【高考专题辅导】浙江省2022版高考英语 专题检测卷（四十二） 短文改错

短文改错（建议用时：40分钟）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。1（2022·杭州模拟）DearMr.Black,I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.Ihadbeenstudyinginyourschoolforayear.Iamdeepmovedbythekindnessofpeoplearound.WhatIwanttosayfirstisthattheteachershereareveryfriendly.Theydowhattheycanhelpmeandencouragemetostudyhard.Wheneverasking,theygivesatisfactoryanswers.Beside,myclassmatesoffermealotofhelp,either.WegetonwelltoeachotherandIhavemadequiteafewgoodfriend.Athome,Walter’sparentstakegoodcareofme,treatingtomeasifIweretheirownchild.I’msogratefultoallthesepeople,withtheirhelpIhavebeenaccustomedtoAmericancultureandgainedalotofknowledge.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua（2022·宁波模拟）AsaboygrownupinIndia,Ihadlongedtotravelingabroad.IusedtolistentothestoriesmyfathertoldmeaboutherstayinCanadaandtripstoEuropein1970s.Mybigmomentfinallycomeinthesummerof1998whenIwasabletoaccompanymyparentstoEurope,wheremyfatherwastoattendforameeting.TheserviceduringtheflighttoFrankfurtwassuchnicethateventodayIcanstillrememberthem.Theflightwasreallysmoothandthoroughenjoyable,evenforsomeoneasme,whoisotherwisescaredofflying.3-6-\n（2022·温州模拟）OneSaturday,Iwasdoingmyhomeworkwhileitsuddenlyoccurredtomethatitwasmymotherbirthdaythenextday.However,Iforgotitcomplete.IwasworriedthatIdidn’tprepareanypresenttoher.Atthatmoment,theideaofonlineshoppingcamemymind.Iclickedthemouseandsearchsomefamousshoppingwebsites.Havingcomparedthepriceofmanydresses,IchoseonewithareasonablepricewhichIsupposedMumwouldappreciateitandboughtitassoonaspossible.ThenextmorningIreceivedthedressasexpectedwithoutgetoutofmyroom.Yousee,onlineshoppinghasmadeourlifemuchconvenientandcolorful.4Alittlewaveisjumpingalongintheocean,havinggreattime.Heisenjoyingthewindbutthefreshairuntilhenoticestheotherwavesinfrontofhim,crashingagainstontheshore.“MyGod,thisisterribly,”thewavesays.“Lookhowisgoingtohappentome!”Thenalongcameanotherwave.Itseesthefirstwavelookeddepressed,anditaskshim,“Whydoyoulooksosad?”Thefirstwavesays,“Youdon’tunderstand!Theyareallgoingtocrash!Allofuswavesaregoingtobeeverything!Isn’tthisterrible?”Thesecondwavesays,“No,youdon’tunderstand.Wearenotwave.Wearepartoftheocean.”答案解析1答案：DearMr.Black,I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.Ihadbeenstudyinginyourschoolhaveforayear.Iamdeepmovedbythekindnessofpeoplearound.WhatIwanttosayfirstdeeplyisthattheteachershereareveryfriendly.Theydowhattheycan∧helpmeandtoencouragemetostudyhard.Wheneverasking,theygivesatisfactoryanswers.-6-\naskedBeside,myclassmatesoffermealotofhelp,either.WegetonwelltoeachotherBesidestoowithandIhavemadequiteafewgoodfriend.Athome,Walter’sparentstakegoodcareoffriendsme,treatingtomeasifIweretheirownchild.I’msogratefultoallthesepeople,withtheirhelpIhavebeenaccustomedtowhoseAmericancultureandgainedalotofknowledge.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua1.【解析】将第二句中的had改为have。文章全文用的是现在的时态。根据时间状语此处用现在完成进行时。2.【解析】将第三句中的deep改为deeply。用副词deeply修饰moved。3.【解析】在第五句中的help前加to。tohelpme是不定式短语作目的状语。4.【解析】将第六句中的asking改为asked。ask与they是被动的关系，用过去分词表示被动。5.【解析】将第七句中的Beside改为Besides。beside是介词，意思是“在旁边”；besides是副词，意思是“此外；而且”，表示并列的关系。6.【解析】将第七句中的either改为too。either和too都是“也”的意思，either用于否定句，too用于肯定句。7.【解析】将第八句中的to改为with。getonwellwith“与……相处得好”是固定短语。8.【解析】将第八句中的friend改为friends。从句中的afew可知用可数名词的复数。9.【解析】将第九句中的to去掉。treat是及物动词，直接跟宾语，不加介词。10.【解析】将第十句中的their改为whose。这是一个非限制性定语从句，allthesepeople是先行词，故用whose。whose在定语从句中作宾语。2答案：AsaboygrownupinIndia，Ihadlongedtotravelingabroad.Iusedtolistengrowingtravel-6-\ntothestoriesmyfathertoldmeaboutherstayinCanadaandtripstoEuropein∧histhe1970s.Mybigmomentfinallycomeinthesummerof1998whenIwasabletocameaccompanymyparentstoEurope,wheremyfatherwastoattendforameeting.TheserviceduringtheflighttoFrankfurtwassuchnicethateventodayIcanstillsorememberthem.Theflightwasreallysmoothandthoroughenjoyable，itthoroughlyevenforsomeoneasme,whoisotherwisescaredofflying.like1.【解析】将第一句中的grown改为growing。句中的as是介词，意思是“作为”，aboy与growup之间是主动关系，用现在分词作定语修饰boy。2.【解析】将第一句中的traveling改为travel。longtodosth.“渴望做某事”。3.【解析】将第二句中的her改为his。his指的是father’s。4.【解析】在第二句中的第二个in后面加the。短语inthe1970s是固定用法，意为“20世纪70年代”表示世纪和年代要用定冠词the。5.【解析】将第三句中的come改为came。文章全文用的是过去时态。6.【解析】将第三句中的for去掉。attendameeting中的attend是及物动词，直接跟宾语。7.【解析】将第四句中的such改为so。so修饰形容词nice。so...that为固定句式。8.【解析】将第四句中的them改为it。it指theservice。9.【解析】将第五句中的thorough改为thoroughly。副词thoroughly修饰形容词enjoyable。10.【解析】将第五句中的as改为like。like是介词，意思是“像……一样”。3答案：OneSaturday,Iwasdoingmyhomeworkwhileitsuddenlyoccurredtomethatwhenitwasmymotherbirthdaythenextday.However,Iforgotitcomplete.Iwasworriedmother’scompletelythatIdidn’tprepareanypresenttoher.Atthatmoment,theideaofonlineshopping-6-\nforcame∧mymind.Iclickedthemouseandsearchsomefamousshoppingwebsites.to/intosearchedHavingcomparedthepriceofmanydresses,IchoseonewithareasonablepricepriceswhichIsupposedMumwouldappreciateitandboughtitassoonaspossible.ThenextmorningIreceivedthedressasexpectedwithoutgetoutofmyroom.Yousee,gettingonlineshoppinghasmadeourlifemuchconvenientandcolorful.more/muchmore1.【解析】将第一句中的while改为when。该句式为is/wasdoing+when...意为“正在做某事，突然……”，when引导一个并列句。2.【解析】将第一句中的mother改为mother’s。指的是“母亲的（生日）”，用名词的所有格。3.【解析】将第二句中的complete改为completely。副词completely修饰动词forgot。4.【解析】将第三句中的to改为for。prepare....for...“为……做准备”是固定搭配。5.【解析】将第四句中的my前加to/into。cometo/intoone’smind是固定搭配。6.【解析】将第五句中的search改为searched。与clicked的时态一致。7.【解析】将第六句中的price改为prices。从manydresses可知用复数形式。8.【解析】将第六句中的第一个it去掉。这是一个定语从句，先行词是one，作appreciate的宾语。9.【解析】将第七句中的get改为getting。without是介词后面跟名词或动名词。10.【解析】将第八句中的much改为more/muchmore。从上下文可知用比较级。convenient是多音节形容词，比较级加more。在此也可用much修饰more，表示程度的加深。4答案：Alittlewaveisjumpingalongintheocean,having∧greattime.Heisenjoyingathewindbutthefreshairuntilhenoticestheotherwavesinfrontofhim,crashingandagainstontheshore.“MyGod,thisisterribly,”thewavesays.“Lookhowisterriblewhat-6-\ngoingtohappentome!”Thenalongcameanotherwave.Itseesthefirstwavecomeslookeddepressed,anditaskshim,“Whydoyoulooksosad?”Thefirstwavelookingsays,“Youdon’tunderstand!Theyareallgoingtocrash!AllofuswavesaregoingtoWebeeverything!Isn’tthisterrible?”Thesecondwavesays,“No,youdon’tunderstand.nothingWearenotwave.Wearepartoftheocean.”waves1.【解析】在第一句中的having后加a。haveagreattime为固定用法，意思是：过得非常开心。2.【解析】将第二句中的but改为and。前后为并列关系。3.【解析】将第二句中的on去掉。crashagainststh.意为“猛撞到……上”。4.【解析】将第三句中的terribly改为terrible。作表语用形容词。5.【解析】将第四句中的how改为what。作happen的主语，用what。6.【解析】将第五句中的came改为comes。和全文的时态一致，用一般现在时，主语为anotherwave,用第三人称单数。7.【解析】将第六句中的looked改为looking。look为系动词，用-ing形式表主动。8.【解析】将第八句中的They改为We。和下面的Allofus对应。9.【解析】将第九句中的everything改为nothing。语境为：海浪汇入大海消失了，就什么也不是了。10.【解析】将第十二句中的wave改为waves。和前面的Weare对应，用复数形式。-6-