05 青少年问题-2024年中考英语热点话题写作

2024年中考英语热点话题写作-青少年问题1．（2023上·河北唐山·九年级统考期中）现在的中学生课业负担繁重，在校外普遍缺乏运动，甚至不做运动，有的在业余时间上网看电视，用手机浏览网页或聊天，这样不但浪费时间，还严重损害健康和视力。请你根据以下提示和要求写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。提示：（1）Whyarestudentsshortofexercise?（2）Whatistheinfluence（影响）onstudents?（3）Whatisyouradvice?要求：（1）短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；（2）短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；（3）词数80左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：缺少beshortof；伤害，损害doharmto；远离stayawayfrom；浏览网页surftheInternet  视力eyesight  电子产品electronicproductsManystudentsareshortofexerciseorevendon’texerciseintheirfreetimenow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2023上·陕西西安·九年级校考期中）手机的发明极大地改变了人们的生活，然而它也为我们带来了一定的负面影响。本周，你们班召开了以“学生是否应该拥有手机”为主题的班会，同学们各抒己见；你的看法如何？请根据下面表格中的信息，以“Shouldstudentsbeallowedtohavetheirownmobile-phones?”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你们各自的观点。原因 赞成与他人沟通；快速查找信息；拍照；购物支付……反对影响学习；对视力不好；可能被坏人窃取个人信息你的观点……参考词汇：searchforinformation,payforthings,influenceourstudy,bebadforeyes,stealourprivateinformation要求：1.参考所给提示，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.词数：不少于70。Shouldstudentsbeallowedtohavetheirownmobilephones?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2023上·广东广州·九年级广州开发区中学校考期中）假如你是李华，你升上初三以来遇到了一些问题不知道如何解决，想给电台主持人Betty写封邮件寻求帮助，请她给你一些建议。你的问题你的感受1.缺少与父母沟通，甚至有时会吵架……2.喜欢打篮球，但是作业增多3.学习压力很大，晚上经常睡不着要求：1.文中不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息；否则不予评分。2.词数80个左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数内。DearBetty, I’mverygladtowritetoyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua4．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级统考期中）假如你是南华中学英语校报的编辑李华老师，该校九年级学生王小明向校报的Problems&Advice栏目写的一封求助信，信中提及进入九年级以来，如作业太多、感到焦虑、无法平衡娱乐与学习的关系等问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，提出你的建议和解决方法。内容要点：1.表示理解、给予安慰；2.提出合理的建议和解决方法：①做好时间安排、不要过于焦虑；②不要熬夜，做到劳逸结合；③请你补充一点相关内容……3.希望以上建议能够对该生有帮助。写作要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.表达得体，标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：balancebetweenworkandrest平衡学习与休息；pressure/stressn.压力 DearWangXiaomingIamLiHua,theeditoroftheEnglishschoolnewspaperatNanhuaMiddleSchool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua5．（2023上·陕西渭南·九年级统考期中）假如你是李华，收到你的好友玲玲的一封来信。请你根据以下来信内容，用英语给她写一封回信，给她一些建议，帮她解决烦恼。DearLiHua,How’sitgoing?I’mnothappythesedaysbecausemyparentsaregoingtobeonbusinessnextweekend.Iwillhavetostayathomealone.ItwillbethefirsttimethatIhavetolookaftermyself.SoI’mreallyworriedaboutit.AndI’malsoafraidthatImaybelonelyandbored.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Writetomesoon!Bestwishestoyou!Yours,Lingling参考词汇：lockthedoor,payattentionto,fire,electricity,safety,keepcalm,ask...forhelp,talkwithsb.,...要求：1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）：4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）DearLingling, I’mreallyhappytohearfromyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级深圳市海湾中学校考期中）为了帮助同学们更好地减轻学习压力、释放心理负担，我们学校把本月确定为“心情放飞月”。假如你是学校的心理老师MissFang，收到了一个名字叫做Julia的同学的来信，信中述说她父母亲经常不理解她，所以她写信希望得到你的帮助。请你根据以下内容提示给Julia回复一封信。可以适当地拓展，字数80词左右，不超过120词。1.Julia的问题和给她写信的目的；2.你的建议：a.列举与父母亲不能达成一致的事情的清单并找到可接受的答案   b.告诉父母你的真实想法和原因  c.多倾听父母亲，了解他们的建议和想法  d.……(自己补充）3.你的希望和祝愿参考词汇：acceptable可接受的    result结果    reason原因   satisfactory满意     disagree不赞同    require要求DearJulia,I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletterandthankyoufortrustingme. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishesforyou.Yours,MissFang7．（2023上·江苏南京·九年级统考期中）假如你是张伟，你在微信里看到你校交流生Andy发的朋友圈。作为他的好友，请你根据Andy朋友圈的内容，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，表示关心并提供帮助。                               Moments                              AndyChineseissohard!Ican’tfindanywaytolearnitwe1l.Also,questionslike“你吃了吗?”“你爸妈是干嘛的呀?”oftenmakemealittleuncomfortable.Ireallydon’tknowhowtoanswerthem.IfinditdifficulttocommunicatewithmyChineseclassmates.Ireallymissmyfamilyandmyfriends!WhatshouldIdo?注意：1.内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。2.词数不少于70词(已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数)。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。DearAndy,I’msorrytoknowthatyouhavesomeproblemsnow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allthebest,ZhangWei 8．（2023上·山东烟台·九年级统考期中）近来，为了进一步加强在校学生的管理，许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华，请你从作业、手机、睡眠、阅读、锻炼和安全这几个方面用英文给你的笔友David写一封信，介绍你校的新校规，并谈谈你对新校规的看法。要求:1.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；2.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。DearDavid,How’severythinggoing?I’mgladtosharemynewschoolruleswithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whataboutyourschoolrules?Pleasewritesoon.Yours,LiHua参考答案：1．例文    Manystudentsareshortofexerciseorevendon’texerciseintheirfreetimenow.Somestudentsstudyhardandtheyhavetoomuchhomeworktodo.Otherstudentsspendmostoftheirfreetimeplayingcomputergames,watchingTV,surfingtheInternetortalkingwiththeirfriendsonline.Itnotonlywastestimebutalsodoesharmtotheirhealthandeyesight.    Inmyopinion,it’simportantforstudentstotakemoreexerciseintheirsparetime.Besides,stayawayfromTV,iPad,computerandotherelectronicproducts.Don’treadbooksoruseamobilephoneinbed.Finally,makesureto haveagoodeatinghabit.    Allinall,studentsneedtodomoreexerciseintheirsparetime.Makesuretohaveahealthylifestyle.Themoreexercisetheydo,thehealthiertheywillbe.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，谈论中学生缺乏运动、业余时间使用电子产品的问题；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，从中学生缺乏运动的原因，影响和建议三个方面写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。描述中学生缺乏运动的原因，影响；第二步，具体阐述我的建议；第三步，书写结语。呼吁中学生多做运动，有一个健康的生活方式。[亮点词汇]①Inmyopinion我认为②intheirsparetime在他们空余时间③Allinall总之[高分句型]①Itnotonlywastestimebutalsodoesharmtotheirhealthandeyesight.（notonly...butalso...不仅……而且）②Themoreexercisetheydo,thehealthiertheywillbe.（the+比较级，the+比较级，越……越……）2．例文Shouldstudentsbeallowedtohavetheirownmobilephones?Ourclassheldadebateonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedtohavetheirownmobilephones.Studentsideasaredividedonthistopic.Herearetheiropinions.Somestudentssupporttheidea,sayingmobilephoneshelpthemkeepintouchwithothersandallowthemtoquicklysearchforinformationandtakephotos.Besides,theycanusemobilephonestopayforthingsandshoponline.However,othersopposetheidea,theythinkmobilephonescanbeadistractionfromstudyingandarebadforoureyesight.Theyalsoworrythatpersonalinformationmightbestolenbybadpeople.Personally,Ithinkmobilephonesareagreattoolforcommunicationandinformationsearch,butweneedtousethemresponsiblyandnotlet theminterferewithourstudies.Inaword,usingitinarightwayisofgreatimportance.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇议论文；②时态：本文主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“你的观点”省略处需要补充相关内容，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。描述话题产生的背景，并引出话题。第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中赞成方和反对方以及你的观点几个重点方面来阐述观点和原因，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第三步，书写结语。表达“正确使用手机的重要性”。[亮点词汇]①keepintouchwithothers与别人保持联系②distraction分散注意力③interferewith干扰[高分句型]①Theyalsoworrythatpersonalinformationmightbestolenbybadpeople.（宾语从句）②Somestudentssupporttheidea,sayingmobilephoneshelpthemkeepintouchwithothers（现在分词作伴随状语）3．例文：DearBetty,I’mverygladtowritetoyou.IhavehadsomeproblemssinceIwasintheninthgrade.Iseldomcommunicatewithmyparents.Itseemsthattheyneverwanttounderstandme.Soweevenhaveanargumentsometimes.Ifeelnervousandunhappy.Iamaboywholikesplayingbasketballverymuch,butmyhomeworkisgettingmoreandmore.Idon’thavetimetoplayandrelaxanylonger.NowIhavealotofpressurefrommyschoolworksothatIcan’toftenfallasleepatnight.Iamreallytiredandstressedout.WhatshouldIdo?Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Thanksalot. Bestwishes,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“感受”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，提出自己遇到了问题；第二步，具体阐述遇到了哪些问题；第三步，书写结语，请求对方给自己一些建议。[亮点词汇]①communicatewithsb.和某人交流②haveanargument争吵③bestressedout压力过大的④not...anylonger不再[高分句型]①Iamaboywholikesplayingbasketballverymuch(who引导定语从句)②NowIhavealotofpressurefrommyschoolworksothatIcan’toftenfallasleepatnight.(sothat引导结果状语从句)4．例文DearWangXiaoming,IamLiHua,theeditoroftheEnglishschoolnewspaperatNanhuaMiddleSchool.Ihavereceivedyourletteraskingforadviceandunderstandyourstress.It’snormalforyoutofeelpressure.First,itisimportanttoplanyourtimecarefully.Don’tworrytoomuch,oryouwon’thaveenoughcouragetofacedifficulty.Second,Iadviseyounottostayuplate.Trytokeepabalancebetweenworkandrest.Third,you’dbettercommunicatemorewithyourparents,teachersandclassmates.Theycanofferussomevaluableadvice.Ihopethesesuggestionswillhelpyoutobettercopewiththestressandanxietyyouarefacing. Yourstruly,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，首先对对方的来信中提到的问题和困扰表示理解；第二步，具体针对不同的问题给出一些建议；第三步，最后总结文章，希望建议能有帮助。[亮点词汇]①toomuch太多②stayup熬夜③offersbsth给某人提供某物[高分句型]①It’snormalforyoutofeelpressure.（it固定句型，不定式作主语）②Ihopethesesuggestionswillhelpyoutobettercopewiththestressandanxietyyouarefacing.（宾语从句）5．例文DearLingling,I’mreallyhappytohearfromyou.Iamsorrythatyouareunhappythesedays.Nowletmegiveyousomeadvice.First,safetyisthemostimportantthing.Whenyourparentsarenotathome,youshouldlockthedooranddon’topenthedoorforstrangers.Second,youshouldalsopayattentiontofireandelectricity.Ifyoucan’tcook,don’ttouchthosemachinesoffire.Third,keepcalmifyouhavesomethingunexpectedandcallyourrelativesorteachersifyouneedhelp.Fourth,ifyoufeelboredandlonely,youcancallmeorchatwithmethroughQQorWeChat.Ihopeyouwillbesafeandhappy. Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”，根据玲玲的烦恼给予解决的建议。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。认真阅读文章的首句，引出下文；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据玲玲的烦恼给予解决的建议；第三步，书写结语。表达期待玲玲的烦恼能够解决。[亮点词汇]①stranger陌生人②unexpected意外的③payattentionto关注④feellonely感觉孤单[高分句型]①Whenyourparentsarenotathome,youshouldlockthedooranddon’topenthedoorforstrangers.(when引导的时间状语从句）②Fourth,ifyoufeelboredandlonely,youcancallmeorchatwithmethroughQQorWeChat.(if引导的条件状语从句）6．例文DearJulia,I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletterandthankyoufortrustingme.Fromyourletter,I’msorrytoknowthatyouhavetheproblemwithyourparentsandyouthinktheydon’talwaysunderstandyou.Herearemysuggestionsforyoutohelpsolveyourproblem.Firstofall,youcanmakealistofthethingsthatyouandyourparentsdisagreeaboutmostandtrytofindanacceptableanswertobothyouandyourparents.Besides,youshouldtellyourparentswhatyouaretrulythinkingaboutandthereasonsforitsothattheycanunderstandyoueasily.What’smore,youaresupposedtolistenmoreto yourparentssothatyoucanknowaboutwhataretheirthoughtsandopinions.Lastbutnotleast,you’dbetterlearntounderstandanotherperson’swayoflookingatthings.Ihopemysuggestionsabovecanhelpyoutodealwithyourproblemeffectively.AndIalsoexpectyoutohaveagoodrelationshipwithyourparents.Bestwishesforyou.Yours,MissFang【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为信件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，需适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍Julia的问题，并表明写作目的；第二步，根据要点给出帮助Julia的建议，注意需要补充一点建议；第三步，表达你的希望和祝愿。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②disagreeabout对……意见不一③what’smore而且④besupposedtodo应该做⑤lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的⑥dealwith处理[高分句型]①youcanmakealistofthethingsthatyouandyourparentsdisagreeaboutmost…（that引导的定语从句）②youshouldtellyourparentswhatyouaretrulythinkingaboutandthereasonsforitsothattheycanunderstandyoueasily.（what引导的宾语从句；sothat引导的目的状语从句）7．例文DearAndy, I’msorrytoknowthatyouhavesomeproblemsnow.IsawyourrecentpostonMomentsandIwantedtoreachoutandoffermysupport.LearningChinesecandefinitelybechallenging,butdon’tworry,you’renotalone!Manyofushavefacedsimilardifficulties.ToimproveyourChinese,Isuggestfindingalanguageexchangepartner.Youcanpracticespeakingwiththemandtheycanhelpyouwithanyquestionsyouhave.Asfortheuncomfortablequestions,it’sokaytosimplysay“Idon’tknow”or“I’mnotsure”.Yourclassmateswillunderstandthatyouarestilllearning.Don’tbeafraidtoaskthemquestionstoo,astheycanprovidevaluableinsightsintoChinesecultureandcustoms.Iunderstandthatyoumissyourfamilyandfriends,buttrytostaypositiveandmakenewconnections.Remember,learninganewlanguagetakestimeandpatience.Don’tbetoohardonyourself.Keeppracticingandyou’llgraduallyimprove.Allthebest,ZhangWei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。第二步，安慰并给出建议。第三步，鼓励并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①reachout伸手②helpsb.withsth.帮助某人做某事③asfor至于[高分句型]①Don’tbetoohardonyourself.（祈使句）②Iunderstandthatyoumissyourfamilyandfriends,buttrytostaypositiveandmakenewconnections.（宾语从句） 8．例文DearDavid,      How’severythinggoing?I’mgladtosharemynewschoolruleswithyou.      Firstly,wemustfinishourhomeworkontimeeveryday.Then,wecan’ttakemobilephonestoschool.Wehadbettergetenoughsleepforatleast9hoursaday,becauseenoughsleepisgoodforourhealthandstudies.Besides,weshoulddevelopgoodreadinghabitsbyreadingagoodbookonceaweek.What’smore,it’simportanttodoexerciseregularly,andwemustdoexerciseforanhouraday.Lastbutnottheleast,safetyalwayscomesfirst.Soweshouldn’tfightwitheachotherandweshouldnevergoswimmingalone.      Ithinktheseschoolrulesaregoodforus.Wemustfollowthem.Whataboutyourschoolrules?Pleasewritetomesoon.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封信；②时态：本文为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的相关内容，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。通过询问对方的近况来引出“学校新的校规”这个话题。第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中“作业、手机、睡眠、阅读、锻炼和安全等”几个重点方面来介绍新的校规，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。第三步，书写结语。表达“对新校规的认可以及期待对方的来信”。[亮点词汇]①regularly定期地②hadbetterdosth最好做某事③develop培养 [高分句型]①It’simportanttodoexerciseregularly（it做形式主语）②Safetyalwayscomesfirst.（谚语）③Wehadbettergetenoughsleepforatleast9hoursaday,becauseenoughsleepisgoodforourhealthandstudies.（because引导原因状语从句）