2024-2025学年外研版九年级英语上学期考点 专题06 书面表达（10篇） 【考题猜想】

专题06书面表达1．（23-24九年级上·天津西青·期中）前段时间同学们观看了“天宫课堂”之后，纷纷表示要向三位宇航员学习，成为一名有理想，有抱负的青少年。请你根据以下内容提示，以“Howtobeabetterteenager?”为题，在下周的主题班会上发言。内容提示：(1)努力学习，积极锻炼，养成健康的生活习惯；(2)尊敬长辈，乐于助人；(3)学会做家务；(4)热爱中国文化，培养各种兴趣爱好；(5)感想……要求：(1)词数：80～100个。(2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。参考词汇：积极锻炼activelyexercise尊敬respect乐于做bewillingto文化cultureHowtobeabetterteenager?Hello,everyone!TodayI’dliketosharemyideasabouthowtobeabetterteenager.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】Onepossibleversion:Howtoabetterteenager?Hello,everyone!TodayI’dliketosharemyideasabouthowtobeabetterteenager.Firstofall,weshouldstudyhardandactivelyexercisetodevelophealthylivinghabits.Astrongbodyandasharpmindarenecessaryforachievingourgoals.Secondly,wemustrespecttheelderlyandbewillingtohelpothers.Thirdly,learningtodohouseworkisimportant.Ithelpsusbecomemoreindependentandresponsible.Additionally,weshouldloveChinesecultureanddevelopvarioushobbies.Thiscanenrichourlivesandbroadenourhorizons.15 Althoughitisnoteasytobeabetterteenager,weshouldalwaysstrivetoimproveourselves.Onlyinthiswaycanwecontributetoastrongerandbettercountry.That’sall.Thankyou!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，根据所给内容提示具体描述如何成为一个更好的青少年；第二步，表达自己的感想。[亮点词汇]①develophealthylivinghabits养成健康的生活习惯②bewillingtodo乐意做③strivetodo尽力做[高分句型]①Thirdly,learningtodohouseworkisimportant.（动名词作主语）②Althoughitisnoteasytobeabetterteenager,weshouldalwaysstrivetoimproveourselves（让步状语从句）③Onlyinthiswaycanwecontributetoastrongerandbettercountry.（部分倒装）2．（23-24九年级上·天津北辰·期中）英语课上，老师要求学生就“如何与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论，请你根据以下你们小组讨论的结果，以“Howtogetonwellwithothers”为题，写一篇英语短文。(1)要尊重他人，学会理解他人；(2)要诚实，要礼貌待人；(3)当他人处于困境时，要主动帮助；(4)当你犯错误时要主动道歉；(5)你认为……参考词汇：尊重respect要求：(1)词数：80～100个。(2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。HowtogetonwellwithothersAsweknow,goodrelationship(关系)canmakeushappyandcomfortable.Buthowdowegetonwellwithothers?15 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtogetonwellwithothersAsweknow,goodrelationshipcanmakeushappyandcomfortable.Buthowdowegetonwellwithothers?First,weshouldrespectothersandtrytounderstandthem.Everyonehastheirownideasandfeelings,soweneedtobeconsiderate.Second,honestyisveryimportant.Weshouldalwaysbehonestandtreatotherspolitely.Third,weshouldoffertohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Helpingotherscannotonlymakethemfeelgood,butalsomakeusfeelhappy.Fourth,whenwemakemistakes,weshouldtaketheinitiativetoapologize.Thisshowsthatweareresponsibleandcanearnthetrustofothers.Inaddition,Ithinkthatbeingpatientandunderstandingiskeytogettingalongwithothers.Weshouldlearntolistentoothersandtrytoseethingsfromtheirperspective.Also,weshouldbewillingtocompromiseandfindsolutionsthatarebeneficialtoeveryone.Inaword,gettingonwellwithothersrequiresoureffortsandsincerity.Onlybytreatingotherswithkindnessandrespectcanwebuildgoodrelationshipsandliveahappylife.【详解】［总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。③提示：写作要点要明确，需要按照题目要求，围绕“如何与人相处”展开论述，包括尊重他人、理解他人、诚实礼貌、帮助他人、主动道歉等方面，并适当添加自己的观点，不要遗漏相关内容。［写作步骤］第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明良好的人际关系能让人快乐舒适，进而引出如何与人相处的话题。第二步，具体阐述与人相处的方法，如尊重他人、诚实礼貌、帮助有困难的人、犯错误时主动道歉等。第三步，书写结语，总结与人相处需要努力和真诚，只有善待他人才能建立良好关系，过上幸福生活。［亮点词汇］①offertohelp主动帮助②taketheinitiative主动③inaword总之［高分句型］①Weshouldoffertohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.（when引导的时间状语从句）15 ②Ithinkthatbeingpatientandunderstandingiskeytogettingalongwithothers.（that引导的宾语从句）3．（23-24九年级上·天津滨海新·期中）你邀请了几个外国朋友到合肥的博物馆来参观，请你用英语写一份入馆须知，汉语提示已经给出。要求：80词左右，要点提示必须写上，其它可适当发挥。注意：书写规范。入馆须知：欢迎来到我市博物馆参观，请遵守以下规则：1.开放时间：8:00-16:00：周一到周五；2.禁止在展馆内吸烟；禁止拍照；3.保持展馆内安静，禁止大声喧哗；不得触摸展品；4.保持展馆内清洁卫生；5.如果想了解展品的详细情况，请咨询工作人员；6.你的想法……exhibits展品             askthestaff询问职员Welcometoourcitymuseum_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyouhaveagoodtimeinthecitymuseum.【答案】例文Welcometoourcitymuseum.Herearesomerulesyouneedtofollow:First,theopeninghoursarefrom8:00to16:00fromMondaytoFriday.Second,smokingandtakingphotosareforbiddenintheexhibitionhalls.Third,keepquietinthemuseum.Don’tshoutormakeanynoise.Also,don’ttouchtheexhibits.Fourth,pleasekeepthemuseumcleanandtidy.Fifth,ifyouwanttoknowmoredetailsabouttheexhibits,youcanaskthestaffforhelp.Finally,Ihopeeveryonecanhaveagreattimeandlearnsomethingmeaningfulduringthevisit.15 Hopeyouhaveagoodtimeinthecitymuseum.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一份通知写作。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。③提示：写作要点要明确，需要按照要求列出了博物馆的开放时间、禁止事项、注意事项等，不要遗漏相关内容，并适当添加了希望大家能在参观中有所收获的内容。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开头欢迎大家来到博物馆参观，并说明需要遵守相关规则。第二步，具体阐述各项规则，包括开放时间、禁止吸烟和拍照、保持安静、不触摸展品、保持清洁、咨询工作人员等。第三步，书写结语，希望大家能在博物馆度过愉快的时光。[亮点词汇]①followtherules遵守规则②makenoise制造噪音[高分句型]①Ifyouwanttoknowmoredetailsabouttheexhibits,youcanaskthestaffforhelp.（if引导的条件状语从句）②Ihopeeveryonecanhaveagreattimeandlearnsomethingmeaningfulduringthevisit.（宾语从句）4．（23-24九年级上·天津河西·期中）假如你是Dave，昨天收到了好朋友Jim的邮件，他在邮件中向你倾诉了他的烦恼。请你根据邮件中提到的问题，用英语回一封邮件，给他提出一些建议。以下是Jim提出的烦恼：(l)父母不了解自己，偷看自己的日记；(2)自己喜欢踢足球，但花费太多时间导致成绩下降，感到非常苦恼；(3)晚上熬夜写作业，第二天上课非常困。要求：(l)词数：80~100个；       (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；       (3)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJim,I’mgladtohearfromyouandI’msorrytohearthatyouareintroublewithyourparentsandstudy.  ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodluck!Yours,Dave【答案】例文：DearJim,I’mgladtohearfromyouandI’msorrytohearthatyouareintroublewithyourparentsandstudy.Asyourbestfriend,I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.First,Ithinkyou’dbettertalkwithyourparentsaboutyourlifeandyourfeelings.Theywanttoknowmoreaboutyou,sotheyreadyourdiaries.Theydothisbecausetheycareaboutyou.Ifyoutalkwiththem,theywon’tworryaboutyou.Iknowthatyoulovetoplayfootball.However,don’tspendtoomuchtimeonit,oryou’llhavelessenergytostudy.Finally,whynotfinishyourhomeworkasearlyasyoucanandmakesuretogotobedbeforeten?Ihopethatmyadvicecanhelpyou.Goodluck!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：结合好友Jim邮件中提出的问题，给他恰当的建议，避免语法错误，确保行文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步；关于父母偷看自己的日记，介绍你的观点；第二步：因为踢足球，Jim成绩下降，为此提出你的建议；第三步：由于熬夜写作业，导致Jim第二天上课犯困，为此给出帮助Jim的建议；第四步：希望这些建议能给Jim带来帮助。[亮点词汇]①talkwith与……交谈②asearlyasyoucan  尽可能早……③makesure确保[高分句型]①Theydothisbecausetheycareaboutyou.(because引导原因状语从句)②Iknowthatyoulovetoplayfootball.(宾语从句)5．（23-24九年级上·天津红桥·期中）假如你是某中学学生李华，最近你在电视里看到英国作家、旅行者威廉·林赛保护长城的令人感动事迹报道。请根据以下提示，给你的英国好友Peter写一封信，与他分享你的感动。15 (1)11岁时，他第一次在地图上看见长城。(2)30岁时，他来到中国，登上长城。(3)1998年的一天他去长城拍照，看到垃圾，感到伤心。(4)他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾，现已坚持20多年。(5)你认为……要求：1.词数：80~100。2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。3.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。参考词汇：组织organize         垃圾litter       登上长城walkontheGreatWallDearPeter,Howareyou?IhavewatchedareportaboutWilliamLindesay,aBritishwriterandtraveller.HehasbeenprotectingandstudyingtheGreatWall.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHue【答案】例文DearPeter,Howareyou?IhavewatchedareportaboutWilliamLindesay,aBritishwriterandtraveller.HehasbeenprotectingandstudyingtheGreatWall.Attheageof11,hefirstsawtheGreatWallonamap.Attheageof30,hecametoChinaandclimbedtheGreatWall.Onedayin1998,hewenttotheGreatWalltotakephotos.Hefeltsadwhenhesawlittereverywhere.SohebegantoorganizevolunteerstocollectgarbageintheGreatWall.Nowhehasinsistedonitformorethan20years.IthinkthatonewhofailstolovetheGreatWallisnotahero.WeshouldtakeactionstolovetheGreatWall.Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHue【详解】[总体分析]15 ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍英国作家、旅行者威廉·林赛保护长城的举动和行为；第二步，表达自己的感想。[亮点词汇]①attheageof在……岁时②begintodosth开始做某事③insiston坚持[高分句型]①Hefeltsadwhenhesawlittereverywhere.（when引导的时间状语从句）②IthinkthatonewhofailstolovetheGreatWallisnotahero.（who引导的定语从句）6．（23-24九年级上·浙江温州·期中）随着时代的变迁，中国青少年的娱乐方式也逐渐发生着变化。某英语报社就此话题进行了征稿。请你参考下图，谈谈你对此变化的理解，并倡议青少年进行有益的娱乐活动，给报社投稿。InthepastNow参考词汇：滚铁环rollahoop注意：（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；（2）词数110左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Nowadays,teenagershavedifferentwaysforfunfromthepast.15 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：    Nowadays,teenagershavedifferentwaysforfunfromthepast.    Inthepast,theentertainmentmethodsforteenagerswereverysimple.Atthattime,theydidn’thaveaTV,computerorphone.Theyusuallygottogethertoplayallkindsofoutdoorgames.Themostpopulargamewasrollingahoop,whichisasingle-playergame.Althoughtherewasnomodernentertainment,theyallhadagoodtime.    Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,nowtheyhavemanymoderngames,suchascomputergamesandmobilegames.Althoughtheiractivitiesareenriched,theyoftenfeellonely.Somestudentshopethattraditionalgamescanreturntoschoolsothattheycanexperiencethejoyofpastlife.Anyway,Ihopethatteenagersshoulddomoreactivitiesthatarebeneficialtothemselves.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为看图作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：图片内容表达清楚，全文注意时态切换。[写作步骤]第一步，点题写出文章讨论话题；第二步，介绍过去青少年的娱乐方式及自己看法；第三步，描述现在青少年的娱乐方式，发出倡议。[亮点词汇]①single-playergame单人游戏②thedevelopmentof...……的发展③bebeneficialto有益于[高分句型]①Althoughtherewasnomodernentertainment,theyallhadagoodtime.（让步状语从句）②Somestudentshopethattraditionalgamescanreturntoschoolsothattheycanexperiencethejoyofpastlife.（宾语从句、结果状语从句）7．（23-24九年级上·浙江温州·期中）假设你是李华，请阅读从英国来温州的交换生Jenny的邮件，并根据邮件内容给予回复。DearLiHua,Longtimenosee!NowadaysIfeelsoworriedbecauseit’stoohardformetorememberChineseancientpoems.AndIhopetotakesometripsduringweekendsbutIdon’tknowwheretogo.Canyougivemesomeadvice?15 I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Jenny注意：1.邮件必须包含所提问题的回复，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3.词数：110词左右。DearJenny,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearJenny,    How’sitgoing?I’msorrytohearaboutyourproblems.Butdon’tworry.HereissomeadviceforyoutorememberChineseancientpoems.Firstofall,it’sagoodideatounderstandthepoemwell.Therearemanyvideosonlinewhichexplainthepoeminaninterestingway.YoucanalsoaskyourChineseteachersandclassmatesforhelp.Besides,readthepoemloudlyinthemorningandenjoyitsbeauty.Ibelieveyouwillfinditeasytorememberthepoem.    Asfortheplacestovisit,IsuggestyougotoJiangxinIsland/Wumastreet/YandangMountain.Youcannotonlyseethebeautifulviewsbutalsolearnaboutthelocalculture.Ihopemyadviceishelpful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”③提示：根据材料中的电子邮件内容可分析出，对方有两个问题需解决：背不会中国古诗和不知道去哪玩，应根据这两点提出自己的建议，不要遗漏。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山。安慰对方，跟对方说不用担心，会给他建议。15 第二步，针对不会背古诗和去哪里玩给出合适的建议，比如寻求老师的帮助，看视频等来辅助自己背古诗，必要时可适当展开描述。第三步，书写结语。希望自己的建议能被采纳，并期待对方回信。[亮点词汇]①ask...forhelp向……寻求帮助②localculture当地文化[高分句型]①Therearemanyvideosonlinewhichexplainthepoeminaninterestingway.（therebe句型）②Youcannotonlyseethebeautifulviewsbutalsolearnaboutthelocalculture.（“notonly...butalso...”句型）8．（22-23九年级上·浙江温州·期中）学校校报“青春进行时”栏目很受同学们欢迎，他们可以来信诉说学业和校园生活中的困惑。假设你是该报编辑李华，请你从最近收到的这两封信中，选择一位同学的困惑回复，给予合理的建议和理由。注意：1.110词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数。2.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名。IamnotsurewhetherIshouldtakepartintheschoolpianocompetitionthisyear.IpractisethepianoeverydayandIlikeit.Ihaveenteredthecompetitionseveraltimes.However,Ineverwonaprize.IwonderifIshouldjustgiveup.—JackMyfriendPeterfindsmathsverydifficult.Hewantsmetolethimcopymyhomework.Iwanttorefusebecauseitisnotright,butIdon’twantPetertogetintotroublewithhisparents.TheywereangrywithPeterfornotfinishinghismathhomework.—KateDearI’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJack,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.AsfarasIknow,youarenotsurewhetheryoushouldtakepartinpiano15 competition.Herearesomeadviceofmine.Inmyopinion,Ithinkyoushouldtakepartinthepianocompetition.Forthecompetition,winningtheprizeisnottheimportant,buttoimproveyourselfthroughthecompetitionismoreimportant.Atthesametime,youcanmakemorenewfriendswhoaretalentedinpiano,andyoualsocantalkaboutmoreskillsaboutthepianowhichwillbemorehelpfulforyoutoimproveyourabilityinthefuture.Ihopemyadvicewillbeuseful.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点未给出，结合书信内容写出对应建议，考生应注意补充要点，使得语法正确，句子通顺。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写信目的，给Jack一些建议。第二步，详细写明建议内容和理由。第三步，书信结尾，希望建议和理由能够给Jack提供帮助。[亮点词汇]①betalentedin对……有天赋②takepartin参加[高分句型]①Forthecompetition,winningtheprizeisnottheimportant.（动名词作主语）②Atthesametime,youcanmakemorenewfriendwhoaretalentedinpiano.（who引导的定语从句）9．（22-23九年级上·浙江温州·期中）作为一名九年级的学生，李华有一些烦恼，例如上英语课听不懂，爱玩游戏……假如你是英语报社编辑Diana，请结合你自己的想法和图片提示给他写一封信，帮助他走出困境。注意：1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；2.词数：约110词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearLiHua,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblems.15 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Diana【答案】例文DearLiHua,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblems.Iunderstandyourfeelings.Youareworriedbecausecan’tunderstandtheteacherinEnglishclassandlovetoplaygames.Herearemysuggestions.Firstofall,youshouldthinkaboutwhyyoucan’tunderstandtheteacher.YoucantalktoyourEnglishteachertofindoutyourproblems.Thenyoushouldaskyourteacherforsomegoodlearningmethods.Asforgames,youcanplayappropriately.Butyoushouldn’tspendtoomuchtimeplayinggames.Ifyouspendmostofyourtimeongames,yourstudywillbeaffected.Besides,spendingtoomuchtimelookingatyourphoneisbadforyoureyes.Ihopemysuggestionswillhelpyou.Lookforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours,Diana【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；③提示：要求结合自己的想法和图片提示给李华写一封信，帮助他走出英语学习的困境。可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，表示已听说李华的困境；第二步，给李华提出建议；第三步，书写结语。希望提出的建议对李华有帮助。[亮点词汇]①Firstofall首先②talktosb.与某人交谈③findout找出15 ④spendtime(in)doingsth.花时间做某事[高分句型]①Firstofall,youshouldthinkaboutwhyyoucan’tunderstandtheteacher.（宾语从句）②Ifyouspendmostofyourtimeongames,yourstudywillbeaffected.（if引导的条件状语从句）10．（22-23九年级上·浙江温州·期中）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Sam想了解中国学生的课外活动，请根据下图提示，介绍两到三种你喜欢的课外活动，并谈谈喜欢他们的原因以及给你所带来的好处。  要求：①结合上图，可适当拓展；②文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；③文本长度：110词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：experiment,enrichknowledge,makemestrongerDearSam,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Wehavemanykindsofafter-schoolactivities,suchas___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours                                                                        LiHua【答案】范文：DearSam,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Wehavemanykindsofafter-schoolactivities,suchasplayingbasketball,doingscienceexperiments,readingorpainting.Weareencouragedtoparticipateinthem,inwhichourinterestandtalentarefullydeveloped.EverytimewhenIamfree,Ienjoymyselfbytakingpartinallkindsofafter-classactivities.Amongalltheseafter-schoolactivities,whatappealtomemostisplayingbasketballandreading.ThereasonwhyIlikeplayingbasketballisthatIcanbestrongerandstrongerwhendoingsports.Icannotonlybuildupmybodybutalsogainaperfectplatformandrichchoicesformyfuturedevelopment.Besides,Icanmakesomenewfriends.15 Readingisbeneficialtoallpeople,whichcanenrichknowledgeandbroadenpeople’shorizon.IalsofinditagreathelptomyEnglishstudy.IcanlearnalotofnewwordsfromtheEnglishnovelsthatIread.     Inshort,Ireallyenjoytheafter-schoolactivities.Couldyoutellmeyourschoolactivities?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursLiHua【详解】【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”图片的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。根据所给图片提示来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“打篮球”和“阅读”两个方面重点介绍喜欢课外活动的原因；第三步，书写结语。询问对方喜爱的课外活动。【亮点词汇】①participatein参加②appealto吸引③platform平台④beneficial有好处的【高分句型】①Weareencouragedtoparticipateinthem,inwhichourinterestandtalentarefullydeveloped.(inwhich引导的非限制性定语从句)②ThereasonwhyIlikeplayingbasketballisthatIcanbestrongerandstrongerwhendoingsports.(why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句)15