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高考英语一轮复习 第三部分 写作技能培优 第4讲 巧妙遣词造句,实现升级策略课件 牛津译林版

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欢迎来到英语课堂\n第四讲 巧妙遣词造句,实现升级策略\n(2014·高考新课标全国卷Ⅱ)一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture._____________________________________________________\n满分作文:_______________________________________________wouldliketogiveanexcellentpictureofmyfuturelife(很好地描绘我未来的生活)intenyears.Tobeginwith(首先),Iwillmakeeveryefforttotakegoodcareofmyfamily,especiallymyagedgrandfatherbecausehehas_________________________________________________①(奉献大部分生活养育两代人)._________workisconcerned(就工作而言),Iamdeterminedtobecomeafilm-maker②____________(那种情况下),Ishalldirectmanygoodmoviesfortheaudience.Duringholidayseasons,IwillliveintheIoftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.devotedmostofhislifetobringinguptwogenerationsAsfarasInthatcase\ncountryside,_________________________________________③(在那里空气新鲜,人们友善).Iwillenjoysomanyinterestingactivities,____________(例如)fishing,swimmingandvisitingoldfriends.Suchwillbemyfuturelife,oneIhavebeen_____________④(梦想).whereairisfreshandpeoplearefriendlysuchasdreamingof\n温馨提示1.巧用词汇,giveanexcellentpictureof,tobeginwith,devote...to;bringup;Asfarasworkisconcerned,inthatcase;suchas;dreamof2.①该句是一个含原因状语从句的复合句,逻辑严密,用词准确,语义连贯。②Asfaraswork...isconcerned的运用使句子紧凑。③定语从句的使用,符合评分标准对复杂句式的要求。④倒装句和定语从句巧妙结合,与首句相呼应,体现了语篇的完整性。\n\n一、遣词方面:1.措辞要贴切具体试比较下面句子:一个人正在街上闲逛。Amaniswalkingdownthestreet.Amaniswanderingdownthestreet.通过比较可以看出,前一句不如后一句表达得具体、生动。一个词如果内涵越具体,那么在特定的场景中恰当地使用它,就会收到意想不到的效果。\n2.要善于运用短语短语用得好,会给评卷老师留下深刻印象。例如:Whenhewasachild,hewantedtolearneverything.(普通)Whenhewasachild,hehadastrongappetite(胃口)forknowledge.(高级)二、造句方面:1.巧用非谓语动词运用非谓语动词,可使文句看起来更简洁,使语言更加丰富多彩,重点更加突出,增加文采。Icoveredmyears,tryingtokeepthenoiseout,butfailed.\n2.巧用with复合结构“with+名词/代词+现在分词/过去分词/形容词/副词/介词”结构,常作伴随状语以增加被描绘内容的生动性和情感性,使文章读起来更简洁明了。试比较:Hesleptallthenightandthewindowwasopen.(一般)Hesleptallthenightwiththewindowopen.(高级)\n3.巧用复合句评分标准中强调使用语法结构的数量和复杂性,鼓励考生尽量使用较复杂的结构,并且对由此产生的错误采取了宽容的态度。如果恰当运用各类从句,就会增加文章的亮点。SoonIbecameoneofthetopstudentsinmyclass,whichgreatlyincreasedmyconfidenceandgotmemotivated.(定语从句)\n4.巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句、虚拟语气句等使用这些句式可使文章化平淡为生动,加强语气,使评卷老师感受作者的强烈情感,起到升级文章的作用。DisappointedasIfeltattheshabbycampusandthepoorlyequippedclassroom,Ifoundtheteacherspatientandconsiderate.(倒装句)\n5.巧用排比等句式如能运用一个个排比句、对偶句、不定式或短语,可使文章增色不少,会给评卷老师眼前一亮的感觉。Thepurposeoftheprogramistomakeourschoolmorebeautiful,tomaketheaircleanerandfresher,andtoturnourschoolintoabetterplaceforustostudyandlivein.\n\n\n亮点词句:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________fullofwarmth,loveandlaughter;showconcernfor;If;ismorelikelytobe;Otherwise;Meanwhile;aresureto;Since;playsaveryimportantrolein;itisupto;contributeto;Firstofall;paymoreattentionto;Besides;communicatewith;As;Ifwedoso\nⅡ.巧用遣词造句,升级下面文章留意一下我们的周边,可以发现陪读现象很普遍。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文,内容应包括:1.简要描述陪读现象;2.分析父母陪读的原因(2至3个);3.发表你对此的看法。注意:1.词数:120~150;2.标题已给出,不计入总词数。\nShouldOurParentsAccompanyUsinStudyingatSchool___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inrecentyears,manyparentschoosetoaccompanytheirchildreninstudying,whichhasarousedawideconcern.Theseparentsarewillingtoleavetheirhometown,evenquittheirjobstofollowtheirchildrenintothecampus.Mostofthemrentanapartmentnearbysoastotakegoodcareoftheirchildren.\n_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Parentsconsideritnecessarytoofferabetterlivingconditiontotheirchildren.Meanwhile,itenablesthemtokeeptrackoftheirchildren’sacademicperformance.Nevertheless,whattheyhaveignoredisthatitwillgettheirkidsintothehabitofbeingdependent.Thus,theywillneverdeveloptheabilityofself-controlinthefuture.Trustleadstoindependence.Soitseemstomeparentsshouldcreateroomforchildren’sgrowthandstudyinordertoensuretheiroveralldevelopment.\n

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