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初中英语初高衔接应用文写作练习(附参考范文和解析)

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初高衔接英语应用文写作练习班级考号姓名总分1.假定你是李华,你从网上得知你的英国好友Tom所在的城市爱丁堡遭到了飓风的袭击。请你给他发送一封邮件,内容包括:1)得知飓风信息;2)询问他及家人情况;3)给予安慰。注意:1)词数80左右;2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.假定你是李华,计划在你校组建健身俱乐部,请写封邮件给你的交换生朋友Oliver,寻求他的意见和建议。内容包括:1)写邮件的目的;2)希望得到的帮助和支持;3)表示感谢。注意:写作词数应为80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10\n初高衔接英语应用文写作练习班级考号姓名总分3.假定你是李华,你的好友John最近与朋友发生了一点冲突而大吵了一架,他的朋友因此不理他,这让他很是烦恼。请你给他写一封邮件就他所遇到的问题给他一些建议,内容包括:1)给予他安慰;2)给他提出一些合理的建议;3)祝愿他生活、学习愉快。注意:1)词数80左右;2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.假设你是某大学的学生李津,你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你想报名参选。请根据以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。1)个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等);2)组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座);3)组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛);4)表达当选的愿望。注意:1)词数80左右;2)请勿提及真实学校名称;3)可适当增加细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;4)开头、结尾已给出,不计人总词数。参考词汇:副主席vicepresident竞选runforGoodafternoon,mydearfriends,MynameisLiJin.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.10\n初高衔接英语应用文写作练习班级考号姓名总分5.假定你是李华,学生会主席。你校学生会邀请美国外教Nancy参加即将举办的中秋节晚会。请给她写一封邮件,内容包括:1)邀请出席2)时间:下周五晚上6:00。3)地点:演讲大厅(lecturehall)。4)晚会内容。注意:1)词数80左右。2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问疫情期间(COVID-19pandemic)如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下:1)合理饮食;2)加强锻炼;3)保持好心态。注意:1)词数:100左右;2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3)邮件的开头已写好,不计入总词数。DearJack,I'msogladtohearfromyou!Inyourletter,youaskedmehowtokeephealthyduringtheCOVID-19pandemic.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua10\n初高衔接英语应用文写作练习班级考号姓名总分7.假如你是高一同学李华,上个月你校举办运动会,请根据以下提示,给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信,介绍学校运动会。主要内容包括以下要点:1)运动会前的准备工作;2)运动会期间的表现;3)运动会的感想。注意:1)可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;2)词数在80词左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.假定你是李华,你从网上看到一个名叫Tom的澳大利亚男孩想交一个中国的网友。请你给他写封信,内容包括:1)很乐意和他交朋友;2)介绍自己;3)希望得到回复。注意:1)词数100左右;2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10\n初高衔接英语应用文写作练习班级考号姓名总分9.假定你是李华,得知你的英国朋友David将于下个月来中国旅游。请你给他写一封信,推荐一个适合他旅游度假的城市。内容包括:1)推荐城市2)推荐理由注意:1)词数80字左右;2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10.假定你是校学生会主席李华。这学期,你校来了一些英美国家的交换生,由于语言文化方面的差异,他们还不太能适应新的学习生活环境。针对这种情况,你打算在校英语报上发表一篇英语文章,内容包括:1)交换生目前面临的困难:感觉孤独,担心学业,对校园不熟悉等等;2)提出合理建议:和中国学生交朋友,加入学校社团,课余时间参加汉语沙龙等;3)期望。注意:1)标题已给出;2)适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:3)字数:80词HaveaWonderfulSchoolLife_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10\n附:参考范文和解析1.DearTom,Howareyouandyourfamilydoing?IfeelreallysadtolearnthenewsfromtheInternetthataterriblehurricanestruckyourcityandcauseddamage.Itisreportedthatalargenumberofhousesnowlieinruins.Iamreallyconcernedforeverythingwithyouandyourfamily.Pleaseletmeknowaboutyourconditionassoonaspossible.Andifyouneedanyhelp,pleaseletmeknow.Don'tworry,andeverythingwillbefine.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件。写作背景:你从网上得知你的英国好友Tom所在的城市爱丁堡遭到了飓风的袭击。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)得知飓风信息;2)询问他及家人情况;3)给予安慰。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:IfeelreallysadtolearnthenewsfromtheInternetthataterriblehurricanestruckyourcityandcauseddamage.运用了不定式作原因状语,同位语从句;Itisreportedthatalargenumberofhousesnowlieinruins.运用了主语从句;Pleaseletmeknowaboutyourconditionassoonaspossible.运用了祈使句;Andifyouneedanyhelp,pleaseletmeknow.运用了条件状语从句,祈使句;Don'tworry,andeverythingwillbefine.运用了祈使句,并列句。2.DearOliver,Howiseverythinggoing?I'mwritingtoaskforyoursuggestionsandhelpbecauseI'mplanningtostartafitnessclubinourschool.Iknowyouwereinchargeofthefitnessclubinyourschoolandhaverichexperienceinstartingandrunningaclub.Wouldyoupleasetellmehowtostartourclub?Whatclubeventscouldwehold?Ihopeyouwillhelpmyteambygivingusyourvaluableideas.Thankyousomuchforyourtimeandsupportinadvance.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写封邮件给你的交换生朋友Oliver,寻求他的意见和建议。写作背景:你计划在你校组建健身俱乐部。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)写邮件的目的;2)希望得到的帮助和支持;3)表示感谢。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:I'mwritingtoaskforyoursuggestionsandhelpbecauseI'mplanningtostartafitnessclubinourschool.运用了原因状语从句;Iknowyouwereinchargeofthefitnessclubinyourschoolandhaverichexperienceinstartingandrunningaclub.运用了宾语从句;Ihopeyouwillhelpmyteambygivingusyourvaluableideas.运用了宾语从句;Thankyousomuchforyourtimeandsupportinadvance.运用了祈使句。3.DearJohn,It'snormalthatwemeetwithsomeproblemswhilegettingalongwithothers.I'dliketogiveyousomeadviceonit.10\nFirstly,youshouldkeepcalmwhenevermeetingwithsomethingunpleasant.Thiscanhelpyoumakerightdecisionsandavoidmakingthingsworse.Secondly,Ithinkyoucanoffertosaysorrytoyourfriendifyouvalueyourfriendship.I'msurehewillbethankfultoyouandyou'llbecomebetterfriends.Hopethisadvicewillbehelpfultoyouandwishyouahappylifeandstudy.Yours,LiHua【解析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件就好友John所遇到的问题给他一些建议。写作背景:John最近与朋友发生了一点冲突而大吵了一架,他的朋友因此不理他,这让他很是烦恼。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)给予他安慰;2)给他提出一些合理的建议;3)祝愿他生活、学习愉快。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:t'snormalthatwemeetwithsomeproblemswhilegettingalongwithothers.运用了主语从句,省略;Firstly,youshouldkeepcalmwhenevermeetingwithsomethingunpleasant.运用了时间状语从句;Secondly,Ithinkyoucanoffertosaysorrytoyourfriendifyouvalueyourfriendship.运用了宾语从句,条件状语从句;I'msurehewillbethankfultoyouandyou'llbecomebetterfriends.运用了名词性从句,并列句;Hopethisadvicewillbehelpfultoyouandwishyouahappylifeandstudy.运用了宾语从句,并列句。4.Goodafternoon,mydearfriends,MynameisLiJin.Iamapersonwithanoutgoingpersonality.I'dliketorunforvicepresidentoftheEnglishclub.Outgoingandconfident,Ionceservedasmonitorinhighschool,soI'mexpertatmanagement.I'mexperiencedinorganisingallsortsofactivitiesthroughwhichstudentscanexchangeideasandsharestories.Tomakelifeoncampusmorecolorful,Iplantoholdlecturesonlearningstrategieswhichcanhelporganiseeverythinginyourmind.What'smore,Ishallholdsomecompetitions,suchasadebate.I'dappreciateitifIcouldbechosen;Ilookforwardtobeingchosenasvicepresident.Thankyou.【解析】本题是一篇应用文写作,要求考生以某大学的学生李津的身份写一篇竞选演讲稿。写作背景:你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你想报名参选。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等);2)组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座);3)组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛);4)表达当选的愿望。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:Outgoingandconfident,Ionceservedasmonitorinhighschool,soI'mexpertatmanagement.运用了形容词作状语,因果并列句;I'mexperiencedinorganisingallsortsofactivitiesthroughwhichstudentscanexchangeideasandsharestories.运用了限制性定语从句;Tomakelifeoncampusmorecolorful,Iplantoholdlecturesonlearningstrategieswhichcanhelporganiseeverythinginyourmind.运用了限制性定语从句;I'dappreciateitifIcouldbechosen运用了I'dappreciateitif...固定句式。5.DearNancy,OnbehalfoftheStudents'Union,IamwritingtoinviteyoutoattendtheMid-Autumnparty.Asscheduled,itwillbeheldinthelecturehallofourschoolat6:00pm.nextFriday.Wewillhaveagoodtimeenjoyingperformancesaswellasplayinggames.Withthepartyapproachingtheend,10\nwewillsharemooncakesandadmirethefullmoon.Infact,itisnotwhatwedobutwhetherwecanenjoyourselvesthatmatters.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Yours,LiHua【解析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以学生会主席李华的身份写一封邮件。写作背景:你校学生会邀请美国外教Nancy参加即将举办的中秋节晚会。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)邀请出席;2)时间:下周五晚上6:00;3)地点:演讲大厅;4)晚会内容。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:Asscheduled,itwillbeheldinthelecturehallofourschoolat6:00pm.nextFriday.运用了省略,运用了被动语态;Withthepartyapproachingtheend,wewillsharemooncakesandadmirethefullmoon.运用了with的复合结构;Infact,itisnotwhatwedobutwhetherwecanenjoyourselvesthatmatters.运用了强调句。6.DearJack,I'msogladtohearfromyou!Inyourletter,youaskedmeabouthowtokeephealthyduringtheCOVID-19pandemic.I'dliketogiveyousomeadviceindetail.Foronething,exceptforwearingamaskandkeepingdistancewhengoingout,payingattentiontowhatwehaveeverydayisofgreatimportance.Inordertogetenoughenergyandnutrients,weneedabalanceddiet,especiallyweshouldeatmorefreshfruitandvegetables.Foranother,takingphysicalexerciseregularlyisamusttohelpkeepfit.Forexample,youcanplaybasketballortakeawalkafterschool.Lastbutnotleast,beingpositiveandhopefulisnecessary.Youshouldhavetheconfidencethatthehumanbeingwillfinallygetoverofit.Allinall,Idohopeyouandyourfamilycanbesafeandsound.I'dappreciateitverymuchifyoucanfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Yours,LiHua【解析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件提些建议。写作背景:你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问疫情期间如何保持健康。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)合理饮食;2)加强锻炼;3)保持好心态。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:Foronething,exceptforwearingamaskandkeepingdistancewhengoingout,payingattentiontowhatwehaveeverydayisofgreatimportance.运用了时间状语从句的省略,现在分词作状语,宾语从句;Inordertogetenoughenergyandnutrients,weneedabalanceddiet,especiallyweshouldeatmorefreshfruitandvegetables.运用了不定式作目的状语;Lastbutnotleast,beingpositiveandhopefulisnecessary.运用了动名词作主语;Youshouldhavetheconfidencethatthehumanbeingwillfinallygetoverofit.运用了同位语从句;Allinall,Idohopeyouandyourfamilycanbesafeandsound.运用了强调,宾语从句;I'dappreciateitverymuchifyoucanfindthesesuggestionshelpful.运用了I'dappreciateitif...固定句式。7.DearTom,Howiseverythinggoing?I'mwritingtosharewithyoumyunforgettableexperienceofthesportsmeetingheldlastmonth.Beforethemeeting,myteacherandclassmatesmadeadetailedplan.Wewereallveryexcitedto10\ngiveadviceandprovideanythingneeded.Atthesametime,theathletesmadefullpreparations,runningandjumpingintheirsparetime.Duringthemeeting,theathletescompetedfairlyontheplaygroundwiththeotherstudentscheeringaround.Whatagreattime!Ithinkourclasshasbecomemoreunitedafterthesportsmeeting.Inaddition,theclassmatesknowmoreabouteachotherandbecomecloser.Asaresult,wearemorehopefulofthecolorfulschoollife.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldreplysoon.Yours,LiHua【解析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以高一同学李华的身份给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信,介绍学校运动会。写作背景:上个月你校举办运动会。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)运动会前的准备工作;2)运动会期间的表现;3)运动会的感想。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:Wewereallveryexcitedtogiveadviceandprovideanythingneeded.运用了不定式作原因状语;Duringthemeeting,theathletescompetedfairlyontheplaygroundwiththeotherstudentscheeringaround.运用了with的复合结构;Whatagreattime!运用了感叹句;Ithinkourclasshasbecomemoreunitedafterthesportsmeeting.运用了宾语从句;Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldreplysoon.运用了Iwouldappreciateitif...固定句式。8.DearTom,IamverygladtolearnfromtheInternetthatyouarelookingforafriendfromChina.Ihaveneverbeentoyourcountry,butIwouldbeveryhappytobeyourfriend.First,letmeintroducemyself.I'm15yearsold.I'mafreshmaninseniorhighschool.Myfavoritesubjectisbiology.Iwanttogotocollegeandfinallybecomeadoctor.Iliketoplayfootballandbasketball.Myotherhobbiesaresinginganddancing.Itcan'tbemorehappytoreceiveyoure-mailtalkingaboutyourself.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写封信。写作背景:你从网上看到一个名叫Tom的澳大利亚男孩想交一个中国的网友。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)很乐意和他交朋友;2)介绍自己;3)希望得到回复。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:IamverygladtolearnfromtheInternetthatyouarelookingforafriendfromChina.运用了不定式作原因状语,宾语从句;Ihaveneverbeentoyourcountry,butIwouldbeveryhappytobeyourfriend.运用了转折并列句;First,letmeintroducemyself.运用了祈使句;Itcan'tbemorehappytoreceiveyoure-mailtalkingaboutyourself.运用了it作形式主语。9.DearDavid,Hopethisletterfindsyouwell.KnowingthatyouarecomingtoChinanextmonth,Iamwritingtorecommendacitytoyou.RecognizedasVeniceintheeast,Shaoxingattractstensofthousandsoftouristsfromhomeandabroadeveryyear.A-minutedrivewilltakeyoufromXiaoshanInternationalAirporttotheancient10\ncitytoexploreitsbeauty.Whatwillamazeyoumostaretheancientbuildingsandbridgesdatingbacktoover3,000years.Havingatasteoflocalcuisineandwanderingalongtheancientallieswillbeanunforgettableexperienceforyou.Hopefully,myrecommendationwillbehelpful.WishyouapleasantjourneyinChina!Yours,LiHua【解析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写一封信,推荐一个适合英国朋友David旅游度假的城市。写作背景:你得知英国朋友David将于下个月来中国旅游。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)推荐城市;2)推荐理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:KnowingthatyouarecomingtoChinanextmonth,Iamwritingtorecommendacitytoyou.运用了现在分词作原因状语,宾语从句;Whatwillamazeyoumostaretheancientbuildingsandbridgesdatingbacktoover300years.运用了主语从句,Havingatasteoflocalcuisineandwanderingalongtheancientallieswillbeanunforgettableexperienceforyou.运用了动名词作主语。10.HaveaWonderfulSchoolLifeWithexchangestudentsbecomingnewmembers,ourschoolhastakenonanewlook.However,theyarefacinganumberofchallenges,likefeelinglonely,worryingaboutschoolworkandbeingunfamiliarwithcampus.AsthechairmanoftheStudents'Union,I'dliketogivesomesuggestions.Toovercomethedifficulties,ontheonehand,itwouldbebetterforexchangestudentstomakefriendswiththeirChineseclassmates,signupforsomeschoolcommunities,sothattheywillgetusedtothenewenvironment.Ontheotherhand,ChineseSalonisagoodplaceforthemtovisitintheirsparetime.Wedohopeeveryexchangestudentcanleadafantasticandwonderfullifeinourschool.【解析】本题是一篇应用文写作,要求考生以校学生会主席李华的身份在校英语报上发表一篇英语文章。写作背景:这学期,你校来了一些英美国家的交换生,由于语言文化方面的差异,他们还不太能适应新的学习生活环境。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)交换生目前面临的困难:感觉孤独,担心学业,对校园不熟悉等等;2)提出合理建议:和中国学生交朋友,加入学校社团,课余时间参加汉语沙龙等;3)期望。提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如:Withexchangestudentsbecomingnewmembers,ourschoolhastakenonanewlook.运用了with的复合结构;Toovercomethedifficulties,ontheonehand,itwouldbebetterforexchangestudentstomakefriendswiththeirChineseclassmates,signupforsomeschoolcommunities,sothattheywillgetusedtothenewenvironment.运用了it作形式主语,目的状语从句;Wedohopeeveryexchangestudentcanleadafantasticandwonderfullifeinourschool.运用了宾语从句,强调。10

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