10 意见和建议-2024年中考英语热点话题写作

2024年中考英语热点话题写作-意见和建议1．（2023上·黑龙江哈尔滨·九年级校考期末）假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近因为一些事情和父母发生了争吵，你和他也有类似的经历。请你根据以下信息给他写封信，说说中学生如何合理安排自己的课余（after-school）活动。写作要点：1.表达对Mike的理解。2.和Mike类似的经历：(1)因考试不及格而和父母争吵。(2)父母不满意你周末画画时间长。3.说说中学生如何合理安排（arrangeproperly）课余活动。写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。4.至少80词。DearMike,Howareyoudoing?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing 2．（2023上·湖南怀化·九年级溆浦县第一中学校联考期末）假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike来信说最近他身体状况不好（感冒头痛），且临近期末考试，感到学习压力很大，请根据相关信息，写一封回信给Mike，帮助他尽快调整状态。要点提示：1.简要叙述Mike的问题。2.缓解学习压力的方法。3.身体状况方面的建议。4.可适当增加其它信息。词数：80词左右。DearMike,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                 Yourssincerely,LiHua3．（2022上·湖南株洲·九年级统考期末）假如你是李华，你的朋友刘宇写E-mail向你倾诉。他热爱篮球运动并且是校队主力，但是父母不支持他花大量时间训练，而是觉得他应该把所有时间用于文化学习，获得好的成绩，考上理想的高中学校。请你用英语给他回信，说一说你的看法和建议。要点：（1）向刘宇表示理解和支持；（2）青少年应该被允许做出自己的决定及原因（至少2点原因）；（3）如何解决与父母矛盾的有效方法（至少2点）。要求：（1）90词左右；（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名；（3）语义通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。DearLiuYu, I’mhappytoreceiveyourE-mail._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．（2023上·黑龙江哈尔滨·九年级统考期末）假如你是李梅，你的外国笔友Lily来信提到她未能与父母在自己未来的规划上达成共识。请你根据以下信息，给她回信，并告诉Lily你的未来规划和你为之(即将)进行的准备。写作要点：1.告诉Lily不要心情低落；2.发表你对处理这件事情的看法；(1)沟通最重要；(2)彼此尊重(respect)；3.告诉Lily你的未来规划和你为之(即将)进行的准备。写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4.至少80词。DearLily,I’veknownthatyouandyourparentshavedifferentideasonyourfutureplan. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishestoyou!Yours,LiMei5．（2022上·湖南永州·九年级统考期末）假如你叫李华，你的英国笔友Tom将要来你校学习一段时间，他来信向你征求意见，请就此写一封回信。内容：①表明你对Tom来你校学习的态度；②对他来你校学习时可以做什么和不该做什么提出你的建议。注意：1）文中请勿使用真实人名，校名和地名；2）词数：不低于80词；3）文章的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；4）语句通顺，意思连贯，表达正确。DearTom,I’mverygladthatyouwillcometostudyinourschoolforsometime.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2022上·湖南邵阳·九年级统考期末）假如你是LiPing，你被评为学校的“美德少年”，初中的学习生活即将结束。你的表妹WangLi明年即将进入中学读书，她来信请你给她即将开始的初中生活提出一些建议，请根据下面的要点提示，写封回信。要点： 在学校努力学习知识；关注社会新闻；培养兴趣爱好在家里经常与家人交流；知错就改在公共场合遵守规则；注意安全；乐于助人你的建议……要求：1.文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等；2.语言要通顺，表达要正确；3.要求包含所有要点提示，为了行文需要，可适当增加要点.4.词数80左右，开头和结尾己给出，不计人总词数；参考词汇：developinterests培养兴趣；socialnews社会新闻；communicatewith与⋯⋯交流；inpublic在公共场合DearWangLi,I’mverygladtohearthatyouwillbecomeamiddleschoolstudentnextyear.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,andI’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouearlier.Yours,LiPing7．（2022上·陕西延安·九年级统考期末）假设你是校报英语专栏“Let’sshareandhelp”的小编辑。请阅读Jim的来信，并根据内容回复他。注意： 1.文章不少于70词，开头已经给出，但是不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的学校和学生姓名；3.书写工整清晰；4.语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯。Dearfriend,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetohangoutwithmyfriends.Ican’tchoosemyhobbies,either.TheyonlycareaboutexamsandIammadetostudyallthetime.Ifeelbad.WhatshouldIdo?Yours,JimDearJim,IamsorrytohearaboutyourproblemsandI’dliketosharewhatIthinkoftherules.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2022上·浙江舟山·九年级统考期末）学校英语社团举办以“HowtoPlanOurLifeinaProperWay”为主题的征文比赛，请你写一篇短文分享如何规划学习和课余生活的建议，并投稿。注意：（1）短文必须包括导图里的所有信息，并适当发挥。（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。（3）词数：80～100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Planningourlifeinaproperwayisnecessaryforusstudents.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2022上·江苏常州·九年级统考期末）假如你是李蕾，刚刚收到一封来自英国朋友Sandy的邮件。她在邮件中说自己想上一门艺术课，但是不知道选什么好，想听听你的建议。请根据表格提示，选择或自拟1—2门艺术课，给出建议并阐述理由，用英语给Sandy回复一封邮件。SuggestionsReasonspainting/drawinglessons.makeyoucreative…piano/violin/guitarlessonsmakeyourelaxed…dancing/singinglessonshelpyoustayhealthy…要求：1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）DearSandy,Gladtohearfromyou.SinceI’mtakingartlessons,Ihavesomeideastosharewithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ YoursLiLei10．（2022上·浙江金华·九年级校联考期末）假如你是李华，最近收到国外好友Andrew的电子邮件，请你根据该邮件内容给Andrew回复。DearLiHua,Mygradesarenotverygood,andmyparentsareangrywithme.ItoldthemthatIworkedhardatschool.Theproblemis,Iamjustnotgoodatschoolwork.ButtheythinkIspendtoomuchtimeplayingbasketballwhenIshouldbestudying.SoIarguedwiththemlastnight.ItistruethatIplayalotofbasketballbecauseIthinkbasketballissomethinggreat.IamintheschoolteamandIamproudofthat.Iwanttobeinthenationalteamsomeday.Myunclehasofferedtohelpmetraintoo,buthowcanIgetmyparentstoagree?Andrew注意：1.回信必须围绕来信的中主要信息，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3.词数100词左右；4.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearAndrew,Howisitgoing?I’msogladtohearfromyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua参考答案：1．例文 DearMike,Howareyoudoing?Iheardyouandyourparentshadanargumentaboutstudying.Ihavehadthesameexperiencesasyou,soIunderstoodyouverywell.IarguedwithmyparentsaboutthefailureintheexamlastSunday.MyparentsarenotsatisfiedwithmebecauseIspendalotoftimedrawingonweekends.Howcanwearrangeourextracurricularlifeproperly?Firstly,wecanrelaxourselvesbylisteningtomusic,drawing,watchingTV,andsoon.Secondly,weshouldtakeupsomehobbies.Thirdly,itisveryimportantforustocommunicateopenlyandshareourinterestsandpleasureswithparentsasmuchaspossible.Ihopeweshouldlearntorelaxourselveswhilestudying,sothatwecanlearnbetter.Inaword,ifwespendourfreetimeproperly,wewillgetalotinbothbodyandmind.Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”与“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，通过Mike与父母发生的问题表达自己的理解；第二步，具体阐述与Mike类似的经历以及中学生如何合理安排课余活动；第三步，书写结语，总结全文。[亮点词汇]①besatisfiedwith对……感到满意②arrange安排③asmuchaspossible尽可能多[高分句型]①MyparentsarenotsatisfiedwithmebecauseIspendalotoftimedrawingonweekends.（because引导的原因状语从句）②Thirdly,itisveryimportantforustocommunicateopenlyandshareourinterestsandpleasureswithparentsasmuchaspossible.（it固定句式） 2．例文DearMike,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarestressedoutandthatyouarenotfeelingwellthesedays.Don’tworryaboutyourproblems.I’llofferyousomeconstructivesuggestions.Firstandforemost,youshouldseeadoctorandtakesomemedicineontime.Second,you’dbetterdrinkmorewaterandhaveagoodrest.Besides,ifyouhavetroublewithyourstudy,youcanturntoteachersorfriendsforhelp.What’smore,trytorelaxyourself,suchaslisteningtomusic,walkingortalkingaboutyourworrieswithyourparents.Ihopeyouwillbebetterassoonaspossible.                                                           Yourssincerely,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，简要叙述Mike的问题；第二步，介绍缓解学习压力的方法；第三步，介绍身体状况方面的建议；第三步，表达自己的愿望。[亮点词汇]①bestressedout压力过大②worryabout担心③takesomemedicine吃药④haveagoodrest好好休息⑤assoonaspossible尽快[高分句型]①Iamsorrytohearthatyouarestressedoutandthatyouarenotfeelingwellthesedays.（that引导的宾语从句）②Besides,ifyouhavetroublewithyourstudy,youcanturntoteachersorfriendsfor help.（if引导的条件状语从句）③Ihopeyouwillbebetterassoonaspossible.（省略that的宾语从句）3．例文DearLiuYu,I’mhappytoreceiveyourE-mail.Iamworriedaboutyou,afterknowingthatyourparentsdon’tsupportyourbasketballtraining.It’snormalforthemtostopyoufromtraining.Afterall,yourschoolworkisreallyimportantanditisyourdutytoenteragooduniversity.However,Ihavenothingagainstyourtraining.Iholdtheviewthatteenagersshouldbeallowedtomaketheirowndecisions.Firstofall,hobbieswillnotgetinthewayofschoolwork.Instead,theycanmakeusfullofcourageandenergy.What’smore,weareseriousenoughtoberesponsibleforourselves.Inthemeanwhile,Ihopeyoucanhavepropercommunicationwithyourparentstoexpressyouropinions,sothattheycanconsideryourfeelingsseriously.Besides,thereisnodoubtthatyouaresupposedtobalanceyourtrainingandschoolwork.Onlythenwillyousolveyourproblems.Hopethingsworkoutandeverythingwillbebetter!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接邮件开头，向刘宇表示理解和支持；第二步，阐述观点：青少年应该被允许做出自己的决定，说明至少2个原因；第三步，列出至少2个如何解决与父母矛盾的有效方法并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①afterall毕竟②makedecisions做决定③beresponsiblefor为……负责④inthemeanwhile与此同时 [高分句型]①Iamworriedaboutyou,afterknowingthatyourparentsdon’tsupportyourbasketballtraining.（that引导的宾语从句）②Iholdtheviewthatteenagersshouldbeallowedtomaketheirowndecisions.（that引导的同位语从句）③Inthemeanwhile,Ihopeyoucanhavepropercommunicationwithyourparentstoexpressyouropinions,sothattheycanconsideryourfeelingsseriously.（sothat引导的目的状语从句）④Besides,thereisnodoubtthatyouaresupposedtobalanceyourtrainingandschoolwork.（that引导的同位语从句）⑤Onlythenwillyousolveyourproblems.（倒装句）4．例文DearLily,I’veknownthatyouandyourparentshavedifferentideasonyourfutureplan.Infact,it’sacommonphenomenon.Becauseparentsandchildrenhavedifferentvalues.Sodon’tfeeldown.Ihopethefollowingtwomethodscanhelpyou.Firstofall,communicationisthemostimportantthing.Second,weshouldrespecteachother’sideas.Youcanhaveatry.Iwanttotellyoumyfutureplan.Iplantobeascientistandmakecontributionstothefutureofmycountry.SoIwilldomybesttolearnacademicskillsandotherthingsinmysparetime.Bestwishestoyou!                                 Yours,Li Mei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，劝慰笔友；第二步，表达自己对于沟通分歧的看法；第三步，告诉笔友自身的规划和准备。[亮点词汇]①feeldown心情低落 ②makecontributionsto为……做贡献③doone’sbesttodosth尽某人最大努力做某事④inone’ssparetime在某人空闲时间[高分句型]Iplantobeascientistandmakecontributionstothefutureofmycountry.(并列句)5．例文DearTom,I’mverygladthatyouwillcometostudyinourschoolforsometime.Welcometoourschool.HereIhavesomeadviceforyou.Therearemanyrulesinourschool.Forexample,wecan’tbelateforschoolorclass.Ifso,teacherswillbeangrywithyou.Wearesupposedtokeeptheclassroomcleanandtidy.Wemustfinishourhomeworkorschoolworkontime.Wearenotallowedtoeat,drinkorsleepinclassanditisnotacceptabletotalkbacktoteachersinclass.Ithinkitisagoodideaforyoutowearourschooluniformsatschool.Asaboystudent,wecan’twearlonghair.Don’tsmoke,playcards,fightwithothersandsoon.Allinall,behavingwellalwaysmakeseverythingOK.Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtimeinourschool.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，引出后文的建议；第二步，具体介绍来你校学习时可以做什么和不该做什么，给出建议；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①belatefor迟到②besupposedto应该 ③ontime准时④talkbackto回嘴[高分句型]①Wearenotallowedtoeat,drinkorsleepinclassanditisnotacceptabletotalkbacktoteachersinclass.（并列句）②Ithinkitisagoodideaforyoutowearourschooluniformsatschool.（省略that的宾语从句）6．例文DearWangLi,I’mverygladtohearthatyouwillbecomeamiddleschoolstudentnextyear.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Atschool,youshouldstudyhardatknowledge,payattentiontosocialnewsanddevelopinterestsandhobbies.What’smore,youmustdomoresportsinyoursparetime.Athome,youshouldoftencommunicatewithyourfamily.Assoonasyoumakeamistake,youshouldcorrectit.Youshouldhelpdosomehousework.Inpublic,youmustobeytherules,payattentiontosafetyandgetreadytohelpothers.Also,youshouldn’tspeakloudlyinpublic.Bestwishes,andI’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouearlier.Yours,LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，总体介绍要给出一些建议；第二步，从不同的方面具体给出一些建议，包括在学校、在家里以及公共场合等；第三步，最后送上自己的祝福，希望能早日见到朋友。[亮点词汇]①payattentionto注意②inone’ssparetime在业余时间 ③getreadyto准备好做某事[高分句型]①Assoonasyoumakeamistake,youshouldcorrectit.（assoonas引导的时间状语从句）②Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.（倒装句）7．OnePossibleVersion:DearJim,IamsorrytohearaboutyourproblemsandI’dliketosharewhatIthinkoftherules.Althoughyourparentsmakemanyrulesandgiveyoumuchpressure,theywantyoutodowellinschool.Sometimestheyworryaboutyoursafetyortheysimplywanttomakesureyoucanalwayschoosewisely.So,thebestwaytosolvetheproblemistotrytounderstandyourparentsandcommunicatewiththem.Firstly,youshouldunderstandthemmore.Anyway,parentshavemoreexperienceandsomeoftherulesarenecessary.Secondly,itisimportanttoletthemknowyouropinionsandfeelings.Remembertotalkwiththeminapoliteandfriendlyway.Ibelievetheywillthinkaboutyouropinionsandchangetheirwayinsomeway.Ihopemyadviceisofsomehelpandvaluetoyou.Bestwishes!Yours,Tom【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：考生应注意要分析父母制定家规的原因并为Jim提出建议，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，由于开头已给出，故接下来具体分析父母制定家规的原因并为Jim提出建议；第二步，具体分析父母制定家规的原因；第三步，具体说明对Jim的建议；第四步，书写结语。表示希望自己的建议对Jim有帮助并送上最美好的祝愿。[亮点词汇]①worryabout担心②dowellin在……方面做得好 ③makesure确保④necessary必要的⑤value价值[高分句型]①Althoughyourparentsmakemanyrulesandgiveyoumuchpressure,theywantyoutodowellinschool.（although引导的让步状语从句）②Sometimestheyworryaboutyoursafetyortheysimplywanttomakesureyoucanalwayschoosewisely.（省略that的宾语从句）③Ibelievetheywillthinkaboutyouropinionsandchangetheirwayinsomeway.（省略that的宾语从句）④Ihopemyadviceisofsomehelpandvaluetoyou.（省略that的宾语从句）8．例文：Planningourlifeinaproperwayisnecessaryforusstudents.Herearemysuggestions.Asforstudy,Ithinktobegoodlearnersisimportantforus.Weshouldn’tbeafraidofmakingamistake.Weshouldlearnfrommistakes.Andgoodlearnersoftenaskquestionsbecauseknowledgecomesfromquestioning.Besides,wearesupposedtodevelophobbiesinoursparetime.Wecanlearntoplaysportstomakeourselvesstrongandhealthy.What’smore,itisalsoagoodchanceforustogetclosetothenatureandrelaxourselves.Howdoyouspendyourlife?Pleasesharewithus.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，说明写作目的；第二步，分享自己的学习规划和课余生活的建议。[亮点词汇]①beafraidof害怕……②besupposedto应该做某事[高分句型]①Wecanlearntoplaysportstomakeourselvesstrongandhealthy.（不定式表目的） ②What’smore,itisalsoagoodchanceforustogetclosetothenatureandrelaxourselves.（it作形式主语）9．例文DearSandy,Gladtohearfromyou.SinceI’mtakingartlessons,Ihavesomeideastosharewithyou.Isuggestyouchoosethemusiclessons.Youknow,learningtoplaytheguitarorsingsongscanmakeyoumorepopularinthefuturesociety.What’smore,itwillbethemostenjoyabletolistentosomebeautifulsongsafteralongday’sstudy.Itcanmakeyourelaxed.Anditisalsoagoodideatotakedrawinglessonsthatcanmakeyoumorecreative.AndIthinkitwillhelpyouinothersubjects.Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiLei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据表格内容给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，提出自己建议的艺术课以及理由；第三步，表达希望。[亮点词汇]①hearfrom收到……的来信②playtheguitar弹吉他[高分句型]①learningtoplaytheguitarorsingsongscanmakeyoumorepopularinthefuturesociety.(动名词作主语)②Anditisalsoagoodideatotakedrawinglessonsthatcanmakeyoumorecreative.(that引导的定语从句)10．例文DearAndrew,Howisitgoing?I’msogladtohearfromyou.Iamsorrytohearthatyouareintroublenow.It’scommontohavesuchproblemsatyourage.Cheerupandhereismyadvice． Firstofall,playingbasketballisyourhobbyandcanalsomakeyouhealthier.Ithinkitisgood.Maybeyourparentswillworryaboutthesethings.Inordertounderstandeachother,Isuggestyoutalkwiththemabouthowtobalancelearningandplayingbasketball.Youshouldtellthemthatyouwillstudyhard.Ifyouencounteranyproblems,youcanaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp.Youcanalsouseyoursparetimetopracticeplayingbasketball,becausethisisyourdream.Ibelievetheywillunderstandandsupportyou.Ihopethingswillgetbettersoon．Bestwishes,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封书信；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：回信必须围绕邮件中的主要信息，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点“针对来信的问题提出建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，概述自己对这个问题的看法。。第二步，提出自己的建议。第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①beintrouble陷入困境②firstofall首先③inorderto为了[高分句型]①It’scommontohavesuchproblemsatyourage.(it作形式主语)②Ithinkitisgood.Maybeyourparentswillworryaboutthesethings.(省略that的宾语从句)