2024-2025学年外研版八年级英语上期考点 专题06 书面表达（11篇） 【考题猜想】

专题06书面表达1．（23-24八年级上·天津西青·期中）假如你是李华，21世纪英文报正在开展以“HowtolearnEnglish”为题的征文活动，请你根据下列提示内容写一篇英语短文介绍一下你的英语学习方法。要求：（1）中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校；（3）不少于80词。内容提示：（1）经常听英文广播、看英文电影；（Englishradioprograms）（2）英语课上要讲英语，课后也要尽可能多地讲英语；（asmuchaspossible）（3）学唱英文歌曲；（4）结交一个英国或美国的笔友，经常用英语写信。（penfriend）HowtolearnEnglishTherearemanywaystolearnEnglishwell.Nowletmetellyou________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HowtolearnEnglishTherearemanywaystolearnEnglishwell.Nowletmetellyousomeofmymethods.First,IoftenlistentoEnglishradioprogramsandwatchEnglishmovies.Thishelpsmeimprovemylisteningskills.Second,ItrytospeakEnglishasmuchaspossiblebothinandoutofclass.Thispracticeisessentialforimprovingmyspeakingskills.Third,IenjoylearningEnglishsongs,whichnotonlymakeslearningfunbutalsohelpswithpronunciationandvocabulary.Lastly,IhaveapenfriendfromtheUK,andweoftenwriteletterstoeachotherinEnglish.Thishelpsmeimprovemywritingskillsandlearnmoreaboutdifferentcultures.Byfollowingthesemethods,IbelieveanyonecanlearnEnglishwell.【详解】总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；16 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示；以“HowtolearnEnglish”为主题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，以“怎样学好英语”引出主题并提出建议；第二步，逐条阐述建议，从听英文广播和看英文电影、学唱英文歌曲、多讲英语、多读英文读物和交笔友等方面给出建议；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①listento听②asmuchaspossible尽可能多地③isessentialfor对……来说是必不可少的④notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……[高分句型]①IenjoylearningEnglishsongs,whichnotonlymakeslearningfunbutalsohelpswithpronunciationandvocabulary.(which引导的定语从句)②Byfollowingthesemethods,IbelieveanyonecanlearnEnglishwell.(宾语从句)2．（23-24八年级上·北京大兴·期中）根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。来自英国的John一直期待能够到北京旅行，以更好地了解这座城市，同时亲身体验当地的文化。假设你是李华，请你通过书信的形式，向他描述北京的城市概况，介绍来北京旅行的最佳时间及在北京能够去哪里、做什么。提示词语：old,beautiful,autumn.Beijingopera,duck,citywalk提示问题：1.WhatisBeijinglike?2.WhatisthebesttimetovisitBeijing?3.WhatcanavisitordoinBeijing?DearJohn,IamgladtoknowthatyouwouldliketocomeandvisitBeijing._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     Yours,LiHua16 【答案】例文DearJohn,IamgladtoknowthatyouwouldliketocomeandvisitBeijing.IthinkBeijing,thecapitalofChinaisagoodplacetovisit.Itisacitywithalonghistory.It’salsooneofthebiggestcitiesinChina.PeopleinBeijingarekindandfriendly.Theyarealwaysgladtohelpothers.Theweatherisnottoohotinautumn.It’sagoodseasonforyoutovisitBeijing.Therearemanyplacesofinterest,suchastheGreatWall,theSummerPalaceandtheForbiddenCity.Asforfood,BeijingRoastDuckisthemostfamousanditisverydelicious.IfyougotoBeijing,don’tmissit.        IbelieveifyougotoBeijing,youwillhaveagreatvacation.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山欢迎对方来北京；第二步，具体介绍北京的情况；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①thecapitalofChina中国的首都②withalonghistory有着悠久的历史③suchas例如④Asfor至于[高分句型]①IthinkBeijing,thecapitalofChinaisagoodplacetovisit.(动词不定式作后置定语)②IfyougotoBeijing,don’tmissit.(if引导条件状语从句)3．（23-24八年级上·天津滨海新·期中）假设你是小华，你的笔友托尼本周末将要来你的家乡天津游玩。请根据下列提示，写一封邮件，简要介绍天津，并为他的行程提出一些建议。简介：1.天津位于中国北部，渤海沿岸；2.现在比以前更大、更繁忙了，天津的人口也比很多城市的人口要多；建议：3.乘船游海河，费用是80元，是最舒适的方式；4.去茶馆听相声，了解天津传统文化。16 要求：1.词数60~80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.包含上述所有要点，行文连贯，可适当发挥。参考词汇：相声crosstalk    海河HaiheRiver    渤海BohaiSea    文化cultureDearTony,I’mhappytohearthatyouwillcometoTianjinthisweekend.Iwillintroducemyhometowntoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,XiaoHua【答案】例文DearTony,I’mhappytohearthatyouwillcometoTianjinthisweekend.Iwillintroducemyhometowntoyou.TianjinislocatedinnorthernChina,alongtheBohaiSea.Tianjinisnowbiggerandbusierthanever.ThepopulationofTianjinisevenbiggerthanmanyothercities.Afteryoucome,wecantakeaboattriptoHaiheRiver.Thecostis80yuan.Travelingbyboatisthemostcomfortableway.What’smore,wecangototheteahousetolistentocrosstalkandlearnmoreaboutthetraditionalcultureofTianjin.I’msureyou’llhaveagoodtimehereandloveTianjintoo.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,XiaoHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“简介”中天津的特征和去天津游玩的行程的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，引出即将介绍天津的话题；第二步，具体阐述天津的特征以及提出几个游玩天津的建议；16 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望托尼来到天津”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①belocatedin位于②thepopulationof……的人口③what’smore还有④haveagoodtime玩得开心[高分句型]①I’mhappytohearthatyouwillcometoTianjinthisweekend.(that引导的宾语从句)②What’smore,wecangototheteahousetolistentocrosstalkandlearnmoreaboutthetraditionalcultureofTianjin.(and接两个并列句)4．（23-24八年级上·山东德州·期中）为纪念世界动物日，我校广播站将举办以ProtectingAnimals为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，准备一篇演讲稿。提示：TheirsituationindangerWhyanimalsareindangerlosehomekillthemforfurormeatWhyweprotectanimalsourfriendsprotectthemisprotectingourselvesHowtoprotectthemDon’tcutdowntheforest.Don’tkillorbuyanimals.要求：1.短文必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；3.文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；4.词数：80~100词左右。Boysandgirls,Goodmorning!16 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Boysandgirls,Goodmorning!Animalsareourfriendsandweshouldtreatthemkindly.However,manyanimalsareindangerbecauseofhuman’sactivities.Peoplecutdowntreesandforests,solotsofanimalslosehome.Moreover,somehunterskillanimalsfortheirfurormeattomakemoney.Inmyopinion,it’sourdutytoprotectthem.Becauseanimalsareourfriendsandprotectingthemisprotectingourselves.First,wemuststopkillingandcuttingdowntheforest.Second,weshouldn’tkillorbuyanimals.Hopeourworldbetterandbetter.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍动物的处境并给出建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍动物的处境；第二步，表明自己的观点；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①becauseof因为②Inmyopinion在我看来③cutdown砍倒④betterandbetter越来越好[高分句型]①Animalsareourfriendsandweshouldtreatthemkindly.（并列句）②Becauseanimalsareourfriendsandprotectingthemisprotectingourselves.（原因状语从句）5．（23-24八年级上·浙江宁波·期中）上星期，Alice对自己所在城市的超市、影院和学校做了一项调查。请根据下面表格结果，写一份调查报告。注意：1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.可作适当发挥；3.词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。16 ThebestnamereasonsupermarketSanjiangSupermarketclosestto,cheap,bestqualitymovietheaterWandaCinemamostcomfortableseats,biggestscreen,popularschoolNo.1MiddleSchoolbeautiful,bestteachers,friendlytoLastweek,Alicemadeasurveyaboutsupermarkets,movietheatersandschoolsinhercity.Herearetheresults._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Shehopesthisreportcanhelppeoplemakegooddecisions.【答案】例文Lastweek,Alicemadeasurveyaboutsupermarkets,movietheatersandschoolsinhercity.Herearetheresults.Ofallthesupermarkets,shethinksSanjiangSupermarketisthebest.It’stheclosesttoherhome.Allthethingsthereareverycheap.Andtheyhavethebestquality,too.Asformovietheaters,WandaCinemaisthebest.Ithasthebiggestscreenandthemostcomfortableseats.Soitisquitepopularwithyoungpeople.ThebestschoolinhercityisNo.1MiddleSchool.Itisverybeautiful.What’smore,ithasthebestteachers.Theyarefriendlytothestudents.Shehopesthisreportcanhelppeoplemakegooddecisions.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据表格中的内容介绍Alice对自己所在城市的超市、影院和学校做了一项调查的结果，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，根据表格内容介绍城市里最好的超市、影院和学校以及原因；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]16 ①asfor至于②bepopularwithsb.受某人的欢迎③befriendlyto对某人友好[高分句型]Ofallthesupermarkets,shethinksSanjiangSupermarketisthebest.(省略that的宾语从句)6．（23-24八年级上·天津和平·期中）假如你是张华，你的美国笔友Tony对中文学习产生了浓厚的兴趣并发了一封电子邮件向你请教如何学好中文。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.看中文电影、听中文歌曲、读中文杂志、报刊等，猜测生词意思。2.尽可能地多说、不要害怕犯错误。3.把汉字写在卡片上，利用卡片记忆汉字等。注意：1.词数：80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：Chinesecharacters汉字  magazine杂志DearTony,Ireceivedyouremailyesterday.Intheemail,youaskedmehowtoimproveyourChinese.NowI’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thesearemysuggestions.Ihopetheyareusefultoyou.Yours,ZhangHua【答案】例文DearTony,Ireceivedyouremailyesterday.Intheemail,youaskedmehowtoimproveyourChinese.NowI’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.WatchingChinesefilmsandlisteningtoChinesesongsaregreatwaystolearnChinese.It’salsoagoodideatoreadChinesenewspapersandmagazines.Justguessthemeaningofthenewwordswhilelisteningorreading.Also,16 speakChineseasmuchasyoucananddon’tbeafraidtomakemistakes.WhynotwritefourorfiveChinesecharactersonacardandputitintoyourpocket?Readandrememberthemwhenyouarefree.IbelieveyouwilllearnChinesewell.Thesearemysuggestions.Ihopetheyareusefultoyou.Yours,ZhangHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作的内容要点“有关于学好中文的建议”已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作目的；第二步，根据要点给出学好中文的建议；第三步，表达“希望建议有用”。[亮点词汇]①asmuchasyoucan尽你所能②beafraidtodosth.害怕做某事③makemistakes犯错[高分句型]①It’salsoagoodideatoreadChinesenewspapersandmagazines.（it作形式主语）②Readandrememberthemwhenyouarefree.（when引导的时间状语从句）7．（23-24八年级上·天津河东·期中）   假如你叫李磊，你的朋友Tom打算从上海来你所在的城市天津旅游。请你根据以下要点，给Tom写一封电子邮件。(1)天津位于中国东部，以海河而闻名，有大约700年的历史，有许多名胜古迹；(2)现在，天津比以前更大、更繁华，有1600多万人口；(3)每年，许多游客来到天津。来这儿的旅行方式多样化，乘飞机是最昂贵的交通方式，但也是最快的。要提前买好票；(4)在天津，可以乘船游览海河；品尝美味食物；在茶馆可以观看戏剧，看魔术表演，喝茶聊天；(5)我希望……提示词：位于lie；名胜古迹placesofinterest；乘船游览海河takeaboattouronHaiheRiver；品尝taste；美味delicious要求：(1)紧扣主题，要点齐全，语法正确，注意时态和人称，书写规范，可适当发挥。16 (2)词数：80—100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearTom,I’mgladtohearthatyou’llcometoTianjin.Tianjinlies____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiLei【答案】例文:DearTom,     I’mgladtohearthatyou’llcometoTianjin.TianjinliesintheeastofChina.Itisabout700yearsold.ItisfamousfortheHaiheRiver.IfyoucometoTianjin,youcanseemanyplacesofinterest.WiththecontinuousdevelopmentofTianjin,itisbiggerandbusierthanbefore.NowTianjinhasapopulationofover16million.     Everyyear,plentyoftouristswhoarefromallovertheworldcomehere.YouhavemanywaystocometoTianjin.Planeisthemostexpensiveway,butitisalsothefastest.Bookyourticketaheadbeforeyoutravel.     YoucantakeaboattouronHaiheRiver.Youcanalsotasteallkindsofdeliciousfood.Intheteahouse,youcanwatchanopera,enjoymagicshows,drinkteaandchat.      Ihopeyou’llenjoyyourselfhere.Ican’twaittoseeyou!Yours,LiLei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：根据所给的写作要点介绍天津这座城市，可适当加入细节，保持行文连贯，注意不要遗漏要点，时态和人称要正确，避免语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步：总体介绍一下天津（包括地理位置，历史，名胜古迹等）；第二步：介绍天津现在的情况；第三步：介绍每年天津的游客数量和来天津最快的交通方式；第四步：希望Tom能在天津玩得开心。[亮点词汇]①befamousfor以……而闻名16 ②hasapopulation人口为……③plentyof大量[高分句型]①IfyoucometoTianjin,youcanseemanyplacesofinterest.(if引导条件状语从句)②Everyyear,plentyoftouristswhoarefromallovertheworldcomehere.(who引导限制性定语从句)8．（23-24八年级上·天津红桥·期中）假如你是李华，来自天津。你新交的加拿大笔友Judy发来一封电子邮件，想了解你家乡的情况。请你根据提示内容，回复她的邮件，向她介绍你的家乡天津。(1)天津位于渤海沿岸，有大约14百万的人口；(2)是一些著名大学的所在地；  (3)有许多旅游景点，比如天津之眼，瓷房子，海河；(4)因传统美食和相声表演而闻名。要求：(1)语句通顺、意思连贯，语法正确。(2)包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；(3)60~80词(电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。词汇：天津之眼  theTientsinEye   瓷房子ChinaHouse  相声表演  crosstalkshows天津古文化街TianjinAncientCulturalStreet  狗不理包子GoubulisteamedstuffedbunsIt’sgoodtohearfromyou.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyhometownTianjin,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Howdoyoulikemyhometown?Wouldyouliketovisitit?Yours,LiHua【答案】例文It’sgoodtohearfromyou.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyhometownTianjin.TianjinislocatedonthecoastofBohaiSea.Ithasapopulationofabout14million.TherearesomefamousuniversitiesinTianjin.Therearealsomanytouristattractionsinmyhometown,suchastheTientsinEye,ChinaHouseandHaiRiver.Thefoodinmyhometownisdeliciousandthecrosstalkshowsarewonderful.ItisespeciallyfamousforGoubulisteamedstuffedbuns.Howdoyoulikemyhometown?Wouldyouliketovisitit?Yours,LiHua16 【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意介绍清楚家乡的位置、旅游胜地、特色等，不要遗漏。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山。表明自己来自哪里。第二步，具体介绍自己家乡的情况。介绍天津的位置人口、有著名大学、有什么著名的旅游景点、有哪些传统美食和文化，必要时可适当展开描述，让对方了解自己的家乡。第三步，书写结语。询问对方是否了解了自己的家乡，并提出邀请。[亮点词汇]①islocatedon坐落于②apopulationof……人口③befamousfor以……而闻名[高分句型]①TherearesomefamousuniversitiesinTianjin.（Therebe句型）②Ithasapopulationofabout14million.（“Ithasapopulationof...”句型）9．（22-23八年级上·广西柳州·期中）动物是人类的朋友，我们应该善待动物。请根据下表中的提示“Let’shelpanimals”为题写一篇70词左右的英语短文，呼吁人们热爱动物，保护动物。开头已给出，但不计入字数。动物数量减少的原因1.人们捕杀（kill）动物，为了得到它们的肉或皮毛（fur）；2.人们乱砍滥伐（cutdown）树木，夺走（takeaway）了它们赖以生存的家园。保护动物的措施和建议1.禁止捕杀动物；2.禁止乱砍滥伐树木：3.……Let’shelpanimalsAnimalsareourfriends.Weshouldbekindtothem.16 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】写作范文：Animalsareourfriends.Weshouldbekindtothem.Butnowpeoplekillmanyofthemfortheirmeatorfur.Peoplealsocutdownmanytreesandtakeawaytheirhomes.Manyanimalshavenoplacetolivein,sotheyarebecomingfewerandfewer.Itisnotrighttokillanimals.Peopleshouldstopkillinganimalsandcuttingdowntrees.Ourgovernmentshouldplantmoreandmoretrees.Wealsoneedtoworkhardtosetupthenaturepark.  Inaword,let’sfindoutwhatelsewecandotosaveasmanyanimalsaspossible.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍动物数量减少的原因第二步，提出保护动物的建议；第三步，呼吁大家行动起来保护动物。[亮点词汇]①cutdown砍倒②takeaway带走③setup建立[高分句型]①Manyanimalshavenoplacetolivein,sotheyarebecomingfewerandfewer.（比较级+and+比较级）②Inaword,let’sfindoutwhatelsewecandotosaveasmanyanimalsaspossible.（宾语从句）10．（22-23八年级上·山东德州·期中）假如你是李华。今年暑假和父母去了不同的地方旅游。请根据你的旅行经历及内容提示，以“MyGreatTrips”为题，写一篇80词以上的英语短文，介绍一下你的旅行情况。开头已给出，不计入总词数。要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，条理清晰，书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名：3.80词以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。WhoMyparentsandI16 WhereShanghaiSichuanBeijingHowWhatvisittheOrientalPearlTVTower(东方明珠)anddosomeshoppinggotothewildlifepark(野生动物园)andwatchthepandasclimbtheGreatWallandlistentothePekingOperaThefeelingsStrongbeproudofFewprotectmanypeoplebecomeinterestedinloveourmotherlandMyGreatTripsHello,I’mLiHua.ThissummermyparentsandIwenttoseveralplaces.Itwasreallyagreattravelexperience.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Hello,I’mLiHua.ThissummermyparentsandIwenttoseveralplaces.Itwasreallyagreattravelexperience.  First,wetookthetraintoShanghai.WevisitedtheOrientalPearlTVToweranddidsomeshopping.WhenIsawthegreatbuilding,Iwassoproudofourmotherland.Ithinkourmotherlandisbecomingstrongerandstronger.  ThenwewenttoSichuanbyplane.Theplanewasveryfastbutalittleexpensive.Wewentthereinordertogotothewildlifeparkandwatchthepandas.Iwasveryexcitedbecausethepandawasoneofmyfavoriteanimals.Buttheanimalsareindangernow.Theyarebecomingfewerandfewer.Sowemustprotectthem.  Onthelasttrip,myfatherdrovemyfamilytoBeijingtoclimbtheGreatWallandlistentothePekingOpera.ChinaisfamousfortheGreatWallandthePekingOpera.AndmoreandmorepeopleintheworldareinterestedinthePekingOpera.ThissummerIhadawonderfultime.ThroughtravelingIloveourmotherlandmore.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；16 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏表格中给出的内容，并适当增加细节。[写作步骤]①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我的旅行情况”来引出下文中对三个城市的介绍；②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“上海、四川和北京”三个城市入手，重点介绍在这三个城市的旅行情况；③第三步，书写结语。表达对祖国的热爱。[亮点词汇]①beproudof为……而骄傲②inorderto为了③befamousfor因……而著名④beinterestedin对……感兴趣[高分句型]①WhenIsawthegreatbuilding,Iwassoproudofourmotherland.（when引导时间状语从句）②Iwasveryexcitedbecausethepandawasoneofmyfavoriteanimals.（because引导原因状语从句）11．（22-23八年级上·山东德州·期中）如今骑自行车的人越来越多，请以“Ridingbikesbecomesmoreandmorepopular”为题写一篇短文，短文内容必须包括以下要点：1.自行车比其他的交通工具更方便(moreconvenient)；2.骑自行车是一种锻炼身体的好方式；3.骑自行车可以节约能源(energy)，利于环保(protecttheenvironment)；4.……要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；3.80—100词。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文RidingbikesbecomesmoreandmorepopularMoreandmorepeoplechooseridebikestogotoworkorschool.Theydon’twanttodrivetheircarsbecause16 therearemanyproblems.Forexample,thereisnotmuchroomstoparkcars.Weknowitisveryconvenientforpeopletogoanywhereonbikes.Anditneedslessspacetopark.What’smore,ridingbikescanalsokeepourbodieshealthy,becauseit’sagoodwaytoexercise.Ifmorepeopleridebikes,itcansavemoreenergyanditdoesn’tcauseanyairpollution.Itisgoodfortheenvironment.That’swhyridingbikesbecomesmoreandmorepopular.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，用“越来越多的人选择骑自行车去工作或学校”引出本文主题；第二步，介绍骑自行车的好处。[亮点词汇]①forexample例如②what’smore并且③begoodfor对……有好处[高分句型]①Theydon’twanttodrivetheircarsbecausetherearemanyproblems.（because引导原因状语从句）②Ifmorepeopleridebikes,itcansavemoreenergyanditdoesn’tcauseanyairpollution.（if引导条件状语从句）16