高中英语2025届高考读后续写素材（词汇 句式 范文 语料）

高考英语读后续写素材一、词汇1.情绪和细节描写：哭：howling(嚎哭)，sob,weep,burstintotears,burstoutcrying.(one'seyes)brimwith/befilledwithtears怕：horror,frightened,scared,speechless,in(a)panic,inacoldsweat,befilledwithterror,rootedtothespot,freeze,one'skneesfeelweak,(hands)sweat高兴、激动：（动词）dance,jump/leapwithjoy,feelasurgeofjoy/excitement,whistle,overcomewithhappiness/delight/joy/excitement,(one'seyes)twinkle,(one'sheart)beat/poundwildly;(形容词）delighted,overjoyed,excited,thrilled,wildwithjoy伤心、痛苦:feelasurgeofsadness,(sadness)surgewithinsb.,one'sheartache,overcomewithsadness生气、愤怒：felt/getangry/furious,feelasurgeofanger/rage/fury,eyesblaze,stormoutof/into/off,storm/sayangrily,sth.makessb.'sbloodboil,sth.makessb.extremelyangry,claspone'sfists/teeth,sb.'sbloodisup2.转折：个人努力或借助外界鼓起勇气：pluckup/take/gather/summonupone'scourage毫不犹豫：withouteventhinking,withoutdelay,withouthesitation,withoutasecondthought3.转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰似乎：asif,seemingly,appear,seem欣慰：breathasighofrelief,sighwithrelief,toone'srelief4.失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题:徒劳:invain,nouse,withoutsuccess茫然:ataloss,atsea,blankly,belostinafog5.想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）occurto,hit,strike,flashintoone'smind,crowdinone'smind,dawnon6.结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折:过了一段时间notlong,shortlyafterwards,beforelong,foraninstant/moment令人惊讶的是toone'ssurprise,strangelyenough8.总结：点题，呼应前文realize,echo,linger,whisperinone'smind,downdeepinone'sheart二、句式哭：1.Alumpcametohisthroat.2.Hereyeswereredfromcrying.3.Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.4.Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.害怕：6,1.Shewastoofrightenedtotellherfamilywhathadhappened.2.Hisheartwaspounding,asifhewerefrightened.3.Lizawassofrightenedthatshecouldn'tmakeasound.4.Ibowedmyheadtimidlyanddarednotlookatmyfather'scloudyface.5.Mybrainisblank.Ijustwanttoleavethishorribleplace.高兴、激动：1.Whensheknew...shefeltexcited/thrilled.2.Whensheknew...hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.3.Whensheknew...herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.4.Whensheknew...awildexcitementtookholdofher.5.Knowing...shefeltasurgeofexcitement.伤心、痛苦：1.Asadnesscameoverher.2.Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.3.Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.4.Feelingasurgeofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.5.Sadnesssurgingwithinher,sheburstintotears.生气、愤怒：1.Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.2.Hefeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.3.Boilingwithrage,heshookhisfistatme.4.Filledwithfury,shewasunabletoutterasingleword.★转折：个人努力或借助外界鼓起勇气：1.Hesummoneduphiscourageandlodgedaprotestwithhisfather.2.Ifinallypluckedupthecouragetoaskherfor..毫不犹豫：1.Shecouldhardlywaitto...2.Hardlythinking/Withouteventhinking,heranto...★转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰1.Itseemedasif/thatsomeonewascomingtosaveus.2.Oftentimesourtearsofremorserevealaglimmerofhope.3.Awaveofrelieffloodedthroughme...4.Awaveofreliefwashedoverhim...1.ltsuddlyoccur1★失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题1.Butbadluckforme,Ifailedinmyattempttopersuadeher.2.Sheclosedhereyestightlyinavainattempttoholdbackthetears.3.Alloureffortswereinvain.4.Shekeptpacing,wonderingwhattodonext.5.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shedidn'tknowwhattodonext.6.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shewasunsureofwhattodonext.7.Shewasatalosswhattodo.8.Hewasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.★想法：突然有了一个想法1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtohimthat...2.IthitmethatIhadachoice.3.Athoughtstruckherthat...6,4.Itdawnedthat...5.Anideaoccurred/cametomethat6.Aludicrousthought/ideaflashed/camethroughHarry'smind.★结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折1.Itdidn'ttakelongbefore...2.Ittooksometimebefore...3.Tomysurpriseenough,itturnedoutthat...★总结：点题，呼应前文直到·······意识到倒装句：Notuntil+时间状语＋didsb.realize/noticethat+从句强调句：Itwasonly+时间状语＋thatsb.realizedthat+从句还记得某人的话：1.One'swordsechoed/rangoutinone'sears.2.One'swords/voice/lingered/whisperedinone'smind/head3.One'sheadwasstillfullof...经历与教训1.Whata/anvaluable/useful/great/painfullessonshetaughtme/Ilearnedfromher!2.Whata/anenjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/valuableexperienceIhad!3.Downdeepinmyheart,itwasaninterestingexperienceIhadeverhad.三、范文阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Pumpkin(南瓜）carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(软木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I’mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican’tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；6,3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Paragraph2ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Myheadspandizzilyasiftheworldswirled.Atmywit'send,Ifeltastaboffear.(“我”的情绪：慌张、无奈）“Don'tpanic!Papa,Papa,weneedyourhelp,"Jasonexclaimed.Intimeovercamemyfather.(借助外界帮助）HeembracedmyneckandpulledbackwithstrengthwhileJasonpinned/presseddownthepumpkin.（一系列动作描写）Itdidn'twork,though.(问题未解决）“Whynottearthepumpkindirectly?"suddenlyrangoutmother'svoice.(新想法)Inasplitsecond,acreakbrokeoutoverhead,followedbyarayoflight,whichIseeminglyhadn'tseenforages.(问题得到解决）ButwhatdidIsee?Mymotherwasfilmingalltheway.(衔接句）ThatvideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween.Tomysurprise,soonmyvideowasfollowedbyaseaoflikes,mymailboxfloodedwithsimilarstories.(衔接句）Mybigrednoseandmysorechinbecamenetizens'favoritetopic.AlittleembarrassedasIwas,awaveofwarmthwelledupinside.(细节描写之我的心情）Thenagoodideaflashedacrossmymind.(想法）“Isn'titagoodideatosharestoriesonlinetochoosethefunniest?"ItoldJason,jumpingwithjoy.（做法，为结局做铺垫）“Amazing!Let'scallitPumpkin'sCompetition."Jasongiggled.(Jason的反应，照应开头）四、语料【情绪刻画】○高兴Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起喜悦。这个表达并不难记。well做名词时有“水井”的意思，up是“向上”的意思，想象一下，水井向上，不就是涌起吗~Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。以后想写shesmile时，就可以想到这个句子。Wear在此处表示显出，呈现。○恐惧Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。creepupon悄悄爬上，袭来可以自由发挥，把fear替换成其他词，如：Ifeltasmilecreepuponmyface.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.一见到这只凶野的狼，我就吓呆了，丝毫不敢动弹。freeze-froze-frozen冻结too...to...太……而不能……○愤怒Hisangerboiledover.他的愤怒爆发了。相当妙的比喻，煮沸了。除了形容情绪愤怒，boilover还可以比喻事态的恶化，如：Racialtensionfinallyboiledoverintheinnercityriots.种族间的紧张状态最终演化成了市中心贫困区的暴乱。Hewasfumingwithrage.他气得大发雷霆。Fumingwithrage还可做伴随状语，使描写更加生动，如：Fumingwithrage,Hungsaid,"HowdoyouknowIbullyher?"○绝望Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。6,借酒消愁drownsadnessinwineTheywereimmersedinsorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。beimmersedin沉浸于【动作描写】Hetookafirmgripofmyarmandmarchedmetowardsthedoor.他紧紧抓着我的手臂，快步往门口走去。takeafirmgrip/hold/graspof...紧抓;紧握把动词表达变成动名词词组，会更生动也更好凑字数（划掉）。Ipluckedupthecouragetogooutbymyself.我鼓起勇气一个人走了出去。pluckupthecouragetodosth鼓起勇气做...Aloudscreamshatteredthesilence.一声高声尖叫打破了沉寂。shatterthesilence=breakthesilence【环境描写】Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。ArestaurantoverlookingastarlitnightsprangtomyimaginationlikesomethingoutofanilluminatedmanuscriptfromthelateMiddleAges.一个俯瞰星光灿烂的夜晚的餐馆，就像中世纪晚期一份被照亮的手稿中的某种东西一样，跃然于我的脑海。Onepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某处，潺潺的水声在山谷中奏响。【冲突制造】千钧一发型Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim."Getintothecar."PaulshoutedatMac.MacjumpedoffthebikeandslidintothecarwithoutdelayasthewolfwasjusttwostepsawayandwasabouttotearMacintopieces.Whatanarrowescape!翻译：汽车突然停在他前面。“上车吧。”保罗对麦克大喊道。麦克从自行车上跳下来，立刻滑进了车，因为狼离他只有两步远，正要把麦克撕成碎片。真是好险！思路：主人公即将遇险→出现了求生的希望→险中求生主人公必须克服某障碍Butbeforewejumpedoffthehorses,wefoundthatwehadbeenoffthebeatentrackandgotlost.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.翻译：但在我们跳下马之前，我们发现我们已经偏离了常规轨道，迷路了。我们不知道自己在哪里，天都黑了。我筋疲力尽，饿了，不知道能不能找到回去的路。思路：小兔突现→马儿受惊→草原迷路→天色渐黑→又累又饿→心理恐慌人物描写Markisastudiousboywholovesreading.HisclassmatesoftenteasehimforbeingtoohardworkingandtheycallhimMr.Smart.Oneafternoon,whilestudyingathome…马克是个好学的男孩，他喜欢读书。他的同学经常取笑他太努力了，他们叫他聪明先生。一天下午，在家里学习的时候...情感描写ThemomentshesawhowshedidforherSciencetest,tearsstartedwellingupinTina’seyesandfallingdownhercheeks.当她看到她在科学测试中的表现时，蒂娜的眼泪开始涌出，从她的脸颊滑落下来。背景描写6,Iclosedmyeyestoenjoythegentlebreezeandthesoundsoftheclashingwaves.Gentlyopeningmyeyes,Isawmyparentstakingarelaxingstrollalongthebeach.我闭上眼睛欣赏微风和海浪的声音。轻轻地睁开眼睛，我看到我的父母在海滩上悠闲地散步。6