北师大版高中英语 Unit2Success Period5 WritingWorkshop课件

UNIT2SUCCESSPeriodFiveWritingWorkshop,课前自主预习,¤重点单词1．________________铁；熨斗2．________________公认的；经过检验的3．________________捐献；促成4．________________方式；特点5．________________退休；退职6．________________领导；领导地位7．________________奉献；忠心ironrecognisedcontributestyleretireleadershipdevotion,¤重点词块1．为……做贡献；导致________________2．一系列的________________3．取得成功________________4．接受挑战____________________5．在某人的领导下______________________contributetoaseriesofachievesuccesstakeonchallengesunderone’sleadership,¤重点句式(P40)Shehasbeenavolleyballstarformorethanthirty-fiveyearsandhascontributedgreatlytothesport,________hasmadeherthemostpopularfigureinChina’svolleyballhistory.她已经成为排球明星超过35年，为这项运动做出了巨大的贡献，这使她成为中国排球史上最受欢迎的人物。【答案】which,课堂新知讲练,1．recognisedadj.公认的；经过检验的Paraphrase:toshowapprovalorappreciationofsth.orsb.(P40)LangPingisoneofChina’smostrecognisedathletes.【翻译】郎平是中国最知名的运动员之一。◇词汇拓讲,【语言提升】recognisedadj.公认的；经过检验的；认可的She’sarecognisedauthorityonthesubject.她在这个学科上被公认为权威。,【词汇拓展】(1)recognisevt.认出，识别；承认，认可；赞赏recognisesb./sth.认出某人/某物recognisesb./sth.tobe/as…承认某人/某物是……Irecognisedhimassoonashecameintheroom.他一进屋我就认出了他。,Theyrecognisedtheneedtotaketheproblemseriously.他们认识到需要严肃对待这个问题。Heisrecognisedtobetheirnaturalleader.人们都承认他是他们理所当然的领袖。(2)recognitionn．承认，认可，认出Shegainedonlyminimalrecognitionforherwork.她的工作仅仅得到极少的赞誉。,【针对练习】单句语法填空(1)Intheend,theyoungmangained______(recognise)asagoodteacherintheschool.(2)MissLinisrecognised________(be)aninspiringspeakerinthecompany.(3)Tomisrecognised_____apowerfulfigureinthiscompany.(4)MrsWuisa________(recognise)scholarinthiscity.【答案】(1)recognition(2)tobe(3)as(4)recognised,2．contributev．捐献；促成Paraphrase:togivemoneyorresourcestohelppayforsth.ortohelpachieveaparticularpurpose(P40)Shehasbeenavolleyballstarformorethanthirty-fiveyearsandhascontributedgreatlytothesport,whichhasmadeherthemostpopularfigureinChina’svolleyballhistory.【翻译】她已经成为排球明星超过35年，为这项运动做出了巨大的贡献，这使她成为中国排球史上最受欢迎的人物。,【语言提升】contributev．贡献，出力；投稿；捐献；促成contributeto(doing)sth.有助于某事，有益于contributesth.to/towards…向……捐献某物；向……投稿contributetosth.为……做出贡献；有助于；导致,Sportscontributemainlytoyourphysicalfitness.体育运动对你的身体健康有益。Everyoneiswillingtocontributefoodandclothestothehomelesspeople.每个人都愿意捐献食物和衣服给无家可归的人。Hiscarelessnesshascontributedtotheaccident.他的粗心大意导致了这次事故。,Everyoneshouldmakecontributionstoprotectingtheenvironment.每个人都应该为保护环境做出贡献。,【词汇拓展】contributionn．贡献；捐献；投稿makecontributionsto…对……做出贡献contributorn．贡献者；投稿者,【针对练习】完成句子(1)Theheavyrainwill_______________________________(有利于庄稼的生长)inthefields,whichareeagerforwater.【答案】contributetothegrowthofthecrops,(2)Thebusinessmanhasalready______________________(捐赠了五百万美元给穷人)here.【答案】contributedfivemilliondollarstothepoorpeople(3)Thelongdroughthas________________(导致了这场火灾)．【答案】contributedtothefire,(4)You’llhavetoworkharderandlearnmoresoasto________________(为我们国家作更多的贡献)．【答案】makemorecontributionstoourcountry,单句语法填空(5)Alltheteachersandstudentsinourschoolcontributedmoneyandbooks________theschoolchildreninthemountainousregion.(6)Thegreatscientisthasmadegreatcontributions________thepeoplearoundtheworld.【答案】(5)to(6)to,(7)Heisconsideredtobeawell-known________(contribute)inthefieldofcharity.(8)Iwanttomakemore________(contribute)toourmotherlandwhenIgrowup.【答案】(7)contributor(8)contributions,3．retirevi.退休；退职Paraphrase:olderpeopleleavetheirjobsandusuallystopworkingcompletelyorstopcompeting(P40)Afterretiringasanathletein1986shehasbeensuccessfulasavolleyballcoachintheUnitedStatesandItaly.【翻译】1986年退役后，她成了美国和意大利的排球教练。,【语言提升】retirevi.退休；退职；退隐；使撤退；收回,Shewasforcedtoretireearlyfromteachingbecauseofillhealth.她由于身体不好而被迫早早地从教学岗位上退休。MydreamistoretiretoavillainFrance.我的梦想是退休后在法国住上一栋别墅。Hehasnoplanstoretireaseditorofthemagazine.他还不打算从杂志编辑的岗位上退休。,【针对练习】完成句子(1)She________________________________.她退休时是一名老师。【答案】retiredasateacher(2)Myfather________________________________of60.我父亲六十岁时退休了。【答案】retiredattheage,(3)Theoldworkerdecidedto________________thecountry.那位老工人决定退休后搬到乡下去。【答案】retireto,◇句式解读(P40)Shehasbeenavolleyballstarformorethanthirty-fiveyearsandhascontributedgreatlytothesport,whichhasmadeherthemostpopularfigureinChina’svolleyballhistory.【翻译】她已经成为排球明星超过35年，为这项运动做出了巨大的贡献，这使她成为中国排球史上最受欢迎的人物。,【句式剖析】本句中的which是一个关系代词，引导后面的非限定性定语从句。其先行词是前面的整个句子。,【句式提升】which引导非限定性定语从句时，其用法注意如下：(1)其先行词可以是一个词；(2)其先行词也可以是一个句子；(3)先行词指物时，只能用which引导这个定语从句，不可用that。,Overtime,alotofsoilhasbeenremoved,whichhascausedseriouserosionofthelandalongtheYellowRiver.(alotofsoilhasbeenremoved是主句，whichhas…alongtheYellowRiver是非限制性定语从句，which指代前面的整个句子。)经年累月，大量的泥土被冲走，导致黄河两岸严重的水土流失。,Mikegothiscarstolenlastnight,whichmadehimverysad.(本句中的which代指的就是前面“汽车被偷”这件事，其先行词是一个句子，而不是一个名词。)迈克的汽车昨晚被偷了，这使得他很难过。,Thebridge,whichwasbuiltin1950s，gotdestroyedinaheavyrainlastmonth.(在本句中，定语从句对bridge做出一个补充说明，因此，译成中文时，定语从句翻译成另外一个句子，而不译成定语。)这座桥建于二十世纪五十年代。在上个月的大雨中，它被冲毁了。,【针对练习】单句语法填空(1)Sherefusedtolivewithmalecranes,andevenhadareputation(名声)forkillingsomeofthem,________madeitimpossibleforhertobecomeamother.(2)IcouldonlyhaveleftitontheG9bus,________wasnowspeedinginthedarktosomeunknownstations.(3)Ienjoyedsharingmydollsandjokes,________allowedmetokeepmyhighsocialstatus.【答案】(1)which(2)which(3)which,完成句子(4)Thelittledoglookssmart,_________________________(它是我上周买的)．【答案】whichIboughtlastweek(5)Thelittleboydidverywellintheexam,_______________(这使得他的父母很高兴)．【答案】whichmadehisparentsveryhappy,(6)Thepetcatfinallyreturnedhome,__________________(我上周花了很多钱买的)．【答案】whichIpaidalotofmoneyforlastweek,写作高效提升,◎话题短语1．wasborninapoor/richfamily出生在一个贫穷/富裕的家庭2．beverystrictwith…对……严格要求3．duringone’schildhood在童年时期4．beinterestedin…/befondof…对……感兴趣/喜欢5．dowellin…在……方面做/学得很好,6．haveagiftforsth.对某事有天赋7．devoteone’slife/timeto把某人的生命/时间奉献给8．winagoldmedal/firstprize赢得金牌/一等奖9．setagoodexampletosb.为某人树立好榜样10．speak/thinkhighlyof高度评价11．beregardedas被视为12．berespected/admiredby受到尊敬/钦佩,◎话题佳句【引人入胜的开头句】1．Lilyiswidelytakenas…2．MybestfriendiscalledPeter,astudentfromAmerica.【精彩纷呈的篇中句】1．Asaresult,helivedinpovertyallthroughhischildhood.2．Hewentthroughallkindsofdifficultiesinhislife.,【回味无穷的结尾句】1．Finally,hebecameawell-knownsuccessfulbusinessmanathomeandabroadinhisthirties.2．Hehaddonatedover10billionHKdollarstosponsoreducation,culture,sports,publicwelfareinmainland.,◎写作范例下表是霍英东(DrHuoYingdong)的有关信息。请根据这些信息写一篇短文。个人经历1.1923年5月，出生于香港，儿时家境贫困，七岁丧父；2．三十多岁时，经营建筑、航运、石油等。历经艰难，终成为海内外知名的成功商人；3．改革开放以来，先后捐资支持国内教育、文化、体育和福利事业款项达100多亿港元。影响2007年被评选为“感动中国”的人物,注意：1.词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，使内容完整。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,【写作指导】1．明确体裁为记叙文。2．文章的时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。3．文章的结构框架为：第一段：简介霍英东，引出话题；第二段：个人经历；第三段：历史贡献及评论。,4．重点词汇：(1)出生于________________(2)在七岁的时候________________(3)生活在贫困之中________________(4)经历________________(5)从事________________(6)一个接一个地________________(7)创造了一大笔财富________________(8)改革开放政策________________,【答案】(1)bebornin(2)attheageofseven(3)liveinpoverty(4)gothrough(5)beengagedin(6)oneafteranother(7)make/winalargefortune/wealth(8)reformandopenpolicy,5．完成句子(1)Hewassuchasuccessinbusiness________________________________________________________________________.他在商业方面做得非常成功，在三十多岁的时候就享誉全球了。【答案】thathebecamefamousallovertheworldinhisthirties,(2)Sincethebeginningofthereformandopenpolicy,________________________tosponsoreducation,culture,sports,publicwelfareinmainland.改革开放以来，他捐资超过100亿港元，资助内地的教育、文化、体育、公益事业。【答案】hehaddonatedover10billionHKdollars,(3)________________________toconstructingandbenefitingourcountry,DrHuoYingdongwasmadea“contractlungcancer”in2007.由于霍英东博士为建设祖国、造福祖国做出了巨大贡献，2007年被评为“感动中国人物”。【答案】Becauseofhisgreatcontributions,◎写作练笔请根据下表的内容，用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍台球巨星丁俊晖的一些情况。姓名丁俊晖出生地江苏宜兴生日1987年4月1日简介8岁时，他的才能被父亲发现；11岁开始接受系统的训练；13岁在亚洲邀请赛上获奖；16岁成为职业台球手。成就近年来，多次在国际性的大赛中获奖，成为台球界的巨星。,参考词汇：台球snooker亚洲邀请赛AsianInvitationalTournament要求：词数80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,【答案】Onepossibleversion：Dr.HuoYingdongwastakenasoneofthemostfamousbusinessmenintheworld.,HewasborninapoorfamilyinHongKonginMay,1923.Unfortunately,whenhewasattheageofseven,hisfatherdiedofillness.Asaresult,helivedinpovertyallthroughhischildhood.Hewentthroughallkindsofdifficultiesinhislife.Hewasengagedinarchitecture,shippingandpetroloneafteranother.Heworkedhardandearnedgreatwealth.Hewassuchasuccessinbusinessthathebecamefamousallovertheworldinhisthirties.,Sincethebeginningofthereformandopenpolicy,hehaddonatedover10billionHKdollarstosponsoreducation,culture,sports,publicwelfareinmainland.Becauseofhisgreatcontributionstoconstructingandbenefitingourcountry,DrHuoYingdongwasmadea“MovingChinahero”in2007.,写作练笔Onepossibleversion：DingJunhuiisoneofthemostrecognizedsnookerplayersinChina.,HewasbornonApril1,1987inYixing,JiangsuProvince.Whenhewasonlyeightyearsold,Ding’stalentinplayingsnookerwasdiscoveredbyhisfatherbychance.Therefore,hisfatherthoughtthathissonisapromisingboyinplayingsnooker.Asaresult,hewasgivensystematictrainingattheageof11.HewentthroughhardtraininginthefollowingyearsandbegantoreceiveprizesinAsianInvitationalTournamentattheageof13.Afterwards,heturnedprofessionalwhenhewas16.Fromthenon,hebegantoplayindifferentkindsofcompetitions.,Inrecentyears,Dinghasreceivedmanyprizesininternationalcompetitionsandhasbecomeasuperstarinthefieldofsnooker.