高中英语2025届高考读后续写修辞手法运用讲解练习

高考英语读后续写修辞手法运用讲解练习一、比喻比喻是最常见的修辞手法，是以两种具有共同特征的事物或现象进行对比，从而更生动、更深刻地说明道理，增强语言的表现力。比喻分为明喻和和暗喻。例如：Sheisanangel.是暗喻；而Sheisasinnocentasanangel.是明喻。明喻直接表明本体和喻体的相似之处，常用的明喻标志词有like,as,seem,as...as,asif,asthough,similarto等。【基本格式】本体+比喻词+喻体例如：TheUSAislikeabigmeltingpotwhereimmigrantsofdifferentculturesorracesformanintegratedsociety.TheUSA是本体，喻体是meltingpot,比喻词是like,喻体和本体的相似之处都是拥有“包容”的特点。【句型赏析】1.Loveislikethewind,youcan'tseeitbutyoucanfeelit.（情感描写）爱如风，你看不见，但你能感受到它。2.Thehouselookssomethinglikeacastle.（景物描写）那房子看上去有点像一座城堡。(somethinglike...有点像…)3.Kylelookedatthetestwithastareasblankashisnotebook.（情景描写）Kyle茫然地看着试卷，头脑如同笔记本一样的空白。4.Asindepthsofmanyseas,myheartwasdrownedinmemories.（情绪描写）如同在大海深处，我的心里沉溺于回忆之中。5.Hemovedlikelighteningbeforethepolicecame.（动作描写）还没等警察到来，他像闪电一样地跑了。6.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.（情景描写）她的笑容像宝石一样闪闪发光。7.Icouldn'tmovemylegs.Itwasasiftheywerestucktothefloor.（动作描写）我的腿动不了，就好像给固定在地板上似的。【仿写训练】1.这本书陪伴了我很久就像一位我的老朋友似的。______________________________________________________2.我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。______________________________________________________3.他感觉彷佛整个世界都崩塌了。______________________________________________________4.这辆公交车走的像蜗牛一样慢。______________________________________________________5.我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中______________________________________________________暗喻:暗喻也叫隐喻，本体喻体都出现，中间常用喻词“是”等连接，有时不用喻词。【基本格式】暗喻的典型形式为：甲是乙，而不用like,as等喻词。例如：Moneysometimesisapoison.钱有时候是一种毒药。【句型赏析】6,1.Herhairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownhershoulders.（肖像描写）她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。2.Lifeisanunexploredriver.fulloftwistsandturns.(哲理)生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。3.Ifeltalumpinmythroat,tearingwellingupinmyeyes.（情感描写）我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。4.Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.（环境描写）整个房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。5.Theoldman'sfaceisamapoftime.(哲理)老人的脸是岁月的写照。【仿写训练】（一）找出下面句子里面的修辞1.Myverythoughtwasliketheghostlyrustleofdeadleaves.2.Helookedasifhehadjuststeppedoutofmybookoffairytales.3.Windandrainnowwhipped（鞭打）thehouse.4.Mymotherislikeacoatinwinter,offeringwarmthtome.5.Thewindsoundedlikearoarofatrainpassingby.6.Householdandmedicalsuppliesstreamedinbyplane,train,truckandcar.（二）利用明喻或暗语翻译下列各句1.他看起来好像刚从我的童话书中走出来。______________________________________________________2.我妈妈就像冬天的外套，给我温暖。______________________________________________________3.她的头发就像一条金色的河流从她的肩膀上流下来。______________________________________________________4.家用和医疗用品通过飞机、火车、卡车和汽车源源不断地运来。______________________________________________________5.生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既会遇到晴天，也会遇到暴风雨天。______________________________________________________6.笑是驱走人们脸上寒意的太阳。______________________________________________________二、夸张运用丰富的想象，过激的言词，渲染和装饰客观事物，以达到强调的效果。【使用数词或量词】1.Myheartbrokeinaboutmillionsofpieces.（情感描写）我的心成了碎片。2.Shewashalfdeadwithfear.（情感描写）她吓得半死。3.Thebackpackweighsaton.（情景描写）背包很重。【使用动词】1.Theyounggirlbroughtthehousedownwithherperformance.（情景描写）这位年轻姑娘的表演博得了满堂喝彩。2.Itmademejumpoutofmyskin.（情感描写）吓得我魂不附体。6,3.Ialmostlaughedmyheadoff.（情感描写）我都快笑死了。4.Mybloodfroze.（情感描写）我的血液都凝固了。5.Shecriedhereyesout.（情感描写）她痛哭涕流。6.Itbroughtherheartintohermouth.（情感描写）让她的心悬到了嗓子眼。【使用介词短语】1.Shewenthomeinafloodoftears.（情感描写）她泪如泉涌地回家去了。3.Hewasbentoutofshape.（情感描写）他非常生气（气到变形）【仿写训练】1.当他离开时我心都碎了。（情感描写）______________________________________________________2.当他们告诉我这个消息时，我乐不可支。（情感描写）______________________________________________________3.听到这个坏消息时，她泪流成河。（情感描写）______________________________________________________三、拟人把无生命的事物（无灵主语）当作有生命的事物来描写，赋予无生命之物以感情和动作或是把动物人格化，使语言生动，形象，更有感染力。【把自然现象当作人来描写】1.Thewindstoodupandgaveashout.(景物描写)大风凛冽，发出怒吼。2.Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.(景物描写)微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。3.Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.(景物描写)鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。4.Themistswallowedhimup.(景物描写)薄雾把他包围起来。5.Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.(景物描写)寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。6.Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.(景物描写)夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。7.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.(景物描写)顷刻间，黑暗统治了森林。【把含蓄抽象的概念当作人来描写】1.Fearseized/swallowedhim.（情感描写）恐惧把他吞噬了。2.Angerchokedmywords.（情感描写）我气得说不出话来。3.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.（情景描写）我突然想到一个好主意。4.Smiletookholdofhim.（情感描写）他笑容满面。5.Anxietytornhimintopieces.（情感描写）她焦虑不安，十分崩溃。6.Courage/Confidencedesertedhim.（情感描写）他没信心了。7.Excitementdeprivedmeofallpowerofspeech.（情感描写）我兴奋的啥也说不出来了。【把动物当作人来描写】1.Inthedeadofnight,thecrickets（蟋蟀）playedontheterraceofthehouse.(景物描写)寂静的夜，蟋蟀旁若无人地在房子的阳台上玩。2.Birdsonthetreearesingingabeautifulsong.(景物描写)树上的小鸟在树上唱着美妙的歌曲。3.Thefrogsaregivingaconcert---mixedchorus.(景物描写)青蛙在举办音乐会---混声大合唱。4.Firefliespatrolthegrasswithsmalllanterns(景物描写)6,萤火虫提着小灯笼在草丛中巡逻。【仿写训练】1.夏天的微风轻轻地抚摸着我的脸。______________________________________________________2.细雨轻轻地亲吻着我的脸颊。______________________________________________________3.我能听到到处都是鸟儿在歌唱。______________________________________________________4.这个教堂目睹了这个城市20年的变化。______________________________________________________四、排比排比也称平行,是把结构相同或相似、意思密切相关、语气一致的词语或句子成串地排列的一种修辞方法，利用意义相关或相近，结构相同或相似和语气相同的词组(主、谓、动、宾)或句子并排(三句或三句以上),段落并排(两段即可),达到一种加强语势的效果。【句型赏析】1.Motherwasverybusygatheringthelaundry,dustingthefurnitureandwashingthedishes.（动作描写）母亲正忙着收拾要洗的衣服,掸去家具上的灰尘,洗碗。2.Whetherinclass,atwork,orathome,Jameswasalwaysbusy.（情景描写）无论是在课堂上,在工作中,还是在家里,詹姆斯总是很忙。3.Don’tmakepromisewhenyouareinjoy.Don’treplywhenyouaresad.Don’ttakedecisionwhenyouareangry.Thinktwiceandactwise.（哲理）别在喜悦的时候许下承诺;别悲伤的时候做出回答;别在愤怒的时候作出决定。三思而行，做出睿智的行为。4.Painmakesyoustronger,tearsmakeyoubraver,heartbreakmakesyouwiser,sothankthepastforabetterfuture.（哲理）痛苦,会让你更强大;眼泪,会让你更勇敢;心碎,会让你更睿智，所以为了更好的未来感谢过去吧。5.ThisisnotonlyjustwhatIwanted,butalsojustwhatIneeded.这不仅是我想要的，也是我需要的。【仿写训练】（一）找出下面句子所用修辞手法1.Thewindwhispersinthetree.2.Thenoisewasloudenoughtowakethedead.3.Hisspeechbroughtthehousedown.4.TheoldVenicefellasleepagain.5.Thesunbrokethroughthecloudsandjumpedoutofthesea.6.Thebirdsdancedhappilyonthebranch.7.Sheeatslikeabird.8.Theloudmusicalmostdrovemeupawall.6,9.Thenightgentlylaysherhandatourfeveredheads.10.Thevolcanospitoutlavafromitsmouth.11.Heisdyingforthisopportunity.（二）用排比句翻译下列各句1.午后的阳光洒落在草地上，风轻轻地吹着，水静静地顺着小溪往下流。______________________________________________________2.热空气笼罩着房间，灯光在烟雾中闪闪发光，火焰疯狂地向四面八方蔓延。______________________________________________________3.温和的阳光照射在沙滩上，海水轻轻地吹着空气，人群在海滩上快乐地玩耍。______________________________________________________4.地板上灯光明亮，整齐的桌椅整齐排列，学生们聚精会神地听老师讲课。______________________________________________________6,附：参考答案一、比喻明喻【仿写训练】1.Thebookhasaccompaniedmeforquitealongtimelikeanoldfriend.2.Ireachedouttotouchherface,whichwasascoldastheice.3.Hefeltasifthewholeworldhadfallenapartonhim.4.Thebuswentasslowlyasasnail.5.IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.暗喻【仿写训练】（一）找出下面句子所用修辞手法1.明喻2.明喻3.暗喻4.明喻5.明喻6.暗喻（二）利用明喻或暗语翻译下列各句1.Helookedasifhehadjuststeppedoutofmybookoffairytales.2.Mymotherislikeacoatinwinter,offeringwarmthtome.3.Herhairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownhershoulders.4.Householdandmedicalsuppliesstreamedinbyplane,train,truckandcar.5.Lifeisashipontheoceanmeetingbothsunnydaysandstormydays.6.Laughteristhesunthatdriveswinterfromthehumanface.二、夸张【仿写训练】1.Myheartsankwhenheleft.2.Whentheytoldthenews,Iwasoverthemoon/onthetopoftheworld.3.Whensheheardthebadnews,ariveroftearspouredout.三、拟人【仿写训练】1.Thesummerbreezetouchedmyfacegently.2.Thedrizzlekissedmeonmycheekgently.3.Icouldhearbirdssingingeverywhere.4.Thechurchhaswitnessedthecity'schangesinthepast20years.四、排比【仿写训练】（一）找出下面句子所用修辞手法1.拟人2.夸张3.夸张4.拟人5.拟人6.拟人7.明喻8.夸张9.拟人10.拟人11.夸张（二）用排比句翻译下列各句1.Theafternoonsunlightfellonthegrass,thewindblewlightly,andthewaterflewsilentlydownthestream.2.Hotairenvelopedtheroom,thelightsglowedinthesmoke,andflamesspreadwildlyinalldirections.3.Themildsunlightfellonthesand,theairblewsoftlyfromthesea,andthecrowdsplayedhappilyonthebeach.4.Lightsshonebrightlyonthefloor,tidydesksandchairslinedupneatly,andthestudentslistenedtotheteacherattentively.6