高考英语写作中让语句逻辑更完整的方法

0 1解释过渡词如果刚刚写完一句话，然后想解释一下，那么你要用到的是“解释过渡词”：now,inaddition,for,inthiscase,furthermore,infact， 这类过渡词能够有效增加语句的说服力，同时增加文章字数。事实上，英语本身就是一种“解释型语言”（汉语是一种“定义型语言”），解释过渡词用得好不好，直接体现了你的英语硬实力！（1）Theproblem,inthiscase,ishardtosolve.（2）Furthermore,severalpeopletelephonedthesamenight.0 2时间过渡词在记叙文里面，时间顺序是最重要的顺序；在图表文中，也常用表示时间的过渡词来 加强数据之间的联系以说明变化规律！如下，是关于家庭消费结构变化的作文。TheaveragefamilyincomeinourKangmingCityincreasedfrom8,000yuanperyearin1998to20,000yuanin2008.Inthemeantime,thestructureoftheaveragefamilyexpenseshaschanged,too.Thesegraphsshowthechangeclearly.下面这句是大家常用的“现象解释型”议论文的开头模式：Recently,wehavemadeasurveyofthepeopleonphysicaltraining.Only35percentofthepeoplesurveyedhavetakenpartinphysicalactivities.0 3强调过渡词如果你说完一个道理，感觉表达的不完整，想要强调一下，那么你应该使用“强调过渡词”，如：certainly,indeed,aboveall,surely,mostimportant（1）Indeed,adessertisalwaysenjoyable.（2）Aboveall,donotbuildanopenfireinaforest.0 4转折过渡词【but,however,although,though,yet,exceptfor】（1）Yettherewasstillachancethathewouldwin.（2）Exceptforonegirl,allthehikersreturned.0 5举例过渡词【forexample,forinstance,thus,such,next】（1）Forinstance,atelegramoftencostsmorethanatelephonecall.（2）Thusthetripfinallybegan.0 6递进或补充过渡词【inaddition，furthermore，also，moreover，yet】（1）Inaddition,thetourstopsinVancouver.（2）Furthermore,thetimeforregistrationhasbeenextended.0 7顺序的过渡词【first,second,third,afterward(s)（后来）,meanwhile（几乎同时）,thereafter（在那以后）,last,finally,eventually（终于）】（1）First,youmailinanapplication.Second,youaskforanappointment.Third,yousendthemthreepersonalreferences.（2）Thenyoucometoatrafficlightandturnright.0 8比较过渡词【like,inthesameway,similarly,equallyimportant,too】（1）Inthesameway,welookforagooddoctor.（2）Similarly,theThaisenjoyspicyfoods.0 9对比过渡词【unlike,incontrast,whereas,ontheotherhand,instead】（1）Incontrast,theredfluiddoesnotloseitscolor.（2）Thehusbandwantedaboy,whereasthewifewantedagirl.此外，从内容上进行“换词”也必不可少，毕竟很多同学都面临着词汇量匮乏的情况，那些用到“恶心”的词语如何才能华丽大转身呢？我们可以先看看此种“换词大法”的三点注意事项，打起精神来牢记吧！【注1】拒绝冗长，力求实用！听我一席话，省下十本书！【注2】箭头左边是原词，右边是推荐的换词， 有多个换词的一般按照难易程度排列，可以按照你目前的英文水平选择一两个使用。【注3】如果一篇文章里面同一个词要用两次以上，优先使用换词，换词不够了可以用原词， 原词尽量往后用但是不要用在结尾句。10换词大法1.like→befondof/becrazyabout/delightin/rejoicein/takepleasurein/appreciate/2.all+名词复数（如students）→everysinglestudent【注意名词单复数变化】3.thinkabout/consider→takeintoaccount4.wanttodosth→intendtodosth/tendtodosth/beinclinedtodosth./belongingfordoingsth./bethirstfordoingsth5.moreandmore+n.→n.+in/growing/increasing/significant/numbers6.moreandmore+adj(如important)→increasinglyimportant7.most+n.(如student)→anoverwhelminglymajorityofasignificantproportionofasizablepercentageof8.not→bynomeans的 不完全倒装句型。【例】Bynomeansshallwegiveuptrying.我们决绝能停止努力。【注】bynomeans可以用在“正装”句型中，如：Thisisbynomeansagoodwaytosolvetheproblem.这绝不是解决问题的最好方法。9.shoulddo→besupposedtodo10.good-->excellent11.wantsth→desiresth.高级词汇使情感强度更加具体12.but→nevertheless/nonetheless高级词汇使情感强度更加具体（“尽管如此，但是...”）Howthingshavechanged!( 大转折，用于句首，替换But.)13.always→consistently/constantly/continually/eternally/perpetually14.enough→abundant/adequate/sufficient15.important→essential/vital/crucial/fundamental/indispensable16.now→nowadays/thesedays/recently17.really→undoubtedly/absolutely18.very→extremely/surprisingly//unusually/excessively/noticeably/exceedingly19.many→anumberof/plentyof/amultitudeof/many+n.+,ifnotmost,+...( 经典插入语)20.goodfriend→truefriend/closefriend/constantfriend/afriendindeed21.big→distinct清楚的、明显的（可以加到difference/change等词的前面）