高中英语2025届高考读后续写写作指导系列0807

高考英语读后续写指导一、三大原则1.原文一致原则：内容要前后衔接，上下连贯语言表达风格一致。2.正能量原则：故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。3.曲折性原则：凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。二、两句口诀1.两段首句定一框由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。2.二框二首正能量第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。三、写作方法：十句五定法整个读后续写大概分10句话，每段各5句（其中第1/5/10句至关重要）第一句：情感描写（情感万能句）第二句：细节描写（可用分词/形容词作状语）第三句：对话描写（如文章不存在对话可写内心独白等）第四句：细节描写（使用with复合结构/独立主格结构等）第五句：过渡衔接句（通过第二段第一句写出，可使用时间状语从句，定语从句等）第六句：衔接句（第2段的第1句，衔接前面一句给出内容，可用倒装）第七句：细节描写（可适当添加环境描写）第八句：细节描写（可用无灵主语，呼应第一句存在的情绪变化）第九句：引出道理（可用强调句）第十句：结尾感悟+万能结构（需要平时积累一些话题，直接套用，比如亲情，帮助他人）adj.情绪名词n.&nbsp;喜开心/喜悦/兴奋happyhappinessdelighteddelightjoyous/joyfuljoypleased&nbsp;/&nbsp;cheerful/excitedexcitementthrilledthrill感激/感动gratefulgratitude/appreciation//钦佩/欣赏/赞赏admirableadmiration惊讶/吃惊surprisedsurpriseamazedamazementastonishedastonishment4,希望hopefulhopeoptimistic/positiveoptimist&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;n.乐观者ambitious&nbsp;&nbsp;有雄心的ambition&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;抱负，雄心，追求confident&nbsp;&nbsp;自信的confidence&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;自信，信心宽慰/欣慰relieved&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;宽慰的，放心的relief&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;宽慰，安心怒生气/愤怒furious&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;狂怒的，暴怒的fury&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;狂怒，暴怒Angry/irritatedAnger/irritateannoyedannoyance&nbsp;哀悲伤/难过sad/bluesadness/grief&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;悲伤sorrowfulsorrow&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;悲痛，伤心，惋惜愧疚/悔恨guilty&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;有罪的，内疚的guilt&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;内疚，自责regretful&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;悔恨的，遗憾的regret绝望/无望hopelessdesperate&nbsp;绝望的，孤注一掷的despair&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;绝望惧害怕/恐惧afraid/scaredscarefrightenedfrightfearful&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;胆怯的，害怕的fearpanic&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;惊慌的panic&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;惊慌，恐慌焦虑/紧张不安nervous&nbsp;&nbsp;紧张的，焦虑的nervousnessanxious&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;焦急的，焦虑的anxietystressful&nbsp;&nbsp;紧张的，有压力的stress/pressure四、写作技巧读后续写八大用法自查(1)双形容词，主语+谓语&lt;形容词作状语&gt;Hungryandexhausted,Jeffthrewhimselfintohismother&#39;sarmsandfellasleepinafewseconds.又累又饿，Jeff将自己投入妈妈的怀抱，几秒钟就入睡了。Curiousandexcited,heopenedtheboxwithouthesitation.即好奇又兴奋，他毫不犹豫的打开了箱子。Desperateandexhausted,Janekneltdown,withtearsrollingdownhercheeks.即绝望又筋疲力尽，简跪了下来，泪水顺着脸颊滚落。(2)无灵主语+有灵动词（什么事发生在什么人身上）①情感名词+有灵动词+sbAlook/expressionof+情感名词+spreadacrossone&#39;sface<xx神色从某人脸上掠过>4,Asense/surgeof+情感名词+overwhelmed/tookholdof/seized/washedoversb&lt;一阵xx席卷全身&hellip;&gt;Afeelingof+情感名词+creptoversb.＜某人逐渐渐产生一丝＞eg:Aslightfeelingofsuspicioncreptoverme.我渐渐产生了一丝疑惑情感名词(Fear/Terror/panic/surprise/shock/embarrassment)+rootedsbtothespot.＜某人&hellip;呆在原地＞Eg:Panicrootedhimtothespot.他吓呆在原地②情感名词A+gavewayto+情感名词B<a变为b>情感名词Abeovershadowedby情感名词B<a被b掩盖>eg:Thejoywasovershadowedbyawaveofsadness&lt;喜悦被悲伤所掩盖&gt;③One&#39;sheartpounded/racedwith+情感名词&lt;某人的心xx地怦怦跳&gt;eg:Hisheartracedwithnervousnesswhensteppingonthestage.站上台，他的心怦怦跳④Atthesight/thoughtofsth,sbxxx&lt;一看到/想到&hellip;,某人xxx&gt;eg:Atthethoughtofherson,shewasseizedbyasuddenfeelingofsadness,&lt;一想到他儿子,她就被悲伤占据&gt;⑤Itgradually/suddenlydawnedonsbthat&middot;&middot;&middot;&middot;＜某人渐渐/突然意识到＞Eg:Iteventuallydawnedonmethatkindnessandlovedomakeadifference.&lt;我终于领悟到，善良和爱的确会产生影响。&gt;(3)with的复合结构with+n+doing/done,sbdidsthThedogedgedtowardme,withitsheadloweredandteethbared.&lt;那只狗向我走来,低着头,露出牙齿&gt;withherheaddrooping,shexxx&lt;低着头,她xxx&gt;(4)独立主格结构＜名词＋分词＞在句子中用逗号隔开，特殊的非谓语&lt;独立主格加上with就变成了with的复合结构&gt;结构Eyeswideningandjawdropping,hardlycouldsbbelievethat&hellip;眼睛睁得大大的，下巴都掉下来了，某人简直不敢相信....(5)Done/Doing作状语＜分词作状语＞Stunnedbythenews,hewasrootedtothespot,speechless.<done作状语>&lt;被这个消息惊呆了,他被困原地,说不出话来&gt;Surroundedbyherlovedones,Momwasoverwhelmedwithhappiness.&lt;在亲人的包围下,妈妈被幸福所笼罩?Facingrisks,shewasataloss.&lt;面对风险,她不知所措&gt;Lookingattheman,shefeltasifshehadknownhimforyears.&lt;看着这个男人,她觉得自己好像认识他很多年了&gt;(6)强调句式:Itis/was+强调部分+that+其他部分Itwasthelongingtobehomethatquickenedsteps正是对回家的渴望加快了脚步ItwasthroughcommitmentandsweatthatIcanchangemyselfinsideandout.正是通过投入和汗水，我才能彻底改变自己(7)倒装句.①&ldquo;一...就&rdquo;位于句首的倒装scarcely/Hardlyhad+主+donewhensbdidsth=Nosoonerhad+主+donethansbdidstheg:NosoonerhadTomrisenfromhisseatthanhisheartbeatwildly.汤姆刚从座位上站起来,他的心就狂跳起来、4,②So+adj+be动词+主语+thateg:Soirritatedwashethatheslammedthedoorandstormedout.他太生气了以至于摔门而出③adj/n+as+主+且be动词,&hellip;&rdquo;尽管&rdquo;Exhaustedaswewere,wedidn&#39;tquit.尽管很累，我们决不放弃.Freezingcoldasthewaterwas,hedivedinwithoutasecondthought,尽管水很冷,他不假思索地潜了进去&lt;救人&gt;.④Notonly...butalso位于句首的倒装(8)环境描写（天空/风／云／雪／太阳／雨）①Thetendersunlightshowereduswarmly.和煦的阳光温暖地沐浴着我们②Thegentlewindkissedmyfaceconstantly.温柔的风不断地亲吻我的脸③Thecrystalblueskywasspottedwithwhitewords.湛蓝的天空点缀着白云.④Thebone-chillingwindwasroaringveryloudly.刺骨的寒风正在大声地怒吼⑤Thefiercerainwhippedthewindowviolently猛烈的大雨不断地抽打窗户⑥Themountainwasbathedinaquietnight.山沐浴在宁静地月光下⑦Thesunbegantosetinthewest,glitteringredthroughleaves,太阳开始西落,树叶里映射出红色斜辉翻译：和煦的阳光温暖地沐浴着我们，湛蓝的天空点缀着白云，制作山一副绝美的画面，灌输给我们一股强大的纯纯地高兴。Thetendersunlightshowereduswarmlyandthegentlewindkissedmyfaceconstantly,makingabreathtakingpictureandinstillinguswithatremendouspangofsheerhappiness.(9)其它:Much/Greattoone&#39;s+n:令人&hellip;的是（Muchtoone&rsquo;sdelight,最令某人开心的是）what+情绪动词sbmostwasthat:最令某人&hellip;样的是beabouttodosthwhen..刚要做.....当.....sbdidsth..onlytofind...某人做&middot;&middot;&middot;，结果发现&middot;&middot;&middot;【句子再积累】①Myheartspoundingfiercelyandmypalmssweating,thereseemedaninnervoicetellingmethatIshouldsummonupmycouragetowork.我的心狂跳，手掌出汗，似乎有一个内心声音告诉我我应该鼓足勇气xxx.②Withinasplitsecond,awaveofwarmthruledthehouseandasenseofreliefsweptoverme.一瞬间，一股温暖统治了这个房间，一阵解脱横扫我③Asifaheavystonewasliftedfrommymind,Isensedaglimmerofreliefandsaid:&quot;Ifinallymadeit&quot;.仿佛一个沉重的石头从我思维中搬开，我感到一丝解脱、④Asthedarknessdescendedslowly,hewasontheedgeofbreakingdownandtotallyatalosswhattodo.随着天慢慢变黑，他处于崩溃的边缘，完全茫然不知所措、⑤Patienceandpersistencehaveamagicaleffect,beforewhichdifficultiesdisappearedandobstaclesvanished.耐心和坚持有一种神奇的力量,在他们面前,障碍和困难都消失4</done作状语></a被b掩盖></a变为b></xx神色从某人脸上掠过>