一轮复习话题作文之亲人朋友素材篇

优点英语Family,friendsandpeoplearound家庭、朋友与周围的人PartIWORDS优点英语1.addicteda.上瘾的，成瘾，入迷2.understandinga.善解人意的3.confidenta.自信的4.consideratea.体贴人的5.considerationn.考虑；关心6.easy--goinga.随和的7.outgoinga.爱交际的8.outspokena.直率，坦诚9.patienta.有耐心的10.friendlya.友好的11.generousa.慷慨大方的12.gifteda.有天赋的13.determined有决心的14.determinationn.决心15.hardworkinga.努力工作的16.stubborna.固执的，倔强的17.devoteda.忠诚的18.devotionn.奉献，奉献精神19.enthusiastica.热情的，热心的20.gratefula.感激的21.helpfula.有帮助的22.stricta.严格的23.kind-hearteda.好心的24.happinessn.幸福25.shortcomingn.缺点26.cruela.残忍的，残酷的27.selfisha.自私的28.conservativea.保守的29.mercifula.仁慈的30.lonelya.孤独的31.politea.有礼貌的32.quieta.安静的33.punctuala.准时的34.carefula.小心，仔细，谨慎的35.carelessa.粗心的，漫不经心的36.cautiousa.小心的，谨慎的37.reliablea.可信赖的38.responsiblea..负责任的39.seriousa.严肃的,认真的40.simple-mindeda.头脑简单41.skilleda.有技能的42.intelligenta.聪明的43.learneda.有才华的；博学的44.humorousa.富于幽默的45.humourn.幽默,幽默感46.forgetfula.健忘的47.attractivea.迷人的，有吸引力的48.athletica.健壮的,体育运动的49.energetica.精力旺盛的50.curiousa.好奇的51.slima.苗条的52.handsomea.英俊的53.healthya.健康的54.famousa.著名的55.admirablea.值得赞赏的,可钦佩的56outstandinga.优秀的，杰出的57.successfula.成功的58.harmonyn.融洽，和睦59.fortunatea.幸运的60.harmoniousa.融洽的，和睦的PartIIEXPRESSIONS优点英语1.getalong/onwellwithsb.与...相处融洽2.devoteoneselftosth.献身于，致力于3.lookafter/.takecareof/carefor照看4.leadasimplelife过着简朴的生活,优点英语5.berudetosb对某人无礼6.bestrictwithsb.对...要求严格7.beangrywithsb生某人的气8.communicatewithsb.和...沟通9.quarrelwithsb.与...吵架10.congratulatesb.on(doing)sth.向某人道喜11.dependonsb.todosth.依靠某人干...12.help/understandeachother相互帮助/理解13.havetroubleindoingsth.干...有困难14.havefunwithsb.和...玩得高兴15.gettogether(withsb.)聚会，联欢16.helpsb.withsth.帮助某人做某事17.help...out帮助某人解决困难18.hearfromsb.收到某人的来信19.join（sb.）insth.加入某人干某事20.lookdownupon/onsb.看不起，轻视21.makefriendswith与……交朋友22.laughatsb.嘲笑某人23.makefunofsb.取笑某人24.playjokeswithsb.和...开玩笑25.persuadesb.todo说服26.givesb.adviceon就…提出建议27.beconcernedabout对...关心28.beanxiousabout为…而担心29.dreamof/aboutdoingsth.渴望做某事30.keepintouchwith与…保持联系PartIIISENTENCES1.Heiswillingtohelpanyonewhoisintrouble.他乐于帮助任何有困难的人。2.Youcanturntoherwheneveryouhavedifficultywithyourlifeandstudies.不管什么时候你生活学习有了困难，都可以找她。3.Hedevotedallhislifetohelpingthepoorandnevercaredabouthimself.他一生竭力帮助穷人，从不关心自己。4.Sheisalwaysthefirsttoarriveattheclassroomandthelasttoleave.她总是第一个到教室，总是最后一个离开。5.Heishighlyspokenofandconsideredasoneofthebestteachersbyhisstudents.他的学生对他评价很高，认为他是最好的老师之一。6.Notonlyishestrictwithusinourstudiesbutalsoconcernedaboutourlifeandhealth.他不仅对我们的学习要求严格，还关心我们的生活和健康。7.Heapplieseverypossiblemeanstomakehislessonslivelyandinteresting.他千方百计地使他的课堂生动有趣。8.Heiseasy-goingandcangetalongwellwithanyone.他脾气随和，能与任何人和睦相处。9.Althoughheisinhisfifties,heisenergeticasifhedidn’tknowwhattirednessis尽管他已五十多岁，但精力充沛，似乎从不知疲倦为何物。10.Heisamanwithgreatdeterminationandnevergivesintodifficulties.他意志坚强，从不向困难低头。11.Whatimpressedusmostwasthathecouldrememberallthestudentsnamesinoneday.最最让我们感叹的是，他能在一天内记住所有学生的名字。12.EverytimeIread“…ifIhadthepowerofsightforthreedays”,IcannothelpbeingmovedbyitsauthorHelenKeller,anordinarybutgreatAmericanwoman.每当我读到“假如给我三天光明”，我禁不住被其作者海伦·,优点英语凯勒感动，她是一个普通而又伟大的美国女性。13.Henevergivesupandstrugglestoleadanactivelifeandsohassetusagoodexample.他他从不放弃，积极生活，因此为我们树立了一个好榜样。14.Everydayafterwork,nomatterhowtiredhewas,healwaysmanagedtosqueezesometimetocontinuelearningEnglish.每天下班后，无论多么累，他都能挤出时间学英语。15.IhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudywithherhelp.在她的帮助下,我的英语学习进步很大。PartIVCOMPOSITION【话题写作1】请用英语写一段文字，介绍你的英语老师王老师。基本信息如下：30多岁；毕业于山东大学；身体强健；生活简朴；爱岗敬业；课堂生动；关爱学生，要求严格。要求：字数100字左右。【范文】OurEnglishteacher,Mr.Wang,isconsideredasoneofourbestteachersandfriends.Heisaroundthirtyyearsold,stronglybuiltandsimplydressed.HehasbeenteachingEnglishinourschoolsincehegraduatedfromtheForeignDepartmentofShandongUniversityin1983.Heissodevotedtoteachingthatheoftenprepareslessonslateintothenight.InordertoimproveourEnglish,hesparesnoefforttomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Thestudentsinourclassallthinkhighlyofhisclasses.Notonlyishestrictwithusbutalsoshowsgreatconcernforus.Heoftenofferstohelpoutthestudentswhohavedifficultywithlifeandstudies,sowearewillingtoaskhimforhelpwhenweareintrouble.Weallloveandrespecthim.【名师点评】从文章布局方面，开头总说学生对王老师的评价，然后分说，最后结尾又简要总结，首尾呼应。在遣词造句方面，使用了Notonly引导的倒装句，还使用了大量的短语，有意使用了since,so...that...,when引导的状语从句和who引导的定语从句。【积累卡片】　好词：1.bedevotedtodoing忠诚于，全心致力于2.sparenoefforttodo不遗余力地干3.thinkhighlyof高度评价　４.showconcernfor对...表示关心　好句：1.Notonlyishestrictwithusbutalsoshowsgreatconcernforus.他对我们不仅严格要求，还极其关心。好处：成功使用倒装句，使语气加重。　2.Heoftenofferstohelpoutthestudentswhohavedifficultywithlifeandstudies,sowearewillingtoaskhimforhelpwhenweareintrouble.　　　　他经常主动帮助那些生活学习有困难的人，因此我们有困难时乐意向他求助。好处：1.成功使用了定语从句和状语从句，以表达严密的逻辑。2.用两种表达法来表达“有困难”，体现出作者词汇丰富。,优点英语【话题写作2】推荐信假设你是新华中学学生李华。某报招聘兼职大中学生英文记者，要求：身体健康；懂英语；有相关经历；有团队精神。请写信推荐你的哥哥李刚。要求：1.词数100～120，短文开头已给出(不计词数)DearSir/Madam,.............Yours,LiHua【范文】DearSir/Madam,   IamastudentstudyinginXinhuaMiddleSchool.I'mgladtolearnthatyouarehuntingforafewpart-timeEnglishreporters.SoIamwritingtorecommendmybrotherLiGang,whois19yearsoldandstudyinginShandongUniversity.   Ithinkheisfitforit.First，heisfondofsportsandingoodhealth.Second,hereadsalotandhasawiderangeofknowledge.Third,Englishisoneofhisfavoritesubjectsandheespeciallydoeswellinbothspeakingandwriting.HeevenwonthefirstplaceinacollegeEnglishspeechcontest.Themostimportantofall,heonceworkedasapart-timereporterforourschoolbroadcastingstationandcoveredmanystories.Heeveninterviewedsomefamouspeople.Besides,heisoutgoingandeasytogetalongwithandenjoysworkingtogetherwithothers.SoI'msurehecanofferthebestserviceifheisluckyenoughtogettheposition.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.                                                   Yoursfaithfully,                                                       LiHua【名师点评】本文写作特点是：1、文章布局方面，开头简明扼要地写出写信的目的；书信主体部分使用了主题句和过渡词，相关信息出现在同一个句群中，使文章层次分明。２、在遣词造句方面，虽然以简单句为主，但使用了大量的短语，使语言表达更地道，避免汉式英语。【积累卡片】好词：1.用ingoodhealth来代替healthy;2.用haveawiderangeofknowledge来代替beknowledgeable;3.过渡词Themostimportantofall就比Finally、Lastly更有递进的层次感，此处还可用句型Whatisthemostimportantisthat....，这样用上复合句会更好。当然，此处还可用Lastbutnottheleast。４.huntfor寻找　5.easytogetalongwith容易相处好句：1.First，heisfondofsportsandingoodhealth.Second,hereadsalotandhasawiderangeofknowledge.　首先，他喜欢体育，身体健康。其次，他读书多，知识面广。好处：本处虽然使用了两个简单句，用两个and表达因果关系，语言简练。学生习作中的常见问题，往往是句式过于简单或太单一。比如：Iam17yearsold.Iamanhighschoolstudent.Iamhealthy.比较：Iamahighschoolstudentof17yearsold,ingoodhealth.,优点英语另如：Ilikesports.IlikeEnglish.IcanspeakgoodEnglish.Iliketohelppeople.比较：Ilikesportsandknowgamerulesverywell.IamfondofEnglishandevenwon……MyspokenisthebestinmyclassandmyfriendssayIspeakaswellasEnglishnativespeakers.2.Besides,heisoutgoingandeasytogetalongwithandenjoysworkingtogetherwithothers.另外，他性格开朗，容易相处，喜欢与人合作。好处：easytogetalongwith　　【话题写作3】假若下周五是母亲节，某英语刊物正在进行“我的母亲”的征文活动。请以“我的母亲”为题，写一篇120词左右的短文,　介绍你母亲勤劳善良、甘心奉献、重视教育的优良品质。【范文】Mymotherisavillagewoman，whoisinherforties.Likeallothermothers,sheisresponsibleanddevoteseverypossibleefforttoourfamily.Shetreatsmyfatherkindlyandcaresforherchildrenwhole-heartedly.Althoughshehadverylittleschooleducation，sheknowsthatknowledgeisofgreatimportance.Shemakesfulluseofhersparetimetoreadbooksandnewspapers.Sheknowsalot,soIconsultherwheneverIhaveanydifficultyinmylifeandlessons.SheisconcernedaboutmystudiesandoftenasksmehowIgetalongwithmystudiesandencouragesmetostudyhard.Shetriestodoeverythingshecanforme，sothatIcanspendmoretimeonmystudy.Suchismymother，akind，devotedandhard-workingwoman.I'llrespectandloveherforever.【名师点评】　　本文特点：在文章布局方面，逻辑清晰，一段写母亲的奉献精神，二段写母亲重视自身和孩子的教育，最后简要总结。在遣词造句方面，使用了大量定语、状语和宾语从句，用较少的文字表达了丰富的思想。【积累卡片】好词：１.devoteeverypossibleeffortto倾心奉献　２.用beofimportance来代替important,３.makefulluseof充分利用　４.consult请教好句：1.SheisconcernedaboutmystudiesandoftenasksmehowIgetalongwithmystudiesandencouragesmetostudyhard.她关心我的学习，经常询问我的学习情况，并鼓励我努力学习。好处：(1).how引导的宾语从句，(2).getalongwith进展　　　2.Shetriestodoeverythingshecanforme，sothatIcanspendmoretimeonmystudy.　　她力所能及为我服务，因此我能更多学习。好处：(1).shecan(do)forme是一个定语从句；(2).sothat结果从句。