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欢迎来到英语课堂\n\n要想把一篇文章写好,不仅要注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等,还要对文章进行润色,尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式,以增加文章的亮点,给阅卷者留下深刻的印象。一、巧设开头和结尾1.开头常见的开头方式有开门见山式、描述主题式、提供背景知识式、小故事引导式、提出问题式、设置悬念式、倒叙式和名言引入式等。虽然开头有着各式各样的风格,不能千篇一律,要因不同文章的需要而各异,但又有其共同遵循的原则:①开头多是通篇文章内容的摘要;②开头常能展示文章的主题;③开头应能抓住读者的注意力,引导读者读下去。用于文章开头的句型有:(1)Thereisageneraldiscussiontodayabouttheissueof...;Thosewhoobjectto...arguethat...;Theybelievethat...;Butpeoplewhofavor...,ontheotherhand,arguethat...\n(2)Facedwith...,quiteafewpeoplearguethat...;Butotherpeopleconceivedifferently.(3)Currentlythereisawidespreadconcernthat...(4)Nowpeopleingrowingnumberarecomingtorealizethat...(5)Nowitiscommonlyheldthat...;ButIdoubtwhether...(6)Recentlytheissueof...hasbeenbroughttopublicattention.(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believesthat...Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharethisbelief.(8)Moreandmorepeoplearerealizing/havecometorealize...(9)Thereisnodenying/doubtthat...\n2.结尾结尾的方法有很多,如总结式、重复式、结论式、暗示式和求解式等。结尾一般是文章的升华或对文章主题的归纳,也是写好文章的关键。好的结尾能唤起读者共鸣,深化主题,给人回味,引人深思。用于文章结尾的句型有:(1)Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemaysafelyarriveat/draw/cometo/reachtheconclusionthat...(2)Itishightimethatweputconsiderable/great/specialemphasison...(3)Wemustlookforallimmediatemethod,becausethepresentsituationof...ifpermittedtocontinue,willsureleadto/resultin...(4)Manysolutions/methodsarebeingofferedhere,allofthemmakesomesense,butnoneisquitesatisfactory.Theproblemshouldbeexaminedinanewway.\n(5)Thereisnoimmediatesolutiontotheproblemof...,but...mightbehelpful/beneficial.(6)Noeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemof...,butthegeneralawarenessofthenecessity/importanceof...mightbethefirststepontherightway.(7)Thereislittledoubt/denyingthat...(8)Itis,therefore,obvious/evidentthatthetaskof...requireimmediateattention.(9)Asfaras...beconcerned,Ibelieve/thinkthat...(10)Inconclusion,...(11)Inmyopinion,Iaminfavorof...(12)Personally,Ipreferto...(13)Inshort,...shouldlearnto...;Onlyinthiswaycanthemostdifficultproblemsbesolvedproperly.(14)AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththeopinionthat...\n二、准确地道的英美式表达1.注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异alittleboy小男孩(有可爱之意)asmallboy小男孩(强调身材瘦小)2.恰当使用限定词用词准确,从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度,这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词,以避免观点的绝对化,从而提高说服力和可信度。Heisthetopstudentinourclass.→Heisoneofthetopstudentsinourclass.\n3.注意词语的习惯搭配用词准确不仅要求考生掌握具体单词的含义,还要熟悉词语的习惯搭配,一定要避免受汉语影响而出现错误。Nobodyistobeblamedforit.(F)Nobodyistoblameforit.(T)4.避免口语化高考作文一般应该使用较正式的书面文体,因此在写作时要避免使用口语化的词汇。Thisisthebesthotelyoucanfindhere.Youcan'tfindabetterhotelhere.或Nowhereelsecanyoufindabetterhotel.\n5.避免赘言啰嗦赘句是指用词不简练。表达某一思想,本来只需要一两个词,却用了冗长的词组或者从句,如repeatagain,returnback,stillremain,veryperfect等。\n三、提升表达结构1.变简单句为并列句或复合句。Naturalresourcesareverylimited.Theywillbeexhaustedinthenearfuture.Itisnottrue.Butitbecomesamajorconcernaroundtheworld.Thisisawidelyacceptedfact.→Itisawidelyacceptedfactthatthereisamajorconcernaroundtheworldfortheexhaustionoflimitednaturalresourcesinthenearfuture,thoughitisunlikelytobetrue.2.借用关键词汇(介词,不定式等)压缩句子长度,提升句子品味。Theflathasanareaof25squaremetresandthereisabedroom,abathroom,andakitcheninit.Theflathasanareaof25squaremetreswithabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.\n3.语态互换Someonesawhimstudyinghardinhisstudy.→Hewasseenstudyinghardinhisstudy.4.语序调整Thescholardidn'twriteasinglepaperthewholeterm.→Notasinglepaperdidthescholarwritethewholeterm.5.强调句式Youmustwritetomewhenyougetthere.→Doremembertowritetomewhenyougetthere.\n6.感叹及省略Timeflieslikeanarrow.→Howtimeflies!Lookoutforcarswhenyouarecrossingthestreet.→Lookoutforcarswhencrossingthestreet.7.语气虚拟Youdidn'ttakemyadvice,soyoufailedintheexam.→Ifyouhadtakenmyadvice,youwouldn'thavefailedintheexam.8.非谓语动词的使用Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.→Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.\n9.插入语Ithinkthebookiswellworthreading.→Thebook,inmyopinion,iswellworthreading.10.格言警句的套用(1)Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者,事竟成。(2)Everycoinhastwosides.凡事皆有好坏。(3)Nopains,nogains.不劳无获。(4)It'snevertoolatetolearn.活到老学到老。(5)Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。(6)Oneisnevertoooldtolearn.学无止境。\n(7)Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。(8)Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。11.句式调换Hecamehereat5pmyesterday.→Hedidn'tcomehereuntil5pmyesterday.→Notuntil/till5pmdidhecomehereyesterday.\nⅠ.按要求改写句子1.Peoplethroughoutthecountryhavegreatlydemandedallkindsofnutritiousfood.(therebe句型)→2.Hefellasleep.Thelightswerestillon.(with的复合结构)→3.BecauseIhavelotsofworktodo,Ihavetoworkextrahours.(非谓语)→4.ThoughI'mweak,I'llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句改写)→Thereisagreatdemandacrossthecountryforallkindsofnutritiousfood.Hefellasleepwiththelightson.Lotsofworktodo,Ihavetoworkextrahours.WeakasIam,I'llmaketheeffort.\n5.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型Itwas...)→Ⅱ.句式提升(使用较高级的结构使其简洁,连贯,紧凑)1.It'saflatof25squaremeters.Thereisabedroomintheflat.Thereisabathroomandakitcheninit,too.Inthebedroom,thereisabed;thereisasofa,adeskandachairaswell.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.It'saflatof25squaremeters,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.Thebedroomisfurnishedwithabed,asofa,adeskandachair.\n2.Thereisanewmultimediabuildingononesideoftheroad.Thereusedtobeaplaygroundontheotherside.Butthereisalibrarynow.Thereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinthelibrary.Thereisanewplaygroundinthefrontoftheschool.Therearealotoftreesinandaroundtheschool.Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewmultimediabuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobe,nowstandsanothernewbuilding—ourlibrary,inwhichyoucanfindallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.Anewplaygroundisnowinthefrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandaroundtheschool.\nⅢ.语篇升级(订正错误,提升结构,完善脉络)DearLiMing,Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatewithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.Youshouldtakepartinthediscussionsandshowyourownopinionsaboutthematters,learnlistentootherpeople'sviews.Youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmates'likesanddislikes.Thenyoucanhavemuchincommonwiththem.Youcangettoknowmoredifferentpeopleandshowthemthatyouarejustasfriendly.I'malwaysherereadytohelp.WecantakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherandIcanintroduceyoutoothers.Bestregards,ZhangHua\n[满分作文]DearLiMing,Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.That'sbecauseyouarenewhereandpeopledon'tknowaboutyou.ButIthinkyoucanmakeitifonlyyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.First,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionsandshowyourownopinionsaboutthematters,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherpeople'sviews.Second,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmates'likesanddislikes.Thenyoucanhavemuchincommonwiththem.Thisway,youcangettoknowmoredifferentpeopleandshowthemthatyouarejustasfriendly.Lastbutnotleast,I'malwaysherereadytohelp.WecantakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherandIcanintroduceyoutoothers.\nWithtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucandoastheabove.Bestregards!ZhangHua\n本小节结束请按ESC键返回\n

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