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2022年中考英语满分作文评析

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满分作文评析2022北京卷根据中文和英文提示,写一封意思连贯,符合逻辑,不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出,其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用,请不要写出你的校名和姓名。假如你叫李华,你的美国笔友Tom上周刚过完生日。他想知道你经常和谁一起过生日,怎么过的,你收到的最喜欢的礼物是什么,以及你喜欢它的原因。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语:cake,noodles,singsongs,makeawish,getpresents·Whodoyouoftencelebrateyourbirthdaywith?Yourparents?Yourfriends?Or…?·Whatdoyouusuallydoonyourbirthday?[·Whatisyourfavoritepresent?Whydoyoulikeit?ToTomFromLiHuaSubjectBirthdayHi!Tom,I’mgladthatyouhadanicebirthdaypartylastweek.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua52\n【思路点拨】文章格式已经给出,所以我们可以直接回答“跟谁在一起?经常做什么?最喜欢什么礼物?”三个问题。在回答问题时,要言之有理有据,注意衔接。文章写作模版如下:回答问题提出祝愿Ioftencelebrateitwith…Myfavouritepresentis…because…Ihope…I’mgladthat…Letmetellyou…Iusually…onmybirthday…引出话题问题2问题1问题3【标准范文】Hi!Tom,I’mgladthatyouhadanicebirthdaypartylastweek.NowI’lltellyousomethingabouthowIcelebratemybirthday.Ioftencelebratemybirthdaywithmyparentsandmyfriends.Ioftenhaveabirthdayparty.Myparentsbuymeabirthdaycakeandsomedeliciousfoods.Manyfriendscometomyhome.Theysendmemanypresents.Wesinganddance.Weeatfoodandfruitandplaygamestogether.Weoftenhaveagoodtime.AmongallthebirthdaypresentsthatIreceived,myfavouriteoneisaspecialcalendardesignedbymyparents,becausetherearefamilypicturestakenduringthewholeyearandwordswithencouragement.Ihopeeveryonehasagoodtimeeveryday.Yours,LiHua52\n【强化训练】假如你是Lisa,6月19日是你的生日,请根据一下表格的内容,向你的好朋友群发一封邀请信。Time:Friday,June19,at2:30pmPlace:Lisa’shomeActivities:watchinganewmovie,playinggames,havingdinner要求:1.词数:80左右2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Hifriends,I'mveryhappybecausemybirthdayiscoming.Iwillhaveabirthdaypartyatmyhomeat2:30pmonJune192.Wehavealotoffoodanddrink.Ithinkwecanhaveabigdinner.Atthesametime,wecandomanyinterestingactivities.Suchaswatchinganewmovieorplayinggames.Welcomeeveryonetocometomybirthdayparty.RemembertocomeifyouarefreeonFriday. Yours,Lisa2022天津卷52\n在初中即将毕业之际,请你以张明的名义给英国笔友Brian写一封感谢信,要点提示如下:三年前你来到新的班级,没有朋友,感到孤独三年中Brian多次给你写信,他在信中:鼓励你多交朋友;告诉你学好英语的方法;和你分享快乐;你变得……近年来天津发生很大变化,你邀请他来天津游玩参考词汇:分享快乐 sharehappiness要求:⑴词数:80~100个⑵信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数⑶要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥DearBrian,Howtimeflies!Wehavebeenfriendsforthreeyears.I’mwritingtothankyouforyourhelp!Threeyearsago,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopetoseeyousoon!                                                  Yours,                                                  ZhangMing52\n具体帮助发出邀请Youwrotetome…alwaysencouragedmeto….WhenIhadtrouble….Besides,youwerealwayssharing…Thankstoyourhelp…IhopeyoucancometoTianjinto…WhenIcametoanewclass,everythingwas…andfelt…当时处境【标准范文】DearBrain,Howtimeflies!Wehavebeenfriendsforthreeyears.I’mwritingtothankyouforyourhelp!Threeyearsago,whenIcametoanewclass,everything wasstrangeto me.Ihadnofriendsandfeltverylonely.Itwasyouwhohelpedmealot. Duringthesethreeyears,youwrotetomemanytimesandalwaysencouragedmetomakefriends asmanyaspossible. WhenIhadtroublewithmyEnglish,youtoldmemanygoodwaystoimproveit. Besides, youwerealwayssharinghappinesswithme, whichmademylifemorecolorful. Thankstoyourhelp,Ihavebecomemoreconfidentandpositive.Ireally appreciate yourhelp. Theseyears, greatchangeshavetakenplace inTianjinandIhopeyoucancometoTianjintoexperiencethenewchanges.Hopetoseeyousoon!                                         52\n         Yours,                                                  ZhangMing【强化训练】假设你是一名中学生,名叫李华,曾经到英国学习、生活了三个月。在那期间,你住在大卫(David)家中。现在学习已结束,你刚回到家,特意给大卫写一封80词左右的英文信,内容包括以下方面:表达谢意感谢大卫及其家人对你的照顾。难忘的事1.大卫帮助你学习英语,带你去参观了许多地方;2.大卫的父母在你生病时送你去医院,给你做好吃的食物。学习收获提高了英语水平,更多地了解了英国的文化。发出邀请邀请大卫及其家人到你家作客。要求:⑴信件内容要包含所给的提示信息,可适当发挥;⑵信的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;⑶文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇:culture(文化),invite(邀请)DearDavid,I’vejustgotbackhome.Iwanttosay“Thankyou”mostatthemoment.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】52\nDearDavid,I’vejustgotbackhome.Iwanttosay“Thankyou”mostatthemoment.Duringmystaywithyourfamily,Iwaswelllookedafter.YouhelpedmewithmyEnglishandshowedmearoundmanyplaces.WhenIwasill,yourparentssentmetothehospitalandprepareddeliciousfoodforme,soIgotwellsoon.Withyourhelp,myEnglishhasgreatlyimprovedandI’velearnedmoreaboutyourculture.Thankyouforwhatyouhavedone!I’dliketoinviteyoutovisitmyfamilysoon.Yours,LiHua2022上海卷Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Thistimenextyear”(以“明年此时”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)你是否想象过,明年此时,你的生活会发生怎样的变化?你对自己或他人有怎样的期待?你能为此做些什么?(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)Thefollowingsentencepatternsareforreferenceonly.(以下句型仅供参考)Ihopeto/Ihopethat...PerhapsIwill...Itwillbeexciting/necessary/terribleto...____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【试题分析】52\n本题英语作文是让学生谈一谈明年生活有什么变化,以及畅想对自己对他人的期望。本考题一改之前的写建议、写方法和写感受,转向引导学生写畅想未来的记叙文,题材上有些出乎意料,但从内容上来看,却又在情理之中,中考之后的学生马上要面临的就是高中的崭新生活,充满着挑战和变化。这样的命题更贴近学生的生活,也能激发学生从多角度思考、多层次发挥。《明年此时》的作文题目令人赏心悦目,能够激发学生对未来的美好憧憬,有利于学生的个性发挥。正文总结I’llbe…I’llmakelotsoffriends.I’ll…Iplanto…Lifewillbetodaydifferent.But…Mylifenextyearis…Ihope…概述谈期待谈变化谈打算【标准范文】ThisTimeNextYearItisinterestingthatthecompositionIamwritingnowmaydecidewhichschoolIwillbeinandwhatIwillbedoingthistimenextyear.IfIamlucky,Iwillbesittingintheclassroomofafamoushighschool,studyingwithmynewclassmates.Iwillhavegrownoneyearolderandmadealotofnewfriendsbythattime.Andonethingissure:Iwillbecomeamoreindependentandresponsiblepersonandbeabletofacemorechallengesinmystudyandlife.【名师点评】本篇作文主要涉及三个方面:变化、期望和自己的作为。文章第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化,第二句是期望及第一个作为,紧接其后的是第二个作为,最后表达出了考生对变化的想法及态度。全文要点齐全,语句通顺,很好地完成了写作任务。【强化训练】三年的初中生活即将结束,你马上就要进入高中学习,请以Mylifeinthehighschool为题,根据下表所提供的信息和提示词,用英语写一篇小短文,畅想自己未来的高中生活。52\n内容要点校园1.校园(campus)宁静而美丽,教室宽敞明亮,是学习的好地方。老师2.老师知识渊博,严格要求学生又关爱学生。同学3.与同学友好相处。学习4.自主学习和积极参与小组学习,力争学习取得进步。课外活动5.积极参加各种课外活动,保持身体健康。提示词:peaceful(宁静的),knowledgeable(知识渊博的),宽敞明亮(wideandbright),carefor(关爱),learnbyoneself(自主学习),takeanactivepartin(积极参加),groupwork(小组学习),out-of-classactivities(课外活动)要求:1.短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、学习和课外活动五个方面的内容,每个方面用2-3句话表述;2.所给的提示词都必须用上(可适当发挥),词数80左右(不含已给出句子的词数);3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名;4.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。MylifeinthehighschoolMyjuniorschoolwillbeover.AndI’mgoingtomyhighschoolinSeptember.Ithinkmyhighschoollifewillbecolorfulandmeaningful.Thecampusofmyhighschoolwill__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wonderfulhighschoollife!Ican’twait!【参考范文】MylifeinthehighschoolMyjuniorschoolwillbeover.AndI’mgoingtomyhighschoolinSeptember.Ithinkmyhighschoollifewillbecolorfulandmeaningful.Thecampusofmyhighschoolwillbebeautifulandpeaceful.Theclassroomiswideandbright.52\nWhatagoodplacetostudy!Ifallinloveitatonce.Theteachersareknowledgeable.Theyarestrictwithallthestudents,buttheycareforeverystudentmore.Allmyclassmatesarefriendlyandwecangetonwellwitheachother.Sometimes,wehelpeachotheronstudy.Iworkhardinthisschoolandmostofthetimewelearnbyourselves.Ialsotakeanactivepartingroupworkforlearning.IthinkIcanmakegreatprogressonstudy.Doyoulikeout-of-activities?Here,therearemanykindsofout-of-activities.Ijointhemeverytime.Iwanttokeepfitthroughthem.Wonderfulhighschoollife!Ican’twait!2022重庆A、C卷为了更好地开展2022年全民阅读活动,有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见,你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿,提出自己的想法和建议。要点提示:1.阅读的好处:2.你的建议(如:建更多小型图书馆,经常性地介绍好书等);3.……要求:1.词数:80词左右开头,开头已给出,不计入总词数。2.文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。Hello,mydearfriends.Asweallknow,readingisveryimportanttous._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【试题分析】本题是写一篇发言稿,属于应用文体。主要内容是针对阅读提出自己的想法和建议,包括谈论阅读的好处、自己的一些建议等。写作中要符合发言稿口语化的特点,由于是对当前阅读的想法和建议,所以句子时态以一般现在时态为主。【思路点拨】52\n作者首先要点明阅读的好处,然后提出自己的建议,该部分内容相对要多一些。为了使文章条理清楚,建议内容可分条列出,用上first,second,third等过渡词语。最后是自主发挥的内容,可以归纳和鼓励其他同学,引起其他同学们的发言欲望。本题写作模板如下:阅读的建议阅读的希望Ihavesomegoodadviceabutreading.First…,second…,third…Ihopemyadvice…/Ithink…Readingcanmakeus…canhelpus…阅读的好处【名师点评】本文符合发言稿的要求,条理清楚,要点齐全,建议中肯,符合实际。作者能用精炼的语言表情达意;文中多种句式、时态、语态的交替使用,丰富了短文的语言结构,使文章具有很强的可读性。【强化训练】4月23日为世界读书日,我们班将组织“与好书为友,以读书为乐”的主题活动。请根据以下提示,用英语写一段话,词数在80~100之间,内容必须包括表格中提示的要点:读书意义活动计划个人愿意或感受了解世界找些好书……带来快乐用好时间培养习惯做好笔记注意:1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:develop培养OnApril23,WorldReadingDay,ourclasswillorganizeareadingactivity—BeFriendswithGoodBooksandTakeDelightinReading.52\nIthink_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2022南京卷假如你是来自英国某中学的交换生Daniel,你想参加英文报纸JinlingDaily广告中介绍的机器人培训班。ROBOTCOURSERobotcourseforbeginnersatStarlightSchoolOrganizedvisitstoFriendlyRobotsCompanyE-mail:robotcourse@jinling.com请根据该广告内容,用英语写一封电子邮件,询问与该班相关的具体信息,邮件内容须包括:1.培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课;2.参观机器人公司的具体安排;3.你还想了解的该培训班其他信息。注意:1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;3.词数80左右,邮件的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。Dearsir/MadamI’mwritingtoaskforinformationabouttherobotcourseforbeginnersatStarlightSchool.52\n_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursfaithfullyDaniel询问祝愿Howlongwillthecourselast?IwonderwhetherI’llbeableto…Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.I’mwritingtoaskfor…ThevisitstoFriendlyRobotsCompany引言参观安排课程安排其他信息【标准范文】DearSir/MadamI'mwritingtoaskforinformationabouttherobotcourseforbeginnersatStarlightSchool.Firstly,I’dliketoknowmoreaboutthecoursearrangement.Forexample,couldyoutellmehowlongthecoursewilllast?Iprefertoknowifthereisanyclassfortheweekend.Next,I’minterestedinthevisitstoFriendlyRobotsCompany.WouldyoutellmewhetherIneedtopay?Finally,IwonderwhetherI’llbeabletodesignarobotmyselfattheendofthecourse.ThankyouforyourtimeandIlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yoursfaithfully52\nDaniel【名师点评】本文作者能够紧紧抓住文中要点进行写作,短文语句通顺,结构完整,内容充实。文中first,next,finally等的使用使短文层次分明,有条有理。一些宾语从句使用得准确到位,也使询问的语气委婉客气,以Thankyoufor…结尾,使短文更加完整。【参考范文】DearAnna,Thanksforyourletter.I’mgladtoknowthatyouarecomingtoChinaforyourstudy.Ourschoolisinthecenterofthecity.Therearefourteachingbuildings,alargeplayground,abiggardenwithbeautifulflowersandmanytreesaround.Wehavesixclasseseveryday,threeinthemorningandthreeintheafternoon.Usually,wedosomesportsandtakepartindifferentinterestsclassesafterschool.Thereisabasketballmatchbetweenclassesandanewfilmshoweverymonthhere.Ilovemyschoolandit’squiteinterestingtostudyhere.IhavemademuchprogressinmyEnglishandI’malsogoodatplayingthepiano.WecanhavepianolessonseveryTuesdayafternoonatschool.Ihopeyoucancometomyschoolandstudyhere.Yours, May52\n2022河南卷你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“Myspecial______”为题用英语写一篇短文,描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。要求:1.在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象,如grandma,teacher或friend等;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.80词左右。Myspecial_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【试题分析】本题是写一篇人物介绍,属于开放式作文,主要是介绍一个你身边对于你来说具有特殊意义的人,可以是你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。文章主要突出这个人物的特别之处,根据题目要求自由发挥体现了本题写作的开放性。文章应以第一、三人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。【思路点拨】本文主要是介绍一个你身边对于你来说具有特殊意义的人,写作时首先要注意的问题是人称,不能混淆人称;其次,注意动词的形式,根据主语的不同人称,动词使用不同的形式;第三,句型结构要符合英语表达习惯,用自己最熟练掌握的句子来写。写作模板如下:详细介绍发表感受WhenIam…Iknow…Mygrandmais…Sheoften…Iknow…Mygrandmais…because…Shealways…点名人物【标准范文】MyspecialgrandmaMygrandmaisspecialtomebecausewe’relikefriends.Shealwayshelpsmeoutwhenever52\nIamintrouble.Therearenosecretsbetweenus.WhenIamwithmygrandma,wespendalotofhappytimetogether.Iknowmygrandmaisverysmartbecausesheseemstoknoweverything.Mygrandmaisgoodatmanythings.Onethingshe’sbestatiscooking.Sheoftencooksdeliciousfoodforme.IknowmygrandmalovesmeandIloveheraswell.【强化训练】在你成长的过程中父母和老师对你帮助很大。请你根据表格中提供的信息,写一篇短文,参加校园网英语学习园地征文比赛。注意:1、从所给的两个题目中任选一个;    2、短文必须包括表格内容,适当举例,并谈谈自己的感受;    3、词数:80词左右。ThepersonyouwanttothankPersonalitieskind,easygoing,…Helptakecareof,encourage,cheerup,…Feelings…MyMother/Father/Teacher____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyMotherMymotherisverykidandeasygoing.Shehelpsmealot.Shetakesgoodcareofmydailylife.Forexample,everymorning,shewakesmeupandcooksbreakfastforme.WhenI’mintrouble,52\nshealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandcheersmeup.IstillrememberthatonceIarguedwithmybestfriendandwasupset.Mymothertalkedwithmethewholenightandfinallyhelpedmesolvetheproblem.Withherhelp,Ibecameatopstudentinmyclass.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.Ibelieveshewillbeproudofmeinthenearfuture.2022陕西卷在日常生活中,你看到身边有哪些不良现象?请列出—些并就某些方面说说你的做法和想法。提示:speakloudly,cutinline(插队),wastefood,unfriendly(冷漠的),offernohelp…要求:1.参考提示语,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.文中不相出现真实姓名和地名;4.词数:不少于80词。(开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________不良现象做法想法Ioftenhearpeople…Somepeople…Andinourschooldinninghall,Ioftensee…Attimes,people…Forme…SoI…AndI…Iusuallyseesomebadbehavior…点名主题52\n【名师点评】本文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清楚,语言流畅,发挥适当。最难得的是,考生能够参考提示语,通过自己扎实的语言功底,流畅地将要点发挥出来,叙述有条不紊。特别是有效地使用了词语之间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,完全达到了预期的写作目的。【强化训练】目前,我市正在争创省级文明城市,但社会上仍然存在一些类似如图所示的不良现象,这与文明城市的要求相去甚远。作为一名中学生,在日常生活中,我们应该干什么?不应该干什么?对此,校学生会拟举行以“Howtobeacivilizedstudent”为主题的英语作文比赛,请你结合下图反映的内容,写一篇80词左右的短文参赛。注意:1.至少叙述三条日常生活中我们应该普遍遵守的文明行为;2.文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;3.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。HowtoBeaCivilizedStudentAsweallknow,ourcityiscreatingacivilizedcity.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________52\n2022重庆B卷假如你叫李明,你英国友好学校的朋友Mike给你发来e-mail,邀约你暑假前往加拿大游玩。你因故不能赴约,请给他回复。要点提示:1.感谢并致歉;2.不能赴约的原因(如发展爱好,走亲访友,花费太高等);3.……要求:1.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。DearMike,I’mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours,LiMing【试题分析】52\n本文是写一篇电子邮件,主要是介绍自己不能赴约的原因,并对朋友的邀请表示感谢和道歉。文章的重点是描述不能赴约的原因。记叙缘由时,以第一人称为主,时态用一般现在时、一般将来时。【思路点拨】电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已经给出,考生所要表达的内容为“不能赴约的原因”。写作时,注意句型和短语的灵活应用,所写的句子一定要符合英语的表达习惯和语法结构。另外,为了表达清楚,文中可以用firstly,secondly…等词分别表示列举的原因等。写作模板如下:简述原因表达愿望Firstly,Iwillgoonpractice…SecondlyIplantovisit…AtlastIneedtostudy.Iwillgoto…Ihopethatyoucan/will…Iwill…Ilookforwardto…ButI’msorryIcan’tbecause…引入话题【标准范文】DearMike,I’mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.IlookforwardtovisitingCanadathissummer.ButIhadtosayI’msorrythatIcan’tgotherebecauseIwillhaveabusysummerholiday.Firstly,Iwillgoonpracticingmybasketball.Ihaveplayedbasketballforthreeyears.Ihavelesstimeduringtheschooldays,soImustpracticeitasmuchasIcan.Secondly,Iwillvisitmygrandparentsinthecountryside.Mygrandparentsareveryoldandtheyoftenfeelsick,Iwouldliketolookafterthem.Whatmore,Ineedtostudy.Nextyear,Iwillgotohighschool,therefore,Imuststudythesubjectsearlier.Atlast,IthinkthecosttoCanandaistoohigh.Idon’thaveenoughmoneytoaffordthetrip.IhopeyoucanvisitChinathissummer.Bestwishes.Yours,LiMing【名师点评】52\n本文层次清楚,要点齐全,人称和时态运用恰当,语言简洁、表达准确。多种句型结构的运用使得文章表现形式不拘一格。连接词but,so,because,what’smore,therefore等的使用使文章更加连贯、流畅。【强化训练】假设你是赵明,你班来自美国的交流学生Robert患病住院已有三周,请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件。主要内容包括:1.询问病情;2.介绍班级近期活动或学习情况;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80-100词左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信的格式已给出,不记入总词数。DearRobert,It’sthreeweekssinceyouwereill.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,Yours,ZhaoMing【参考范文】DearRobert,It’sthreeweekssinceyouwereill.Howareyoufeelingnow?(Areyoufeelingbetternow?)Weallmissyouverymuch.Recentlywehavehadmanyactivities.Wetookpartinthesportsmeetinginourschoolandwonthefirstprize.Thematcheswereexcitingandtough.Butwetriedourbestandgotthegoodresult.Whatapity!Youdidn’twatchthem.Ihopeyou’llgetwellsoonandcomebackearlier.We’rebusypreparingforthesingingcompetitionnow.Wepracticeasongeverydayinordertosingbest.Remembertohaveagoodrestanddon’tworryaboutyourlessons.I’llhelpyouwiththem.Bestwishes,Yours,52\nZhaoMing2022广东卷____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【试题分析】本文是写一篇微博留言,主要是对如何改善现有的设施设备条件发表自己的意见,内容包括两个方面:一是喜欢学校哪个场所的设施设备以及喜欢的原因;二是选取学校现有的两个场所谈谈设施设备的不足。第二个方面是重点。文中要用第一人称来写,句子用一般现在时态为主。【思路点拨】根据题目要求,作者在写作时首先谈谈你喜欢学校的哪两个场所的设施设备以及喜欢的原因,然后重点写学校现有的两个场所设施设备的不足,具体到缺少什么设备、设施,有什么负面影响,怎样改善。写作时一定要具体到真实性,不可以凭空想象、任意编造。本题写作模板如下:52\n不足的设施However,weonlyhave…besides…Ithink…should…Whynot…?Thereis…Ilikeitbecause…Sowefeeluncomfortable…wecan’t…喜欢的设施负面影响缺少的设施你的建议【名师点评】本文结构清晰,层次分明,语言准确,内容充实,要点齐全。全文语言得体,用词准确,长短句交叉运用和复合句的出现,使文章提高了得分档次。文中whynot…,sooutofdatethat等的使用,更加体现了考生较高的英语水平。【强化训练】目前,我国实施城市化进程中,给从乡村(镇)迁入城市的大多数孩子带来诸多的问题,特别在交朋友方面尤为突出。假如你是Know,你的朋友Tony发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题,请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议,词数约80左右。内容包括如下:1、在小区内玩耍时,你可以主动与他们交流成为新朋友,并告知家长;2、请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所,既可认识更多伙伴又可参加文体活动;3、在星期天,可外出郊游等。总之,多参加交流活动,克服困难,保持耐心。要求:1、涵盖所有要点,意思连贯,符合逻辑。52\n2、卷面整洁、书写规范工整。不得逐字翻译。(可能用到的词:First,Second,Third,Inconclusion)DearKnow,Ineedsomeadviceonhowtomakefriends!Ihavejustmovedtoanewcity.Iam13.Idon’tknowanybodyhereandIwanttomakesomefriends.What’sthebestway?WherecanImeetpeople?Yours,TonyDearTony,Therearelotsofthingsyoucando._____________________________________________________________________________Ittakestimeandpatience.Ihopeyouwillfindabestfriendsoon!Yours,KnowYours,Know2022安徽卷52\n假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在署假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。●家庭安全:小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗;●游泳安全:不独自去游泳,不去河、湖游泳;●交通安全:过马路要当心,不在马路上玩耍。提示词:electricity(n.电)注意:1.词数80-100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。【试题分析】本命题紧密联系实际,要求考生通过电子邮件来谈论假期安全,该话题涉及学生生活的一部分,所以每个考生都有话可说,都容易得分。提示部分为必写内容,对学生的假期生活具有指导意义;本题要求考生结合实际适当发挥,由于话题贴近考生实际生活,所以都有能力发挥。【思路点拨】根据题目要求和提示内容,本文的写作重点分为三个部分:即家庭安全、游泳安全和交通安全。在表达时可多用时间状语从句或条件状语从句,从而避免句式单一。要注意选用合适的连接词,使上下文连贯。由于是暑假期间的要求,文中时态可用一般现在时态或一般将来时态,人称用第一人称。本题写作摸板如下:52\n正文结尾Weareaskedto…athome.When…Weshouldobeytrafficruleswhen…Ithinktheserulesarenecessary…Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Letmetellyou…Wearenotallowedtoswim…If…引言游泳安全家庭安全交通安全【名师点评】本文要点全面,句式多变,表达清楚,行文连贯,能够根据题目要求清晰地表达了学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。文中when引导的时间状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句的使用合理,能充分表达学校在不同情况下对学生的安全要求。文章多次使用了被动语态,充分显示出考生深厚的语言功底。【强化训练】学生安全问题已引起学校、家长、社会的高度关注,为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提离自我保护能力,某校开展了以“Howtokeepsafe?”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。52\n注意:⑴内容必须包括所给的全部要点,可适当发挥;⑵表达淸楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;⑶词数80-100左右,文章开头已给出,不计人总词数。参考词汇:becareful,gobad,turnoff,tap(自来水龙头),obey.Hello,everyone!I’mgladtosharemyideasabouthowtokeepsafehere.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshould__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening.2022湖南长沙卷随着年龄的増长,不少青少年发现越来越难以与父母沟通和交流,各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你的看法。要求:⑴内容包括①分析这种现象产生的主要原因;②提出解决该问题的具体建议。52\n⑵字数:60-80词。⑶短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【试题分析】本题是一篇半开放式议论文体裁,主要论述青少年与父母沟通和交流困难的原因,并提出解决问题的建议,主题很接近考生的现实生活,写起来有话可说,也很容易写出具有特色的文章来。本文的写作重点是论述“原因和具体建议”,提建议时可灵活运用first,second,third来表达,写作时可用第一人称或第二人称,时态以一般现在时态为主。【思路点拨】写作时首先要简单介绍这种现象产生的原因,然后要重点提出具体的意见。可根据实际情况分别介绍,行文要有条理,适当使用必要的连接词。最后可以表明自己的观点,应与文章的开头相呼应。写作模板如下:具体建议发表看法First,you/Weshould…Second,tryto…Third…Ifyoufollowthesedoso.Youcan…Ithinkit’sbecause…分析原因【标准范文】Nowadays,studentscannotcommunicatewithparentswell.Ithinkit’sbecausebothyouandyourparentsaretoobusy.Youdon’thaveenoughtimetostaytogether.Howtocommunicatewithourparents?Herearesomesuggestions.First,bothyouandyourparentsshouldspendtimewitheachother.Secondtrytotalktoyourparentspolitely,ortheywillnotfeelliketotalktoyou.Third,trytothinkaboutyourparentsmore,soyouwillfindthatyoucanunderstandthem.Ifyoufollowthese,youcangetonwellwithyourparents.【名师点评】52\n本文结构合理,句式多样,条理清晰,词组communicatewith,feellike,getonwellwith等的使用提高了文章的档次。不同句式的使用避免了文中句式的单调性,使文章脉络清晰,连贯自然。trytodosth.和because引导的表语从句、if引导的条件状语从句等更加体现了考生深厚的语言功底和较高的英语表达能力。本文考生能够用精确的语言提出自己合理的建议,做到了精确、规范、严谨、多变。【强化训练】建议是在乎你的人给予你的最真诚的关爱,建议是爱护你的人给予你的最温暖的期待。你需要认真倾听;也需要理解他人的善意;更需要积极改正……,请你围绕“中学生如何正确对待(treat)他人的建议”这一话题,展开思路谈一谈你的想法。要求:1.请根据所提供的信息材料和话题(不要逐句翻译),写出结构完整、条理清晰、内容充实、语言精练、语法准确、可读性强的短文。2.至少80词。3.题目自拟。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Adviceisthemosthonestlove,adviceisthewarmestexpectation.Asmiddleschoolstudents,howdowetreatadviceofothers?Forexample,wefailinanexam;orwearemisunderstoodbyyourfriends.Thesethingsmaymakeusfeelbad.Thenwhatwillwedo?Whynotlearntotakesomeadviceofothers?Goodadvicecanbringbackourconfidenceandcheerusup.Goodadvicecanhelpusgetonwellwithothers.Mostimportantofall,goodadviceofotherscanhelpusmakemoreprogressandbecomestronger.Ithinkweshouldtakemoreadviceofotherstocorrectourmistakes,sothatourworldwillbemorewonderful.2022江西卷阅读使人明智,阅读使人充实。某英文报为了了解中学生课外阅读情况,向广大中学生做调查,请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文,介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及你的阅读计划。52\n提示:1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;3.词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。benefit(益处)planopenupeyes,wise,rich……ReadingoutsideclasswhathabitWhatkindofbooksdoDoyoureade-books(电子书)?Whyorwhynot?youlikereading?Why?Whendoyouusuallyread?Howlongdoyoureadadayoraweek?ReadingOutsideClassAsweallknow,Readinghasalotofbenefits._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【试题分析】本题属于材料作文,重在考查考生综合运用语言的能力。题目要求考生根据所给的材料总结课外阅读的益处、阅读的内容、阅读的习惯和阅读计划。本文话题与考生生活息息相关,因此在写作时考生有内容可写,很容易下笔。但考生要根据提示进行适度的发挥,不能脱离主题。52\n【思路点拨】考生进行写作时首先点明课外阅读的益处,如开阔视野,使人明智等;接着陈述自己喜欢读什么样的书并说明原因,然后说明自己的阅读习惯,在介绍阅读习惯时,要紧紧围绕提示中的三个问题来表达;最后写出自己的阅读计划。文中句子可用一般现在时态和一般将来时态。本题写作模板如下:阅读材料阅读习惯Ilikereading…Becauseitgivesme…Ilike/dislikereadinge-booksbecause…I…Readingcanopenup…makeus…读书益处阅读计划Iplantoreadatleast…booksinthecoming…【名师点评】本文首先介绍了阅读的益处,然后表达了自己喜欢的阅读材料和阅读习惯,最后说出自己的阅读计划。文章结构严谨、条理清楚、要点齐全、语言流畅。文中寥寥数语,却说明了阅读的重要性和必要性。充分体现了考生布局语篇、驾驭语言的能力。长短句结合是本文的一个亮点,文中用了原因状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句等复合句式,这些复杂句式的正确使用,体现了考生高超的语言功底。【强化训练】目前中学生学习任务重,学习压力大。而广泛的阅读有利于开拓视野,调节身心。在课业学习和业余生活中,你喜欢阅读吗?你喜欢阅读什么样的书呢?作为中学生的你,是如果看待阅读呢?请就这个话题,谈谈你的想法和理由,可适当给出建议。52\n注意:1.词数:80词左右;2.要求调理清楚,语意连贯,字迹工整,可适当发挥。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2022广东广州卷为弘扬广府文化,你校在上周六举行了一次“GuangzhouCultureFestival”的活动。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,介绍活动的情况并提出你对下一年文化节的建议。注意:1.词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入词数);52\n2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。Inordertoincreasestudents’knowledgeaboutthetraditionalcultureofGuangzhou,ourschoolhelda“GuangzhouCultureFestival”lastSaturday....___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________介绍建议Weheld…Thestudents…Themusic…Onfoodshow,studentstaste…Isuggestholdingaspeechcompetitionsothat…Inorderto…ourschoolhelda…Itshowsthechangeof…Wecan…引言图片展粤剧赛美食展祝愿Ihopemorepeoplecanjoinusnextyear.【标准范文】Inordertoincreasestudent’sknowledgeaboutthetraditionalcultureofGuangzhou,ourschoolhelda“GuangzhouCultureFestival”lastSaturday.WeheldaCantoneseOperaCompetitiontocelebratethefestival.Studentsweresointerested52\nthattheytookanactivepartinit.Boththeirmusicandcostumewerewonderful.Besides,PictureShowPresentedthechangeswhichhadtakenplaceinGuangzhou,fromwhichstudentshadatasteofthehistoryandcultureofthiscity.AnotheractivityofthefestivalwasFoodShowwherestudentstastedsometraditionalGuangzhou-styledimsum.Tomakethefestivalbetter,IalsosuggestholdingaspeechcompetitionsothatstudentscansharetheirfeelingsandunderstandingaboutGuangzhou.Allinall,weenjoyedourselvesinthefestivalandIhopemorepeoplecanjoinusnextyear.【强化训练】假如你是李磊,你的美国笔友Tom对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封80词左右的电子邮件,介绍一或两个中国传统节日,如春节(SpringFestival)、中秋节(Mid-autumnFestival)等。要求:l、所给词不计人总词数。2、语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯。3、文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等相关信息。参考词汇:traditional传统的;decorate装饰DearTom,I'mverygladtotellyousomethingabout_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiLei【参考范文】DearTom,I’mverygladtotellyousomethingaboutSpringFestival.It’satraditionalfestivalinChina.Itcomesinwinter.52\nIt’stimetogetnew.Weusuallycleananddecorateourhousecarefullybeforeitcomes.Ialwayshelpmymothercleanthewindowsandwashtheclothes.Weputonchunlianonthedoorandchuanghuaonthewindow.It’stimetogettogether.Everyonegohometogettogetherwiththeirfamily,thoughsomeoneisfarawayfromhome.Theymusthavedinnertogetheronthatday.Theymustvisittheirrelativesandfriendsandsay“Happynewyear”tothem.Whenthekidsgreettheirgrandparents,theycangetmoney.YoursLiLei2022浙江杭州卷假设你是李平,最近你学习上遇到困惑。请用英语给你的英国朋友Nancy写一封电子邮件,讲述你的问题并寻求她的帮助。注意:1、邮件必须包括下面三幅画所描述的内容;2、词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计词数)。参考词汇:考试不及格failtheexam熬夜stayuplateHiNancy,Howareyou?Hopeyou’rewell._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mreallylookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplysoon.Love,52\nLiPing【试题分析】本题属于看图写话题。要求考生根据图画中所提供的信息叙述图中的事情,主要考查考生的观察力、想象力和逻辑思维能力以及语言组织和表述能力。在写作过程中,考生首先要准确理解漫画的意思,并准确找出关键词语和图中的主人公的行为组成要表述的句子。作文内容应覆盖图画的要点,避免只作简单翻译。【思路点拨】通过仔细观察图画内容,考生不难发现,本篇作文的立意就是在日常学习生活中遇到的事情,即考试不及格,妈妈很生气;“我”经常熬夜学习,导致在课堂上疲倦,精力不集中;老师询问原因。写作过程中注意每幅图画的衔接尤为重要,因此,考生要适当运用一些转承连接用语,使行文顺畅。本文以叙事为主,文中用一般过去时态。具体写作模板如下:正文询问Ifailedthe…Mymotherwas…Myteachercameandasked…I…WhatshouldIdo?Couldyouplease…?Ihaveaproblemandneedyourhelp.Inorderto…,Istayeduplate.Ifelt…引言图画2图画1图画3【标准范文】HiNancy,Howareyou?Hopeyou'rewell.Ihaveaproblemandneedyourhelp.Ifailedthemathexamyesterday.Mymomwasreallymadwithme.Inordertodobetternexttime,Istayeduplatelastnightdoingmymathhomework.SinceIdidn’tgetenoughsleep,Ifeltsleepythismorning.Myteachernoticedit.Shecameupandaskedwhatwaswrongwithme,butIdidn’ttellherthetruth.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?I'mreallylookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplysoon.Love,LiPing【名师点评】52\n本文作者能正确理解图画内容,并能用正确的语言表述每幅图画所涵盖的信息。文中要点齐全,表达清晰,句式多变。连词and,since,but等的运用使短文更加通顺、流畅;文中短语inorderto,stayup,feelsleepy和宾语从句、状语从句的使用,提升了文章的档次,显示了考生深厚的语言功底。【强化训练】在我们的成长过段中,既有快乐,也有烦恼。请用英文写一篇短文,内容包括:1.你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大问题或烦恼;2.你解决问题或烦恼的过程;3.你的感想。要求:1.字数:80—100字。开头已给出,不计入总字数。2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。Mymiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Duringthethreeyears,notonlydidIhavehappytime,butIhadkindsofproblems.Mybiggestproblemwas____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________兰州卷学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士,并结合自己的观点,以“HowCanWeProtectOurselves”为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护。要求:句子结构准确,要点齐全,内容合理,篇章结构连贯。52\n____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________主要建议回扣主题First,weshould….Second,wemust….Also,weoughtto….Besides,weshouldn’t….Lastbutnotatlest…Wemust…Inshort,everyoneneedstolearn…Self-protectionis…Buthowcanweprotectourselves?Hereare…导入主题【标准范文】HowCanWeProtectOurselvesSelf-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?Herearesomeofmysuggestions. First,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.Also,we52\noughttoeathealthilyandsafely.Besides,weshouldn’tcrowdeachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschool.Lastbutnotleast,summeriscoming,wemustrememberit’sdangeroustoswimalone.Inshort,everyoneneedstolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】KeepingsafeatschoolIt’simportantforustokeepsafeatschoolanditwillmakeusstudybetterandlivemorehappily.Inordertokeepsafeatschool,wemustdolikethese.First,beinorderwhenwearegoingupstairsordownstairs.Second,makesuretobesafewhenwearedoingsports.Trynottobehurt.Third,knowaboutsomeknowledgeofsafety.It’shelpfultous.Ifwefollowtheadvice,we’llmakeourselvessafeatschool.2022辽宁大连卷52\n假期中,我们有时间做与学校学习生活不同的很多事情,如旅游、干家务、做义工、参加夏(冬)令营……请你根据以往的假期生活经历,用英语写一篇短文,跟同学们分享你在假期做过的一件事情及体会。内容提示:⑴讲述你在假期里做过的一件事情;⑵谈谈你做这件事情的体会。要求:⑴中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;⑵文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;⑶词数80词左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________具体经过谈谈体会Istayedthere…Ivisited…andwatched…,itwasgreat.Ialsovisited…,suchas….Butthemostinterestingthingwas…Iwas…,but….Weshould…InthepastsummerholidaysI…点名主题【标准范文】InthepastsummerholidaysIwenttoBeijingbymyself.Istayedthereforsevendays.IvisitedTsinghuaUniversityandwatchedanoperainthetheater.Itwasgreat.Ialsovisitedsomeplacesofgreatinterest,suchastheGreatWall,theSummerPalaceandsoon.ButthemostinterestingthingwasthatIworkedasavolunteerattheheavy52\ntraffictime.ThereweretoomanycarsandpeopleinBeijing,soIhelpedatrafficpolicewithhisworkeveryafternoon.Iwastiredbutveryhappy.Weshouldlearntostandonourownfeet.Nothingisimpossibleifwetryourbest.【名师点评】本文语言简洁,层次分明,举例典型,符合生活实际。文中简单句、并列句和复合句的并用避免了句式的单调性,词组bymyself,suchas,andsoon,workas,standonourownfeet等的准确运用,使文章增加很多色彩。【强化训练】假设英语课上将以“家乡的名胜”为话题展开讨论,请你根据下面表格中的信息,用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍中国十大历史文化名街之一的福州三坊七巷。三坊七巷ThreeLanesandSevenAlleys位置:市中心交通:便利特色:老式建筑,明清风格名人故居,保护光好民俗展示,传承文化美食特产,品种丰富感想…(写1-2点)要求:⑴内容完整,意思连贯,语句通顺,书写规范⑵请不要逐字翻译;词数90左右,不包含已给出的句子的词数。参考词汇:便利的convenient明清风格thestyleoftheMingandQingDynasty故居formerhome民俗folkcustom传承passon特产speciallocalproductThreeLanesandSevenAlleysinFuzhouisamongthetoptenhistoricalandculturalstreetsofChina.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ThreelanesandSevenAlleysinFuzhouisamongthetoptenhistoricalandculturalstreetsofChina.Itliesinthecitycenterandthetrafficisconvenient.It’sfamousforoldbuildingsinthestylesoftheMingandQingDynasty.Manyfamouspersonsinhistoryusedtolivehere.52\nTheirformerhomesarewellprotectedandattractlotsofpeoplefromhomeandabroad.There’rewonderfulfolkcustomshowsthatpassonthecultureofFuzhou.Besides,thetouristscanenjoydifferentkindsofdeliciousfoodsandspeciallocalproducts.I’mproudofthisgreatplaceofinterestinmyhometown.It’swellworthvisiting.2022山东烟台卷两个月前,胶东在线对我校初四学生毕业后的人生规划进行了一次问卷阅充。请报据图表中提供的数据信息,写一篇100-120词的调查报告,并结合实际谈谈你的观点和毕业后的人生理想。要求:1.行文不得出现真实姓名和校名;2.开头已给出.不计入总词数。Twomonthsago,JiaodongOnlinemadeasurveyonwhatjuniorGrade4studentswoulddoaftergraduation.Hereistheresult.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【试题分析】本题是写一篇调查报告,主要是描述问卷调查的结果。要根据所给图表提示内容注意把调查结果表达清楚,并结合实际谈谈自己的观点和毕业以后的人生理想。描述问卷调查的结果时要灵活运用各种句式来表达,避免句式单一。时态以一般现在时态为主,人称以第一、三人称为主。【思路点拨】本文在写作时首先描述问卷调查的结果,然后发表自己的观点,最后谈谈毕业后的人生理想。观点一定要明确,有说服力,人生理想一定要有榜样性。本题写作模板如下:52\n发表观点人生理想Inmyopinion,weteenagersshould…Mydreamistobe…So,I…65%ofus…About20%wouldliketo…And10%ofthestudentswill…Only5%...调查结果【名师点评】本文要点齐全,句式多变,语言流畅、得体。文章层次分明,观点明确,具有很强的说服力,人生理想也很有榜样性。短语beadmittedto,soasto,besureabout,bedeterminedtodo…等以及不定式作目的状语、表语和复合句的恰当运用,使文章具有很强的可读性,也体现了作者很高的写作水平。【强化训练】据调查现在有相当一部分中学生很少甚至从来不吃早餐,这一现象表明许多中学生生活中不注意保持身体健康。请根据图表所提供的信息,写一篇调查报告,简单表述中学生不吃早餐的主要原因,并给出保持身体健康的一些建议。要求:1、可适当发挥,但必须包含表格所提供的信息;2、词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,且不计入总词数);3、参考词汇:appetiten食欲;harmv.伤害原因建议52\n没时间占56%没食欲占26%防止发胖占18%三要1.多吃水果和蔬菜2.睡眠时间不少于8小时3.多运动三不要1.不要吃脂肪太多的食品2.工作不要太劳累3.不要吸烟KeepGoodHabitsAccordingtoasurvey,quiteafewmiddleschoolstudentsseldomorevenneverhavebreakfastbeforetheygotoschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2022浙江宁波卷假如你是Mike,后天是父亲节,请你根据下面所给信息,写一封信,回忆去年夏天与父亲一起爬山的难忘经历,作为一份送给父亲的特殊礼物。注意:①信中应包含所提供的信息,并展开合理的想象。52\n②信中不能出现真实的姓名。③词数:80词左右,(信的开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数)。DearDaddy,It’sagiftforFather’sDaywhenyouarereadingit.Istillrememberthedaylastsummerwhen____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Now,Iwanttosay;Iloveyou,Daddy.Youraisemeup!HappyFather’sDay!Yours,Mike【试题分析】本题是写一篇书信。文中书信的开头和结尾都已经给出,所以本文的写作重点是回忆去年夏天与父亲一起爬山的难忘经历,同时表达对父亲的感激之情。文章是叙述过去发生的事情,所以时态主要用一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主,写作时要注意语言的准确性和事情发生的先后顺序。【思路点拨】本文是一封书信,主要叙述作者去年夏天与父亲一起爬山的经过和感受。这是一篇半开放式作文,作者自由发挥的空间较大,首先要选择自己所熟悉的词语和句型进行写作,在句式选择上要注意多样化,同时,也要选择合适的连接词,如and,so,but等,使文章句子之间连接自如。本题写作模板如下:描述过程表达感激Westarted…But,unluckily…SoI…However,you…Youreally…We…andenjoyed…Now,Iwanttosay…Istillrememberthedaylastsummerwhenwe…点明主题【标准范文】DearDaddy,It’sagiftforFather’sDaywhenyouarereadingit.52\nIstillrememberthedaylastsummerwhenwewentmountainclimbingtogether.Westartedearlyinthemorning.But,unluckily,itbegantorainonthehalfway.Igotallwetthrough,feelingcoldandtired.SoIcouldn’thelpcomplainingandwantedtogiveup.However,youencouragedmenottogiveupandputyourcoatonmesoftly.Yousaid,“Wewon’tseethefantasticsceneryunlesswereachthetop”.Youreallycheeredmeup.WegottothetopatlastandenjoyedthebeautyofthenaturethatIhadneverseen.Now,Iwanttosay:Iloveyou,Daddy.Youraisemeup!HappyFather’sDay!Yours,Mike【强化训练】6月15日是父亲节。请你以“MyFather”为题,写一篇短文。从性格、爱好等方面简略介绍一下你的父亲,重点写一个曾经发生在你们之间的令人感动的故事,并简要说明你将如何回报这如山的父爱。如写作要求:1.短文详略得当,条理清楚,行文连贯,逻辑性强,书写规范;2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;3.词数80词左右。参考词汇:感动move(v.)回报inreturn(adv.)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Myfatherisa40-year-oldmathteacher.Heistallandfatwithshorthairandbigeyes.Healwaysworkshard.Hisclassesarelivelyandinterestinganddeeplylovedbyhisstudents.     Myfatherisalsoanhonestandkindman.Hegetsonwellwithhisstudents.Oneday,hisstudentwasill,hewenttohelphimwithhismathafterschooleveryday.Myfatherwasillwhenhisstudentsreturnedtoschool.He likestoplaytabletennis.Weoftenplaytabletennistogetherattheweekends.    Myfatherisnotonlyagoodfatherbutalsoagoodfriend.Ihavelearnedalotfromhim.Ilovemyfatherverymuch.52\n2022四川成都卷你即将升入高中,面临寄宿(aboardingschool)和走读(adayschool)两类学校的选择。请你以“Aboardingschooloradayschool?”为标题,写一篇80-120词的短文,内容须包括:1.读寄宿学校的利和弊各一点;2.读走读学校的利和弊各一点;3.你的选择和理由(理由不得与上述两点内容重复)。注意:1.短文必须包括所有要点;2.可根据内容要点适当添加有关细节,使行文连贯;3.书写规范,卷面整洁。【试题分析】本题是写一篇议论文,主要是谈论寄宿学校和走读学校的利与弊,并针对你的选择谈谈理由,本文的重点是谈论寄宿学校和走读学校的利与弊,在写作过程中要注意使用准确的语言将这些要点表达出来。也可以根据内容要点适当添加有关细节,但一定不能脱离话题。本文的人称以第一人称为主,时态用一般现在时。【思路点拨】本篇写作可由三部分组成,第一部分谈论寄宿学校和走读学校两类学校的选择;第二部分谈论寄宿学校和走读学校的利与弊;第三部分针对你的选择说明理由。写作时要灵活运用各种句式。本题写作模板如下:各自利弊选择理由Ifwechoose…wewill…However,wemay…Ifwechoose…Atthesametime…Asforme,Iprefer…Weshoud…Wearegoingto…andwewillmakeachoiceto…Bothkindsofschoolhave…两种选择【标准范文】Wearegoingtograduatefromourmiddleschool,andwewillmakeachoicetoenteraboardingschooloradayschool.Bothkindsofschoolshavetheiradvantagesanddisadvantages.Ifwechooseaboardingschool,wewillsavemoretimetostudy.However,wemayhaveless52\ntimestayingwithourfamily.Ifwechooseadayschool,parentscanknowmoreofourstudies.Atthesametime,computergamesmaytakeabadinfluenceonus.Asforme,Ipreferaboardingschool.Weshouldconcentrateonourstudytogetgoodgradesinhighschool.【名师点评】本文作者能够紧紧抓住主题进行写作,文章要点齐全,段落完整,句式多样。文中作者有效地采用了不同的连接手法,使得文章层次清晰,行文连贯,简单句和复合句的并用避免了句式的单调性,文中短语graduatefrom,makeachoice,knowof,haveabadinfluenceon等的准确使用提高了文章的评分档次。不定式、动名词、条件句和并列句的使用显示了考生高深的英语水平。【强化训练】假如你是林思,要去澳大利亚的MelbourneHigh留学,需要在当地找一个寄宿家庭(hostfamily),请按要求写一封约100词的电子邮件给寄宿家庭中介公司的经理Mr.Porter.内容包括:⑴简单介绍自己的个人情况,如语言,爱好等;⑵提出自己对寄宿制家庭的要求(如下表所示);FamilymemberEnglishspeaker,nosmokerHousingneartheschool,abedroomwithabathroomOtherscookingbymyself注意:邮件需涵盖以上所有要点,可适当发挥;开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数);文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。DearMr.Porter,MynameisLinSi.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes,LinSi【参考范文】DearMr.Porter,52\nMynameisLinSi.I'masixteen-year-oldboyfromChina.I'mgoingtostudyinMelbourneHigh.Ilikemakingfriends.EnglishismyfavoritesubjectbutI'mweakinspokenEnglish.That'swhyIwanttofindahostfamilywhoarenativeEnglishspeakers.Inthisway,IwillhavemorechancestopracticeEnglishindailylife.Ihopeit'safamilywithoutsmokers.Moreover,it'sbetterifthefamilyliveswithinatwentyminuteswalkfrommyschoolandprovidesabedroomwithabathroom.Asforthemeals,I'dliketocookbymyselfbecauseI'mfondofcooking.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes.LinSi2022河北卷请阅读Tony从美国发来的电子邮件,并根据所给提示和要求,以李华的名义回复。HeyLiHua!Howareyoudoing?I’vebeenbusysinceIcamebackfromChina.Guesswhat!I’mlearningChinesecooking,andIreallyenjoyit.Onemorething,IhearyouhaveMid-AutumnFestivalinChina.What’sthedateofthefestival?Howdoyoucelebrate?Tony提示:⑴AskTonysomethingabouthisChinesecooking.⑵AnswerhisquestionsaboutMid-AutumnFestival.要求:⑴邮件须包括所有提示内容。⑵邮件中不得涉及真实的人名、校名、地名。开头结尾已给出,不计入总次数。⑶词数60~80.参考:thelunarcalendar(阴历),mooncake,watchthemoon,thesymbolofreunion(团圆的象征)From:LiHua@happymail.comDate:22/06/20223:30PMTo:Tony@happymail.comSubject:Hello52\nHi,Tony!Goodtohearfromyou!It’samazingthatyou’relearningByefornow,LiHua【试题分析】本题是写一篇电子邮件回复。写作的主要内容是李华向Tony介绍关于学习中国烹饪的情况和向Tony介绍中国的中秋节,具体内容给考生很大的自由发挥的空间。考生要根据自己的见解,想法和观点进行回答。写作能否顺利完成,不仅要求考生了解中国的传统节日,而且能利用所学的语言知识进行表述。【思路点拨】本文开头已经给出,考生不用考虑格式问题。本文的写作重点是询问Tony关于学习中国烹饪的情况和向Tony介绍中国的中秋节。写作前要仔细阅读Tony的电子邮件,回复时要看清提示,根据提示内容逐一作答。【名师点评】本文语言简练,表达准确,作者能够紧紧围绕提示内容进行写作并适当的发挥。文章层次清晰,表达严密,句子通顺,行文流畅。短语beinterestedin,oneof…,gettogether,thesymbolofreunion52\n等的运用恰到好处;疑问句和陈述句的灵活运用,都成为本文的亮点。【强化训练】根据中文和英文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出,其词数不计入所完成的回信内。成长中每个人都要面对烦恼,并解决问题。假设你叫刘明,是美国中学生艾丽的朋友,你收到了她的电子邮件,请给她回复,回答她的问题,提出你的建议,并就此事谈谈你的看法。Hi!LiuMing,I’msosad.Angelaisaclosefriendofmine.Thismorningshewantedtoborrowsomemoneyfromme.IfIlendherthemoney,I’mafraidshewon’tpaymeback.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Doyouhavethesameproblem?Ineedyourhelp.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,AliceHi!Alice,I’mgladtohearfrom._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopewhatIsaidcanhelpyou.Yours,LiuMing【参考范文】Hi!Alice,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Yes,Isometimeshavethesameproblem.Ithinkifshereallyneedsthemoney,you’dbetterlendittoher.Youdon’tneedtoworry52\ntoomuch.She’llprobablypayyoubackwhenshehasmoney.Ifyoudon’tlendherthemoney,I’mafraidyoumaylosethefriend.Ithinkeveryonemayhavetroubleinlifeandweshouldhelpeachother.Sowhenmyfriendsneedmoney,Iwilltrymybesttohelpthem.MaybeI’llgetitback,ormaybeIwon’t.IhopewhatIsaidcanhelpyou.Yours,LiuMing52

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