高考英语作文范文模范短文背诵

英语模范短文背诵BOOKS书籍Asiswellknown(tous),booksteachustolearnlife,truth,scienceandmanyotherusefulthings.Theyincreaseourknowledge,broadenourmindsandstrengthenourcharacter.Inotherwords,theyareourgoodteachersandwisefriends.Thisisthereasonwhyourparentsalwaysencourageustoreadmorebooks.    Readingisagoodthing,butwemustpaygreatattentiontothechoiceofbooks.Itistruethatwecangetbenefitsfromgoodbooks.However,badbookswilldousmoreharmthangood.如众所周知，书籍教我们学习人生，真理，科学以及其它许多有用的东西。它们增加我们的知识，扩大我们的心胸并加强我们的品格。换句话说，它们是我们的良师益友。这是为什么我们的父母终鼓励我们要多读书的理由。读书是一好事，但我们必须多加注意书的选择。不错，我们能从好书中获得益处。然而，坏书却对我们有害无益。DUTIESOFASTUDENT学生的责任 Educationistheverythingthatwewanttoreceive.Ourparentssendustoschoolsoastoenableustoget(obtain)knowledgeandachievegreatthingsinthefuture.Thefollowingarethedutiesofastudent(which)weshouldkeepinmind.Inthefirstplace,weshouldbefilialtoourparentsandrespectfultoourteachers.Inthesecondplace,wehaveto(must)studyashardaswecan.Lastofall,wemustnottelllies.Tosumup,theabove-mentionedrulesaretheverydutiesofastudent.教育就是我们要承受的东西。我们父母送我们上学以便能使人们获得知识与将来成大事。下面是我们应该记住的学生的责任。35/35\n我们应对父母要孝顺，对教师要尊敬。我们要尽可能的用功读书。最后，我们切不可说谎。总而言之，上面所说的规那么就是我们应尽的责任BEPATRIOTIC要爱国Itisthedutyofeverycitizentomakethecountryrichandpowerful.Inordertoaccomplishthisobjectonemustbepatriotic.Iconsiderthisanunchangeabletruth.Howcanastudentlovehiscountry?Ifindmyanswerverysimpleandclear.Hemuststudyhardandstoreupknowledgesoastoservehiscountryinthefuture.IfeverystudentcandoaccordingtowhatIsaid,thecountrywillcertainlyberichandpowerful.要使国家富强是每个公民的责任。为了到达此目的，必须爱国。我认为这是一条不易的定理。一个学生如何才能爱国呢？我觉察答复很简单明了。他必须用功读书并积储知识以便将来效劳国家。如果每个学生能按照我所说的去做，国家一定会富强。AMODELSTUDENTWouldyouliketobecalledabadstudent?Ofcoursenot.SofarasIknow,everybodyintendstobe(become)amodelstudent.However,tobeamodelstudentisbynomeansaneasything.Firstly,hemustdohisbesttoobtainknowledge.Amanwithoutsufficientknowledgewillnotsucceed.Secondly,hemustremembertoimprovehishealth.Onlyastrongmancandogreattasks.Thirdly,heshouldreceivemoraleducation.Ifhisconductisnotgood,noonewillconsidermakingfriendswithhim.模范学生你愿意被称为坏学生吗？当然不。就我所知，每个人都打算做模范学生。35/35\n然而，做模范学生却决不是件容易的事。第一，他必须尽力获得知识（求知）。一个没有足够知识的人是不会成功的。第二，他必须记住促进安康。只有强壮的人才能做大事。第三，他应该承受道德教育。如果他品行不好，没有人会考虑和他交朋友的。(7)FACTORSOFSUCCESS成功要素Iwouldrathersufferhardshipsthanfail.Inotherwords,toachievesuccessismyonlydesire.Weallknowthattherearemanyfactorsofsuccess.Nowletmewritedownthemostimportantonesinthefollowing.Diligence—Foolishasapersonis,hecansucceedinhisworkifheworkshard.Thatdoesnotadmitofanydoubt.Perseverance—Whenyoufail,don'tloseheart.Keeponworkinguntilyouaccomplishyouraim.Honesty—Ifyoutellliesordoesnotkeepyourword/promise,noonewillrelyonyou.Iwouldratherbescoldedthancheat(others).我宁愿受苦难不愿失败。换句话说，获致成功是我唯一的愿望。我们大家知道成功要素很多。现在让我们把它们最重要的写在下面。勤勉――一个人虽然不大聪明，但是他地能做成他的工作，如果他苦干的话。那是不容置疑的。毅力――当你失败的时候，不要灰心。要继续工作，直到你到达目的为止。老实――如果你说谎或不守信，没有人会信赖你。我宁愿挨骂不愿欺骗人。GOODHEALTH良好的安康Weallwish(hope)tobehappy,soweshouldtakegoodcareofourhealth.Healthisthebesttreasure(which)amancanpossess.Moneycandomanythings,butitcannotbuyhappiness.However,solongasmanhasgoodhealth,hecanenjoythepleasuresofhumanlife.35/35\nInordertoinsuregoodhealthwemustpayattentiontothreethings.Theyare-nourishingfood,freshairandproperexercise.我们大家都希望快乐，所以我们应该好好保重安康。一个病人因为失去安康而很少快乐。安康是一个人所能拥有最好的财富。钱能做许多事情，但是它却不能购置。然而，只要一个人有良好的安康，他就能享受人生的乐趣。为了保证良好的安康，我们必须注意三件事情。它们是营养食物，新鲜空气和正当运动.(9)HONESTYISTHEBESTPOLICY诚为上策ThereisanEnglishproverbwhichsays(saying)“Honestyisthebestpolicy.”Itsignifiestheimportanceofhonesty.Whatarethebenefitsofhonesty?Ifyouarehonesttoothers,theywillbehonesttoyouinreturn.Whenyouaresad,theywillcomfortyou.Whenyouareintrouble,theywillhelpyou.Thereisnoneedtolisttheevilsofdishonestyhere.Inaword,adishonestmanwillbelookeddownuponbyothersand(be)regardedasapublicenemy. 英国有一句谚语说“诚为上策”。它说明了诚的重要性。诚的益处是什么？如果你对他人老实，他们也会对你老实作为报答。当你忧悉的时候，他们会抚慰你。当你是处在困难中的时候，他们会帮助你。不必在这里数述不老实的害处。一言以蔽之，一个不老实的人会被人看轻的而且被看作为一个公敌。（10）    INDUSTRY(DILIGENCE)勤勉Itisamatterofcoursethatindustrywillbringussuccess,wealthandgoodluck.Iamsurethatahard-workingpersoncanalwayssucceedintheworkwhichhewantstodo.Thisisunchangeabletruth.Idlenessistheoppositeofindustry.Itisthesourceofallevils.Anidlemanonlyenjoysplayingandmakingpleasures.Thatheisdoomedtofailureisofnodoubt.Weshouldnotfollowhisexample.35/35\n勤勉会带给我们成功，财富和好运乃是当然之事。我确信一个苦干的人终是能够做成功他所要做的工作。这是不易之定理。懒惰是勤勉的反面。它是万恶之源泉。一个懒惰的人只享受玩耍和寻乐。他命运注定失败是毫无疑问的。我们不应学他的典范。（11） HOWTOBEAGOODCITIZEN如何做一个好公民Myaimistobecomeagoodcitizensoastobeabletoservethecountryheartandsoul.However,tobecomeagoodcitizenisnotaneasything.Hehasmanydutiestofulfill.Thefirstdutyofagoodcitizenistolovehiscountry.Hemustbereadytosacrificeevenhisownlifeforthecountry.Hisseconddutyistoobeythelawandhelpthegovernment(to)maintainorder.Ifeverybodycandoso,thecountrywillberichandstrong(powerful).我的志向是做一个好公民以便能给国家效力。然而，做一个好公民不是一件容易的事情。他有许多责任要尽。一个好公民第一件责任是爱他的国家。他须准备为国家牺牲自己的生命。他第二件责任是服从法律并且帮助政府维持治安。如果人人都能这样做的话，国家必定富强。 (12)HOWTOGETHAPPINESS如何获得快乐Thereisnodoubtthathappinessisthemostpreciousthingintheworld.Withoutit,lifewillbeemptyandmeaningless.Ifyouwishtoknowhowtogethappiness,youmustpayattentiontothefollowingtwopoints.Firstly,healthisthesecretofhappiness(thekeytohappiness).Onlyastrongmancanenjoythepleasureoflife.Secondly,happinessconsistsincontentment.Amanwhoisnotsatisfiedwithhispresentconditionisalwaysindistress.无疑的快乐是世界上最珍贵的东西。没有它，人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐，你须注意下面两点。安康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。快乐在于知足。一个不满于现状的人终是处在痛苦之中。35/35\n(13KNOWLEDGEISPOWER知识就是力量Ifwehavenoknowledge,wecannotsucceedindoinganywork.Why?Becauseknowledgeispower.Withknowledgewehaveconquerednatureandinventedsteamers,trainsandairplanes.Wecansendmessagesbytelegram.Wecantalkwithourfriendsbytelephone.Asiswellknown,westudentsarethefuturemastersofthenation.Sheneedsusverymuch.Ifwedonotmakeeffortstoacquireknowledge,howcanwerenderservicetoher?如果我们没有知识，我们就不能做成功任何事情。为什么？因为知识就是力量。冯藉知识我们征服了大自然，并且创造了轮船，火车与飞机。我们能用电报传递消息。我们能用电话和朋友谈话。如众所周知，我们学生都是国家未来的主人。她非常需要我们。如果我们不努力去获得知识，将来如何来报效她呢？（14）MONEY钱Everybodywishestogetmoneysothathecanmaintainhislivelihood.Inotherwords,moneyissousefulthatitisimpossibleformankindtolivewithoutit.Forthisreason,wehaveaninterestingproverb.Itsays“Moneycanmaketheworldgoaround.”Inaword,moneyispowerfulinourlife.However,moneyisnoteverything.moneyshouldnotbewasted.Itmustbeusedfor(some)properpurposes.Weyoungmenshouldformthegoodhabitofnotspendingmoneyinthewrongway.每个人为了能够维持生活，所以都希望得到钱。换句话说，钱是非常有用，所以没有它人类即无法生活。基于此种理由，我们有一句有趣的谚语。它说有“钱能使鬼推磨”。总之，在生活中钱发挥挺大的作用。然而，金钱并非万能。钱不应该被浪费掉。它必须用于正当的用途上。我们青年人应该养成不乱花钱的好习惯。(16)MYAIM我的志向35/35\nWhateveraman'sstatusmaybe,hemusthaveanaim.Ifnot,hecanhardlystandonhisowntwofeetintheworld.Thatstandstoreason.Howeverimportantfameandwealthmaybe,wemustnotletthembecomeourobjectinlife.Weshouldaimatdoingsomethingusefultothesociety.Ifmyaimcancometrue,Ihopetobeateacher.However,teachingisbynomeansaneasything.Imustapplymyselfcloselytomystudiessoastobeabletocopewithmyduties(asateacher).不管人是什么身份，他必须有一个志向。如果没有的话，他很难立足于世上。那是显而易见的。不管名利如何重要，我们切不可让它们成为我们生活之目标。我们应当志在做一些对社会有益的事情。如果我的志向能实现的话，我就希望成为一个教师。然而，教书并不是一容易的事情。我必须专心学业以便能应因我的职责。(17)THEBENEFITSOFTRAVELING旅行的益处Iamalwaysinterestedintraveling.Myreasonsareextremelysimpleandclear.Ifanybodyisnotsatisfiedwithmyviewpoint,Ishallbegreatlysurprisedathiswaysofthinking.Inthefirstplace,travelingincreasesourknowledge.Onlybytravelingcanweseethingsoutsideourhometown.Inthesecondplace,travelingisgoodtoourhealth.Whilewearetraveling,weusuallyexerciseourbodies.Inconclusion,Iearnestlyhopethateverybodymustseize(graspat)theopportunityoftraveling.我对旅行终是感觉有趣。我的理由非常简单时了。如果任何人对我的观点不满意的话，我将对他的想法会大大吃惊。旅行增加我们的知识。只有藉旅行我们可以看到我们故土以外的东西。旅行对我们的安康有益。当我们旅行的时候，我们通常运动我们的身体。（18）35/35\nMYFAVORITEPASTIME我喜欢的消遣Itgoeswithoutsayingthatworkwithoutrestwilldoharmtohealth.Inotherwords,wehadbettertakesufficientrecreationtorelaxafterwork.Thereisnodoubtthatthereareanumberofamusements,suchasplayingballgames,collectingstamps,fishing,gardening,skatingandsoon.Asforme,Itakegreatdelightingardening.WheneverIamatleisure,Iamaccustomedtogrowingflowers.Iregardthemasmymostagreeablecompanion.不需说，工作而不休息会对安康有害的。换句话说，我们最好工作后，从事分的消遣来轻松一下。无疑的，消遣的种类很多，诸如打球，集邮，钓鱼，园艺，溜冰等等。就我而言，我大大喜欢园艺。每当我有闲暇的时候，我习惯于种花。我把它们看作是我最满意如意的伴侣。（22）TOBEPATIENT要忍耐Whensomeonedisagreeswithyouoroffendsyou,don’tloseyourtemper.Why?Becauseitisofnousetodoso.Yououghttobepatientandkeepcalmlestyoushouldquarrelwithhim.Youmustknowthatpatienceisnotcowardice,butavirtue.Ihopethateverybodypracticesit.Inaddition,patiencewillalsobringussuccess.Whenyoumeetwithdifficultiesinyourwork,itisnouselosingheart.Youmustkeeponfightinguntilthefinalvictorybelongstoyou.当有人和你意见不同或开罪你的时候，你切不可发脾气。为什么？因为这样做是无用的。你应当忍耐并且保持冷静，唯恐和他争吵。你必须知道忍耐不是弱而是一种美德。我希望人人都实行它。另外，忍耐也会带给我们成功。当你在工作中遭遇到困难的时候，灰心是无用的。你必须继续作战直到最后胜利属于你为止。（24）35/35\nTORISEEARLY论早起Idonotknowthereasonwhysomepeoplewanttogetuplate.Theywillneverhavetheopportunitytoenjoythefreshairandcalmnessofthemorning.Thisisindeedaquiteregrettablething.Toriseearlyisagoodhabitwhichweshoulddevelop.Why?Becausethebesttimewhenwecanpursueourstudiesisinthemorning.Inaddition,earlyrisingisalsogoodtoourhealth.Ihopethateverybodyknowsthereasonwhywemustriseearly.我不知道某些人要晚起的理由。他们永不会有时机来享受早晨的新鲜空气和宁静。这真是一件发令人遗憾的事情。早起是我们应该养成的一种良好习惯。为什么？因为早晨是我们从事学业的大好时间。再者，早起对我们安康也有益处。我希望每个人应该知道我们必须早起的理由。(25)WHERETHEREISAWILL,THEREISAWAY有志者事竟成Thekeytosuccessisnotsomuchmoneyasastrongwill.Agreatmanisonewhohasastrongwillandanindomitablespirit.Inotherwords,ifamandoesnothaveastrongwilltowinthefinalvictory,hewillneversucceedinhislife.Heisnomorethanafailure.Itisquiteobviousthatthereisnothingdifficultintheworld.Ifyoumakeupyourmindtodoit,youwillcertainlyaccomplishyouraim.Thatstandstoreason.成功的要诀不是金钱而是一个坚强的意志。一个大人物是一个具有坚强意志和不屈不挠精神的人。换句话说，如果一个人没有坚强意志去获得最后胜利的人，他终其一生永远不会成功。他只不过是一个失败者。很显明的世界上并没有难事。如果你下定决心去做它，你一定会到达目的。那是显而易见的。(26)WHYSHOULDWELEARNENGLISH为什么我们要学英文IfyouwanttoaskmewhyweshouldlearnEnglish,myanswerwillbesimpleandclear.Nowletmeexplainthereasonsonebyoneinthefollowing.Inthefirstplace,Englishhasbecomeaninternationallanguage.IfyouknowEnglish,youvanmakeatriproundtheworldwithoutbeingmisunderstood.35/35\nInthesecondplace,mostvaluablebooks,newspapersandmagazinesarewritteninEnglish.Ifyouwish(hope)togetknowledge,youmustlearnEnglish.如果你要问我们为什么我们要学英文。我的答复很简单明了。现在让我来把我的理由一一列举在下面：英文已成为一种国际语言。如果你通晓它，你可以环游世界不会被人误解。大多数有价值的书籍，报纸和杂志都是用英文写的。如果你希望获得知识，你必须学习英文。题目：HowtoApproachMoney。请根据以下提示作文，要求以三句话作为段首语构造文章。      Moneyisnecessaryinourmodernlife.      Butmoneyisnotallgood.      Howshouldweapproachmoney.【范文】HowtoApproachMoney       Moneyisnecessaryinourmodernlife.Weneedmoneytobuythingssuchasfoodandclothing.Whenwegoout,weshouldpaytrafficfeeandotherfees.Inaword,moneyisimportant.Withmoremoney,wecanlivebetterandcreatebetterworkingorstudyingconditions.       Butmoneyisnotalwaysgood.Manypeopleworkhardwhentheyhavenomoneybutdonothingwhentheyhavemorethanenoughmoney,Andevenworse,therearesomepeoplenowadayswhomakemoneyattheexpenseoffriendshiporotherpeople'sinterests.      Howshouldweapproachmoney,then?Inmyopinion,weshouldworkhardtoearnmoremoney,Butatthesametime,wemustrememberthatmoneyisnotourfinalgoal.【要求】ambition的意思是我们的生活目标，是对成功、权力、财富等等的强烈渴望。ambition并不意味着要成为最好的，它是一种鼓励我们向前的目标，使我们不因失败而失去希望。每个人都有自己的ambition，但不是每个人都能实现自己的渴望。结合以上内容，以“Ambition”为题写一篇议论文。不要逐字逐句翻译。字数100字左右。35/35\n【范文】Ambition      Ourambitionmeansthegoalwehaveinourlife.Itisastrongdesireforsuccess,power,riches,andsoon.Tohaveambitiondoesn'tnecessarilymeanonewantstobenumberone.Thisisnottherealsenseoftheword.Trueambitionisthegoalthatencouragesustolookforwardandnottolosehopebecauseoffailure.Ambitiondiffersfrompersontopersonandeveryonehashisorherownambition.Yetnotevery-oneofuscansucceedinwhatwedesiretodo.      Liveallyoucan.It'samistakenotto.Therighttimeisanytime,thatoneisstillsoluckyastolive.【评语】      本文充分表达了题目的要求，思路清晰，构造完整，内容简明扼要。语句活泼流利，用词直接精当，防止了华美浮夸的词藻或含义模糊的语句。紧扣题意，中心明确，是一篇成功的议论文。结尾处引用格言更显出深厚的语言功底，为全文增色不少。文明礼貌(GoodManners)请以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇以文明礼貌为题的文章。Peopleallovertheworldsetgreatregardongoodmanners.Therearegoodmannersinwhichwebehaveinpublicplaces.Ifeveryonehasdevelopedgoodmanners…【范文】GoodManners      Peopleallovertheworldsetgreatregardongoodmanners.Toacertaindegree,goodmannersindicateaperson'sgoodeducationandbreeding.Inschools,itispartofstudents'moraltrailingtodevelopgoodmanners.Apersonwithgoodmannersalwayswinspraise.Onthecontrary,peoplewillfrownonhimifhebehavesroughlyandimpolitely.      Therearegoodmannersinwhichwebehaveinpublicplaces.Itisagoodmannertoofferhelptotheyoung,theoldandthehandicappedwhentheyareinneedofit.Soisittobehavepolitelyandkeepawayfromfoullanguage.Besides,weshouldguardagainstsuchminoroffensesasmakingaloudnoise,castingpeelsandshells,smokingandspitting.      Ifeveryonehasdevelopedgoodmanners,peoplewillfromamoreharmoniousrelationship.Ifeveryonebehavesconsideratelytowardsothersandfollowsthesocialethics,peoplewillliveinabetterworld.Withthegeneralmoodofsocietyimproved,therewillbeaprogressofcivilization.35/35\n【评语】      本文按照题目所给的纲要从三方面论述了文明礼貌的重要性。意思明晰，文理通顺。“frownon”，“keepawayfrom”，“guardagainst”，“minoroffenses”等小词用得准确自然，很好地传达了作者的意思。Don'tStopHalfway    Whenamanisdoingsomework,hedesiressomebenefitfromit.Inordertogetthisbenefit,themustdothetasktotheendandcompletelyfinishit.    Tofinishatask,whetherhardornotrequirespatienceandfirmness.Thereforewhenyouhavesomeworktodo,youmustdoitfaithfully,irrespectiveofthedifficulty.Difficultiesandobstaclesareunavoidable;ifyouturnyourbackonmeetingthem,youwillsucceedinnothing,butifyoucanovercomethem,youwillaccomplishsomething.    Tostophalfwayisverybad.Supposethatapreciousstoneisatagreatdistancefromyouandyouwanttoobtainit;youmustreachforit;youmustnotstophalfway.Ifyoustophalfway,youwillnotonlygetnothing,butalsolosesomething,becauseyourtimeandstrengthwillbewasted.    Itisagoodthingforonetodoonethingatatime,andneverstophalfway.    Cultivateareputationforbeingreliableandhardworking,evenifitmeansbuckingpeerpressure.【评语】      作者对不要半途而废的论证具体而有说服力，告诉我们半途而废不仅无法到达目标而且浪费时间、精力。段落安排逐层深入，循循善诱。全文整体构造完整、自然。【要求】      题目：Failure（失败）是一个人经常遇到的。失败不是好事，因为它使人的努力(efforts)付之东流。但是，失败也是好事，它可以教育我们使我们学到更多的东西。试写一短文就此谈谈你对失败的看法。【范文】Failure      Nearlyeverybodyregardsfailureasabadthing.Theeffortswehavemadeseemtobeofnouseandwefeelverydisappointed.Somepeopleevenlosethecouragetostartagainorloseinterestinlifewhenthefailureisaverygreatone.35/35\n      Butfailurecanalsobenefitus.Itcanteachusagoodlessonandmakeusexperienced.Also,wecanrealizeourownshortcomingsandgetabetterknowledgeofourselves.Sowhenwestartagain,wecansucceedmoreeasily.      Therefore,failurenotonlydisappointsusbutalsobenefitsus.Whenwefail,weshouldmakefulluseofourfailureandlearnfromourexperience.Then,wemaysucceedinthefuture.      Lifeismadeupofambiguousvictoriesandnebulousdefeats----claimthemallasvictories!【评语】      本文最大的优点是正反对照，条理清楚。高考作文时间很短，所以谋篇布局显得十分重要。本文脉络清楚，浅显易懂，应该说在考场中是容易取胜的。此外，本篇行文简练，显得干净利落。人人都渴望幸福，但对幸福的理解却不尽相同：有人追逐金钱，有人看重名誉，有人渴望友情，有人视爱情为人生的崇高追求。你呢？写下你对幸福的看法。字数：100左右。【范文】Happiness      Happinessmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Forexamplesomepeoplebelievethatiftheyhavealotofmoneyormanymaterialthings,theywillbehappy.Theybelievethatiftheyarewealthy,theywillbeabletodoeverythingtheywant,andsotheywillbehappy.Ontheotherhand,somepeoplebelievethatmoneyisnottheonlysourceof happiness.Thesepeoplevaluetheirintelligence,ortheirhealth,ortheirreligion;thesethingsmakethemhappy,Forme,happinessiscloselytiedtomyfamily.Iamhappyifmyfatherandmymotherliveinharmony.Whenallthemembersofmyfamilysharethegoodtimeandthebad,Iamhappy.Althoughthedefinitionofhappinessdependsontheindividual,my“wealth”ofhappinessismyfamily.      Rememberthis,----thatverylittleisneededtomakeahappylife.【评语】      作者首先列出不同人对幸福的不同理解，然后引出作者本人对幸福的观点—“closelytiedtomyfamily”尤其“I'mhappyifmyfatherandmotherliveinharmony”读来令人感动。全篇行文流畅，构造严谨，首尾照应。【要求】       请以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇以安康、美貌和学识为题的文章。35/35\n       Youngpeoplelookforwardtobeingstrongandhandsome.       Therearewomenwhosetgreatstorebythebeautyofoutwardappearance.       Healthandbeautywithoutknowledgeisalmostequaltoabodywithoutsoul.【范文】Health,BeautyandKnowledge       Youngpeoplelookforwardtobeingstrongandhandsome.Theytakepartinrigoroustrainingtobuilduptheirbody.Theytakesomegymnasticsstarsastheirmodels,whosewelldevelopedmusclesorproportionedfigureisthecombinationofstrengthandgrace,andalsotheindicationofyouthfulnessandvitality.       Therearewomenwhosetgreatstorebythebeautyofoutwardappearance.Theydressthemselvesinclothesofthelatestfashion.Theyapplyaheavymake-up,rougingtheirlips,powderingtheirfaces,paintingtheirbrows,andwearingearringsandnecklaces.Tocompensatetheinadequacyoftheirnaturalbeauty,somegoessofarastoreceivetheoperationoffacemending.      文体和文风也是应该注意的。文体比较郑重。      Healthandbeautywithoutknowledgeisalmostequaltoabodywithoutsoul.Apersonwithastoutbodyalonecangonowhereinthemodernageofscienceandtechnology,aperson'soutwardbeautyisaseasytofadeasaflowertowithernomatterhowcolorfulitis.Itistruethathealthandbeautyaresomethingonemaywellbeproudof.Butitisofgreaterimportanceforastudenttomasteradequateknowledgethatisusefulinhislife-longservicetothecountry.      句子相应规整一些，用词也尽量正式，以免出现不得当的笑话。【评语】      全文围绕三个主题句展开议论，条理清楚，层次清楚，用词准确。“well-developedmuscles”，“proportionedfigure”，“applymake-up”，“rouginglips”，“powderingfaces”，“paintingbrows”，及“wearingearringsandnecklaces”等词语搭配讲究，生动地表达了作者的意思。“aperson'soutwardbeautyisaseasytofadeasaflowertowithernomatterhowcolorfulitis.”比喻句用得贴切自然，很好地强调了主题。【要求】      安康是革命的本钱，请以“health”为题目写篇100单词的英语小短文。每段的中心句已经给出：35/35\n      Healthisthefoundationofone'sfuturesuccess.      Whatshouldwedotomaintainandenhanceourhealth?      Healthismoreimportantthanwealth.【范文】Health       Itisclearthathealthisthefoundationofone'sfuturesuccess.Ifyoubecomesick,itisnearlyimpossibletopursueyourcareereffectively.Ontheotherhand,ifyouarestrong,youcangoallouttoovercometheobstaclesthatlieaheadofyou.      Nowthatweknowthathealthisthesourceofourenergy,whatshouldwedotomaintainandenhanceourhealth?First,weshouldexerciseeverydaytostrengthenourmuscles.Second,weshouldkeepregularhoursofourlives.Ifwegetupearly,wecanbreathefreshairandseethesunrise,andthishabitcandowondersforouroutlookonlife.Third,thereisaproverbthatsays,“Preventionisbetterthancure.”      Inconclusion,healthismoreimportantthanwealth.Thosewhoarerichbutlosetheirhealtharenomorefortunatethanthosewhoarepoor.Ifyouwantyourwishtocometrue,healthisthemostimportantingredientofyoursuccess.【评语】      该文为行云流水，构造清楚而紧凑。开篇说明安康的重要性。在第二段里，分了三个层次来阐释“安康是我们能量的源泉”，而且还有提问句来引导下面的答复。最后一段，“inconclusion”，总结了全文，而且有所提高。      Understandyourhealthbenefitsandkeeptrackofthem.【要求】      请以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇题为“老实”的文章。      Itisusuallybettertobehonestthandishonest.      Oneoftheworstthingsaboutlyingisthatitresultsinaguiltyconscience.       Honestymakesyouhappyandgainagoodreputation.【范文】honesty35/35\n      Weoftenpraisesomebodybecauseofhisdiligenceandhonesty.Soallthepeoplethinkthathonestyisavirtueandthatitisthebestpolicy.      Itisusuallybettertobehonestthandishonest.Peopletendtobelieveanhonestman,nomatterwhathedoesandwhathesays.Onthecontrary,dishonestpeoplearenottrustworthy.Forthisreason,honestpeoplearealwaysmoresuccessfulthanthedishonest.Soitisbettertobehonestbecauseitcanhelpyousucceed.     Oneoftheworstthingsaboutlyingisthatitresultsinaguiltyconscience.Ifapersontellslies,hisfacewillturnredandhisheartwillbeatfaster.Hewillalwaysliveinfright.      Honestymakesyouhappyandgainsagoodreputation.Allpeopleconsiderwhatyou'vesaidtrueandtrustyoujustbecauseyouareanhonestman.Therefore,youcansaywhatyoulikeanddowhatyoulikewithoutfear.Youwillfeelveryhappy.Likewise,justbecauseofyourhonesty,peoplerespectyouandloveyou.Gradually,youwillgainagoodreputation.Tobehonestwillensureyouahappylife.【评语】      该文内容切题，详略安排得当，重点放在老实的益处，即第二段和第四段上。这两段的段末均有一句总结句与段首的主题句相照应，使段落构造完整，同时强化了主题。文章语言略显单调，但比较顺畅，表达也较清楚。【要求】      题目：HowtoApproachMoney。请根据以下提示作文，要求以三句话作为段首语构造文章。      Moneyisnecessaryinourmodernlife.      Butmoneyisnotallgood.      Howshouldweapproachmoney.【范文】HowtoApproachMoney       Moneyisnecessaryinourmodernlife.Weneedmoneytobuythingssuchasfoodandclothing.Whenwegoout,weshouldpaytrafficfeeandotherfees.Inaword,moneyisimportant.Withmoremoney,wecanlivebetterandcreatebetterworkingorstudyingconditions.       Butmoneyisnotalwaysgood.Manypeopleworkhardwhentheyhavenomoneybutdonothingwhentheyhavemorethanenoughmoney,Andevenworse,therearesomepeoplenowadayswhomakemoneyattheexpenseoffriendshiporotherpeople'sinterests.35/35\n      Howshouldweapproachmoney,then?Inmyopinion,weshouldworkhardtoearnmoremoney,Butatthesametime,wemustrememberthatmoneyisnotourfinalgoal.【评语】      本文为一给起首句的作文，所以内容限制很大，个人发挥余地较小。本文优点在于简练地评论了金钱的利与弊，逻辑清楚。此类文章写作起来比较容易。【要求】题目：暑假两个月的漫长假期为紧张学习的同学们提供了空闲娱乐、实践锻炼的好时机。你将怎样安排你的暑假生活？请以“HowtoSpendtheSummerVacation”为题，写一篇100个单词左右的英语短文。写出你安排暑假的活动和选择这些活动的理由。【范文】HowtoSpendtheSummerVacation      Inschool,wehavesummervacation.Insummer,theweatherissohotthatourbrainneedsarestafteraperiodofhardwork.Thusitisforhealthreasonsthatwehaveoursummervacation.      Whatwouldbethemosthealthywaytospenditthen?Therearemanykindsofsports,whicharegoodforhealthinsummer,suchasswimming,tennisandbaseball.Butcareshouldbetakennottopracticesuchsportsalldaylong,whichwouldbeverybadforourhealth.      Anotherpointwehavetoconsideristhatourtimeshouldnotbespententirelyinplaying.Weattendschoolinordertogetsomeknowledge,whichwillbeusefulinourlife.Butknowledgecanonlybeobtainedthroughconstantdrilling.Duringthevacation,weshouldnotneglecttoreviewthelessonswehavelearnt.Itistruethatallworkandnoplaymakesyouadullfellow.Thoughtheremaybeotherwaystospendthesummervacation,thisseemstomethebestofall.【评语】      文章首先从暑假的必要性开场，在第二段里又用问句来承上启下，提出本文的中心意思：“我们怎么才能最好地利用暑假的时间呢？”并说明运动是一个很好的选择，但是，第三段又说明还要学习以增长知识。      答复“怎么样”的时候往往要阐述“为什么”，才显得理直气壮。【要求】35/35\n每个人的生活中都有过失败的经历，失败对于我们来说，到底意味着什么？请你按如下提纲写一篇文章，谈谈你对失败的理解。失败是生活中的常事。人们对失败的态度各不相同。就我而言，我认为失败…【范文】IsFailureaBadThing      Failureisquiteacommonthinginourlife.Aslongaswedothingswewillsurelyencounterdifficulties.Ofcourseweshouldtryourbesttogetoverthem,butinmanycases,itisnotsoeasy,orevenimpossible.Thenhowshouldwefacefailure?      Differentpeopletakedifferentattitudestowardsfailure.Whenfacedwithfailure,somepeoplebecomefrustratedandlosetheirselfconfidence.Theyrefusetomakeanyfurtherefforts.Thesepeoplewillprobablyneveramounttoanythinginlife.Somepeoplejustdon'tfearfailure.Theyfirmlybelievethatfailureisthemotherofsuccess.Asaresult,notonlycanfailurestopthem,buttheydrawusefullessonsfromitandtryevenharder.Suchpeoplearesuretosucceedsomeday.      Asforme,Idon'tthinkfailureisabadthing.Failurecanneverdiscouragemebutonlyenrichmyexperienceandsteelmywill.Withthispositiveattitudeinmind,IwilltryhardinanythingI'mdeterminedtoaccomplishandattainsuccessintheend.【评语】35/35\n      本文按题目所给纲要分为三段。首段简要地论述了失败是每个人都会遇到的，末句用了一句设问，起到了承上启下的作用。第二段谈到了人们对失败的两种典型态度，先写错误观点进展铺垫，而后再写正确观点。这种安排自然突出了作者所赞同的态度，同时为引出第三段做好的了准备。末段作者那么说明了自己的观点。全文层次清楚，段落间衔接严密而自然，主题突出，语言流畅，用词准确。【要求】失败，是人人都不愿体验的结果。有人说失败使人消沉，有人说失败是成功之母。你对失败的态度怎样？写一篇短文。字数150—200字，题目自拟。【范文】IsFailureaBadThing?      Failureisacommonthinginourdailylives.Asstudents,Wesometimesfailtogethighscoresonourexaminations.Whenweplaygame,wesometimescan'tavoidlosingtoothers.Andtherearetimeswhenwefailtodosatisfactorywork.Allthesefailureshappennaturallyandalmosteveryoneofushashadsuchexperiences.      However,therearedifferentattitudestowardsfailure.Somepeopleloseheartinfailure,theythinktheworldhascometoanend.Somepeopledon'ttakefailureseriouslyandjustignoreit,whilesomeotherslearnmuchfromit.      Inmyopinion,whatreallycountsisnotfailureitself,butwhatwethinkoffailureanddoafterfailure.Aslongaswebelieveinourselvesanddon'tgiveup,andinthemeantimelearnsomethingfromourfailure,We'llcertainlybesuccessfulintheend.SoI'mneverafraidoffailure,forIbelievethatfailureisnotabadthing,butthemotherofsuccess.      看问题一定要看到正反两面，表达在文中，就往往是鲜明的比照。【评语】      表达思想清楚，内容比较充实，文字流畅，句子构造多样。第一段、第二段主题句简练而贴切，句间衔接比较自然，用词造句有不少闪光点，如：theworldhascometoanend等。题目：爱是人类普遍而伟大的感情，请以“love”为题，写一篇100单词左右的英语小短文。文章每一段的前一句话已经给出。Loveplaysanimportantpartinthisworldtoday.Thelovebetweenyouandyourparentsisaspecialslove.Thereareotherkindsoflove.35/35\n【范文】Love       Loveplaysanimportantpartinthisworldtoday.Withtheincreasingmodernizationofsociety,relationshipbetweenpeoplearebecominglooserandlooser.Itisdifficulttoimaginewhattheywouldbelikeiftherewerenoloveforeachother.Loveisthecaringandconcernfor,andunderstandingofotherpeopleandtheacceptanceoftheirstrengthandweaknesses.Toloveandtobelovedisthetruehappinessinlife.      Thelovebetweenyouandyourparentsisaspecialone.Thislove,asanyothersincerelove,mustbehonestandbesharedbybothparentsandchildren.Theloveofparentsisagreatsupportintheirchildren'slives.Itwillremainwiththemandhelpthemovercomeallthedifficultiesandmakethemfeelsecure.      Thereareotherkindsoflove.Lovebetweenfriends,partners,humanbeingsandanimals.Thepoweroflovemakesusendurethedifficultiesinourlives,eventhoughwemaynothavethechancetothinkaboutit,itmaybebekeptalivedeeplyinourheart.【评语】      该文逻辑清晰，词语简练，先从“爱”的普遍意义谈起，说到“爱”的含义，“爱”对我们的重要。在第二段里又重点地谈了谈父母和孩子之间的“爱”，然后结尾处点到了其他种类的“爱”。有序有节，完整精干。      并不是好文章必须追求晦涩的词语，平易的语言只要运用得当，也会有极好的效果。坚强的意志(Man'sStrongWill)请以下面三句分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇以坚强的意志为题的文章。       Strongwillisuniversallyregardedasaverypraisablequality.       Therehavebeenmanyexamplesthatsuccesscanbeachievedbystrongwill.       Itisnoteasytocultivateastrongwill.【范文】Man'sStrongWill      Strongwillisuniversallyregardedasaverypraisablequality.Itisneithergeniusnorextraordinaryabilitythatgivesuspowertodealwithandovercomewhateverhardshipthatbefalls.Itisstrongwillthatenablesustoendurethetryingsituationandtoattainourgoals.Strongwillgivesuslightwhenweareinthedark,andencouragementwhenwearefrustrated.Withthismeritoriousquality,noenemycanoverwhelmus,andnoobstaclescanstandinourway.Asthesayinggoes,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.35/35\n      Allpainhelpstomakeusrise,how-evermuchwemayhateitatthetime.     Therehavebeenmanyexamplesthatsuccesscanbeachievedbystrongwill.DuringtheLongMarch,theRedArmysoldiersmetwiththegreatesthardshipmenhaveeverexperienced.Theyhadnothingtoeatbutgrassrootsandbarksoftrees.Itwastheirstrongwillthatmadethemdefeatthehardship.HelenKeller,astrongwilledAmericanblindwoman,masteredtheEnglishlanguageandbecameawell-knowneducator.Suchinstancesabound,andsufficeitjusttoenumeratethetwo.      Developahightoleranceforambiguity----you'llbemoresatisfied.      Itisnoteasytocultivateastrongwill.Firstofall,wemustsetupafirmfaithinourcause,namely,thecauseofcommunism,andbereadytodevoteourlivestoit.Secondly,wemustlearnfromstrong-willedpersons,especially,fromrevolutionarymartyrswhofoughtforcommunismtothelastdropofblood.Finally,weshouldboldlygothroughtrialsandhardshipstotrainourwillsoastogetridoftheweakpointsofourmoralcharacter.【评语】       本文为议论文。首段的“neither…nor…”“Itisstrongwillthat…”，和“noenemy…noobstacles…”的运用，加强了文章的语气，突出了坚强意志的重要价值。段末的格言起到了画龙点睛的作用。第二段用了红军二万五千里长征和海伦·凯勒这两个例子，有力地证明了坚强的意志能使人获得成功这一主题。末段谈如何培养坚强的意志，层次清晰，观点正确，具有说服力。【要求】“虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后”这句家喻户晓的格言指出了谦虚这一美德的重要性。请你围绕这句格言写一篇短文谈谈你对谦虚的理解。人各有所长，因此可能会自视过高。例如老年人可能看不起年轻人，认为年轻人缺少智慧和阅历；而年轻人也会轻视老人，认为他们缺少活力。重要的是，要谦虚地学习别人的长处。学习知识也离不开谦虚。一个谦虚的人会不耻下问，因为他知道，知识的海洋如此浩瀚，一个人在一生中能学到的只是沧海一粟。反之，一个自负的人那么炫耀自己的一知半解，不再进取。谦虚的人对知识的追求是无止境的，这正是他能取得成功的原因所在。【范文】Modesty      “Modestyhelpsoneprogress,andpridemakesonelagbehind.”Celebratingthevirtueofmodesty,Thesayingbecomesmanypeople'smotto.35/35\n       Everyonehashisstrongpoints,ofwhichhemayhavetoohighanopinion.Forexample,theoldmaylookdownupontheyoung,thinkingthatyoungpersonslackwisdomandexperience;theyoungmaydespisetheold,takingprideintheirvigor.Theimportantthingistobemodestandtolearnfromotherpeople'sstrongpoints.      Modestyisimportantinlearning.Amodestpersonneverhesitatestoconsultthosewhoareinferiortohim.Heunderstandsthattherangeofknowledgeisasvastastheseaandonecanonlygainadropallhislife.Incontrast,aconceitedperson,whilehavingonlyasmatteringofknowledge,showsitoffanddissatisfiedwithwhathehasachieved.Asamodestperson'sthirstforknowledgeisneversatisfied,theroadtosuccessliesbeforehim.【评语】      文章以“虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后”这一格言开头，从“人各有所长，应虚心取人所长”和“谦虚对求学至关重要”两方面论述了谦虚这一主题，最后得出结论“虚心的人能够走向成功”。层次清楚，措辞准确。文中将知识与大海作比喻句贴切自然，没有牵强附会之感。文中一些习语的熟练运用，也显示出了作者良好的文字功底。【要求】       英语课上教师教给同学们一句英语格言“NoPains,NoGains”（不劳那么不获），并让大家围绕如下三方面以这句格言为题写一篇短文。人们在困难面前容易气馁，并产生不劳而获的想法。“不劳那么不获”这一格言能给予人鼓励。       学生要取得优异成绩离不开苦功夫，所谓成功的秘诀即是辛勤的劳动。【范文】NoPains,NoGainsPeopleattemptingataskmaybediscouragedinfrontofdifficulties.Theystartwithagreatinterestandpassion.Whentheyfindthatthetaskwilltakemuchmoreeffortthantheythought,theirinterestdiminishesandtheirpassionwanes.Atthattime,theyarelikelytohavetheideaofreapingagoodharvestwithoutmuchlabor.35/35\nTheoldsaying“Nopains,nogains”comesasawordofcheertothesediscouragedpersons.Notaskthatisreallyworthdoingcanbedoneeithereasilyorquickly.Nomasteryofanyknowledgeorskillcanbegainedwithoutpainstakingefforts.Westudentsshoulderthetaskoflearningknowledgethatcallsforexertion.Toimproveourgradesiswhateverystudentwants.Wemayenvythosewhohaveachievedexcellence,andwonderwhatmakesthemsucceed.Infact,theirsecretofsuccessisnosecret.Itdependslargelyontheirefforts.Goodgradesonlybelongtohardworkingstudents.Manythanksforthefavoryoudidforme!【评语】该文紧紧围绕题目给出的三方面加以论述，层次清楚，语言流畅易懂。“interestdiminishesandtheirpassionwanes”中词语搭配讲究，“reapingagoodharvestwithoutmuchlabor”用另一个习惯表达法点出了“NoPains,NoGains”的含义，同时又防止了重复。文章句式灵活，长短搭配得当，使文章朗朗上口，虽然是议论文，但却没有枯燥之感。【要求】班会课上要求同学们为大家用英文讲述一个小哲理，要求条理清晰，有自己的见解。你的发言稿内容如下：真诚是一种重要的思想方法。应该弄清楚什么是真诚。为什么有时人们难以做到真诚。真诚，是一种人生态度。【范文】OntheTruth35/35\n      Truthisanattitudeofthemind.Itisimportant,ifonedoesnotwishtoinconvenienceandborehisorherfriends.Itmeanstellingnoliesandneverbackingoutofone'sword.      Butitismoreimportanttoknowwhatisthetruth,andnottoslideintothoseuntruthfulhabitsofthoughtwhicharesopleasantandsoeasy.      Thereisawordnamed“thevictoryhabitofmind”.Peoplewhohavethismindareundulypreoccupiedbywhatwassociallyandmorallyconvenient.Oneshouldhavethecouragetothinkuncomfortably,sinceitisonlybyrejectingtheconveniencethatonecancometothinkthetruth.      Truth,isanattitudeofthelife.      直线式思维，层层推进是英文的习惯。防止Chinglish不仅仅要防止出错，还要培养语感和思路。【评语】      这篇短文首尾照应，用同一句式，只换了一个单词：“mind”、“life”，却把意思推进了一层，很符合英文的习惯，能起到警人的效果。能够不停地把意思深入，也是这篇短的一个特点。它使用的是层层推进的方法，没有在每个点上展开论述，但却显得乏味。【要求】在现代社会，请你谈一谈对礼貌的看法。字数100—150字【范文】Politeness      Politenessmeansgoodbehaviorinsocialintercourse.Codesofpolitenessmaydifferfromcountrytocountry.Buttheobjectisalwaystoaddpleasureandgracetodailylife.       Apolitepersonisalwaysanagreeablecompanion.Heisagreeablebecauseheisalwaysthinkingofothersbeforehimself.Hedoesn'tinterruptpeoplewhentheyaretalking.Heiscarefulnottosayanythingtohurtotherpeople'sfeelings.Hedoesn'tpushinacrowd,butwaitsquietlyuntilitishisturntopass.Inaddition,byactinginaccordancewiththeprevailingcustoms,heisconsideredamemberofthecivilizedsociety;otherwise,heislookeduponasafoolandwillbeavoidedbypeopleofhighbreeding.Politenessistrulyavaluableasset.35/35\n      Ifyouarecourteoustootherpeople,youhavegoodmannersandyoureverdaylifewillbemuchhappier.【评语】      论点鲜明。文章开头即说明作者观点，接着围绕这一观点以第三人称娓娓道来，给人以中肯无惑之感。全文运笔流畅，论证充分。读后给人以深刻印象。 【要求】题目：自信请指明什么是自信，并说明自信的重要性。【范文】Self-confidence      Self-confidencemeanstrustinone'sownability.Asaveryimportantpsychologicalquality,itbringsyourcreativepowertoplay,arousesyouenthusiasmforworkandhelpsyouovercomedifficulties.Whenaskedofthesecretofhersuccess,MarieCurieanswered,“Mysuccessliesinperseveranceandself-confidence,thelatterinparticular.”      Self-confidencegivesyoulightwhenyouareindarkandencouragementwhenyouaredismayed.Itisself-confidencethatinspiresyoutocopewithanyarduoustask.Withself-confidence,thegoalyouintendcanbereached,andsocanthehardnutbecracked.      Somepeoplefindmostofthethingsimpossible,saying,“Itisbeyondmyabilitytodothetask.”or“Iamnotcutoutforit.”Inmanycases,theseareonlylameexcuses.Whenourheartisvoidofself-confidence,everyhopeisgone,andeverythingwearelayingourhandsonisspoilt.      Behonestwithyourselfaboutyourstrengthsandweaknessandmanageaccordingly.【评语】      本文为议论文，分三局部层层深入地论述了自信心这一可贵的心理素质。首段在给自信心作出简要解释后，接着说明了自信心的重要性。段末恰到好处地引用了居里夫人的话来支持自己的论点。第二段进一步陈述了自信心的重要性。而在末段作者首先通过两句话生动地表现出了缺乏自信心人的心态，而后从反而指出如果缺乏自信心，那么会一事无成。【要求】35/35\n古今中外有很多关于人生问题的讨论，这方面的精彩英语文章也数不胜数。现在有一个英语杂志想开辟一个讨论人生的小专栏，要求语句精练警人，观点有新义。你的应征文章内容如下：生命中的快乐是人们所不断寻求的。但是我们往往无视身边的快乐，而去寻找那些所谓大的野心勃勃的东西。快乐无所不在。想一想身边有哪些可珍惜的快乐呢。【范文】TheHappinessoftheLife       Lifeislikeawindingpaththatsurroundedbyflowers,butterflies,anddeliciousfruit,butmanyofusspendmuchtimelookingforhappinessaroundthenextcorner.Wedonotbendtoenjoythehappinessthatisoursforthetakingjustatoutfeet.       Inourdesiretoreachthe“potofgold”,completeandlastinghappinessweallwanttofillourlives,weignorethingswhichdon'tseemworthyofsuchalargeambition,orwhichcan'tgiveusthewholethingallatonce.      Happinessisallaroundus,butitoftencomesinsmallgrains.Whenwegatheritgrainbygrain,wesoonhaveabasketful.     Whatsmallpiecesofhappinesssurroundmerightnow?     Mostfolksareaboutashappyastheymakeuptheirmindstobe.【评语】      该文按要求描写了自己是如何对待生活中快乐的。语言很清新，几个比喻用得很有特色：比方把“life”比做“awindingpathsurroundedbyflowers,butterflies,anddeliciousfruit”，把收集生活中的快乐比做“gathergrain”。既生动又形象。最后的疑问句也起到了发人深省的效果。【要求】       很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就，但不是所有人都能取得胜利。成功需要顽强的意志，锲而不舍的努力，勤奋学习的精神。请你以此为主要内容，准备一篇百字左右的简短发言。【范文】Thewaytosuccess35/35\nEveryonetriestoachievesuccessinhis/hercareer.Butsomefinallyattaintheiraimswhileothersfail.Why?Somecontinuetheircausetotheendthroughlongperiodofhardstruggles,butothersareeasilydisappointedandstophalfway.Strongwill,perseveranceanddiligencearethethreeessentialsofsuccess.Amanofstrongwillandperseverancealwayshasaninflexiblespirit.Hestickstohiscausenomatterhowtoughitmightbe.Lifeisshortandwehavetoomuchtodo.Withoutdiligencenoonecanachieveanything.Ibelievethatwherethereisawillthereisaway,andthatsuccessbelongstothosewhocanmakeconstantefforts.Don'tbeafraidoflife.Believethatlifeisworthliving,andyourbeliefwillhelpcreatethefact.【评语】这是一篇议论文，作者首先提出问题，再提出自己观点：意志坚强、锲而不舍、勤奋，是成功的三大要素。作者在结尾，巧妙地运用了谚语“wherethereisawillthereisaway”，使文章增色不少。【要求】面对班上越来越多的同学开场讲究吃穿，追求名牌，班主任王教师组织了一次以“节省”为主题的班会。经过讨论，大家达成了共识，认为现在虽然生活富裕了，衣食无忧了，但节省是我们富家强国的根底，是一种美德，不应忘记。请你从以下三方面入手来谈一谈你对节省的认识：节省是一种美德，节省的人懂得花钱之道；节省有诸多益处；中国是一个开展中国家。我们只有勤劳节省，才能建立一个强大的祖国。【范文】Thrift      ThriftisconsideredasakindofvirtuenotonlyinChinabutalsointheworld.Thriftypeopletakegreatcarenottowasteanythingwhentheyaredoingthingsandnottowasteanymoneywhentheyarespendingit.Asavirtue,thriftisveryimportanttoeveryone.Intheworldsomepeoplespendtheirmoneylikewater,whileotherskeepthehabitofpracticingthrift.Thelatterneverspendtheirmoneyonuselessthings,what'smore,theyalwaysmakegooduseoftheirmoney,forexample,tohelpthepoortodothingsoutofcharity.Bydoingthistheyhavemadecontributionstothesocietyandtheirvirtuehasbeenhighlyappreciated.      Livewithinyourmeans.35/35\n      Noteveryoneknowshowmysteriouslymoneydribblesawayinpettyexpenditure.Ifwedon'ttakecareofthecent,itwillmounttodollars,whichwilltakewingsandflyaway.WeshouldalwaysremembertheEnglishproverb“Takecareofthepenceandthepoundswilltakecareofthemselves”.Sometimeswewanttogoouttohaveholidayswithourfamilyandbymeansofthriftthemoneytobespentonsuchoccasionscanoftenbesavedbeforehand.Sicknesssometimescomesandunlesspreparationhasbeenmade,thereismuchdifficultyinmeetingtheincreasedexpenditure.Soeverybodyshouldtrytosaveasmuchmoneyaspossible.      Chinaisadevelopingcountry.IfweChinesepeopleareallthriftyandworkinghard,surelyourcountrywillbestrongerandstronger,andthenonedaybecomeaveryrichandprosperousone.      突出特点是大量谚语的运用，借力发挥，为文章增色不少。【评语】      全文围绕题目所给的三方面展开论述，内容切题，观点鲜明。语言流畅，句与句之间联系严密，富有逻辑性。句式的变换和一系列比喻及谚语的使用，使文章读来生动，具有说服力。【要求】      暑假就要到了，许多同学都会选择旅游作为度假的一种方式。确实，旅游对一个人的身心安康颇有好处。那么就请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇旅游的文章。       Travelisaverygoodmeansofbroadeningaperson'sperspective.       Travelmayrelieveapersonofboredomandgloom.       Travelerscanchoosedifferentmodesoftransportationwhichhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.【范文】Travel      Travelisaverygoodmeansofbroadeningaperson'sperspective.Itmakesyoucomeintocontactwithdifferentcultures,meetpeopleofdifferentcolorsandgothroughpeculiarritesandceremonies.Travellingmuch,youwillnotonlyenrichyourknowledgeandexperiences,butalsobeawareofthevastnessofnature.      Travelmayalsorelievepersonofboredomandgloom.Travelbringsyouenjoymentandattraction.Itgivesyouapleasantexperience,whichwilldisperseyourboredomandmakeyouforgetwhateverannoysyou.Travelbroadensyourmindandleavesyougoodmemories.Later,youmaygooverthesememoriesandenjoyyourpastexperiences,thuskeepingafreshandsunnymind.35/35\n      Thefield'shisstudy,naturewashisbook.      Travelerscanchoosedifferentmodesoftransportationwhichhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.Airplanesarethefastestbutalsothemostexpensive.Busesandtrainsarelessexpensive,buttheysoonmakeyoufeelcrampedanduncomfortable.Shipsprovideyouwithcomfortunlessyougetseasick.Mostpeoplecanaffordtravelingbybicycle,which,althoughslow,canlimberupyourmusclesandgetyouclosertonature.【评语】      本文首先陈述了旅游能够开阔人们眼界的原因，接着指出为什么旅游能够消除烦闷、抑郁的心情，最后说明进展旅游可采取的不同交通工具的优缺点。本篇各段解释言简意明，主题突出。“comeintocontactwith…”，“enrichyouknowledgeandexperiences”，“beawareofthevastnessofnature”，“disperseyourboredom”，“broadenyourmind”等词语的恰当搭配，生动而准确地表现出了旅游的益处。【要求】      人类每时每刻都在浪费着各种各样的资源，不仅包括自然资源，还包括时间资源。请你以下面三句话分别作为段首主题句，写一篇短文谈谈浪费问题。Mankindiswastingthingseverywhereandeveryday.Theworstexampleofman'swasteisthewasteoftime.Itistimetocallforanendtowaste.【范文】       Mankindiswastingthingseverywhereandeveryday.Whereverweturn,wecanseethatpaper,bottlesandcansarethrownaway;foodiswastedjustbecauseofitspoortaste;clothesarediscardedsimplyduetotheiroldfashion.Notonlythingsandmoneyarewasted,butnaturalresourcesareabusedaswell.Treesarecutdownmerelyforfuel;wildlifeiskilledsimplyforfood;oil,coalandmineralsareexploitedinabadway.       Theworstexampleofman'swasteisthewasteoftime.Manypeopletendtospendtheirtimeonworthlessthings,suchaswanderingaboutinthestreet,gossipingintheoffice,orsleepingtoomuchduringtheday.Asweknow,timeissoprecioustousthatitpassesbyandneverreturns.Thewasteoftimeamountstothewasteoflife.      Itistimetocallforanendtowaste.Ontheonehand,wemustsavenaturalresourcesandmakefulluseofthem;otherwisehumanbeingswillbefacedwiththescarcityofnaturalresourcesandsufferfromthepollutioncausedbywastes.Ontheotherhand,wemusttreasureourtime.Onlywithourtimedevotedtostudyandworkforthepeoplewillweneverregretthelifewehavehad.35/35\n【评语】      该文主题突出，论述充分而有层次。句子之间衔接自然，逻辑性强。文中词语搭配讲究，符合英语表态习惯。      词语搭配是难点也是重点，只要熟练运用，才能真正掌握。【要求】      要求：旅游事业对我国具有举足轻重的作用。请以WaystoImproveChina'sTourism为题为我国旅游事业的开展提几点建议。（提示：扩大宣传，改善旅游设施，提高效劳质量……）【范文】WaystoImprovechina'stourism      Tourismisnowbecomingamajorindustrythroughouttheworld.However,tourisminChinaisnotasdevelopedasitshouldbe.Ifthefollowingisdone,China'stourismwilldefinitelybeimproved.       First,ourplacesofinterestshouldbebetteradvertisedthroughouttheworldtoattractmoretourists.Second,facilitiesshouldbeprovidedtoensurethattouristsenjoytheirtrip.Finally,thequalityofserviceshouldbeimproved.      Don'ttellpeopletheirideasarebadunlessyou'vegotagoodone.【评语】      本文第一段提出问题，第二段解决问题，“first”，“second”，“finally”等词的使用，使整篇文章条理格外清晰。【要求】       社会的变化引起人们对富有与欢乐的讨论。人们开场认为富有与欢乐并非必然相联系，穷人一样有他们的欢乐。你会在富有与欢乐之间作出什么选择？请你就常人的看法和你自己的看法写简短文。【范文】WealthyandHappy      Wealthandhappinessarenotnecessarilyrelatedtoeachother.      Firstofall,wehavetobelievethatwealthypeoplearemorelikelytobehappythanpoorones.Becausewealthypeopledonothavetoworryabouttheirworkandbread,whichareusuallythecausesoftroubletothepoor.35/35\n      Butinthisworld,happinessdoesnotbelongtotherichonly.Thepoorhaveanequalrighttoit.Solongasthepooraresatisfiedwiththemselvesandtheircondition,theyfeelhappy.      Ithinkitwouldbeperfecttobebothwealthyandhappy.Butifthetwocannotbeheldatthesametime,Iwouldratherchoosehappiness.      Moneymaybethehuskofmanythings,butnotthekernel.【评语】      富有与欢乐是一个赋有哲学意义的问题：一个是物质条件，一个是心理感觉。不同的人应该允许有不同的看法。本文开篇阐述了常人的观点，按着从正、反两个方面辩证阐述二者的关系，最后说明自己的观点，显得说理充分，让人信服。写这类主观性题目，个人观点必须明确。【要求】周末两天的休息对于平时忙于工作学习的人们来说是非常珍贵的。请你根据以下提纲写一篇短文。周末对于人们来说意味着什么。每个人都有自己度周末的方式。我是怎样度周末的。天星版权所有【范文】Weekends      Weekendstopeoplemeanthattheycanhaveatwo-daygoodrest.Forexample,peoplecangoouttoenjoythemselvesorgettogetherwithrelativesandfriendstotalkwitheachotherorwatchinterestingvideotapeswiththewholefamily.      Everyonespendsweekendsinhisownway.Withintwodays,somepeoplecanrelaxthemselvesbylisteningtomusic,readingnovels,orwatchingfilms.Othersperhapsaremoreactivebyplayingbasketball,wimmingordancing.Differentpeoplehavedifferentrelaxations.      Ioftenspendweekendswithmyfamilyormyfriends.Sometimesmyparentstakemeonavisittotheiroldfriends.SometimesIgotothelibrarytostudyorborrowsomebookstogainmuchknowledge.Ialsogotoseevariousexhibitiontobroadenmyvision.Anexcursiontoseashoreormountainresortsismyfavoritewayofspendingweekends.Weekendsarealwaysenjoyableforme.【评语】35/35\n      全文思路清晰，论述充分，语言流畅易懂。用词讲究，注意了词语搭配，没有重复、堆砌之感。【要求】根据下面的提示写一篇短文，内容须包括下面几个要点。没有坚强的意志就不可能取得成功。事业成功须非凡的干劲。有些人害怕困难，那么一事无成。【范文】WherethereisaWill,ThereisaWayNomancanwinsuccesswithoutstrongwill.Wehearsomemenhavegotgoodresults,buthardlyrealizethatthegreatmenhadbeenmakingmoreeffortsbeforetheyachievedsuccess.Successrequiresanunusualamountofenergytoovercomedifficulties.Soitisimportantforustohavegreatresolution.Somementendtobeafraidofdifficulties.Iftheymeetwithsomedifficulties,theywillgivein.Sotheygetnothingeventually.Solet'smakeupourminds,sticktoitandsurelywinsuccessinourcareer.Focusonthemostimportantthingstodotohelpyourorganizationbesuccessful.Don'tfocusontheeasiestthings.【评语】对这种提纲式作文，一定要囊括所给提纲中的全部内容，但又无须拘泥于提纲，更不能逐字逐句地“翻译”。对此应发挥自己的想像力和创造力，大胆地创作扩展。【要求】      以“Whyasenseofhumorisimportant”为题，写一篇100字左右短文。提示如下：幽默能表达个性。幽默有益于身心安康。35/35\n      幽默能融洽与他人关系。【范文】WhyaSenseofHumorIsImportant       Humorshowsaperson'scharacteristics.Ifyoucanseeeverythingwithasenseofhumor,youareaninterestingperson,andpeoplewillneverfeeldulltogetherwithyou.Italsoshowsthatyouareawell-educatedman.       Youarehealthyandhappywithyoursenseofhumor,foritcanalwayskeepyouinhighspirit,whichwilldogoodtobothyourmentalandphysicalhealth.Asenseofhumorchangesthecolorofthewholeworldbeforeyou.      Youwillalsohaveplentyoffriendswithyoursenseofhumor.Peoplefeelitapleasuretobewithyou,foryouhelpthemtoseethingsfromanentirelydifferentviewandamuchbrighterview.Yougivepeoplestrengthtofaceaworldfullofstruggle.【评语】      本文给出了每段的主题句。文章应围绕这几点开展成段，运用类比、假设等技巧，可以完成一篇出色的习作。      Alittlebitofhumorcanbeaneffectiveicebreaker.【要求】你认为在人际交往中最能表达个性风度、融洽与他人关系的性格是什么。请用100字左右阐述你的理由。题目自拟。【范文】WhyaSenseofHumorIsImportant      Asenseofhumorisuniversallyconsideredthemostvaluablepersonalitytrait.Althougheveryoneisbornwithit,ithastobecultivated.Apersonwithouthumorisjustlikeaspringwithoutflowers.Inaway,yourpersonalityliesinyoursenseofhumor.Humorcanenhancephysicalaswellasmentalwellbeing.Ithelpsusreducestress,overcomefrustrationanddissolvecountlesstriflingirritations.35/35\n      Humorhelpsustogetalongwithothers.Misunderstandingandtensionwithothersduringworkorstudyisunavoidable.Butappropriateuseofhumorcansettlequarrelsandconflicts.Withagoodsenseofhumoryoucanalwayskeepongoodtermswithothers【评语】      本文语言优美，比喻恰当，论述有理有据，条理清晰，层次清楚。自拟的题目既指出了性格关键词“humor”，又说明了本文的主要内容是论述“重要性”，是自命题作文中的精品。      把这几篇同题材的文章对照参阅，一定会很有帮助的。【要求】幽默感是上天赐给人类的最好礼物，是快乐生活中所必不可少的要素。请你以下面的提纲写一篇短文，谈谈为什么幽默感非常重要。幽默感是上天赐给人类的最好礼物，是公认的最有价值的性格特征之一。幽默可以促进我们的身心安康。幽默有助于我们与他人和谐相处。综上所述，…【范文】WhyaSenseofHumorisImportant       Asenseofhumor,God'sgreatestgifttomankind,isuniversallyconsideredthemostvaluablepersonalityasset.Itisbornwithineveryperson'sheart,buthastobecultivated.Apersonwithouthumorisjustlikeaspringwithoutflowersandadishwithoutseasoning.Inasense,yourpersonalityliesinyoursenseofhumor.      Humorcanenhancephysicalaswellasmentalwellbeing.Ithelpsusbearourburdens,lessenourtension,overcomeourfrustration,relaxourbodymuscles,anddissolvecountlesstriflesandirritations.Withthecrackingofajoke,allourworries,sadnessandtirednessdisperselikemistandsmoke,andwearefullofvigoronceagain.       Humorhelpsusliveinharmonywithothers.Itisunavoidabletohavemisunderstandingandtensionwithothersduringworkorstudy.Buthumorcan,asa“pacifier”,injectalightnoteintothetouchysituationtoeasetheseproblemsquickerthanangrywordsorquarrels.Withityoucanalwayskeepongoodtermswithothers.      Inshort,asenseofhumorisreallyoneofthekeystohappiness.Itgiveszesttolifetomakeitworthliving.35/35\n【评语】      该文语言生动流畅，用词准确。尤其是词语的搭配比较讲究，值得大家学习。文章内容切题，层次清楚，句与句之间的连接富有逻辑性35/35