外研版高三英语一轮总复习写作专项攻略四课件

欢迎来到英语课堂\n\n书面表达的评分标准是把衔接与过渡作为重要标准来要求的。学生要学会恰当地使用这些表示逻辑关系的关联词语，使文章前后连贯、结构紧凑、过渡自然。一、使用过渡性词语1．表递进关系的过渡词：besides，inaddition，moreover，furthermore，what'smore，what'sworse，ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...等。[例]我不喜欢那件衣服，而且它太贵了。(1)Idon'tlikethedress；besides，it'stooexpensive.(2)Idon'tlikethedress；moreover，it'stooexpensive.\n2．表转折对比的过渡词：but，however，yet，instead，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，despite，inspiteof，whereas，nevertheless等。[例]他原以为自己理解了那道题，但是他错了。(1)Hethoughtheunderstoodtheproblem，buthewasmistaken.(2)Hethoughtheunderstoodtheproblem，however，hewasmistaken.3．表目的过渡词：forthisreason/purpose，sothat，inorderto/that等。[例]为了让学生听清，老师提高了声音。(1)Theteacherraisedhisvoicesothatstudentscouldhearhimclearly.(2)Inordertomakehimselfhearedclearly，theteacherraisedhisvoice.\n4．表示因果关系的过渡性词语：because，as，since，for，thanksto，thus，therefore，asaresultof，onereasonisthat...，anotherreasonisthat...等。[例]由于天在下雨，你最好乘出租车。(1)Asit'sraining，you'dbettertakeataxi.(2)It'srainingsoyou'dbettertakeataxi.5．表示列举事实的过渡性词语：forexample/instance，suchas，take...forexample，thatistosay，asfollows，inotherwords等。[例]许多伟人从贫困中崛起，例如林肯和爱迪生。(1)Manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty—LincolnandEdison，forexample.(2)Manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty，forexample，LincolnandEdison.\n6．表特定的顺序关系的过渡词：first，firstly，second，secondly，third，thirdly，aboveall，firstofall，then，next，finally，intheend，atlast，eventually等。[例]努力学习，最终你会成功的。(1)Workhard，andyouwillsucceedintheend.(2)Workhard，andyouwillsucceedintime.7．表示并列的过渡性词语：and，or，also，too，aswellas，neither...nor...，notonly...butalso...，either...or...，not...but...等。[例]他不但给我建议，还给我钱。(1)Hegavememoneyaswellasadvice.(2)Hegavemenotonlyadvicebutalsomoney.\n8．表示条件的过渡性词语：if，unless，as/solongas，onconditionthat等。[例]只要有生命，就有希望。(1)Aslongasthereislife，thereishope.(2)Wherethereislife，thereishope.9．表示让步关系的过渡性词语：as，though，evenif/though，who(what，when，where)ever/nomatterwho(what，when，where)等。[例]不管谁违法都要受到惩罚。(1)Nomatterwhobreaksthelaw，hewillbepunished.(2)Whoeverbreaksthelawwillbepunished.\n10．表总结的过渡词：inaword，ingeneral，inshort，tosumup，finally，inconclusion，insummary，generallyspeaking，allinall等。[例]一般而言，语言是用来交际的。(1)Ingeneral，languageisforcommunication.(2)Generallyspeaking，languageisforcommunication.\n二、使用过渡性句子段与段之间除了借助于一些篇章层次上的连接性词语，如however，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，similarly，therefore，inconclusion，inshort等，还经常需要使用一些表示过渡的句子来确保其连贯性。常见的过渡性句子类型有：1．设问引出下文为了引出下文所要表达的内容，作者有时采用设问的方式引出下文。\n2．总体陈述不同观点有时作者在前一个段落列举各种现象或者引出某个要供大家讨论的话题之后，接下来就要从整体上论述人们对此持有的不同看法，然后再具体论述各种观点，如Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowardsit.等。3．举实例佐证有时为了增强某个观点或者现象的说服力，我们可以使用实例加以佐证。可以使用“take...forexample”来引出下文。\nⅠ.根据句意，用适当的连接性词语填空1．JanewasdressedinblueMarywasdressedinred.2．Shewillbelate，，sheiscaughtinatrafficjam.3．Hetookthefirstbus.，hegotontime.4．thecatthedoghasbeenfed，becausethehostessisill.5．Theycangotheypromisetobebackbefore11o'clock.Ⅱ.根据汉语提示完成句子1．英语是一门有用的语言。一方面，它是联合国官方语言；另一方面，它在商业，科学及技术领域广泛使用。Englishisausefullanguage.，itisanofficiallanguageintheUN.，itiswidelyusedinbusiness，scienceandtechnology.whilewhat'sworseAsaresultNeithernoraslongas/solongasForonethingForanother(thing)\n2．一般而言，为了保持身体健康，我们应该饮食多样化，除主食外，通常还包括适量的鱼、肉、蔬菜和水果。，tokeepfit，weshouldhavevarioushealthydiets，whichincludeproperamountsoffish，meat，vegetables，fruitmainfood.3．首先，我需要你的姓名和住址。其次，你生日在什么时候？，Ineedyournameandaddress.，when'syourbirthday?4．一方面60%的学生反对公园收门票，另一方面，40%的学生认为应该收门票。,60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees；,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbecharged.Generallyspeakingaswellas/besides/inadditiontoTobeginwithThenOntheonehandontheotherhand\n5．然而，在城市生活的费用通常是很高的。你必须找到一份报酬丰厚的工作。否则，你将负担不起你所需要的东西。，livinginthecityisoftenveryexpensive.Youmustfindawellpaidjob，，youwillnotaffordthethingsyouneed.Ⅲ.阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空，并根据行文补上第三段首句Asanewwayofshopping，onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.Howeverotherwise\n，onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First，onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings.Insteadofsearchingacrowdedstore，wejustneedtowatchthecomputerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.，itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.Wedon'thavetospendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Third，wecanseealotofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenatthesametime.Thepicturesofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.，wecanbecheatedeasily.，wecannotseethethingsindetail.，thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping，Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.Soweshoulddevelopit.On(the)onehandSecondOntheotherhand，onlineshoppingisnotsoperfect./Ontheotherhand，onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.AsaresultWhat'sworseInaworddespite\n本小节结束请按ESC键返回\n