15 经历与感受-2024年中考英语热点话题写作

2024年中考英语热点话题写作-经历与感受1．（2024上·安徽黄山·九年级统考期末）某中学生英文网站本期论坛发起的讨论话题是“面对一些抉择时，你是听从父母的安排还是自己做决定？”。假设你是李华，请你根据自己做决定的一次经历写一篇英语短文，参与讨论。内容包括：1.你自己做决定的一次经历；2.你父母的态度；3.你想对父母说的话。要求：1.紧扣主题，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。Hello,I’mLiHua.IwassohappythatIwasallowedtomakemyowndecisionthatday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2024上·山西吕梁·九年级统考期末）回首过往，在十几年的人生中，你学习、运动、旅游、交友、玩耍……其中你有收获、有遗憾，会欣喜、会难过……请结合发生在你身上的一个事例，以“LearnfromYesterday”为题写一篇作文，并谈谈你从中得到的启示。要求：（1）书写工整，结构合理；（2）短文不少于80词；（3）不得使用真实姓名、校名。LearnfromYesterday ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2024上·广西贺州·九年级统考期末）转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“MyChanges”为题，根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。要求：1.写出你至少三个方面的变化，从外貌、性格、学科的进步等，用上usedto结构；2.紧扣作文题目，语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；3.词数80词左右。开头已给，不计入总词数。MyChangesI’minGrade9andIhavechangedalot.First,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2024上·辽宁抚顺·九年级统考期末）人在成长的道路上一定会有许多改变。请以“_________has(have)changedme”为题，写写你的改变。要求： 1.题目的横线上所填词数不限；2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等；3.词数80~100。_________has(have)changedme____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2024上·河南信阳·九年级统考期末）回首两年多的初中时光，你一定取得了不少的进步。请根据以下提示，以“TheProgressI’veMade”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你在生活和学习方面取得的进步，以及对未来的展望。1.要求：(1)文中必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；(3)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；(4)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。2.提示词：makefriends,housework,developlearninghabits...TheProgressI’veMadeLookingbackonthepasttwoyears,Ihavemadegreatprogress    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2024上·云南昆明·九年级校考期末）成长有时是一个过程，而有时只在一瞬间。那一刻你从幼稚走向成熟，从懵懂走向深刻，在初中生活中一定有那样一刻让你体会到了自己的成长。简述让你成长的一件事，说说你从中收获了哪些成长的经验。请以“TheMomentMadeMeGrowUp”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语意通顺，书写规范。2.不得使用真实姓名和学校，如需使用名字，请用Mike,Gina等英文名字，校名统一使用GuangmingMiddleSchool。3.词数不少于60。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2024上·江苏南通·九年级统考期末）新年伊始，学校英语社团将举行以“Lookbackonthepast,Hopeforthefuture”为主题的英语征文大赛。请根据下图提示，就本学期一次难忘的经历谈谈收获及感受，并写写新学期的希望和打算。注意： 1.词数在90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Lookbackonthepast,HopeforthefutureThistermisnearlyover.Asthesayinggoes“Nopain,nogain”.Duringthisterm,Iexperiencedalot.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2024上·云南昆明·九年级校考期末）你是否曾在遇到困难时，得到别人的帮助？你是否曾有过温暖内心的感人经历？请以“WarmthinMyHeart”为题，用英语写一篇短文要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；3.文中不得使用真实的人名、校名，否则以零分计。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2024上·山东潍坊·九年级统考期末）在现实生活中，很多事情会意想不到，充满了未知和不确定性。计划好去短途旅行，结果突然下起大雨；和朋友约好去图书馆，结果朋友突然感冒发烧；考试时以为自己做完了试卷，交卷时才发现还有几道题…… 新华中学网站(https://www.xhzxxshenghui.com/)发布了以“Lifeisfullofunexpected!”为主题的英语分享交流活动，请你结合具体事例与同学们分享你在这方面的体会，用英语写一篇短文投稿于此网站。内容提示：(1)Whatunexpectedthingsdidyoumeet?(2)Howdidyoudealwithit?(3)Whatdidyouthinkofit?要求：1.语句通顺连贯，可适当发挥；2.100词左右；3.文章不得出现真实学校、班级与姓名。Lifeisfullofunexpected____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2024上·河南平顶山·九年级统考期末）眼中有美好，生活处处是风景。美是四季的变换，是家乡的一角，是朋友的话语，是陌生人的善举，是温馨的画面……。请以“Thebeautyinmyeyes”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。1.要点：1)你认为的美是什么；2)具体描述这种美；3)你为什么认为它很美。2.要求：1)文中不能出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；2)词数100左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：1．例文Hello,I’mLiHua.IwassohappythatIwasallowedtomakemyowndecisionthatday.IstillrememberwhenIstartedjuniorhighschool,myparentswantedmetotakeafter-schoolclassesonweekends.ButIwantedtoplayfootballbecauseIlikeditverymuch.Wehaddifferentopinions,butintheend,myparentsagreedtoletmeplayfootball.Inordertobalancemyschoolworkandplayfootball,Imadeplansandfollowedthemstrictly.Asaresult,IgotgoodscoresonmyexamsandIamdevelopingwellinP.E.I’dliketothankmyparentsfortrustingme.AndIwanttosaysomethingtothem.Asateenager,Ineedmorechancestolearntomanagemyownlife.Believeinme,andthenIwillgraduallybecomemoreandmoreindependent.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，对被允许自己做决定感到高兴；第二步，介绍自己做决定的经历，以及父母对此的态度；第三步，谈谈自己想对父母说的话。[亮点词汇]①beallowedtodosth.被允许做某事②intheend最后③inorderto为了④makeplans制定计划[高分句型]①ButIwantedtoplayfootballbecauseIlikeditverymuch.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②Believeinme,andthenIwillgraduallybecomemoreandmoreindependent.（祈使句+and+陈述句）2．例文LearnfromYesterdayAgoodstudentshouldadoptapositiveattitudetowardslife.Inthepast,IhadalotoftroubleinlearningEnglish.Itriedmanywaystoimproveit,butIwasstillpoorinmyEnglish.IaskedmyEnglishteacherforhelp.Shesaidthatmyhardworkwouldbeuseful.Afterafewmonths,ImadegreatprogressinmyEnglish.SoIknowthatIshouldlearnfromyesterday.Icangetusefullessonsfrommyexperience.IfIlearnfromthepast,Ishouldbepositivetolifeandstudy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：根据提示信息介绍发生在自己身上的一件事，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，详细介绍自己的经历；第三步，介绍从中得到的启示。[亮点词汇]①havetroubleindoingsth.做某事有困难②asksb.forhelp向某人寻求帮助③makegreatprogress取得很大的进步[高分句型]①Shesaidthatmyhardworkwouldbeuseful.(that引导的宾语从句)②IfIlearnfromthepast,Ishouldbepositivetolifeandstudy.(if引导的条件状语从句)3．例文MyChangesI’minGrade9andIhavechangedalot.First,Iusedtobethin,butnowIamalittlefatter.Iusedtohavecurlyhair,butnowIhaveshortstraighthair.Second,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglish.Iusedtobeweakinit.ButwithmyEnglishteacher’shelp,nowIoftengetgoodgradesinmyEnglish.What’smore,I’mmoreoutgoingthanI usedtobe.Iusedtobeafraidofspeakinginfrontofpeople.ButnowIcangiveaspeechinpublic.I’vealsomademanyfriends.Thesearemychanges.Whataboutyours?【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：本文主要是从外貌、性格、学科的进步等方面介绍自己的变化，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，从外貌、性格、学科的进步等方面介绍自己的变化；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①makeprogress取得进步②withsb’shelp在某人的帮助下③beafraidof害怕[高分句型]①Iusedtobethin,butnowIamalittlefatter.(but连接的并列句)②Iusedtobeafraidofspeakinginfrontofpeople.(动名词作宾语)4．例文DoingsportshaschangedmeIusedtoplaycomputergamesalot.Asaresult,itaffectedmystudyanddidharmtomyhealth.Andhonestlyspeaking,Ilostheartandbecameweak,aboutwhichmyparentswereworried.IlookeduptomyPEteachersomuchthatIturnedtohim.HesuggestedItakepartinsomesportsactivities,andIdecidedtotakehisadvice.Ihavekeptplayingbasketballfor45minutesorsoeverydaytilltoday.Nowmyhealthhasbeengreatlyimproved.Inaddition,I’vemadeprogressinmylessons.  Doingsportshaschangedmeintoaconfidentandpowerfulperson!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：根据所给话题，补全题干并完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，补全题干；第二步，介绍过去的事情以及是什么改变了自己；第三步，最后表达感想。[亮点词汇]①usedtodosth过去常常做某事②asaresult因此③takepartin参加④inaddition此外[高分句型]①IlookeduptomyPEteachersomuchthatIturnedtohim.（结果状语从句）②Doingsportshaschangedmeintoaconfidentandpowerfulperson!（动名词短语作主语）5．例文TheProgressI’veMadeLookingbackonthepasttwoyears,Ihavemadegreatprogress.Firstofall,Ihavemademanyfriends.Weshareourfeelingswitheachother.WhenIamintrouble,theygivemeahand.Iamnotshyanylongerandbecomeactiveandconfident.Withthehelpofmyparents,Ihavelearnedtodosomehousework,suchascleaningmyroom,cookingandsoon.Icantakecareofmyselfwellnow.Thankstomykindandpatientteachers,Ihavedevelopedgoodlearninghabits,anddonebetterinstudyaswell.Iwillmakegreatereffortstoachievegreatersuccessinthefuture!【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。回首过去的两年，我已经取得了很大的进步，引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从生活和学习方面重点介绍我取得的进步；第三步，书写结语。表达对未来的展望。【亮点词汇】①share分享②introuble遇到困难③takecareof照顾④patient耐心的【高分句型】①WhenIamintrouble,theygivemeahand.（when引导的时间状语从句）②Iwillmakegreatereffortstoachievegreatersuccessinthefuture!（动词不定式作目的状语）6．例文TheMomentMadeMeGrowUpEveryonemayhavesomemomentsthatmakehimgrowup.TherewasonceatimewhenImadeamistakesinmath.Becauseofcarelessness,Ifailedtheexam.WhenIwasdepressed,itwasmymathteacherwhogavemeahandandtoldmethatmistakescouldalsoteachusalesson.Whatshetoldmeencouragedmetofacewithmymathproblembravely.Finally,mymathgradesimproved.Takingmyexperienceintoconclusion,ifwelearnfromourmistakes,wewillhavelearntanothersecrettosuccess.Treasurethemistakes,andyouwillwinthetreasure.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为命题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题目中的要求，并适当增加细节。[写作步骤]①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“每个人都会有成长的时刻”来引出下文中对自己成长时刻的叙述；②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“遇到的问题、解决的方式和学到的道理”三方面入手，重点介绍自己的成长时刻；③第三步，书写结语。表达对将来的期望。[亮点词汇]①growup长大②becauseof因为③givesbahand帮助某人 ④learnfromsth从某事中学习[高分句型]①WhenIwasdepressed,itwasmymathteacherwhogavemeahandandtoldmethatmistakescouldalsoteachusalesson.（when引导的时间状语从句）②Whatshetoldmeencouragedmetofacewithmymathproblembravely.（what引导的主语从句）③Takingmyexperienceintoconclusion,ifwelearnfromourmistakes,wewillhavelearntanothersecrettosuccess.（if引导的条件状语从句）7．例文Thistermisnearlyover.Asthesayingsays“Nopain,nogain”.Duringthisterm,Iexperiencedalot.LastOctober,IquarreledwithmotheraboutthetimeIspentonhobbies.Ithoughthobbieshelpedmerelaxbutshedidn’tthinkso.Ifeltupsetthen.Luckily,thereweremanytruefriendswhoofferedmevaluableadvice.NowIcangetalongbetterwithMotherandhaveadeeperunderstandingofherlove.Nextterm,we’llfaceanimportantexam.Ihopetobesuccessful.SoIplantousemytimemorewisely.Idecidetolistmygoalsandtrytomakethemcometrue.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述过去的经历用“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。[写作步骤]第一步，描述过去的经历及感受；第二步，描绘新学期的希望和打算。[亮点词汇]①quarrel吵架②upset心烦③valuableadvice有价值的建议④wisely明智地[高分句型]①LastOctober,IquarreledwithmotheraboutthetimeIspentonhobbies.(定语从句)②Ithoughthobbieshelpedmerelaxbutshedidn’tthinkso.(宾语从句) 8．例文WarmthinMyHeartInmymemory,Ihavemetsomeproblemsinmylife.Theymademereallyupsetandevengiveup.Forexample,ItookuplearningphysicswhenIenteredGrade8.ItwassodifficultformethatIfailedthephysicstestsveryoften.ThankstomyphysicsteacherMs.Liu,Imadegreatprogresswithherhelp.Ms.Liu’skindnessmovedmealot.Fromthenon,Ihavehadgreatinterestinphysics.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：方向已给出，写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。[写作步骤]第一步，简短铺垫，直抒主题；第二步，详细描述一件事；第三步，总结从中获得的感受。[亮点词汇]①giveup放弃②takeupdoingsth.开始从事某事③thanksto由于④fromthenon从此[高分句型]①ItookuplearningphysicswhenIenteredGrade8.（句型：状语从句，when引导时间状从）②ItwassodifficultformethatIfailedthephysicstestsveryoften.（句型：状语从句，so...that引导状从）9．例文LifeisfullofunexpectedLastweekend,Idecidedtovisitmyaunt.WhenIgottothetrainstation,IrealizedthatIhadleftmymobilephoneathome.Itwasnotagoodstart,wasit?ThenIcheckedthetimetableandfoundIhadmadeabigmistake.Mytrainhadalreadyleftfiveminutesago.IwassoworriedthatIdidn’tknowwhattodo.Suddenly,apolicemansawmestandtherehelplesslyandaskedmewhathadhappened.ItoldhimthatImissedmytrain.Tomysurprise,hetoldmethatthetraindidn’tleavebecause itbrokedown.Itwouldleaveintenminutes.Ihadenoughtimetocatchit.Lifeisreallyfulloftheunexpected.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍你遇到的意想不到的事；第二步，书写结语，表达自己的想法。[亮点词汇]①decide决定②realize意识到③makeabigmistake犯了一个大错④helplessly无助地⑤breakdown坏了，抛锚[高分句型]①WhenIgottothetrainstation,IrealizedthatIhadleftmymobilephoneathome.(时间状语从句)②IwassoworriedthatIdidn’tknowwhattodo.(结果状语从句)③Tomysurprise,hetoldmethatthetraindidn’tleavebecauseitbrokedown.(宾语从句；原因状语从句)10．例文ThebeautyinmyeyesIalwaysbelieveactsofkindnessarebeautiful.Oneday,Igotonabusintherushhour.Thereweresomanypeoplethateveryonestoodclosetoeachotherandtherewasnoemptyseat.Anoldladygotonthebus,aprimaryschoolstudentstooduprightawayandofferedheraseat.Ididn’tmindhissmallact.ButlaterIfoundthathewasthelastonetogetoffasIdid.Atthattime,Ifeltthebeautyofhisact.Hiskindnessmakesmefeelpowerful.Asstudents,wecanalsobebeautifulnotbywearingfashionableclothesbutbybehavingwell.【详解】[总体分析]         ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；  ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；          ③提示：需注意时态的一致性，按照图片提示进行写作；准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等进行清楚连贯地书面表达，并保证语句通顺，意思连贯。     [写作步骤]         第一步，总结我眼中的美是善良的行为；          第二步，具体描述事情发生的经过，说明为什么认为这种行为很美。    第三步，短文结尾，呼吁作为学生应该有良好的行为。     [亮点词汇]        ①rushhour高峰期②empty空的③rightaway立刻④offersbsth给某人提供某物⑤powerful有力的，强大的[高分句型]          ①Thereweresomanypeoplethateveryonestoodclosetoeachotherandtherewasnoemptyseat.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）②ButlaterIfoundthathewasthelastonetogetoffasIdid.（that引导的宾语从句）