高中英语2025届高考读后续写高分“动作链”描写系列0929（共三组20段）

高考英语读后续写高分“动作链”描写段（一）1.在博物馆中走失【动作链】参观博物馆→发现家人不见→到处寻找→向工作人员求助→广播寻人→最终找到家人【例】Whileadmiringtheancientartifacts,shesuddenlyrealizedherparentswerenowhereinsight→Shequicklyretracedhersteps,checkingeachroominthemuseum→Aftersearchingforwhatfeltlikeforever,sheapproachedamuseumguideandaskedforhelp→Thestaffmemberannouncedherparents'namesovertheintercom→Momentslater,herparentsappeared,smilingapologeticallyastheyhuggedher.2.在陌生城市迷路【动作链】游览城市→迷失方向→尝试使用地图→遇到语言障碍→寻求当地人的帮助→顺利找到目的地【例】Asheexploredthewindingstreetsoftheunfamiliarcity,hesoonrealizedhehadnoideawherehewas→Pullingouthisphone,hetriedusingthemap,butthenarrowalleysconfusedhimfurther→Frustrated,heaskedfordirections,butthelocalsspokealanguagehedidn’tunderstand→Justwhenhewasabouttogiveup,akindstrangerofferedtoguidehiminbrokenEnglish→Followingthehelpfullocal,hefinallyfoundhiswaybacktothemainsquare.3.独自在海边夜钓【动作链】准备钓具→夜晚独自来到海边→放下鱼线→看到远处有奇怪光亮→小心靠近查看→发现是一只误入浅水的海龟→把它引回深水区【例】Hesetuphisfishinggearonthequietbeach,thesoundofwaveshisonlycompany→Ashecasthislineintothedarkwater,henoticedafaintglowfaroffintheshallowwaters→Intrigued,hecautiouslywadedintoinvestigate→Tohissurprise,itwasaseaturtlethathadgottentooclosetoshore→Gentlyguidingitbacktodeeperwaters,hewatchedwithsatisfactionasitswamsafelyaway.4.追逐流星雨【动作链】得知流星雨即将出现→准备好望远镜→出发到郊外→安静等待→看到流星雨划破天际→感慨自然的美丽【例】Excitedbythenewsofameteorshower,shegatheredhertelescopeandsetoutforaquietspotinthecountryside→Onceshereachedtheopenfield,shesetupherequipmentandlaybackonthegrass→Asthenightdeepened,shewaitedpatiently,theskyclearandfullofstars→Suddenly,astreakoflightdartedacrossthesky,followedbyanother→Inawe,shewatchedastheskyfilledwithshootingstars,feelingdeeplyconnectedtothebeautyoftheuniverse.5.森林中迷路的露营者【动作链】在森林中露营→第二天醒来发现伙伴不见→开始寻找踪迹→跟随脚印深入丛林→发现伙伴在溪边迷路→带他回到营地【例】Wakinguptoanemptytentnexttohis,hequicklyrealizedhisfriendhadwanderedoff→Hestartedfollowingthefootprintsleftinthedampground,callingouthisfriend’sname→Deeperintotheforest,hefoundhisfriendbyacreek,clearlylostandfrustrated→Aftersomereassurance,hehelpedguidehisfriendbacktothecampsite→Theyreturnedsafely,gratefultobebackinfamiliarsurroundings.5,6.加集体攀岩训练【动作链】准备攀岩装备→参加教练的简报→开始攀爬→途中遇到险峻地形→与队友合作→安全抵达顶峰【例】Thegroupgatheredtheirropesandhelmets,listeningcloselyastheinstructorbriefedthemontheclimbahead→Onebyone,theybeganscalingthesteeprockface,relyingontheirtraining→Midway,theyencounteredatrickyoverhangthatrequiredextracare→Workingasateam,theyassistedoneanother,withexperiencedclimbershelpingthenewcomers→Afterafewchallenginghours,theyreachedthesummittogether,theviewfromthetopmakingeveryeffortworthit.7.山间遇到暴风雪【动作链】在山间徒步→天气突然恶化→遇到暴风雪→寻找庇护所→找到山间小屋→在小屋里躲避暴风雪【例】Theyhadbeenhikingforhourswhendarkcloudsrolledinoverthemountains→Asthewindpickedup,snowbegantofallheavily,quicklyturningintoafull-blownblizzard→Battlingthefiercecold,theyspottedasmallcabintuckedbetweenthetrees→Rushingtowardsit,theymanagedtoreachtheshelterjustasthestormintensified→Inside,theyhuddledaroundafire,gratefultohavefoundsafetyamidstthehowlingwind.8.遇到暴风雨中断旅程【动作链】计划一次长途驾驶→中途遇到暴风雨→无法继续前行→停车避雨→在车里等待暴风雨结束→继续前行【例】Theywerehalfwaythroughtheirroadtripwhentheskiesdarkened,andrainbegantopoundonthewindshield→Soon,thestormbecametoointensetodrivesafely,andtheywereforcedtopullover→Sittinginthecar,theywatchedtherainpourdown,thunderrumblinginthedistance→Withnochoicebuttowait,theypassedthetimechattingandlisteningtomusic→Afterwhatseemedlikehours,thestormfinallypassed,andtheywereabletocontinuetheirjourney,thesunpeekingthroughtheclouds.9.海岛浮潜遇到海洋生物【动作链】准备浮潜设备→下水探险→看到珊瑚礁和小鱼→发现海龟游过→小心跟随海龟→回到船上分享经历【例】Withsnorkelsinhand,theydivedintothecrystal-clearwatersofftheisland→Beneaththesurface,theymarveledatthevibrantcoralreefsteemingwithcolorfulfish→Astheyswamfurther,alargeseaturtlegracefullyglidedpastthem→Theyfollowedatarespectfuldistance,admiringitsslow,deliberatemovements→Aftersurfacing,theyreturnedtotheboat,excitedlyrecountingtheirencounterwiththemajesticcreature.10.在城市公园发现迷路的小动物【动作链】在公园散步→发现一只迷路的小狗→尝试靠近→帮助找到主人的联系方式→把小狗带回家→与主人联系并归还小狗【例】Duringhereveningstrollthroughthepark,shenoticedasmall,tremblingdoghidingunderabench→Carefullyapproaching,shecroucheddownandcoaxedthedogtocomecloser→Checkingitscollar,shefoundaphonenumberandimmediatelycalledtheowner→Thegratefulowneraskedhertotakethedoghomeforsafekeepinguntiltheycouldarrive→Ashortwhilelater,therelievedownercametocollectthelittledog,thankingherprofuselyforherkindness.5,（二）1.夜间远足遇到迷路的游客【动作链】参加夜间远足→享受星空→突然听到求救声→确定声音来源→发现迷路的游客→带领游客安全返回【例】Theyhadjustbeguntoenjoytheclearnightskyduringtheirhikewhentheyheardfaintcriesforhelp→Theypaused,listenedcarefully,andpinpointedthedirectionofthesound→Carefullynavigatingthroughtherockyterrain,theyfoundalosthikersittingalone,clearlydisoriented→Aftercalmingthehikerdown,theyofferedhimsomewaterandassuredhimtheywouldhelp→Together,theyretracedtheirstepsandsafelyreturnedtothemaintrail.2.湖边野餐遇到突发风暴【动作链】湖边野餐→天气突然变化→风暴迅速逼近→收拾物品并寻找避难所→找到安全地点→风暴过后继续活动【例】Theywereenjoyingtheirpicnicbythelakewhendarkcloudssuddenlyappearedonthehorizon→Realizingastormwascoming,theyhurriedlypackeduptheirfoodandblankets→Asthewindpickedupandthunderrumbled,theyspottedanearbypavilionandrushedtoit→Safelysheltered,theywatchedasthestormunleasheditsfury,withrainlashingdownonthelake→Oncethestormpassed,theyventuredbackouttoresumetheirday,gratefulfortheirquickthinking.3.热气球之旅遇到技术故障【动作链】准备进行热气球之旅→热气球升空→途中发现气球设备故障→迅速冷静下来与飞行员沟通→飞行员紧急修复设备→安全降落【例】Excitedfortheirfirsthotairballoonride,theywatchedasthecrewpreparedtheballoonfortakeoff→Astheyascendedintothesky,theymarveledatthesprawlinglandscapebelow→Suddenly,thepilotnoticedanissuewiththeburnerandcalmlyinformedthepassengers→Theytookdeepbreaths,trustingthepilot’sexpertiseasheworkedtofixtheproblem→Afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,theburnerreignited,andtheballoondescendedsmoothly→Theylandedsafely,theirheartsstillracingfromtheunexpectedadventure.4.沙漠旅行遭遇沙尘暴【动作链】在沙漠中旅行→远处看到沙尘暴逼近→立即寻找避风地点→躲入附近岩洞→避免受到伤害→沙尘暴过后继续旅程【例】Theyweretrekkingthroughthedesertwhentheynoticedamassivewallofsandbuildingonthehorizon→Realizingasandstormwascoming,theyquicklyscannedthelandscapeforshelter→Spottingasmallcaveinthedistance,theysprintedtowardsitasthewindbegantohowl→Safelyinside,theycoveredtheirfaceswithscarvestoshieldthemselvesfromtheblowingsand→Hourslater,thestormfinallypassed,andtheycautiouslyemergedfromtheirshelter→Thoughcoveredindust,theywererelievedtocontinuetheirjourney.5.在热带雨林发现稀有动植物【动作链】探险雨林→观察周围环境→发现罕见动植物→小心靠近不惊扰它们→拍摄照片→记录这次发现【例】5,Astheyventureddeeperintothetropicalrainforest,theykeptacloseeyeonthefloraandfauna→Suddenly,theyspottedararespeciesofbirdperchedonalowbranch→Theyquietlyapproached,carefulnottodisturbthecreature→Usingtheircameras,theycapturedseveralphotosofthebird,itscolorfulfeathersglisteninginthesunlight→Nearby,theynoticedanunusualplantwithvibrant,twistingvines→Theycarefullydocumentedtheirfindings,excitedabouttheirrarediscovery.6.爬山时被困在大雨中【动作链】开始爬山→突然遭遇暴雨→找到临时避雨地点→等待雨停→雨停后继续攀登→安全抵达山顶【例】Theybegantheirascentonaclearmorning,theweatherperfectforhiking→Halfwayupthetrail,darkcloudsrolledin,andrainbegantopourdown→Withnoimmediateshelterinsight,theyfoundalargeoverhangingrocktohideunder→Soakingwetbutsafefromthedownpour,theyhuddledtogether,waitingfortheraintoletup→Afterwhatseemedlikehours,theskiescleared,andtheyresumedtheirclimb→Despitethedelay,theyreachedthesummit,greetedbyastunningview.7.滑雪时遇到突发雪崩【动作链】滑雪活动→听到远处雪崩的声音→迅速找到掩体→躲避雪崩→雪崩结束后确认安全→离开危险区域【例】Whileglidingdownthemountain,theysuddenlyheardtheunmistakableroarofanavalancheinthedistance→Theirheartsracedastheyspottedasmallridgenearbyandskiedtowardsitasfastastheycould→Reachingtheridgejustasthesnowbegantorushdowntheslope,theypressedthemselvesagainsttherock→Theavalanchesweptpast,buttheyweresafeunderthecoveroftheridge→Oncethesnowsettled,theycautiouslymadetheirwaybackdownthemountain,gratefultohaveavoideddisaster.8.森林徒步时遇到危险动物【动作链】在森林中徒步→突然发现危险动物→保持冷静→评估安全逃离路线→缓慢撤退→安全离开【例】Whiletrekkingthroughthedenseforest,theysuddenlyfrozeasalargecougaremergedfromtheunderbrush→Theirfirstinstinctwastorun,buttheyknewthatsuddenmovementscouldprovoketheanimal→Remainingcalm,theyslowlybackedaway,keepingtheireyesonthecougarwithoutmakingdirecteyecontact→Stepbystep,theymovedtowardanearbytreeforcover→Afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,thecougarlostinterestanddisappearedbackintotheforest→Theyexhaledinreliefandquicklybutquietlycontinuedontheirpath.9.潜水时遭遇强流【动作链】进行潜水活动→突然遇到水下强流→迅速冷静下来→使用潜水设备调整姿势→脱离强流范围→返回船上【例】Divingintheclearwaters,theymarveledatthevibrantcoralreefsbelow→Withoutwarning,apowerfulunderwatercurrentsweptthemoffcourse,pullingthemdeeper→Remainingcalm,theyquicklysignaledtotheirdivebuddyandadjustedtheirbuoyancy→Usingtheirfinsanddivingtechniques,theygraduallymovedoutofthecurrent’sgrip→Oncebackincalmerwaters,theyswamtothesurfaceandsignaledtheboat→Climbingaboard,theysharedtheirharrowingexperience,gratefultobesafe.10.山中露营时失火5,【动作链】夜间露营→不小心引发营火失控→迅速扑灭火焰→检查周围是否安全→重新点燃安全的营火→确保火源受控【例】Astheysataroundthecampfire,tellingstorieslateintothenight,oneofthemaccidentallyknockedoveralog,sendingembersintothedrygrass→Flamesquicklystartedtospread,andtheyscrambledtoputitoutwithwateranddirt→Afterafewtenseminutes,theymanagedtocontrolthefire,breathingacollectivesighofrelief→Oncesurethatthefirewascompletelyout,theycarefullyreassembledtheirfirepit→Thistime,theykepttheflamessmallandmonitoreditclosely,ensuringtheircampsiteremainedsafe.5