2023年高考英语题型训练写作四含解析20230301180

题型训练写作（四）第一节短文改错YesterdayIwenttothelocalstoretobuysomebreads.IwasabouttoenterthestorewhileIsawalittleboyinthefrontofmefallover.However,hedidn’tgetupimmediately.Walkcloser,Ifoundhiseyesclosingandtherewasbloodontheground.Irealizedsomethingwrongwithhim.Irunintothestoretoaskforhelp.Fortunately,ithappenedtobeadoctoramongthecustomers.Hequicklywentouttodofirstaid.Afewminuteslate,theboycamebacktolife.Justthen,anambulancecameandseveralmedicalworkerstookhertothenearesthospital.第二节书面表达假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Simon刚刚转学，感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请给他回信，内容包括：1.对他所处情况的理解；2.建议；3.你的期望。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；DearSimon,参考答案短文改错第一处：breads→bread\n第二处：while→when第三处：去掉the第四处：Walk→Walking第五处：closing→closed第六处：在wrong前面加was第七处：run→ran第八处：it→there第九处：late→later第十处：her→him书面表达Onepossibleversion：DearSimon,Iamsorrytohearthatyouare havingtroublefittinginatyournewschool. Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Thefollowingsuggestionsmaybe helpful.First,Ithinkyoumayneedtocommunicatewithyourclassmatesasmuchaspossible.Inthisway,youwill gettoknoweachotherbetter.Second,itmightbeagoodideaforyoutotakepartinmoreactivities,whichusually involveteamworkandinteractionwithotherstudentsand aretherefore goodfordeveloping friendlyrelationships. Lastly,facedwithsometoughproblems,youmight consideraskingyour teachersforhelp,who canusually offeryousomesuggestions.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Ifthereis anythingmoreIcan,pleasefeelfreetocontactme.Yours，\nLiHua