高中英语2025届高考建议信写作指导和练习

高考英语建议信写作指导和练习【试题探究】(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1.说明问题;2.提出建议。Step1:审题布局类型建议信人称第三人称时态一般现在时要点1.随机分组的弊端12.随机分组的弊端23.我的口语分组建议14.我的口语分组建议2Step2:巧饰亮点要点1:首先,随机配对的学生可能会导致小组内的语言能力不平衡。Randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.这可能会阻碍学生的进步,因为更先进的人可能会主导谈话,给其他学生留下很少的进步空间。(增加细节)Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonesmaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.要点2:如果与一个他们相处不好或沟通有困难的人配对,学生可能会感到不舒服或缺乏动力。Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwellwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.要点3:我的建议是根据学生的语言能力来分组,或者让学生自己选择合作伙伴。Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.要点4:大家一起练习和提高英语口语就会更舒服。EveryonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Step3:衔接成篇DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Idon’tthinkit’sagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonesmaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwellwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.EveryonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.13,Yourssincerely,LiHua【句式储备】1.篇头——开篇表意,说明目的①I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.Herearemysuggestions.很高兴收到你的来信询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。②I’mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI’mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写邮件给你一些建议。2.篇中——讲清理由,表达建议①Classroominteractioncancreateademocraticandharmoniousclassroomatmosphere.课堂互动可以创造一个民主和谐的课堂氛围。②Classroominteractioncanchangetherolesofbothteachersandstudents.课堂互动可以改变教师和学生的角色。③Youmaytrytodividetheclassintosmallergroupstopromotecollaborationandstudents’interaction.ItwillgiveChinesestudentsthechancetopracticeEnglishinalow-pressuresetting.你可以尝试将班级分成较小的小组,以促进协作和学生互动。它将让中国学生有机会在轻松的环境中练习英语。3.结尾——望采纳,盼回复①Ifirmlybelievethatbytakingthesesuggestions,youwillhaveamoreengagingandinteractiveclassroomenvironment.ItwillenhanceourlearningexperienceandprovideuswithvaluableopportunitiestopracticeourEnglishskills.我坚信,通过采纳这些建议,你将拥有一个更具吸引力和互动性的课堂环境。它将增强我们的学习经验,并为我们提供宝贵的机会来练习我们的英语技能。②Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真诚地希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。③Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.无论如何,我希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。【拓展储备】假定你是李华,外教David向全班征求如何与学生更好地进行课堂互动的建议。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.支持与学生课堂互动;2.给出课堂互动的方法。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。DearDavid,IamLiHua,oneofyourChinesestudentsinyourclass.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearDavid,IamLiHua,oneofyourChinesestudentsinyourclass.Iwouldliketoexpressmy13,strongsupportaboutclassroominteractionbecauseitcannotonlycreateademocraticandharmoniousclassroomatmospherebutalsochangetherolesofbothteachersandstudents.ApartfromyourcommunicatingwithusinEnglishclass,asyouhope,I’dbefranktoprovideyouwithsomesuggestionsasfollows.Tobeginwith,youmaytrytodividetheclassintosmallergroupstopromotecollaborationandstudents’interaction,whichwillgiveChinesestudentsthechancetopracticeEnglishinalow-pressuresetting.Additionally,creatingamorewelcomingatmospherewherequestionsareencouragedmaybeagoodmethodtomotivateustoengageindiscussions.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofhelptoyou.Thanksforreading.Yourssincerely,LiHua【要点精练】1．假定你是李华，你班英国交流生Robert因为语言和文化差异导致心情郁闷，请你给他写封邮件，表示安慰。内容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRobert,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．假定你是李华，你校校刊英语角正在征集有关新生如何加入社团的建议。请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。内容如下：1.你对社团的认识；2.你的建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Johnson所在的学校将开设汉语选修课（Chineseelective）。他来信询问如何布置一间教室来营造良好的汉语学习氛围。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.提出建议；2.说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJohnson,13,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．假设你是李华，你的英国好友Tim计划明年来北京读大学，主修中文专业，他发来邮件向你询问择校建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：1．表示欢迎；2．建议他读哪所大学及理由；3．祝福他成功。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearTim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua5．假定你是李华，你校英语报计划举办英语文化周系列活动，现向同学们征集活动内容。请你给英语报的负责人Mr.Smith写一封邮件，内容包括:1.提出建议；2.说明理由。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMr.Smith,I’mLiHua.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua6．假定设你是李华，你们班外教Chris要求每位同学针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题，问题意识缺乏”这一现象给他写一封信，发表自己的看法。内容包括：1.分析原因；2.提出解决办法。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearChris,13,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是某高中学生李华，你在Amazon上某网店Kentier里购买了一本英语词典，收到货后你发现该词典存在一些问题。你打算给该网店发一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.说明购物情况；2.陈述问题所在；3.表达你的建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearSirorMadam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua8．假设你是李华，你的好朋友Harry即将步入自己理想的高中，在憧憬高中生活的同时，他也有些担忧，他写邮件向你求助，请你给他写一封回信。内容如下：1.表示祝贺；2.分享学习、交友等方面建议；3.表达期望。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。DearHarry,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua9．假定你是李华，近日你发现一些招聘广告对应聘者设置了年龄限制。请你给当地英文报写一封邮件，内容包括：1.描述你对此现象的看法；2.说明存在的问题；3.提出你的建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。DearEditor,13,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua10．假定你是李华，你的交换生好友Alice最近沉迷于抖音（TikTok），你非常担心她。请给她写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.阐述玩抖音的危害；2.提出建议和解决办法。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAlice,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考答案】13,1．DearRobert,Iamsorrytohearyouhavebeenfeelingdepressedrecently.Iwouldliketooffersomeadvicetoyou,whichIhopewillbeofhelptoyou.Indeed,it'sunderstandablethat,comingfromadifferentculture,you'vefoundyourselfatalossastohowtodealwiththelarguagebarrier,letalonetheculturaldifference.Butthat'spartofourprocessofgrowth.Bycommunicatingmorewithyourclassmatesandteachers,you'lldevelopyourCbinesefluencyaswellasagoodunderstandingofChineseculture.Gradually,you'lldefinitelyseeaboominyouroverallwellbeingandenjoyyourstayhere.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交流生Robert写封邮件，就他因为语言和文化差异导致心情郁闷的问题表示安慰并提出建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累有帮助的：beofhelp→behelpful处理：dealwith→handle与……交流：communicatewith→interactwith肯定的：definitely→surely2.句式拓展陈述句变倒装句原句：Bycommunicatingmorewithyourclassmatesandteachers,you'lldevelopyourCbinesefluencyaswellasagoodunderstandingofChineseculture.拓展句：OnlybycommunicatingmorewithyourclassmatesandteacherswillyoudevelopyourCbinesefluencyaswellasagoodunderstandingofChineseculture.【高分句型1】Iwouldliketooffersomeadvicetoyou,whichIhopewillbeofhelptoyou.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】Indeed,it'sunderstandablethat,comingfromadifferentculture,you'vefoundyourselfatalossastohowtodealwiththelarguagebarrier,letalonetheculturaldifference.（运用了现在分词作状语、疑问词how+动词不定式结构以及that引导的主语从句）2．Schoolclubsplayanimportantroleinenrichingstudents’campuslife,promotingstudents’abilitiesanddevelopingstudents’interests.Inmyopinion,itisbesttofollowsomeprinciplestojoinclubs.Firstofall,theclubyouchoosemustberelevanttoyourinterestsandstrengths.Secondly,don’ttrytoattendeveryclub,whichwillaffectyournormalstudy.Finally,itisbettertojointheclubundertheguidanceoftheteacher,sothatyoucanavoidblindlyfollowingthetrend.Ihopeallstudentscandeveloptheirownspecialtiesandhobbieswhilestudyingwell.【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校校刊英语角正在征集有关新生如何加入社团的建议，要求考生按照要求用英语写一篇短文并投稿。【要点分析】1.词汇积累重要的：important→significant提升：promote→improve相关的：relevant→related参加：attend→participatein2.句式拓展13,同义句转换原句：Finally,itisbettertojointheclubundertheguidanceoftheteacher,sothatyoucanavoidblindlyfollowingthetrend.拓展句：Finally,toavoidblindlyfollowingthetrend,youhadbetterjointheclubundertheguidanceoftheteacher.【高分句型1】Inmyopinion,itisbesttofollowsomeprinciplestojoinclubs.（运用了it作形式主语、不定式tofollow作真正的主语）【高分句型2】Secondly,don’ttrytoattendeveryclub,whichwillaffectyournormalstudy.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）3．Onepossibleversion:DearJohnson,I’mthrilledtohearthatyourschoolisintroducingaChineseelective!Tocreateanimmersivelearningenvironmentfortheclassroom,Isuggestthefollowing:First,decorateyourclassroomwithculturalitems:Chinesecalligraphy,traditionalpaintings,andmapsofChinatostimulateinterestinthelanguage.Second,engagestudentswithChinesemusic,films,andinteractivesoftwareformoredynamiclearning.Finally,includeauthenticobjectslikeChineseteasetsorchopsticks,whichcanhelpstudentsunderstandthepracticaluseofthelanguage.IhopethesesuggestionswillhelpmaketheChineseclassroomaplaceofexcitementandinspiration.Wishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Johnson写一封回信，就如何布置一间教室来营造良好的汉语学习氛围提供建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累激动的：thrilled→excited激发：stimulate→arouse活跃的：dynamic→active领会：understand→grasp2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First,decorateyourclassroomwithculturalitems:Chinesecalligraphy,traditionalpaintings,andmapsofChinatostimulateinterestinthelanguage.拓展句：First,decorateyourclassroomwithculturalitems:Chinesecalligraphy,traditionalpaintings,andmapsofChina,whichareofgreathelptostimulateinterestinthelanguage.【高分句型1】First,decorateyourclassroomwithculturalitems:Chinesecalligraphy,traditionalpaintings,andmapsofChinatostimulateinterestinthelanguage.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语）【高分句型2】Finally,includeauthenticobjectslikeChineseteasetsorchopsticks,whichcanhelpstudentsunderstandthepracticaluseofthelanguage.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）4．DearTim,Youcouldn’timaginehowthrilledIamwhenhearingaboutyourintentiontopursuehighereducationinBeijing.WelcometoBeijing!Whenitcomestoselectingauniversity,PekingUniversityishighlyrecommended.Firstofall,notonlydoesitrankamongthepremieracademicinstitutionsinChina,butalsoitsChineselanguageandliteratureprogramisrenownedforits13,exceptionalquality.Additionally,studyingalongsideesteemedprofessorsandhigh-achievingpeerswillundoubtedlyprovideyouwithprofoundinsightsintotraditionalChineseculture.Ultimately,theuniversity’scampusboastsavibrantatmosphere,andBeijing,asthecapitalcity,offersanabundanceofopportunitiesforculturalimmersionandlanguageacquisition.IextendmysincerestwishesforyouracademicsuccessandeagerlyanticipateyourarrivalinBeijing!Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国好友Tim计划明年来北京读大学，主修中文专业，他发来邮件询问择校建议。要求考生给他回信表示欢迎，并提出建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累激动的：thrilled→excited打算：intention→plan选择：select→choose著名的：renowned→famous2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Ultimately,theuniversity’scampusboastsavibrantatmosphere,andBeijing,asthecapitalcity,offersanabundanceofopportunitiesforculturalimmersionandlanguageacquisition.拓展句：Ultimately,theuniversity’scampusboastsavibrantatmosphere,andBeijing,whichisthecapitalcityofChina,offersanabundanceofopportunitiesforculturalimmersionandlanguageacquisition.[高分句型1]Youcouldn’timaginehowthrilledIamwhenhearingaboutyourintentiontopursuehighereducationinBeijing.(运用了连接副词how引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Firstofall,notonlydoesitrankamongthepremieracademicinstitutionsinChina,butalsoitsChineselanguageandliteratureprogramisrenownedforitsexceptionalquality.(运用了部分倒装句型)5．DearMr.Smith,I’mLiHua.LearningthattheEnglishCultureWeekisgoingtobeheld,I’mwritingtoproposeideasforit.Firstly,aMulticulturalDaycouldbeorganizedwherestudentspresentEnglish-speakingcountries’cultures.Thiswillpromotecross-culturalunderstanding.Inaddition,toenhancecriticalthinkingandspokenEnglish,anEnglishDebateContestcouldbeorganized.Moreover,consideranEnglishMovieNight,screeningclassicEnglishfilmsfollowedbydiscussions,whichwillsurelystimulateinterestanddeepenourgraspofthelanguage.Theseactivitiesareengagingandinclusive,suitablefordiverseinterestswhilepromotingEnglishcultureandlanguagelearningeffectively.Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校英语报的负责人Mr.Smith写一封邮件，就即将举办的英语文化周系列活动提出建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累首先：firstly→tobeginwith增强：promote→enhance肯定地：surely→certainly13,有趣的：engaging→entertaining2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：LearningthattheEnglishCultureWeekisgoingtobeheld,I’mwritingtoproposeideasforit.拓展句：BecauseIlearnthattheEnglishCultureWeekisgoingtobeheld,I’mwritingtoproposeideasforit.【高分句型1】Firstly,aMulticulturalDaycouldbeorganizedwherestudentspresentEnglish-speakingcountries’cultures.（运用了关系副词where引导的限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】Moreover,consideranEnglishMovieNight,screeningclassicEnglishfilmsfollowedbydiscussions,whichwillsurelystimulateinterestanddeepenourgraspofthelanguage.（运用了现在分词作状语、过去分词作定语以及关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句）6．DearChris,IamwritingtosharemythoughtsonthephenomenonthatmanyofusarehesitanttoaskquestionsandlackofawarenessinaskingquestionsduringEnglishclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Somestudentsmaybeafraidofbeingjudgedorcriticizedforaskingquestions.Additionally,oureducationsystemoftenemphasizesmemorizationandtest-taking,ratherthancriticalthinkingandinquiry.Ithinkcreatingamoresupportiveandencouraginglearningenvironmentcouldhelpboostourconfidenceinaskingquestions.Organizingmoreinteractiveactivitiesisalsoofequalsignificance.I’mconfidentthatwecanovercomethischallengeunderyourguidance.Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题，问题意识缺乏”这一现象给Chris写一封信，发表自己的看法。【要点分析】1.词汇积累害怕：beafraidof→fear强调：emphasize→stress重要：significance→importance克服：overcome→conquer2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：I’mconfidentthatwecanovercomethischallengeunderyourguidance.拓展句：Ifyoucouldoffersomeguidance,I’mconfidentthatwecanovercomethischallenge.[高分句型1]IamwritingtosharemythoughtsonthephenomenonthatmanyofusarehesitanttoaskquestionsandlackofawarenessinaskingquestionsduringEnglishclass.(运用了that引导同位语从句)[高分句型2]Ithinkcreatingamoresupportiveandencouraginglearningenvironmentcouldhelpboostourconfidenceinaskingquestions.(运用了动名词作主语)7．DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,acustomerofyouronlinestore.IamwritingtomakeacomplaintabouttheEnglishdictionaryIpurchasedinyouronlinestoreKentierthreedaysago.Iwasverygladtoreceiveityesterday.However,whenIopenedthepackage,Iwassorrytofindsomethingwrongwithit.Apartfromthebrokencover,tomydispleasure,therearesomedirtyspotsonitduetothepoorpackagingandtheprocessofdelivery.In13,addition,somepagesaremissing,whichmakesitimpossibletorefertosomewords.SuchisthereputationofyourstorethatIsupposeit’snomorethanacarelessmistake.Itwillbesatisfyingenoughforyoutochangeitforanewoneandpostittomeassoonaspossible.Ifthisrequirementcan’tbemet,arefundisacceptabletome.AndIamconfidentthatyoucanliveuptotheexpectationofyourcustomers.YourssincerelyLiHua【写作解析】本篇是应用文写作。你在Amazon上某网店Kentier里购买了一本英语词典，收到货后你发现该词典存在一些问题，要求考生给该网店发一封电子邮件说明购物情况，陈述问题所在以及表达你的建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累顾客：customer→consumer高兴的：glad→delighted除了：apartfrom→besides另外：inaddition→furthermore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Apartfromthebrokencover,tomydispleasure,therearesomedirtyspotsonitduetothepoorpackagingandtheprocessofdelivery.拓展句：Notonlywasthecoverbroken,buttomydispleasure,Ialsonoticedseveraldirtyspotsontheproduct,whichIbelievewerecausedbythepoorpackagingandroughhandlingduringthedeliveryprocess.[高分句型1]IamwritingtomakeacomplaintabouttheEnglishdictionaryIpurchasedinyouronlinestoreKentierthreedaysago.(省略关系代词的定语从句)[高分句型2]Ifthisrequirementcan’tbemet,arefundisacceptabletome.(if引导的条件状语从句)8．DearHarry,I’mverypleasedtohearthatyouhavepassedtheentranceexaminationandbeenadmittedtoanidealhighschool.AndIamsorrytohearthatyoufeelupsetbecauseofinadaptationafterenteringthehighschool.Youshouldrememberthatyourclassmatesarealsonewthereandfacingthesameproblem,soyoudon’thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.Thereisalsosomethingthatyoucandotochangethissituation.First,trytoinvitesomeofyourclassmatestotakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherafterschool.Thiswillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetterbycommunicatingwithothers.Second,helpothersasmuchasyoucanwhentheyareintrouble,andaskthemtohelpyouwhenyouhavedifficulties.Third,joininginastudygroupisabetterwaytomakefriendsifyoulike.Soon,Ibelievethatyouwillmakemanynewfriendsthere.Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。好朋友Harry即将步入自己理想的高中，在憧憬高中生活的同时，他也有些担忧，因此写邮件求助，要求考生给他写一封回信。【要点分析】1.词汇积累不安的：upset→distressed参加：takepartin→participatein帮助：help→assist求助：ask…tohelp→turnto…forhelp2.句式拓展13,合并句子原句：First,trytoinvitesomeofyourclassmatestotakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherafterschool.Thiswillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetterbycommunicatingwithothers.拓展句：First,trytoinvitesomeofyourclassmatestotakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherafterschool,whichwillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetterbycommunicatingwithothers.【高分句型1】Youshouldrememberthatyourclassmatesarealsonewthereandfacingthesameproblem,soyoudon’thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.（运用了that引导宾语从句，so连接并列句）【高分句型2】Thereisalsosomethingthatyoucandotochangethissituation.（运用了that引导定语从句）9．DearEditor,I’venoticedsomejobadvertisementsinourareasetagelimitsforapplicants.Ifinditinappropriate.Byfocusingonage,employersmightmissoutontalentedindividualswhodon’tfitwithintherequiredagerange.Theseagelimitsmayalsobeseenasdiscriminatory,potentiallyleadingtonegativeattitudestowardsthesecompanies.Instead,Ibelievejobadvertisementsshouldfocusonskills,qualifications,andexperience.Isuggestthatyoudiscussthisissueinyournewspaper.Encouragingbusinessestoprioritizecapabilitiesoveragecanmakeourlocaljobmarketfairer.Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以李华的身份，给当地英文报写一封邮件，对招聘广告中的年龄限制现象提出看法和建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累不合适的：inappropriate→unsuitable问题：issue→problem建议：suggest→advise集中于：focuson→concentrateon2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Isuggestthatyoudiscussthisissueinyournewspaper.拓展句：Itissuggestedthatthisissuebediscussedinyournewspaper.【高分句型1】Byfocusingonage,employersmightmissoutontalentedindividualswhodon’tfitwithintherequiredagerange.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Theseagelimitsmayalsobeseenasdiscriminatory,potentiallyleadingtonegativeattitudestowardsthesecompanies.(运用了现在分词作结果状语)【高分句型3】Encouragingbusinessestoprioritizecapabilitiesoveragecanmakeourlocaljobmarketfairer.(运用了动名词作主语)10．DearAlice,IamworriedtoknowthatyoushouldbesoaddictedtoTikTokthesedays.PlayingwithTikToktoomuchisbadforyourhealth.Besides,ifyouspendsomuchtimeonit,I’mafraidyouwillfallbehindyourclassmatessoonerorlater.Inmyopinion,youshouldfindsomethinginterestingtodoifyouwanttorelax.Forexample,takeawalkontheplaygroundwithyourfriends.Alternatively,youcanchatwithyourclassmates,whichwillcheeryouup.Itdoesn’tmeanthatTikTokshouldbecompletelyrefusedinourlife,butplayingtoomuchwillsurelyaffectourstudy.13,Iknowyouhaveastrongwillandyouareclever.Ibelieveyoucangetridofthisbadhabitquitesoon.Yours,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Alice写一封电子邮件，因为她最近沉迷于抖音，你非常担心她。【要点分析】1.词汇积累担心：worried→concerned沉迷于：beaddictedto→beobsessedwith例如：forexample→forinstance此外：besides→inaddition2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Iknowyouhaveastrongwillandyouareclever.Ibelieveyoucangetridofthisbadhabitquitesoon.拓展句：BecauseIknowyouhaveastrongwillandyouareclever,Ibelieveyoucangetridofthisbadhabitquitesoon.[高分句型1]IamworriedtoknowthatyoushouldbesoaddictedtoTikTokthesedays.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Alternatively,youcanchatwithyourclassmates,whichwillcheeryouup.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)13