Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthecitythemoment/immediately/assoonas/directly(一……就……)Iarrivedhereat6o’clockinthemorningbyplane.微技能(四)　适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容1．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。1.休息；2.读书；3.参加社会活动。(1)Ineedagoodrest.I’lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse，I’lldosomereadingforfun，andforknowledgeaswell.(因果关系)(2)I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.6\n→IfIhavefreetime，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)→Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)→Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(结果状语)2．Tracy来电话：咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)见面取消。Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehadsomethingimportanttodo.(原因状语)3．帮助邻居的孩子们补习英语。IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.→IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy，theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增添结果)题组过关4　根据括号内提示完成句子14．TombSweepingDay，oneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals(传统的中国节日之一)，usuallyfallsaroundApril5everyyeartohonorthedeadandsatisfytheirancestors.15．Withtheglobalclimatebecomingwarmerandwarmer(伴随着全球气候变得越来越暖和)，ourearthisfacedwithgreatthreat.16．Situated/Locatedinnortheast(坐落在东北部)，Beijingiswell-knownforitsculturalrelicswhichhavebeenthereforalonghistory.17．Duringthisperiod，peoplewillgotocleanthegravesandpayrespecttotheirancestors，carryingfoodandfruit(带上食物和水果)．18．Beingaseniorschoolstudent(作为一名高中生)，it’severyone’sdutytodosomethingtosaveourearth.19．Asisknowntoall/Aseveryoneknows(众所周知)，EarthHourisanactivitywhichaimsatsavingenergy.微技能(五)　结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、希望愿景、倡议等1．AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(个人感受)2．Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(评价)3．Inaword，ifshewouldliketolearnChinese，Ihopeshewilldoitwell.(愿景)4．Asstudents，it’sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡议)6\n题组过关5　根据括号内提示完成句子20．Asaprofessionalbasketballplayer(作为一名专业的篮球运动员)，heisoneofChina’sbest-knownathletes.21．IthinkBeijingiswellworthasecondvisit(非常值得再次参观)．22．Inmyview，nomatterhow/howeverattractivetheInternetis(不管因特网多么吸引人)，itshouldn’tseparateusfromourlovedones.23．Wedrewaconclusionthroughtheexperiment(通过这个实验我们得出一个结论)：thetemperaturedoesn’tchangewheniceismeltingintowater.24．Let’sdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomakemorecontributionstoourenvironment(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献)．25．Therefore，weshouldspendtimewithourfamilies，enjoyingthetimewhenwearetogether(享受我们在一起的时光)．Ⅰ.按要求对下列句子进行扩充1．每天要努力学习，为每一次考试做出仔细的计划。(增加条件状语)Studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam.Ifweareprepared，wewillnotfeelworried.2．复旦大学位于上海。(增加which引导的非限制性定语从句)FudanUniversityislocatedinShanghai，whichisaninternationalcitywhereIcangetalotofknowledgeandexperience.3．不管我将面对什么样的困难，我都不会屈服。(增加目的状语)Torealizemydream，whateverchallengeIwillface，Iwillnevergivein.4．我们应该学会如何与他人相处。(增加具体信息说明)Weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Forexample，weshouldrespectteachersandbefriendlywithclassmates.5．一些学生非常担心考试以至于晚上无法入睡。(增加结果状语)Somestudentsaresoworriedaboutexamsthattheycan’tfallasleepatnight.Asaresult，theyfeelsleepyinthedaytimeandcan’tconcentrateinclass.Ⅱ.请为下面的短文适当增加细节DearSam，TheCollegeEntranceExaminationlastsfortwodays.TheexamineesaretestedonChinese，math，scienceandarts.Wearephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex.6\n参考范文　DearSam，Thankyouforyourconcern.NowI’lltellyousomethingabouttheonce-a-yearCollegeEntranceExamination.Thereisnodoubtthattheexaminationisveryimportant.ItlastsfortwodaysfromJune7thto8th.TheexamineesaretestedonChineseandmathonthefirstday.Scienceandartsaretestedonthesecondday.Wearephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex.Butwearefullofconfidencebecausewearewellprepared.Weallbelievethatthefruitsofoureffortswillbesweet.6