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、Units7-8单元主题写作(满分范文20篇)一、书面表达1.“骑行”这一低碳环保的休闲运动,受到越来越多人的青睐。“骑行”既是一种运动,又能保护环境减少污染。请以“EnjoyingCycling”为题,写一篇英文短文,并介绍骑行的好处和注意事项。注意:1.词数100个左右;2.短文须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。EnjoyingCycling_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)学校校报中的“我是环保小卫士”板块正在征集稿件,请你从以下主题中选择一项,谈一谈保护这项资源的重要性以及如何保护。ProtectingtreesSavingwaterSavingelectricity 、________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.Use“Greenuser,greenplanet”asatitletowriteashortpassageinatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.(根据所给情景,以“绿色用户,绿色地球”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。)    Youaregoingtodesignaposterabout“SavingEnergy”inyourneighbourhood.Hereistheoutlineforyou:1.HowdoweuseenergyproperlytomaketheEarthlesspolluted?2.Whatkindofenergyuserdoyouthinkisgreen?3.Canyoupromisetobeagreenenergyuser?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.假设你们学校正在举行“保护地球”英文征文活动,请以“SavetheEarth!”为题写篇短文投稿。内容要点包括:现状1.地球变脏、变暖;2.自然灾害多发;3.动植物处于危险之中;原因1.砍伐森林;2.杀戮动物;3.……(请至少列出一个)建议保护地球,从我做起:1.不吃野生动物;2.植树造林;3.……(请至少列出一个)要求:1.注意文章条理,语句通顺:2.词数80词左右,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Ourearthwashealthyandbeautifulinthepast. 、However,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.我们是地球的主人,地球是我们的家。学校英语社团将举行一次征文大赛,主题为“OneEarth,onehome”,请你根据以下内容,写一篇英语短文,内容提示如下:Oneearth,onehome现状1.morenaturaldisasters;2.wildanimalsindanger;3....原因1.badweather;2.cutdowntoomanytrees;3....措施1....2....要求:1.短文应包括表格内的所有要点,省略号处作适当发挥;2.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;3.词数85词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;4.不得提及真实的姓名、校名和地名等。TheEarthisourhome,andweonlyhaveoneEarth.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 、____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.假设你叫李华,请用英语给你的朋友Sandy写一封电子邮件,介绍你们学校开展的一次慈善活动的具体情况。内容提示:1.时间:上星期日上午9点;2.地点:学校操场;3.举办单位:校学生会;4.参加对象:全体师生、当地一些企业;5.活动目的及结果:……6.个人感想及希望:……注意事项:1.邮件须包括所给内容提示,但不要逐条翻译;2.第5、6要点的内容需各用2—3句话展开合理想象;作适当发挥;3.词数80左右,邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数。DearSandy,Howareyou?Ihaven’theardfromyouforalongtime.I’mwritingtotellyouaboutacharityactivity.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 、________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua7.观鸟俱乐部正在招募志愿者,假如你是王彬,请你根据下表信息用英语写一封申请信给俱乐部主席Mr.Green,希望加入该俱乐部,为保护野生鸟类作出贡献。学校No.2MiddleSchool年级八年级特长乐于助人、成绩优秀爱好足球和旅游;从小喜爱鸟类申请原因1.大多数人没有认识到保护鸟类的重要性。2.砍树、造屋导致鸟类生存空间减小,数量越来越少。申请理由……联系方式0511-87268888,wangbin@sina.com要求:1.词数:不少于90词,信的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数;2.信的内容必须包括以上要点,申请理由用2-3句适当发挥;3.段落分明,语意通顺,书写规范;4.不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名等信息。DearMr.Green,IreadyouradvertisementonlineandIwouldliketojointheBirdwatchingClub. 、________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourssincerely,WangBin8.假设你是李明,本周班会上,你将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动。内容提示:1.星期天早上8:30在校门口集合,乘公共汽车前往;2.打扫卫生,整理房间;3.唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天,给老人们带去欢乐;4.给老人们赠送班级礼物;5.活动很有意义,希望大家积极参与。注意事项:60~80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。Fellowstudents,wewillpayavisittotheOldPeople’sHomethisSunday.————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————9.假如你是LiHua,曾在你校交流学习的Daniel给你写了一封邮件。请你根据Daniel的邮件内容及下面所给的关于ProjectHope的相关信息,用英语回一封电子邮件。DearLiHua,I’msorryfornotreplyingtoyouremail.I’mbusywithmyvolunteerworkforUNICEF.IrememberthatyouareaProjectHopevolunteer.Wouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutit?AndwhathaveyoudoneforProjectHope?Also,I’dliketoknowyourfeelingsaboutyourvolunteerwork. 、I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes,DanielProjectHopeTimesetupin1989Purposehelpchildreninpoorareas...注意:1.内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。2.词数80左右(已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数)。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。DearDaniel,I’mgladtohearfromyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua10.假定你是来自八年级一班的学生李华,上周日你班同学到希望儿童福利院(theHopeChildren’sHome)开展志愿者活动。请你为校英语报写一篇约100词报道,内容包括:1.时间、地点、参与者;2.具体活动内容:捐赠物品、举行派对、教孩子们读书……(至少三项);3.简要评论活动的意义(可适当增加细节,使行文连贯)。VolunteeringintheHopeChildren’sHome 、______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11.作为社区的志愿者(communityvolunteers),你和你的同学4月2日去了阳光敬老院(SunshineNursingHome)开展了志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等),假设你是学校英语报的记者,请写一篇新闻报道:1.当天活动的时间、地点、人物、活动;2.老人们的反应或感受;3.你的感受。要求:1.所写内容必须包括所提供的信息。2.字数80词左右。3.不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。Ascommunityvolunteer,myclassmatesandIwentto________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12.暑假将至,你校学生会拟前往黄山市敬老院组织开展暑期志愿服务活动。作为学生会的一员,请你根据下列表格中的信息写一份倡议书号召同学们积极参加此次活动。活动内容:1.陪老人散步、聊天。2.给老人表演节目。3.……报名条件:1.有耐心。2.会照顾人。3.…… 、报名方式:发送邮件至邮箱:schoollovehouse@qq.com要求:1.内容完整,适当增加细节,语言准确,行文连贯、通顺;2.书写规范,卷面整洁。3.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;4.文中不得提及自己真实姓名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇:耐心的patientDearall,TheSummerholidayiscoming.Inordertomakeitmoremeaningful,theSchoolStudents’UnionisgoingtohaveavoluntaryactivityinHuangshanOldPeople’sHome.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13.小红、小明和小刚是第一中学的三个学生。他们根据自己的兴趣和爱好,每周花几个小时的时间参加不同的志愿者工作。根据以下要点,以“BeingaVolunteerisGreat”为题,写出他们的志愿者工作及他们的感受。80词左右,短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数。1.小红到小学帮助小学生阅读;2.小明到动物医院照料动物;3.小刚到医院给病人演唱歌曲;4.参加志愿者的感受等。BeingavolunteerisgreatNo.1MiddleSchoolisproudofthreestudents.Theyare 、______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14.近年来,我区一直在推广“书香江都,让阅读走进生活”活动,这一活动的实施使市民的生活发生了很大的变化。假如你是李华,请用英文写一封信,向你的美国笔友Tom介绍近年来江都打造“书香城市”的变化与影响。请根据下面的信息完成这封信。变化过去:借书地方少,书籍种类缺乏……现在:社区有阅览室供居民借阅书籍;江都新图书馆开放,有多种书籍……影响越来越多的人认识到阅读的重要性:使人愉悦,益于学习;你的感受……(至少两点)注意事项:1.要求语句通顺、意思连贯,可根据自己的认识,适当增加细节;2.词数在90个左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.信中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。DearTom,I’mLiHua.TheactivityofLettingReadingintoLifehasstartedinJiangdu.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyoucanenjoytheworldofbookswithmetogether.Yours,LiHua15.2022年第31届世界大学生夏季运动会将在成都举行,现在在全国范围内征集志愿者。假如你是李华,请给组委会负责人Mr.Wang写封信申请成为一名志愿者。内容包括: 、个人基本情况:李华;兴文第二中学学生;喜欢听英语歌曲和运动。你的优势:英语说得很好;为人友好,性格外向;曾经去过很多国家,了解一些西方文化。表达期望:……要求:1.可适当发挥:2.80词左右。参考词汇:the31stWorldUniversitySummerGames第31届世界大学生夏季运动会;advantage优点DearMr.Wang,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua16.为配合我市近年来开展的“创建文明城市(buildacivilizedcity)”活动,学校举办了以“从我做起,让城市更美好”为主题的征文活动,并对学校100名学生进行了随机抽样调查。现在请你根据提示内容与图表,用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文积极参与活动。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。Doyouoftendothevolunteerworktohelpthecity?提示:1.Whatdoesthechart(表格)tellus?2.Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentinourcity?Itisknownthattheenvironmentisimportanttohumans.Theresultoftheschoolsurveyshowsthat 、___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17.学校英语社团将举办以“SavetheEarth”为主题的英语演讲比赛,旨在呼吁学生关注自然,保护环境。请你根据图表中的要点,写一篇英语演讲稿。注意:1.内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺。2.词数不少于80词(已给出的演讲稿开头不计入总词数)。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。ProblemsTheair…Thewater…Causescutdowntrees…AdviceThegovernment……Hello,everyone!TodayIwillgiveaspeechhereandthetitleis“SavetheEarth”._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________18.为倡导绿色环保新时尚,学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Gogreenatschool”为题,根据提示内容写一份英语演讲稿,号召全体同学行动起来,共建美好校园。不少于60个单词(已给的开头和结尾不计入总词数)。目标developagreenlifestyle 、采取行动(action)节省资源(saveresources)1.节省纸张:reusethetextbooks;usebothsidesofthepaper2.节约用水:……3.节省木材:notuseone-off(一次性的)papercupsorchopsticks减少污染(reducepollution)1.保护树木花草2.尽可能步行,骑车或乘坐公交车上学提出希望(hopes)……GoGreenatSchoolHi,guys,Isn’titpleasanttostudyinanenvironmentallyfriendlyschool?Todevelopagreenlifestyle,westudentscangogreenatschoolinsmallerways.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall,thanksforyourlistening!19.Writeapassagewithatleast60wordsonthetopicof  “Waterislife.”(就“水是生命”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文)Questionsforreference:Ql:Whyiswatersoimportanttoourdailylife?Q2:Whatchallenges(挑战)arewegoingtohaveinthefuture?Q3:Howcanweprotectwaterfrombeingpolluted?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20.假设不久前8名无锡青年骑车沿大运河(theGrandCanal)开展了“慈善行”活动。请以“Acharitybicycletrip”为题,根据以下内容提示为某中学生英文报写一篇报道。 、1.目的:为希望工程筹款;2.时间:5月20日离开无锡,6月5日到达北京;3.简况:虽然车程漫长,路途艰辛,但是他们一路上精神高昂,在很多人的帮助下,他们筹得善款5万多元;4.其他:他们在活动后的感受。注意事项:1.报道必须包括所给内容提示,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;2.展开合理想象,作适当发挥;3.词数80左右,报道的开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。AcharitybicycletripNotlongago,eightyoungpeoplefromWuximadeacharitybicycletripalongtheGrandCanal.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案:1.例文:EnjoyingCyclingNowadayscyclingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularwithyoungpeople.It’sausefulsportanditbringsusalotofbenefits.Firstly,cyclingisgoodexercisebecauseitcanhelpuskeephealthy.Besides,it’salsogoodfortheenvironmentbecauseitcangreatlyreduceairpollution.What’smore,it’sveryeasytoparkandhelpstoavoidtrafficjam.However,weshouldbecarefulwhenriding.Weshouldn’tridetoofast.Remembertowearhelmetswhenriding.It’simportantforustoobeythetrafficrules.Inaword,wecanbenefitalotfromcycling.Let’sgetonbicyclesandenjoycycling!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中骑行的好处和注意事项,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,直入骑行这一主题,并引出下文的好处;第二步,介绍骑行的优点;第三步,介绍骑行的注意事项;第四步,总结全文,呼应主题。[亮点词汇]①becomepopularwith受到……的欢迎②keephealthy保持健康③avoidtrafficjam避免交通堵塞④obeythetrafficrules遵守交通规则⑤benefit...from...从……中受益[高分句型]①Nowadayscyclingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularwithyoungpeople.(比较级句型)②Firstly,cyclingisgoodexercisebecauseitcanhelpuskeephealthy(because引导原因状语从句)2.例文: It’sveryimportantforustoprotecttreesbecausetreesareourfriends.Theycooltheairaswellascleanit.Theyalsoaddbeautytocities.Withouttrees,therewouldbealotofproblems.Soweshouldprotecttreesfromnowonbyplantingmoretreesandtakingcareofthem.Let’stakeactiontoprotecttreestogether.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇小作文,为说明文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:题目要求选择主题写短文,要先选择三个主题中的一个,围绕这一主题来谈谈保护这项资源的重要性及如何保护。[写作步骤]第一步,选定“保护树木”这一主题;第二步,谈谈保护树木的重要性;第三步,谈谈如何保护树木。[亮点词汇]①aswellas也,还②add...to...给……增加……③fromnowon从现在开始④takeaction采取行动[高分句型]①It’sveryimportantforustoprotecttreesbecausetreesareourfriends.(it固定句式;because引导原因状语从句)②Let’stakeactiontoprotecttreestogether.(祈使句)3.例文:Greenuser,greenplanetWiththedevelopmentofthetechnology,environmentalproblemshavebecomemoreandmoreserious.Inaddition,theshortageofnaturalresourcesisveryserious,too.    InordertomaketheEarthlesspollutedandsaveenergy,weshouldusegreenenergy.Inmyopinion,greenenergyisrenewableenergysuchassolarenergy,windenergy,andtideenergy.Wecanreusethiskindofenergyanditalsocauseslesspollution.Itcanhelpkeepourenvironmentclean.Ipromisetobeagreenenergyuserbecauseit’sgoodfortheenvironment.I’lltrymybesttosaveenergyandpreventpollution.【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇说明文;②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;③提示:题目要求根据提示,以“绿色用户,绿色地球”为题,谈一下如何使用绿色能源来保护我们的地球。写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。[写作步聚]第一步,介绍我们面临的环境污染问题;第二步,根据所给要点,具体介绍使用哪些绿色能源来减少对地球的污染;第三步,最后表达自己成为绿色能源使用者的决心。[亮点词汇]①moreandmoreserious越来越严重②Inaddition此外③naturalresources自然资源[高分句型]①InordertomaketheEarthlesspollutedandsaveenergy,weshouldusegreenenergy.(不定式作目的状语)②Ipromisetobeagreenenergyuserbecauseit’sgoodfortheenvironment.(because引导的原因状语从句)4.例文SavetheEarth    Ourearthwashealthyandbeautifulinthepast.However,nowit’sgettingdirtierandwarmer.Naturaldisastershappenmoreoftenthanbefore.Animalsandplantsareindanger.Whydoesallthishappen?First,therearemoreandmorepeopleontheearth.Second,peoplekeepcuttingdownforestsandkillinganimals.Whatcanwedotohelptheearth?Ithinkeverybodycandosomethingtohelpsavetheearth.Forexample,weshouldn’teatwildanimals.Weshouldplantmoretrees.Also,weshouldencouragepeoplearoundustodothesame.Ihopeourearthwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.    【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是话题作文;②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏图表中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述,适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我们的地球之前健康美丽,但现在变脏变暖”来引出重点介绍的内容。第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的几个要点——地球现状、变化原因及建议等均要一一阐述。 第三步:书写结语。表达“我希望我们的地球越来越美丽”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①beindanger处于危险中②keepcuttingdownforests一直砍伐树木③moreandmorebeautiful越来越美丽[高分句型]①However,nowit’sgettingdirtierandwarmer.(比较级+and+比较级的用法)②Ihopeourearthwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.(宾语从句)5.Onepossibleversion:OneEarth,onehomeTheEarthisourhome,andweonlyhaveoneEarth.However,itfacesseriousproblems.Therearemoreandmorenaturaldisastersnow.Manykindsofanimalsareindanger.What’smore,therearemoreandmorepeople,over8billionintheworld.Badweatherleadstoterribledisasters.Peoplecutdowntoomanytreesandhuntorkillanimalsformanypersonalreasons,whichmakeallthethingsworse.It’stimeforeveryoneofustotakeactiontoprotecttheearthandprotectourselves.Governmentscanmakelawstopreventpeoplefromcuttingdowntreesorkillinganimals,especiallythoseindangerinthewild.Peopleshouldn’tbuyanythingsmadefromanimals.Asstudents,wecanalsodoalottohelp,suchasplantingtrees,makingposterstoaskmorepeopletoprotecttheearth.Let’sworktogetherandmakeourhomebecomemoreandmorebeautiful.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍地球现状;第二步,阐明造成现状的原因;第三步,给出解决措施。[亮点词汇]①naturaldisasters自然灾害 ②indanger处于危险之中③cutdown砍倒(树木)④takeaction采取行动⑤preventsb.fromdoingsth.阻止某人做某事[高分句型]Peoplecutdowntoomanytreesandhuntorkillanimalsformanypersonalreasons,whichmakeallthethingsworse.(which引导非限制性定语从句)6.Onepossibleversion:DearSandy,Howareyou?Ihaven’theardfromyouforalongtime.I’mwritingtotellyouaboutacharityactivity.Itwasheldat9a.m.lastSundayontheplayground.ItwasheldbytheStudents’Union.Alltheteachersandstudentsandsomelocalbusinesseswereinvitedtotakepartinit.Duringtheactivityeveryonedonatedmoneyactively.Intheendweraised1,800yuan.Themoneywillbeusedtohelpthosehomelesschildren.Ithinkifeveryonehelpspeopleinneed,theworldwillbefulloflove.Ihopemoreactivitieslikethiswillbeheld.Whatdoyouthinkofouractivity?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou!Yourssincerely,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读。该题目属于应用文——电子邮件的写作,在写作时应承接短文开头,根据汉语提示,介绍我们学校开展的一次慈善活动的具体情况,内容包括:活动的时间、地点、举办单位,参加对象以及活动的结果和个人愿望等。2.写作指导:本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容,时态采用一般过去时为主。在介绍内容时,力求语句通顺,语法正确,保证提示内容完整,条理清晰,行文连贯。7.例文DearMr.Green,IreadyouradvertisementonlineandIwouldliketojointheBirdwatchingClub.IamastudentofGradeEightinNo.2MiddleSchool.Iamwillingtohelpothersinmydailylifeandachievehighgradesatschool.Ilikeplayingfootballandtravelling.IhavebeenfondofbirdssinceIwasalittleboy.Mostpeopledon’trealizetheimportanceofprotectingthebirds.Besides,cuttingdowntreesandbuildingtoomanyhouseswillleadtothereductionoftheirlivingspaceandnumbers.Iwanttotakesomeactionstoarouse people’sawarenesstoprotectthebirdsandtheirlivingspace.Sotheycanhaveabetterlivingenvironment.Mytelephonenumberis0511-87268888andemailaddressiswangbin@sina.com.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourssincerely,WangBin【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇申请信;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表达自己的写信目的;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“学校、年级、特长、爱好、申请原因、申请理由以及联系方式”等方面进行介绍;第三步,表达自己的期待。[亮点词汇]①bewillingtodosth.愿意做某事②befondof喜爱③leadto导致[高分句型]①IhavebeenfondofbirdssinceIwasalittleboy.(since引导的时间状语从句)②Iwanttotakesomeactionstoarousepeople’sawarenesstoprotectthebirdsandtheirlivingspace.(todo不定式表目的)8.例文:Fellowstudents,wewillpayavisittotheOldPeople’sHomethisSunday.We’llhavetomeetattheschoolgateat8:30onSundaymorningandthengotherebybus.Therewewilldosomecleaningandtidytherooms.Afterthatwewillhavemanyactivities,suchassinging,dancing,tellingstoriesandchattingtocheeruptheold.Beforeweleave,we’llgiveourpresentstothem.Ihopeallofuscantakeanactivepart.Throughthemeaningfulactivity,wecanlearntocarefortheold.【详解】1.题干解读:本文主要是根据题干中的提示内容通知同学参加一次敬老院的公益活动,可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导:本文以一般将来时和第一人称为主。第一段主要讲述了这次活动的具体信息,包括时间、地点、交通方式和活动内容;第二段呼吁大家积极参与。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。9.例文DearDaniel,I’mgladtohearfromyou.IdovolunteerforprojectHope.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutit.Firstofall,ProjectHopewasestablishedin1989.Itaimsathelpingchildreninpoorareas.Keeptheminschool,feedthem,clothesthem.Myworkismainlytoselectchildrenfrompoorareasandrecordthem.Inaddition,Isometimesdistributesuppliestothechildren.Ilikethisjobverymuch,becauseIthinkitisveryhappyandmeaningfultohelpthosechildren.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇电子邮件。根据Daniel的邮件内容及所给的关于ProjectHope的相关信息,写一篇邮件回复Daniel。2.写作指导:本文时态使用一般现在时;人称以第一人称为主。写作时首先涵盖要点,针对希望工程的目的可适当发挥,围绕主题内容,不偏题。文章语句确保通顺,无单词语法错误。10.例文VolunteeringintheHopeChildren’sHomeLastSunday,somestudentsfromClassl,Grade8wenttotheHopeChildren’sHomeforvoluntarywork.Whentheyarrived,theygaveawaysomevaluablethingsincludingbooks,toysandclothes.Thentheyheldaparty,playinggames,singinganddancingtogether,whichmadethechildrenfeellesslonely.Latersometaughttheolderhowtoread.Otherstoldstoriestotheyounger.Theyallgotastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhentheysawthelookofjoyonthechildren’sfaces.Volunteeringisreallymeaningful.Notonlydoesitenrichstudents’lifeexperiences,butitalsohelpsthepeopleintrouble.Therefore,whynotconsidervolunteeringinyourfreetime?【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,围绕“上周日的志愿者活动”展开叙述,结合提纲,分别介绍活动的时间、地点、参与者以及活动内容和意义,不能有要点的遗漏。2.写作指导:本文主要使用第三人称来叙述;针对“上周日的志愿活动”,要用一般过去时描述。要求能够准确使用语法以及一定的词汇、短语和句型,清楚连贯地表达思想,保证条理清晰。11.例文:Ascommunityvolunteer,myclassmatesandIwenttoSunshineNursingHomeanddidsomevoluntarywork.Assoonaswearrived,wepresentedflowersandfruitstotheoldmanandstartedworkingimmediately, suchascleaningwindowsandsweepingthefloor.Afterthat,weallsatintheyardandchattedwiththeoldman.Whenweleft,theoldpeoplethankedusforourkindness.Theysaiditwassuchabeautifuldaythattheywouldalwaysrememberit.Wearealsoveryhappy.Whatwedidbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedmyownlife.ByChenJieSchoolNewspaper【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求以学校英语报的记者名义,请写一篇关于去敬老院参加志愿活动的新闻报道,结合提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥。2.写作指导:写作时以第一人称来行文,时态以一般过去时为主,作文可分为三段,第一段介绍当天的活动的时间、地点、人物、活动;第二段叙述老人们的反应或感受;第三段说说自己的感受并进行收尾。要求语言连贯,无语法以及拼写错误。12.例文:Dearall,TheSummerholidayiscoming.Inordertomakeitmoremeaningful,theSchoolStudents’UnionisgoingtohaveavoluntaryactivityinHuangshanOldPeople’sHome.First,youcantalktotheoldaboutsomethinginterestingortakeawalkwiththem.Then,youmaygivethemagreatperformance.Finally,youcandowhateveryoucansuchascleaningthebedroomsorfoldingclothesfortheold.Ibelievetheseactivitieswillnotonlymaketheoldhappybutalsohelpyoulearnalot.Isn’titmeaningful?Ifyouarepatientenoughandknowhowtogetonwithorcareforothers,pleasecomeandjoinus!Youcanemailusatschoollovehouse@qq.com.【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据提示内容写倡议书,号召同学们参加到黄山市敬老院的志愿服务活动,内容需包括活动内容、报名条件、报名方式等。2.写作指导:写作时要以第二人称为主,结合具体语境采用合适的时态。正文可分为四段式:第一段点题;第二段介绍具体活动内容;第三段介绍活动的意义;最后一段介绍报名条件及方式。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。13.Onepossibleversion:BeingavolunteerisgreatNo.1MiddleSchoolisproudofthreestudents.TheyareXiaohong,XiaomingandXiaogang.Everyweektheyworkasvolunteersatdifferentplaces.Xiaohongenjoysreading,soafterclassshespendssometimereadingtogetherwiththestudentsinaprimaryschool.AnimalsareXiaoming’sfavourites,soheoftengoestoananimal hospital.Therehecanlookafterthesickanimals.Xiaoganghassweetvoice,sohespendsmuchofhisfreetimesingingforthepatientsinthehospital.Theyallthinkwhattheyaredoingisright.Howgreatitistobeavolunteer!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,介绍每个人志愿者工作的情况。[写作步骤]第一步,首先介绍第一中学的三个学生让人们骄傲;第二步,具体介绍三个人各自的爱好以及各自做的一些善事;第三步,最后是总结成为一名志愿者是伟大的。[亮点词汇]①beproudof以……感到骄傲②enjoydoingsth喜欢做某事③lookafter照顾[高分句型]①Theyallthinkwhattheyaredoingisright.(what引导的宾语从句)②Howgreatitistobeavolunteer!(how引导的感叹句)14.例文:DearTom,I’mLiHua.TheactivityofLettingReadingintoLifehasstartedinJiangdu.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutthisactivity.Inthepast,thereweren’tmanyplacesforpeopletoborrowbooksfrom.Andthereweren’tmanykindsofbooks.Itwasreallyinconvenient.Butnow,peoplecanborrowbookseasily.TherearereadingroomsinourneighbourhoodsandthenewlibraryinJiangduisopenforeveryone.Manykindsofbookscanbefoundthere.Withthisactivity,moreandmorepeopleknowtheimportanceofreading.Wefindthatreadingmakesushappyanditisbeneficialforourstudy.IlovethisactivitybecauseIcanfindmoreinformationaboutstudyandIcanknowmoreabouttheworldthroughbooks.Atthesametime,Iwon’tspendtoomuchtimeoncomputergamesandphones.Itisreallyhelpfulanduseful.Ihopeyoucanenjoytheworldofbookswithmetogether. Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,格式是书信格式;②时态:时态主要是“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,也要补充自己的两点感受,注意突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图,以“想介绍这个活动”引出下文关于阅读情况的变化;第二步,重点阐述过去和现在变化,注意时态的改变,以及表明活动对人们的影响;第三步,抒发自己的感受,表达自己对这个活动的喜爱之情。[亮点词汇]①wouldliketo愿意②theimportanceof……的重要性③isbeneficialfor对……有好处④atthesametime与此同时[高分句型]①TherearereadingroomsinourneighbourhoodsandthenewlibraryinJiangduisopenforeveryone.(therebe句型)②Wefindthatreadingmakesushappyanditisbeneficialforourstudy.(that引导的宾语从句)③IlovethisactivitybecauseIcanfindmoreinformationaboutstudyandIcanknowmoreabouttheworldthroughbooks.(because引导的原因状语从句)15.范文:DearMr.Wang,MynameisLiHua,astudentofXingwenNo.2MiddleSchool.Iwanttobeavolunteerofthe31stWorldUniversitySummerGames.IlikelisteningtoEnglishsongsandplayingsports.IspeakEnglishverywell.IamsofriendlyandoutgoingthatIhavealotoffriends.Ihaveeverbeentomanycountries.SoIlearnedalotaboutsomewesterncultures.Iwishalltheplayerswillbesuccessful.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一封申请书,属于书信作文写作; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:文章要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,承接短文开头,引出话题;第二步,先介绍个人基本信息,及说明写信目的;再根据要点提示介绍个人爱好、个人优势等,可列举具体的事例;第三步,表达期望并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①friendlyandoutgoing为人友好,性格外向②lookforwardto期待……[高分句型]①IamsofriendlyandoutgoingthatIhavealotoffriends.(so…that引导结果状语从句)16.例文Itisknownthattheenvironmentisimportanttohumans.Theresultoftheschoolsurveyshowsthatfifty-twostudentsalwaysdothevolunteerworktomakethecitycleaner.Thirty-sixstudentssometimesworkasvolunteers.It’sapitytofindthattwelvepercentofthestudentsseldomdovolunteerwork.Thelivingenvironmentisgettingworse.Soweshouldtakepartintheactivitiestoprotectthecitywelivein.Tobuildacivilizedcity,wehavesomanythingstodo.First,weshouldplantmoretrees.Asweknow,treescanprotecttheenvironmentandbegoodforourhealth.Next,wecansavewaterandreuseit.Finally,wemustn’tdroprubbisheverywhere.Ibelieveourcitywillhaveagreatenvironmentinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]  ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;  ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;  ③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,描述完整图表信息并回答完整提示中的问题,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。  [写作步骤]  第一步,承接开头,描述图表内容;  第二步,表达自己对本市环境的看法;  第三步,介绍保护环境的一些方法。  [亮点词汇]  ①takepartin参加 ②Asweknow众所周知③begoodfor对……有好处[高分句型]  ①It’sapitytofindthattwelvepercentofthestudentsseldomdovolunteerwork(that引导的宾语从句)②Soweshouldtakepartintheactivitiestoprotectthecitywelivein.(动词不定式表目的;定语从句)17.Hello,everyone!TodayIwillgiveaspeechhereandthetitleis“SavetheEarth”.Nowtheairisgettingworseandtheriverisgettingdirtieranddirtierbecausepeoplecutdowntheforesttoomuchanddumprubbisheverywhere.Ithinkit’stimeforustotakeactiontoprotecttheearth.Firstofall,Ithinkthegovernmentshouldmakelawsagainstdeforestationandweshouldsortourgarbage.Atthesametimeweshouldplantmoretreestoprotecttheearth.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步,总体阐述地球正在面临的问题以及背后的原因;第二步,介绍保护地球的相关建议。[亮点词汇]①giveaspeech发表演讲②takeactiontodosth采取措施做某事[高分句型]Nowtheairisgettingworseandtheriverisgettingdirtieranddirtierbecausepeoplecutdowntheforesttoomuchanddumprubbisheverywhere.(原因状语从句)18.例文GoGreenatSchoolHi,guys,Isn’titpleasanttostudyinanenvironmentallyfriendlyschool?Todevelopagreenlifestyle,westudentscangogreenatschoolinsmallerways.Protectingtheenvironmentiscrucial,anditstartswithus. Ononehand,weshouldsaveresources.First,weshouldsavepaper.Wecanreusethetextbooksandusebothsidesofthepaper.Second,weshouldsavewater.Wecantakeshortshowersandreusewater.Third,wearesupposedtosaveelectricity.Wecanturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheclassroom.Finally,don’tordermorefoodthanweneed.Trynottouseone-offpapercupsorchopstickstosavewood.Ontheotherhand,weshouldreducepollution.Wecantakecareofthetreesandflowers.Walkorridetoandfromschoolifpossible.Ifyourhomeisfarfromschool,you’dbettertakeabus.WeshoulddevelopagreenlifestyleandwecanalsodomoreexerciseandwatchlessTV.Ifwetakegoodcareofourearthtoday,itwillbemorebeautifultomorrow.Tosumup,goinggreenisn’tjustaone-timething;it’salifestyle.Ittakessmall,consistentactionstomakeabigdifference.Let’sworktogethertobuildasustainablecampusnowforourfuture.That’sall,thanksforyourlistening!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一篇演讲稿;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:文章应该包括表格中所列要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。[写作步骤]第一步,绿色环保很重要,从我做起,从而引出话题;第二步,介绍节省资源方面的做法;第三步,介绍减少污染方面的做法;第四步,提出希望,呼吁大家行动起来。[亮点词汇]①tosumup总而言之②makeabigdifference有很大影响③besupposedtodosth.应该做某事④turnoff关闭[高分句型]①Wecanturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheclassroom.(when引导的时间状语从句)②Ifwetakegoodcareofourearthtoday,itwillbemorebeautifultomorrow.(if引导的条件状语从句)19.例文:Waterislife Waterislife.ThewaterontheEarththatwecanusedirectlyisnotmuch.Sowemustsavewater.Weusewaterinmanydifferentways.Farmersusewatertogrowvegetablesandfeedanimals.Firemenusewatertoputoutfires.Cooksneedwatertocookfood.Wecannotlivewithoutwater.Butwaterisgettingpollutedindifferentplaces.Waterpollutionisabigprobleminmanycountries.Wemuststopdumpingsewageintorivers,lakesorseas.Allfactoriesmustdosometreatmenttothewastewaterbeforeitispumpedintothewatercycle.Ifallofuscandothis,wecanhaveabrightfuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为一般现在时;③提示:根据题中的参考问题,主要围绕水的重要性,会遇到的挑战,及能够采取的措施等方面书写。此外,写作的文章要具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍水对人类的重要性;第二步,介绍我们未来会遇到的挑战;第三步,介绍我们应如何保护水资源。[亮点词汇]①savewater节约用水②pumpinto注入[高分句型]①Allfactoriesmustdosometreatmenttothewastewaterbeforeitispumpedintothewatercycle.(before引导的时间状语从句)②Ifallofuscandothis,wecanhaveabrightfuture.(if引导的条件状语从句)20.例文AcharitybicycletripNotlongago,eightyoungpeoplefromWuximadeacharitybicycletripalongtheGrandCanal.ThepurposeoftheirtripwastoraisemoneyforProjectHope.TheyleftWuxionMay20andarrivedinBeijingonJune5.Thoughtheridewaslongandtough,theywentallthewayinhighspirits.Withthehelpofmanypeople,theyraisedmorethan50,000yuan.Afterthelongtrip,theyweretired,buttheywerehappy.Theywereproudofwhattheyhaddone.Itisanunusualexperiencethattheywillneverforget. 【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“Acharitybicycletrip”这一题目展开叙述。内容要包括慈善行的目的,慈善行的时间、地点,一路的情况及结果,最后阐述他们的活动感受,即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上,条理要清晰。2.写作指导:本文写作人称应该使用第三人称复数。时态应用一般过去时。叙述中可适当应用含有宾语从句,状语从句等复合句,也可以运用itisadj./n.+that从句等固定句型。文章第一段可介绍活动的目的、时间、地点、过程和结果,第二段可以参加者的感受作为总结。

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