2023高考英语二轮复习书面表达优化热门话题10社会主义核心价值观202303022201

热门话题：社会主义核心价值观对成功的理解如何理解“成功”,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation),按要求用英语写一篇短文。“Successistheabilitytogofromonefailuretoanotherwithnolossofenthusiasm.”—SirWinstonChurchill内容要求:1.你对该引语的理解;2.你的相关经历;3.恰当的结尾。注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息;3.词数:80左右。练考场审题Step1:精准审题　谋篇布局人称I时态一般现在时,一般过去时段落布局开头点题:点明对引语的理解主题段落:用事例解释对这句话的理解结尾:再次深化自己的观点Step2:头脑风暴　字字珠玉(1)美词:getdiscouraged,enthusiasm,consistin,worsestill,beabouttodo...when...,succeedin(2)佳句:①SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn’twaittotrymyhandatridingit.②Lookingback,IfeelIwouldn’tbeabletorideabikehadIlostheart.Step3:斟酌词句　妙笔生花要点1:我非常激动,决定试骑一下。一般表达:Iwasexcitedandtriedmyhandatridingit.句式升级:(so...that...倒装句)\n我是如此激动以至于等不及要试骑一把了。SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn’twaittotrymyhandatridingit. 要点2:回顾过去,我觉得如果我失去了信心,就不能学会骑自行车。一般表达:Lookingback,IfeelifIlostheart,Icouldn’tlearntorideabike.句式升级(分词作状语,虚拟语气):回顾过去,我觉得如果我失去了信心,就不能学会骑自行车。Lookingback,IfeelIwouldn’tbeabletorideabikehadIlostheart. Step4:衔接过渡　斐然成篇ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthatweshouldn’tgetdiscouragedrightafterfailures.Instead,weshouldkeeptryingwithenthusiasm.Successconsistsintheabilitytocontinueeffortsthroughfailures.Attheageoftwelve,Igotanicebikeasabirthdaygift.SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn’twaittotrymyhandatridingit.However,itwasharderthanexpected.Thebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficulttocontrol.Worsestill,Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.Iwasabouttogiveupwhenmyfathercameandencouragedmetokeepgoing.Withmorepractice,Ididbetterandbetter.Lookingback,IfeelIwouldn’tbeabletorideabikehadIlostheart.Actually,wecan’tsucceedineverythingwetry.What’simportantisthatweshouldstickatit.50年后的地球假定你是李华,现在某英文报社面向中学生征文,题为“50年后的地球”,请发挥你的想象力,用英语写一篇短文,向该报社投稿。世纪金榜导学号注意:词数80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________\n【参考范文】　　Whatwillourearthbelikeafter50years?Ihavesomewonderfulpredictions.Theenvironmentthenwillbemuchbetterthanitisnow.Peoplecanenjoythebluesky,whitecloudsandfreshair.Therewillbelesspollution.Treesandflowerscanbeseenhereandthere.Theriverswillbecleanerasnofactoriespourwasteintotheriversandlakes.Asforpeople’slife,therewillbegreatchanges.First,peoplewillleadamorecomfortablelifebecauserobotswillreacheachfamilyandhelppeopledothehousework.Inaddition,peoplecanworkattheirownhomesontheInternet.Inthisway,theywillhavemoretimetoentertainthemselves.Theearthwillbecomeamorecomfortableplanetforpeopletoliveon50yearslater.