2023高考英语二轮复习书面表达经典好文专题01成功与机遇202302351208

一、成功与机遇1．国外老师上SocialStudies这类课的时候，常常用到“成功冰山(SuccessIceberg)”的例子。请你根据下面的图和相关文字叙述，按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Everyoneisfamiliarwiththephrase“Hardworkisthekeytosuccess”．Somepeoplethinkthatluckistheonlysolutiontosuccesswhilemanyothersbelievethatsuccessincludescompromise，persistence，dedication，andfailures.Toconcludeit，Iconsiderthat“Successisaniceberg”．Weareallacquaintedwiththestructureoftheicebergwhichfloatsinthesea.Onlyasmallportionoftheicebergisvisiblewhilethelargeportionishiddenunderthewater.Icebergcanbeperfectlyrelatedwithsuccess.Achievement，whichisseenbyeveryone，canbecomparedtothevisibleportionoftheicebergwhilethehardworkbehindsuccessisthebottomoftheiceberg.【写作内容】1．用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2．结合上述信息，简要分析你对“成功冰山”的理解；3．举例说明“成功冰山”对你的启示。【写作要求】1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3．不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。【范文必背】Asisvividlyillustratedabove，successislikeanicebergfloatinginthesea.Onlya\nsmallpartofitcanbeseenwhilemostofitisinvisibleunderthewater.Whentalkingaboutsuccess，peopleoftenfixtheirmindonsuccessitself，ignoringsomehiddenfactors.Iholdthebeliefthatalthoughdedication，hardworkanddisciplinearekeyelementsofsuccess，failureandsacrificearealsosignificant.Thosewhoareunwillingtobepersistentwillendinfailure.Onthewhole，hardworkistheleadingfactor.Astome，IwasweakinEnglishinthepast.Inspiredbytheteacherandfriends，IdeterminedtoimprovemyEnglishwiththeguidanceofSuccessIceberg.Thoughfacedwithseveralfailure，IwasdedicatedtoEnglishandstillworkedhardonit.Withpersistenceanddiscipline，Imadegreatprogressintheend.Ibelieveifweconcentrateonthehiddenfactorsandputthemintoaction，weareboundtosucceed.2．请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Opportunitiesfavourthepreparedmind”为题，用英语写一篇作文。你的作文应包括以下内容：1．简要描述两幅图的内容；2．概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；3．举例说明两幅图对你的启示。注意：1．可参照图片适当发挥；2．作文词数150左右；3．作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。【范文必背】OpportunitiesfavourthepreparedmindThetwopicturesrevealtwomentakecompletelydifferentattitudestobuildingabright\nfuture.InPicture1，amanisdreamingofopportunitiesforabrightfuture，butwithoutanyaction，whilePicture2showsanothermandevoteshimselftohisstudiestogetfullyprepared.Themessageconveyedhereisclear，“Opportunitiesfavourthepreparedmind”.Thedifferencebetweenthetwoliesonlyinthewayeachtreatsopportunities.Successfulpeoplealwaysmakeadequatepreparationstoseizeopportunities.Unsuccessfulpeople，ontheotherhand，worklittleandjustwait，seeingthempassby.Tofurtherstresstheimportanceofourattitudetowardsopportunities，let'stakeWomen'sVolleyballTeamforexample.InordertowinthegoldmedalintheOlympics，theytrainedhardeverydayandeventuallymadeit.Therefore，weshouldsparenoeffortstofulfillourdreams.It'suniversallyacknowledgedthatwewouldaccomplishnothingwithoutactionsandefforts.3．请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。It'salwaysemotionalwhenasportssuperstarannounceshisorherretirement.AndwhenKobeBryant，37，wroteapoemcalledDearBasketballtosaygoodbyetooneofthegreatest，mostfascinatingcareersinNBAhistory，thesadnesswasoverwhelming.WhethercompetingintheFinalsormakingjumpshotsaftermidnightinanemptygym，hehasanunconditionalloveforthegame.WhenTeamUSAwastraininginLasVegasmonthsbeforeitheadedtoLondonforthe2012OlympicGames，Bryantstartedhisworkoutat5∶30everymorninginthegymuntilteampracticebeganat11∶00am.DuringeachpracticeBryantcountedeverysingleshothehit，andhewouldn'tleavethegymuntilhehadhitatleast400.Thiskindofhardworkcertainlypaidoff.HewonanNBAMVPaward，fiveNBAchampionshipswiththeLakersandtwoOlympicgoldmedals，makinghimoneofthegreatestplayersinNBAhistory.【写作内容】1．用约30个词写出上文概要；2．用约120个词发表你的观点，内容包括：(1)你对“成功源于坚持不懈的努力”的看法；(2)用事例说明你或你朋友是怎么努力的。\n【写作要求】1．阐述观点或提供论据时，不得直接引用原文语句；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【范文必背】ThepassageabovetellsusthatpeoplegenerallyfeelsadatKobeBryant'sretirementandthathissuccessresultsfromhisloveforbasketballandyearsofhardwork.Kobe'sexampleremindsmethatone'ssuccessisbasedonbothpassionandhardwork.BesidesKobe，otherpeoplesuchasThomasEdison，SteveJobsandsoonhaveallproventhatperfectly.WhenIwasachild，IwasfacedwithgreatdifficultyinlearningEnglish，especiallyinvocabulary.Nevertheless，withmyEnglishteacher'spatientinstructionandhelp，Ikeptonpracticing.Intheend，myperseveranceanddeterminationpaidoff.“Wherethereisawill，thereisaway”，astheoldsayinggoes.Ifwearedeterminedtodosomething，wewillfindawayofdoingitandachievesuccess.Withoutperseverance，itisimpossibleforustokeeptryinguntilourdreamscometrue.