高考应用文建议信写作指导

letterofrecommendation高考应用文写作指导之建议信,【文体概述】建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确，理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：一、说明写信目的；二、提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告；三、表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。,【常用语块】1.给某人提建议givesomeoneadvice（on）2.如下asfollows3.做某事有困难havedifficultydoingsomething4.利用makeuseof5.向某人征求意见asksomeoneforadvice6.认为……有用find…helpful/useful/beneficial7.听从某人的建议followsomeone'sadvice8.把……考虑在内take…intoaccount,【常用语块】9.得到改善getimproved10.依我看来Inmyopinion11.我建议……Irecommendthat12、如果我是你，我会......IfIwereyou,Iwould...13、你最好/最好不......You'dbetterdo.../notdo...,【套用句式】1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2、Knowingthatyou'rehavingtrouble...soI'mwritingtoyouwiththefollowingsuggestions.知道你在……有困难，因此我写信给你提如下一些建议。3、YouareaskingmeforadviceonEnglishlearning,andhereItrytogivesomeuseful/helpful/practicaladvice.关于英语学习，你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的/有帮助的/实用的建议。,【套用句式】5、Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.在我看来，采取以下行动是明智的。6、Doing...isagoodchoice/betterchoice.做……是一个好的选择/更好的选择。7、youmightaswell/betterdo…你不妨/最好做……8、Iwouldbedelighted/pleasedifyoucouldconsidermysuggestion.如果你能考虑我的建议，我将非常高兴。,【套用句式】9、Ihopethatmyadvicewillbebeneficialtoyou.我希望我的建议对你有益。10、Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。,【优秀作文范本】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Leslie打算近期到北京参观，请你写封信给他一些建议。内容包括：1、出行方式；2、出游季节；3、其他注意事项。,【参考范文】DearLeslie,(说明写信目的)LearningthatyouarepayingavisittoBeijingrecently,I‘mwritingtoofferyousomepracticalsuggestions.（提出建议及建议的理由)Firstly,itisconvenientforyoutotravelbothbyairandbyhigh-speedtrainasitisveryeasytogettothecity.inaddition,youmayaswelltakeatourinfall,whenyoumayfeelmorepleasanttoenjoyyourjourney.Lastbutnotleast,doarrangeatimetovisittheGreatWallbecauseitissofamousallovertheworld.(表达愿望)Ihopethatyouwillfindmysuggestionsbeneficial.WishyouagoodtimeInChina.(105words)Yours,LiHua,【课后练习】学以致用假如你是李华，你班里有一位来自澳大利亚的交换生Kingston，他是首次来中国。因语言交流有困难，他萌生了问国的念头。请给他写一封电子邮件，帮他走出困境。内容要点包括：1.分析困难；2.你的建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。,【参考范文1】DearKingston,I’msorrytohearyouhavedifficultywithcommunication,butI’mwillingtohelpyououtofthetrouble.Totellyouthetruth,itisnaturalthatyoushouldmissyourparentsandwanttogohome.Butpersonally,Idon’tthinkwecanlivewithourparentsallthelife.Thus,itisagoodchanceforyoutobemoreindependent.Youcancallyourparentsmoreofteninsteadofgivingupyourstudy.Ifyoudon’tmind,Iwouldliketobeyourfriend.Wecanchatfrequently,whichwillimproveyourChinesealot.Onlybycommunicatingwithotherscanyouovercomeyourdifficulties.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua,【亮点解读】本文很好地完成了写作任务，从词到句构思缜密,逻辑流畅。句式变化多样，长短句搭配合理，过渡自然。时态准确，要点齐全，发挥适度。一些高级词汇和复杂结构的使用给文增彩不少。高级词汇有：outofthetrouble，personally，independent,insteadof,frequently,overcome等；复杂句式有：which引导的非限制性定语从句（whichwillimproveyourChinesealot）,if引导的状语从句（Ifyoudon'tmind）;倒装句（Onlybycommunicatingwithotherscanyouovercomeyourdifficulties）等。,【参考范文2】DearKingston,SorrytohearyouhavedifficultiesincommunicationinChinese,butI'mwillingtohelpyouout.Truly,itisnaturalthatyoumissyourparentsinAustraliaandwanttogoback.Butpersonally,Idon'tthinkitisagoodidea,itisagoodchanceforyoutostudyhereindependently.Youcancallyourparentsmoreoftenwhilestudyingwithus.Ifyoudon'tmind,I'dliketobeyourfriend.Wecanchatfrequently,whichwillimproveyourChineselot.Onlybycommunicatingwithotherscanyouovercomeyourdifficulties.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,谢谢观看！