2024-2025学年译林版八年级英语上学期考点 专题08 书面表达 （8篇）【考题猜想】

专题08书面表达1．（23-24八年级上·江苏淮安·期中）涟水县即将举办“涟水好少年(LianshuiExcellentStudent)”候选人推荐活动，请根据下方的信息表，为你的好朋友Amy写一则个人简介。外貌特征又高又苗条，短发，圆脸，总是面带微笑。品行乐于助人，……(举一例说明)比班上其他同学都努力：爱好1.痴迷于DIY，买了很多有关DIY方面的书籍，经常为家人制作水果沙拉;2.喜欢旅行，去年和父母去北京，参观了很多名胜古迹，他们在那玩的很开心。她的未来计划她长大后想……要求：1.内容涵盖所有要点，注意文章条理，语句通顺，可适当发挥;2.词数100词左右;已给出的文章开头和结尾，不计入总词数。AmyisaGrade8studentinourschool.Sheismygoodfriend.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WeallthinkthatAmywillmakeaLianshuiExcellentStudent.【答案】例文：    AmyisaGrade8studentinourschool.Sheismygoodfriend.Sheistallandthin.Shehasaroundfaceandshorthair.Shealwayssmile.Sheworksharderthananyotherstudentinherclass.Also,sheiswillingtohelpothersanytime.Forexample,Sheoftenhelpsmewithmyhomework.    SheiscrazyaboutDIY,sosheboughtmanybooksaboutDIY.Sheoftenusesfruitinseasontomakesalad.Shelovestravelling.Lastyear,sheandherparentstravelledtoBeijing.Theyvisitedlotsofplacesofinterest.Whensheisfree,shelikestalkingaboutinterestingbookswithherfriends.Shehopestotravelaroundtheworldwhenshegrowsup,becauseshewantstolearnmoreabouttheworld.      WeallthinkthatAmywillmakeaLianshuiExcellentStudent.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；12 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据表格中的提示信息介绍自己的朋友，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍朋友的外貌特征和品行；第二步，介绍朋友的爱好；第三步，介绍朋友的未来计划。[亮点词汇]①bewillingtodosth.乐意做某事②becrazyabout对……着迷[高分句型]①SheiscrazyaboutDIYandsheoftenusesfruitinseasontomakesalad.（and连接的并列句）②Shehopestotravelaroundtheworldwhenshegrowsup,becauseshewantstolearnmoreabouttheworld.（when引导的时间状语从句以及because引导的原因状语从句）2．（23-24八年级上·江苏扬州·期中）在九月份的澳洲交流生活动中，你认识了来自OfficerSecondarySchool的Alice同学。请以“MyAustralianfriend”为题，根据所给信息，介绍一下你的新朋友Alice.Looks眼睛……；鼻子……；发型……；身高……Personality诚实……；幽默……Schoollife最喜欢法语，坚持用法语记录日常生活；喜欢阅读……Hobbies对DIY感兴趣，上周给我做了……Futureplan长大想成为一名……，因为……(列举一至两个原因)。要求：1.词数100词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。2.文章应包含所给内容要点，可适当发挥。3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。MyAustralianfriendAliceismyAustralianfriend.12 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyAustralianfriendAliceismyAustralianfriend.Sheistallandslim.Shehasbigbrighteyesandlongstraighthair.Sheisverycute.Sheishonestandshehasagoodsenseofhumor.WhenIfeelboredorunhappy,Ialwaysgotoher.Amongallthesubjects,shelikesFrenchbest.ShekeepswritingherdailylifeinFrench.SheisinterestedinDIY.Shemadeabirthdaycardformelastweek.Shewantstobeateacherwhenshegrowsup.Sheiskind,helpfulandpatient.Shelikesworkingwithchildren.ThatisallaboutAliceandwouldyouliketomakefriendswithher?【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的澳大利亚朋友，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，根据表格内容详细介绍朋友的信息，包括她的外貌、个性、学校生活、爱好以及未来计划等；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①asenseofhumor幽默感②beinterestedin对……感兴趣③growup长大[高分句型]①Sheishonestandshehasagoodsenseofhumor.(and连接的并列句)②WhenIfeelboredorunhappy,Ialwaysgotoher.(when引导的时间状语从句)3．（23-24八年级上·江苏淮安·期中）请你以MyTriptoBeijing为题，写一篇100词左右的游记。内容包括：1.从盱眙乘坐大巴去南京，再坐高铁(thehigh-speedtrain)去北京；     2.北京秋天天气晴朗，非常凉爽，适宜旅游；3.参观了长城、故宫博物馆、颐和园等，给我同学买了些小礼物；4.访我的舅舅，在他家吃了北京烤鸭；      5.感受……12 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyTriptoBeiingAdayinOctober,ItookabusfromXuyitoNanjing,andthentookthehigh-speedtraintoBeiing.TheautumnweatherinBeijingissunnyandverycool,makingitsuitablefortourism.Ididalotofinterestingthingsthere.Onthefirstday,IvisitedtheGreatWall,thePalaceMuseum,theSummerPalace,andotherplaces.Thereweremanypeople.Onthesecondday,Iwentshoppingandboughtsomegiftsformyclassmates.Afterwards,IvisitedmyuncleandhadBeijingduckfordinnerathishome.Itwasverydelicious.Allinall,IlikeBeijingbecauseitiswonderful.Ilookforwardtovisitingitagain.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍“我”旅行的地点；第二步，具体阐述北京秋天天气晴朗，非常凉爽，适宜旅游；参观了长城、故宫博物馆、颐和园等，给我同学买了些小礼物；访我的舅舅，在他家吃了北京烤鸭。第三步，书写对旅行的感受以及对下次的期待。[亮点词汇]①tourism旅游业②theGreatWall长城③thePalaceMuseum故宫④theSummerPalace颐和园⑤Beijingduck北京烤鸭⑥lookforwardtodoingsth期盼做……[高分句型]12 ①TheautumnweatherinBeijingissunnyandverycool,makingitsuitablefortourism.(现在分词作状语)4．（23-24八年级上·江苏无锡·期中）假设你是英国交流生Daniel，已经在无锡阳光中学度过了一个月，现即将离开，上周五刚和阳光中学的学生进行了一次无锡一日游活动，请将这次活动写入日记，活动轨迹如下：AdayinWuxi注意：1.词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；2.文章须包括所有要点，并按照时间顺序描写，每个地方添加相应的活动内容，使全文连贯、通顺；3.最后至少用两句话表达对本次活动的感受。7thNov,2023                                                                        SunnyIhavebeeninSunshineSchoolforamonth.NowI’mleaving,solastFridaywevisitedsomeplacesofinterestinWuxi.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：7thNov,2023SunnyIhavebeeninSunshineSchoolforamonth.NowI’mleaving,solastFridaywevisitedsomeplacesofinterestinWuxi.Wemetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andtookabustoXihuiPark.Weclimbedthehillandtookaboattripthere.ThenwewalkedtoHuishanOldTowntolearnmoreaboutthehistoryandcultureofWuxi.Afterthat,werodesharedbikestothePlumGarden.Therewesawmanybeautifulsights.Then,wetooktheundergroundtoLivatShoppingMalltodosomeshopping.Intheend,ittookusaboutonehourtogetbacktoschoolbyunderground.Weenjoyedourselvesthatday!IhopeIcancometoWuxiagain.【详解】[总体分析]12 ①题材：本文是一篇日记；②时态：时态为一般过去时；③提示：根据提示内容介绍无锡一日游活动，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，根据题干中的内容详细介绍无锡一日游的活动细节；第三步，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①attheschoolgate在校门口②learnabout了解③intheend最后[高分句型]①Then,wetooktheundergroundtoLivatShoppingMalltodosomeshopping.(动词不定式作目的状语)②IhopeIcancometoWuxiagain.(省略that的宾语从句)5．（23-24八年级上·江苏南通·期中）你校BuddyClub正举办以“MyBestFriend”为题的英语征文活动，假如你是Peter，请根据下表所提示的要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的好友Tom。基本情况我班最高的男生，黑色短发，明亮微笑的眼睛。个人品质有幽默感，乐于助人。兴趣爱好痴迷于DIY……列举一例喜欢大熊猫，上周日去动物园拍了很多熊猫照片，放在主页上供人欣赏。保护熊猫的建议立即采取措施保护大熊猫，因为……建立更多的熊猫保护区。要求：1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数90左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。3.表达中请勿出现真实校名及姓名。MyBestFriendTomisoneofmybestfriends.He12 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyBestFriendTomisoneofmybestfriends.Heisthetallestboyinmyclass.Hehasshortblackhairandbrightsmilingeyes.Tomhasagoodsenseofhumour.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.HeiscrazyaboutDIY.Forexample,heputupalightbyhimselfinhisbedroom.Tomlikespandastoo.LastSundayhewenttothezooandtooklotsofphotosofpandas.Heputthemonhishomepageforeveryonetosee.Hethinksweshouldtakeactionrightawaytoprotectthembecausetheyarefacingseriousproblemsinthewild.Andhehopeswecanhelpbuildmorepandareserves.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；③提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，文章内容更加丰满。[写作步骤]第一步：介绍好朋友的基本情况；第二步：介绍好朋友的品质；第三步：介绍好朋友的兴趣爱好，以及保护熊猫的建议。[亮点词汇]①readytodo准备去②asenseofhumor幽默感③becrazyabout...痴迷于……[高分句型]①Heisthetallestboyinmyclass.（最高级）②Hethinksweshouldtakeactionrightawaytoprotectthembecausetheyarefacingseriousproblemsinthewild.（because引导的原因状语从句）6．（22-23八年级上·江苏常州·期中）阳光中学本学期开展的课外实践活动主题为“Adayoutwithmybestfriend”。假如你是Sandy，想和好朋友一起参加。请你写一封信向你的父母介绍同行的朋友，并说明旅游日的具体安排。介绍同行的朋友1.长相2.性格品质介绍当天旅行安排1.目的地？12 2.如何去？3.选择去那里的理由(自拟两点)注意事项：1.文章须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯，并作适当发挥；2.词数在90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearMomandDad,Thisterm,ourschoolholdsanewoutdooractivitycalled“Adayoutwithmybestfriend”.ItsoundsreallyinterestingandIwanttogowithmybestfriend.Here’smyplanforthatday.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.Sandy【答案】例文DearMomandDad,Thisterm,ourschoolholdsanewoutdooractivitycalled“Adayoutwithmybestfriend”.ItsoundsreallyinterestingandIwanttogowithmybestfriend.Here’smyplanforthatday.I’mgoingoutwithmybestfriendBetty.Sheisslimandhasshorthair.Sheisgenerous.Sheiswillingtosharethingswithherfriends.Sheisalsohelpfulandreadytohelppeopleanytime.WeplantotakeabustoMoonlightFarmonSaturday.We’regoingtohelpthefarmersgrowvegetablesandmilkthecows.Thesewillbeveryinterestingactivities.We’llenjoythenaturalbeautyinthecountryside.Atthesametime,wecanlearnsomeusefullifeskills.I’msurewe’llhaveagoodtimethere.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.Sandy【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：根据表格中的内容介绍自己的朋友以及当天旅行安排，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]12 第一步，引出话题；第二步，介绍同行的朋友；第三步，介绍当天旅行安排。[亮点词汇]①bewillingtodosth.乐意做某事②atthesametime同时③haveagoodtime玩得开心[高分句型]①We’regoingtohelpthefarmersgrowvegetablesandmilkthecows.(省略to的动词不定式作宾补)②I’msurewe’llhaveagoodtimethere.(宾语从句)7．（22-23八年级上·江苏无锡·期中）当今社会，人们的环保意识越来越强，DIY也越来越受欢迎。请你根据下表内容，用英语向你的朋友介绍一下DIY并提出你对做DIY的建议。短文应包含所有给出的信息，并适当发挥，词数90左右。含义意思是“自己做”，是一种积极的生活方式；优点1.有趣，能从中得到快乐；2.……（自拟一条）；缺点1.危险，有时如果粗心可能会伤着自己；2.要花费更多的时间；学习途径1.可以向老师、家长或朋友学习；2.……（自拟一条）；建议……（自拟一至两条）IwouldliketotellyousomethingaboutDIY.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:IwouldliketotellyousomethingaboutDIY.DIYstandsfor“do-it-yourself”.It’sanactivewayofliving.Manypeoplelikedoingthingsthemselvesbecauseitisinterestingandtheycangetfunfromit.Also,DIYcan12 helppeoplesavemoney.Theydon’tneedtospendmuchmoneybuyingthingstheycandoorpayingsomeonetodothem.DIYalsohassomeproblems.Itcanbedangerous.Sometimes,peoplemayhurtthemselvesiftheyarecareless.Besides,itusuallytakesmoretime.PeoplecanlearntodoDIYfromteachers,parentsorfriends.TheycanalsobuybooksaboutDIYandlearnbythemselves.TheycantakeacourseinDIY,too.Ithinkpeopleshouldbecarefulwhentheydothingsthemselves.Usingbrainandhandsmoreoftenisalsoagoodwaytohelpusbemorecreative.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接短文开头，说明DIY的含义；第二步，根据提示要点介绍DIY的优点和缺点，以及其学习途径，可列举具体的事例；第三步，提出你对做DIY的建议并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①standfor代表②spendmoneydoingsth花钱做某事[高分句型]①Manypeoplelikedoingthingsthemselvesbecauseitisinterestingandtheycangetfunfromit.（because引导的原因状语从句）②Sometimes,peoplemayhurtthemselvesiftheyarecareless.（if引导的条件状语从句）③Ithinkpeopleshouldbecarefulwhentheydothingsthemselves.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句）④Usingbrainandhandsmoreoftenisalsoagoodwaytohelpusbemorecreative.（动名词作主语）8．（22-23八年级上·江苏扬州·期中）阳光中学八年级二班的学生将在本周六去瘦西湖公园游玩。假如你是班长，请根据下面表格中所提供的信息，用英语写一个通知，将活动安排告知全班同学。活动时间本周六集合时间、地点上午7:30、学校大门口到达时间上午9:00出发、返回时间上午8:00、下午4:00交通工具大巴活动内容上午：划船，野餐，DIY水果沙拉；下午：观园，摄影拍照……要求1.爱护花草树木，  2.不乱扔垃圾，  3.……12 要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯;2.必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥;  3.词数：100词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数);4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。NoticeWearegoingtotakeatriptotheSlenderWestLakethisSunday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wewillbebackat4:00.Atlast,wishyouhaveagoodtrip!【答案】Onepossibleversion:NoticeWearegoingtotakeatriptotheSlenderWestLakethisSunday.Pleasegettotheschoolgateat7:30onSaturdaymorning.Wewillstatoffat8:00.Soweshouldbeontime.Itwilltakeusonehourtogettherebycoach.Onthatday,inthemorningwecangoboating.Afterthat,wecanhaveapicnicingroups.SomeofusareinterestedinDIY.Sowecantakesomefruittomakeafruitsalad.Intheafternoon,wecantravelaroundtheparkandenjoythebeautyofthenature.Duringthetrip,itismeaningfultotakesomephotos.Ifwearetired,itiscomfortableforustorideasharingbicycle.Inthepark,pleaseremembertobecarefulwiththegrass,flowersandsomesmalltrees.It’sourdutytoprotectthem.What’smore,don’tdroplittercarelessly.Allofusmustpayattentiontoourownsafetywhiletravelling.Wewillbebackat4:00.Atlast,wishyouhaveagoodtrip!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，一个通知；②时态：本文以一般现在时为主；③提示：本通知的要点已给出，注意写活动内容要衔接自然，下午的内容要补充完整。[写作步骤]第一步，活动的时间，集合地点和时间及出发的时间，交通工具；第二步，详细叙述活动的内容，及注意点；第三步，结束语，告知返回的时间，及对这次游玩的期望。[亮点词汇]12 beinterestedin对……感兴趣thebeautyofthenature自然的美[高分句型]Ifwearetired,itiscomfortableforustorideasharingbicycle.（条件状语从句）12